Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYPDPDR65R1SJ8ZFXJ2Z4H

Run Details

Duration:
7.8s
Cost:
$0.002680

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient standing stones loomed like silent sentinels, their weathered surfaces etched with symbols that seemed to shimmer and dance at the edge of vision. Aurora traced her fingers along the rough oak surface, feeling a strange vibration pulse beneath her touch. "This place feels different," she murmured. Nyx's shadowy form rippled beside her, their violet eyes scanning the grove. The wildflowers carpeting the ground pulsed with impossible colors — deep indigos that shouldn't exist, crimson blooms that seemed to breathe. Time felt liquid here. The light shifted strangely, pools of amber and silver bleeding into one another. Isolde moved ahead, her silver hair floating as if underwater, leaving no trace of footprints on the ground. A whisper of wind carried fragments of forgotten languages. Roots twisted beneath their feet, creating impossible pathways that seemed to reconfigure with each step. The Fae-Forged blade at Aurora's hip hummed softly, its moonsilver edge catching ethereal light. "Watch your step," Isolde called, her voice like chimes. "The Grove does not welcome careless travelers." The air tasted of something ancient — honey and thunderstorm, moonlight and forgotten promises.
total_cost0.00268

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount183
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount183
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"dance"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"etched"
3"dance"
4"traced"
5"pulse"
6"scanning"
7"pulsed"
8"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences13
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences13
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences14
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords184
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.18% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions4
wordCount170
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.18
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Nyx1
Fae-Forged1
Aurora2
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.912
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences11
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"symbols that seemed to shimmer and dance at the edge of vision"
1"blooms that seemed to breathe"
2"pathways that seemed to reconfigure with each step"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount184
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences14
matches(empty)
97.87% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs7
mean26.29
std12.95
cv0.493
sampleLengths
042
16
233
335
438
516
614
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences13
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs29
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences14
ratio0.143
matches
0"The wildflowers carpeting the ground pulsed with impossible colors — deep indigos that shouldn't exist, crimson blooms that seemed to breathe."
1"The air tasted of something ancient — honey and thunderstorm, moonlight and forgotten promises."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount169
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.023668639053254437
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.011834319526627219
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences14
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences14
mean13.14
std5.69
cv0.433
sampleLengths
025
117
26
312
421
54
613
718
89
915
1014
119
127
1314
92.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.6428571428571429
totalSentences14
uniqueOpeners9
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences12
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount0
totalSentences12
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount12
totalSentences12
matches
0"The ancient standing stones loomed"
1"Aurora traced her fingers along"
2"Nyx's shadowy form rippled beside"
3"The wildflowers carpeting the ground"
4"Time felt liquid here."
5"The light shifted strangely, pools"
6"Isolde moved ahead, her silver"
7"A whisper of wind carried"
8"Roots twisted beneath their feet,"
9"The Fae-Forged blade at Aurora's"
10"Isolde called, her voice like"
11"The air tasted of something"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences12
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences9
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The ancient standing stones loomed like silent sentinels, their weathered surfaces etched with symbols that seemed to shimmer and dance at the edge of vision."
1"The wildflowers carpeting the ground pulsed with impossible colors — deep indigos that shouldn't exist, crimson blooms that seemed to breathe."
2"Isolde moved ahead, her silver hair floating as if underwater, leaving no trace of footprints on the ground."
3"Roots twisted beneath their feet, creating impossible pathways that seemed to reconfigure with each step."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
68.4862%