Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYPQKQEXKVHTJS244B2VX3

Run Details

Duration:
1m 8s
Cost:
$0.003513
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The night pressed in like velvet, thick with the hush that followed a storm’s last whisper. The Fae Grove lay beyond the edge of Richmond Park, a pocket of damp dark where the ordinary world thinned and bled away. Time stalked differently here; an hour inside could be minutes outside, the legend said, and Rory had learned to listen for the between-places as if it wore a throat and breathed in the same room. The standing stones stood like patient judges, ancient oak roots curling around their bases, roots that remembered footsteps long dead. Wildflowers bloomed where a chill wind should have withered them, every petal lacquered with dew that tasted faintly of iron and rain that hadn’t fallen. Moonlight poured through branches with the care of someone who’d stitched the night together piece by piece. Rory stood at the lip of the clearing, the Heartstone Pendant resting warm against her chest, a dull, persistent glow crawling along the silver chain. I came here for a reason, she told herself, and kept her voice even, as if she were explaining the plan to a cautious partner who might suddenly decide to bolt. The pendant wasn’t a weapon, not exactly, but it stirred when she drew near the Grove’s heart. Its crimson gem pulsed with a steady, patient warmth, a heartbeat she could feel through the cloth of her shirt whenever she crossed the boundary of the edge stones. The warmth wasn’t threatening, not yet, but it kept time with something else in the air—something old and patient, something that preferred to wait. She stepped inside. The air thickened, like syrup left to cool too long, and the silence stretched until she could hear her own pulse. The wildflowers watched in their still, bright way; their faces—if one could call them that—didn’t move, but they seemed to study her with a kind of patient curiosity. The grove smelled faintly of rain and something sweeter, something that prickled her throat and made her tongue feel unfamiliar. The first sound came as a mistake: a branch snapping somewhere to her left, brittle and sudden, followed by nothing but the hush of leaves that did not rustle in the way any wind ever rustled them. It wasn’t a gale or a storm, just a minor unhinging of the night’s careful arrangement. She paused, face tilting toward the sound as if listening for a signal she’d known to expect. The Heartstone warmed more insistently against her chest, and the pendant’s glow shifted from a quiet internal glow to something that breathed along her sightline, a glow that suggested a presence rather than a shimmer. A pulse of warmth crawled up to her jaw, and she pressed a finger against the pendant’s chain to anchor herself. The chain’s cold metal pressed back, a small, honest contrast against the heat. “Show me,” she murmured into the darkness, though the words didn’t feel loud so much as carefully aimed. The grove exhaled, a long, slow exhale that carried with it a scent of moss and distant rain. The scent wasn’t dangerous, but it was private, as if the forest kept its own weather and manners. A rustle moved along the edge of the trees, a line of motion that disappeared the instant she tried to fix it with her eyes. The wrongness wasn’t in sound alone; it was in what didn’t happen—no animal skittering, no night insects thrumming in a chorus, only the soft, patient fabric of the dark and a breath she could almost hear, as if the night itself was exhaling through her own lungs. Rory projected a breath she didn’t quite take, then spoke again, the words clipped and practical. “I came because you told me to, pendant. Don’t fail me now.” The pendant’s glow deepened, a warm ember in a pool of red. The warmth touched the skin at the back of her neck, then spread, as if she’d brushed against something tiny and patient—an invitation, not a threat. Something moved. Not a step, not a physical thing, but a suggestion of a presence just beyond the range of sight, bending the air to a shape she could intuit but not see. She tightened her grip on the chain, and the Heartstone throbbed in response, a small, insistence that said, You are not alone here, not yet. “Who’s there?” she tried, though she knew it would do little good to ask a question meant for a presence that might not wish to answer. The question hung between the trunks, a slender thread she tugged at, hoping it would knot into knowledge. The grove remained silent for longer than she could bear, a patient thing that preferred to wait until attention wandered. Then a sound arrived—soft, almost like a whisper carried on a breeze that wasn’t there. It drifted from the boundary stones, a chorus of barely-there murmurs that came and went with the slow drift of the air. It wasn’t language so much as intent, a sequence of syllables formed by the rustle of leaves and the sigh of air through a hollow seam in the stones. The sound stitched itself into her memory. Rory pictured a map drawn in sound, each syllable a location, every cadence a door. The notion made her stomach tilt with a sort of cautious awe. If the grove could speak in whispers, what more could it tell her about the Hel portal that the pendant sometimes hinted at in its warmth? She did not move toward the boundary stones. The Grove’s edge did not invite; it suggested an invitation and then withheld, with a trickster’s patience. The wildflowers around her wore their year-round bloom bravely, their colors an almost aggressive brightness in the otherwise dim world. One of them, a pale, almost translucent petal, seemed to tilt as if listening when she spoke. “Always listening,” she said softly, as if to remind herself of the grove’s nature. The words sounded hollow in her own ears, as if she were recording someone else’s sentence and listening to it echo back. The hush thickened. The heartstone’s pulse aligned with the rhythm of her breath, and for a moment she could have sworn the forest’s heartbeat and hers shared a single pulse. The odd sensation sent a tingle down her spine, a reminder that the place did not simply contain her; it watched her, evaluated her choices, weighed the stones around her as if they formed a jury. One step, then another, and a shape moved again—this time more certain, more corporeal, though still not fully seen. A shadow thickened at the edge of vision and retreated as soon as she tried to fix it with eye contact. The sense of something close, something almost gentle, pressed against her awareness. Not a threat, not yet, but enough to push the nerves taut and ready. The Heartstone shifted in its cradle, now showing a faint inner glow that poured through the gem in a way that made the red look almost alive, as if two crimson eyes stared from within. The glow found its own tempo and hummed in sympathy with a long, slow exhale from the grove. The air tasted coppery and sweet at the same time, an impossible combination that prickled the tissue of her lips. “Don’t be coy,” she whispered, trying to keep the line between courage and folly clean. “If you want me to see what you hide, you’ll have to show me more.” The grove complied with a quiet rattle of leaves somewhere behind her. It wasn’t a threat—more like a patient librarian turning a page—yet the sound felt intimate, as if the forest had moved closer for a moment to listen to the exchange. She turned her head just enough to catch a glimpse of movement at the very edge of her vision, a shape that might have been a tree limb or might have been a finger of shadow sliding along the boundary stones. It vanished when she fixed upon it, leaving behind only the sense of being watched, of a gaze that pressed somewhere just past the skin. The memory of Eva’s voice, its dry humor and black-edged trust, flickered for a moment in Rory’s mind. The image of Eva leaning against the door frame of her late-night apartment, saying, It’s never just a place, Rory. It’s what you do with the space between. It wasn’t a line she would easily forget, not after all the times she’d repeated it to herself in the quiet hours. Keeping her pace steady, Rory spoke again, the words precise and careful, like a technician testing a system she knew would respond if she pressed the right button. “If there’s a door you want me to walk through, you’ll have to give me more than warmth and whispers. I need a map, a sign, a reason worth the risk.” The pendant answered not with a direct line but with a subtle shift in temperature, a warmer surge that crawled up toward her cheek. The glow within grew more intense, pushing outward as if it wanted to carve a path through the air, to sketch a line in the dark that even she could follow. It wasn’t a map in a conventional sense, but it offered a direction: toward the grove’s deeper core, toward a hollow where the sense of time grown jagged could be smoothed again. She did not move toward any destination with bravado. The grove’s interior had a way of folding in on itself, a secret chamber somewhere between the roots of the ancient oaks, where the world’s edges softened and a single moment could stretch out longer than it should. The thought of stepping into such a place, of letting the ground beneath her morph into something unfamiliar, made her shoulders tighten and the muscles in her back grow rigid. “Show me the reason I am here,” she said softly, pressing the pendant a little more firmly against her chest. The crimsón gem acquired a warmer glow, a feverish warmth that spread through her collarbone and radiated outward in a kind of a halo that didn’t glow so much as recolor the surrounding air. The trees shifted, not with heavy motion, but as if someone had nudged the air with invisible fingers. The grove’s center, a clearing ringed by the standing stones, appeared to breathe. The grass grew briefly taller, catching a dew that hadn’t rained that night, then settled back into its velvet hush. The air tasted like old copper and wild sugar, the way a memory sometimes tastes when you bite it again. The pulse in the pendant steadied, then pulsed again, stronger this time, and Rory felt a pressure against the bridge of her nose, the sort of pressure you associate with a familiar presence suddenly becoming aware of you. She pressed her fingers to the pendant’s smooth surface and found herself staring down into the crimson gemstone as if it were a window. A voice whispered inside her skull, not a sound but a suggestion, a direction that did not shout so much as coax. You came here for a reason, it said, and the reason is not written in your notebook. It’s alive, and it listens when you listen. It wants to be found. Her breath hitched. The grove’s whispering intensified in a faint chorus, the voices of the wildflowers, of the stones, of a distant water trickling through a hidden tunnel, all harmonizing into a single, unsettling note. The note wasn’t a threat; it was a ladder, a way to climb without the ground offering a grip. She widened her stance, feet planted, and took a measured step toward the grove’s interior, toward a place where the standing stones had formed a rough circle that looked almost ceremonial, as if it had waited for someone to follow a thread into its heart. “I’m listening,” she said, not loud but decisive, as if she spoke to a co-conspirator rather than to an empty space. The pendant flickered, then steadied, the glow coalescing into a narrow shaft of red light that stabbed into the earth’s dark, pointing toward something beneath the roots. The ground trembled. Not violently, not like an earthquake, but a small, patient tremor, as though the earth itself exhaled through its layers, a slow churning of soil and stone. A shallow scent rose, metallic and sweet, the smell of something ancient waking, something that wouldn’t be rushed. Rory kept her gaze fixed on the axis of the light, refusing to blink, refusing the urge to bolt back toward the boundary stones. “What are you trying to show me?” she asked, speaking aloud again, the sound of her own voice oddly encouraging in the quiet. In response, the light moved—a fraction of an inch, then another—the way a cautious creature inches forward, never taking a direct threat head-on but always advancing, always testing. It traced a line through the grass, stepping between two small wildflowers, and then it vanished beneath a knot of roots, as if it had punched a doorway through the ground itself. Rory exhaled, her breath turning smoky in the cold air. The Heartstone remained active, a bright ember in a quiet furnace, its warmth soaking into her bones, past the ribcage and into her shoulders, as if someone had lit a second sun inside her chest. The whispering grew denser, the forest’s private language layering upon itself until it formed something akin to a sentence, something she could almost translate if she focused hard enough, if she trusted the world not to slip away while she listened. The sentence was not in any tongue she recognised. It wasn’t Gaelic or English or a Fae-inflected dialect; it was a pattern, a rhythm of breath and gravity that suggested a location rather than an utterance. It pointed toward a particular gnarled oak whose roots curled like a sleeping serpent around a stone so dark that it might have been a shard of night itself. The tree’s trunk bore ancient knotholes, like eyes that had watched countless seasons of grief and joy pass through the Grove’s rooms. A single drop of dew slid down Rory’s temple, chilling the skin there, then rolled into the hollow behind her ear. The forest hushed, as if listening for what she would do next. The pendant’s glow pulsed twice, a heartbeat within a heartbeat, and the room’s shadows pooled deeper at the tree’s base. She stepped forward again, careful with the cadence of her feet, careful not to betray the tremor of anticipation in her hands. The grove’s edge was still there, a line she did not cross without a clear purpose to counterbalance whatever lay beyond. The tree, ancient and patient, seemed to lean toward her as though it remembered every step she had ever taken in this part of the earth. Its bark was rough and cold, the knots like doors slightly ajar. “Open,” she whispered, and the word sounded hollow, almost ceremonial, as if she had spoken a spell rather than a sentence aloud. The Heartstone’s glow intensified with the utterance, the red flame drawing longer shadows across the ground. It seemed to exhale back at her, a soft, intimate breath that carried the skeletal scent of old forest and damp stone. From the corner of her eye, a movement—thin, quick, too deliberate to be a creature—slid along the boundary stones and vanished into the darkness between two of the standing stones. The impression of a body, the shape of a person who wasn’t quite there, lingered for a heartbeat before dissolving into the night’s velvet. If she had been someone else, she would have spun to confront it. If she had been someone else, she would have spoken louder, demanded what was happening, or run. But Rory stood still, letting the Grove reveal itself in its own time, letting the Heartstone’s pulse map out the night’s geography. The old habit of keeping her head clear, of thinking through every possibility, steadied her. The fact that her life had taught her to move fast and to question every step now served as a counterweight to the Grove’s patient menace. The whispering rose again, a chorus of the wild and the old, and with it came a quiet realization: something was preparing to reveal its face in a way that wouldn’t allow for retreat, not properly. The grove wasn’t trying to frighten her so much as to draw her into its own rhythm, to insist she listen to a truth she hadn’t admitted to herself yet. Rory’s mouth tightened. She had crossed a line, not merely into a place but into a condition, a readiness to accept that the world could unspool in directions she hadn’t anticipated. The pendant’s glow clicked softly, confirming the result of the choice she was about to make without the luxury of a pause. “It’s not enough to know the route,” she said, mostly to the pendant but also to herself. “I want the reason, and I’ll pay whatever price the grove asks.” It wasn’t bravado; it was a practical decision, a line drawn in the earth’s own dust where a map should have appeared but hadn’t. The Heartstone brightened, a red sun held in a pocket of night, and a soft, patient insistence urged her onward. She stepped away from the circle of boundary stones and toward the hollow oak, toward the suggestion of a doorway carved by roots and air. The ground sank a touch under her foot, as if the earth itself made a polite bow to her resolve and then lowered its gaze again, waiting for her to step fully into the revealed chamber. The forest closed around her in a careful embrace, not tight enough to smother but tight enough to keep the air from escaping, to keep the moment from slipping away. The Heartstone’s warmth spread across her ribs, and for a moment the world felt almost ordinary, as if the grove might be only a very old building, the sort that held a secret in its basement and a quiet room for people who listened. Then the hollow beneath the roots opened with the patient inevitability of a door opening in one's own childhood house. A soft, cool air breathed up from the opening, carrying with it a scent like rain plus something unnameable and sweet. The glow from the pendant moved with her, painting the space in a red shimmer that did not illuminate so much as reveal, as if the light knew what to reveal and what to keep hidden. Rory lowered her head and stepped down, feet finding solid earth, hands brushing against fern fronds that pressed back with surprising warmth. The interior smelled of old stone and living things, of earth and memory, of a *place that remembers* more than it tells. The chamber beneath the roots proved small but not trivial. It was a room carved by hands that no longer moved, a space where time had slackened its grip and allowed the present to linger simply because someone needed to listen. The heartstone’s ruby glow heated the air into a soft warmth, not enough to be comforting and not enough to burn. It made the air feel thick, as if one could lean into it and feel the weight of centuries pressing down. Rory’d come here for a reason, and the reason was about to reveal itself in a manner both intimate and terrible, the kind of revelation that would force her to choose between a secret she’d guarded and a truth that could ruin everything she’d ever built in London’s night streets. The stones hummed as if approving, a chorus that carried the cadence of a vow. The chamber wasn’t empty of mankind, not entirely. It bore the faint imprint of footsteps that hadn’t cared for distance, of breath that hadn’t worried about tempo. It was as if someone or something had stood here before, listening to someone else’s breaths, accepting the rhythm of a life spent listening and waiting for a moment when the listening would become louder than the voice. Rory knelt on the stone floor, not out of fear but out of a need to be level with the truth they’d prepared to offer. The Heartstone pulsed against her chest, a stubborn yet gentle reminder that she wasn’t alone in this room, not entirely. The whisper from the grove pressed against the back of her thoughts, a single clear directive: Stop and listen, then decide. “Show me what lies beyond silence,” she murmured, and the words felt like a hinge turning slowly in a sealed door. The chamber answered with nothing more dramatic than a soft click, a nearly imperceptible shift in the air as if a hidden latch slid into place somewhere above her head. The pendant’s glow intensified just enough to sketch a map of the room—lingering shadows, a niche in the wall where roots pressed through, a small stone basin carved into the floor, dry now but once filled with rain that tasted of copper and earth. The voice inside her head wasn’t loud, but it carried weight, the sort of gravity you feel in your bones when someone speaks a truth that hurts to hear. You came here for a reason, it reminded, and now the grove will insist you carry it through. The message said nothing about mercy, only about necessity. Rory stood slowly, the pendant warm against her chest, and pressed her palm flat on the cool stone basin. The surface showed no reflection, only the red glow bending across it like blood in water, like a secret that preferred to remain unseen unless someone pressed forward with a steady hand and a ready heart. The whisper changed then, softened into a murmur that seemed less about menace and more about companionship—an invitation to finish what she’d started. The small chamber grew cooler again, as if a window had opened into another season, but the heartstone’s warmth stayed, a stubborn beacon. The tree above her, through the root-hinged logistics of the grove, seemed to tilt a fraction in acknowledgment, as if it had seen hundreds of people arrive with questions and patience. She spoke without planning to, letting the moment ride on the breath she hadn’t noticed slipping away. “If you want me to remember, you’ll have to let me carry this with me. If you want me to forget, you’ll have to show me a way out.” The words were plain, the kind of line a person used when bargaining with a force they did not fully understand. And then something moved in the corner of the chamber—the faintest arc of shadow, a silhouette that wasn’t quite a shadow because it had intent, a suggestion of a shape that pressed against the boundary of sight and insisted it not be ignored. The figure lingered for a beat longer, as if listening to the words she spoke aloud, as if the grove itself leaned in to catch their meaning. “The reason,” Rory repeated softly, turning her head toward the silhouette with a careful calm that surprised even herself, “the reason isn’t just for me. It’s for a circle of people who might never know what you are until they see it for themselves. If there’s a door, I’ll walk through it, but I’ll ask for a name before I step through.” The silhouette did not respond with words. It did not dislodge, did not vanish, only grew marginally clearer, the edge of a form that could have been a man or a tree or a memory standing there in quiet defiance of the night’s rules. The Heartstone pulsed with a steady, patient rhythm, and the chamber’s air settled into a deeper, older stillness, the sort that happens when someone makes a choice that can’t be easily undone. Rory breathed in the damp scent of the chamber, then outward, slow. The pendant’s glow reflected in her eyes, turning them into twin lanterns within a face that had learned how to resist spectacle for years. She wasn’t sure what lay beyond the hollow beneath the roots, but she knew one thing for certain: she would not retreat because fear had learned her name. She would not turn away because an unseen thing had decided it preferred the dark to the light. She stepped closer to the silhouette, the soft light of the pendant gliding along the boundary like a finger tracing a seam. The grove, the stones, the roots, all of it listened as if it had nothing to listen to before but now listened for her, for the decision she dared to make in the heart of a night that didn’t end. The last thing she did before the scene’s line froze in place was to lift the pendant, to cradle it with both hands and press the cool metal against her sternum as if staking a claim on her own courage. The crimson gem glowed with intent, steady and clear, and she looked at the shadow not with fear but with a deliberate, unyielding stare. “What you are,” she said, not to the silhouette, but to the room itself, to the century-old silence that kept the grove’s secrets until someone asked—“is it worth the price?” The shadow did not answer in word. It answered in consequence: a slow exhale of the night, a new hush that pressed against her ears, and the sense that something very old had finally decided to reveal its plan by allowing her to see the pattern beneath the pattern, the map beneath the map. The Heartstone’s warmth intensified, and the chamber’s walls shivered with the quiet sound of carved roots rearranging themselves as if the space itself were adjusting to fit a new riddle. Rory stood, not moving, simply listening to the night press closer until even the wildflowers seemed to listen with an almost frightened stillness. She did not rush to the exit, did not call out to Eva or to Silas or to any of the living souls who might have followed her here for other purposes. The grove didn’t demand it, not yet. It existed to test the quiet, to teach a person how to stay long enough to hear what a place wanted to say. Finally, she whispered the simplest thing she could, the sentence that felt true enough to anchor her future, the line that might keep her from stumbling into a mistake: “I came for truth, and I’ll take it in the form you give it.” The Heartstone flared once, a bright, stubborn flare, then settled into a slow, unwavering glow that suggested the night’s answer would arrive not as a thunderclap but as something she would have to walk toward—one careful step at a time. The chamber, for all its old age, seemed to lean closer as if listening to the sound of her breath. The grove’s stillness pressed in, heavy and patient, ready to receive the decision she was about to make. And Rory, with the pendant’s warmth warming her skin and a new ache of resolve drilling into the marrow of her resolve, found that the night’s wrongness had shifted into something nearly solid—an upcoming moment that would define what she did next, not what she thought about it. She did not speak again for a long minute, letting the quiet keep its own counsel. Then, when she finally did, it was in the plainest, most unavoidable tone she could manage, the tone of someone who would not pretend the answer wasn’t staring back at her: “I’m ready.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
2"Rory repeated softly [softly]"
3"The Heartstone flared once [once]"
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tagDensity0.789
leniency1
rawRatio0.267
effectiveRatio0.267
85.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4637
totalAiIsmAdverbs13
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count4
3
adverb"very"
count3
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"carefully"
2"softly"
3"very"
4"slightly"
5"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4637
totalAiIsms70
found
0
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count3
1
word"whisper"
count4
2
word"footsteps"
count2
3
word"chill"
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4
word"pulsed"
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5
word"warmth"
count14
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"silence"
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word"pulse"
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9
word"throbbed"
count1
10
word"stomach"
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11
word"echo"
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12
word"aligned"
count1
13
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word"reminder"
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word"flickered"
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word"firmly"
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word"familiar"
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word"measured"
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word"trembled"
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22
word"churning"
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23
word"traced"
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24
word"chilling"
count1
25
word"anticipation"
count1
26
word"resolve"
count3
27
word"comforting"
count1
28
word"weight"
count2
29
word"beacon"
count1
30
word"tracing"
count1
31
word"the last thing"
count1
32
word"unwavering"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"whisper"
2"footsteps"
3"chill"
4"pulsed"
5"warmth"
6"could feel"
7"silence"
8"pulse"
9"throbbed"
10"stomach"
11"echo"
12"aligned"
13"down her spine"
14"reminder"
15"sense of"
16"almost alive"
17"flickered"
18"firmly"
19"familiar"
20"measured"
21"trembled"
22"churning"
23"traced"
24"chilling"
25"anticipation"
26"resolve"
27"comforting"
28"weight"
29"beacon"
30"tracing"
31"the last thing"
32"unwavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences194
matches
0"d in sympathy"
1"the tremor of anticipation"
2"t with fear"
32.40% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount10
narrationSentences194
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"listen"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences198
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords4610
ratio0.001
matches
0"place that remembers"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions47
unquotedAttributions4
matches
0"I came here for a reason, she told herself, and kept her voice even, as if she were explaining the plan to a cautious pa…"
1"Keeping her pace steady, Rory spoke again, the words precise and careful, like a technician testing a system she knew wo…"
2"You came here for a reason, it said, and the reason is not written in your notebook."
3"Finally, she whispered the simplest thing she could, the sentence that felt true enough to anchor her future, the line t…"
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount4407
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.48
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove6
Richmond1
Park1
Rory21
Heartstone13
Pendant1
You3
Hel1
Eva3
Gaelic1
English1
Fae-inflected1
London1
Stop1
Silas1
persons
0"Grove"
1"Rory"
2"Heartstone"
3"Pendant"
4"You"
5"Eva"
6"Silas"
places
0"Fae"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences187
glossingSentenceCount14
matches
0"as if listening for a signal she’d known to expect"
1"quite take, then spoke again, the words clipped and practical"
2"as if listening when she spoke"
3"tasted like old copper and wild sugar, th"
4"something akin to a sentence, something she cou"
5"as if listening for what she would do next"
6"quite there, lingered for a heartbeat before dissolving into the night’s velvet"
7"as if approving a chorus that carried the cadence of a vow"
8"It was as if someone or something had stood here before, listening to someone else’s breaths, accepting the rhythm of a life spent listening and waiting for a moment when the listening would become louder than the voice"
9"felt like a hinge turning slowly in a s"
10"quite a shadow because it had intent, a suggestion of a shape that pressed against the boundary of sight and insisted it not be ignored"
11"as if listening to the words she spoke aloud, as if the grove itself leaned in to catch their meaning"
12"as if staking a claim on her own courage"
13"as if listening to the sound of her breath"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches19
per1kWords4.121
wordCount4610
matches
0"not exactly, but it stirred"
1"not yet, but it kept time with something else in the air"
2"Not a step, not a physical thing, but a suggestion of a presence just beyond the range of sight, b"
3"not a physical thing, but a suggestion of a presence just beyond the range of sight, b"
4"Not a threat, not yet, but enough to push the nerves taut"
5"not yet, but enough to push the nerves taut"
6"not with a direct line but with a subtle shift in temperature, a warmer surge"
7"not with heavy motion, but as if someone had nudged the air with invisible fingers"
8"not a sound but a suggestion, a direction"
9"not loud but decisive, as if she spoke to a co-conspirator rather than to"
10"Not violently, not like an earthquake, but a small, patient tremor, as though the earth itself exhaled"
11"not like an earthquake, but a small, patient tremor, as though the earth itself exhaled"
12"not merely into a place but into a condition, a readiness to accept"
13"not enough to know the route,” she said, mostly to the pendant but also to herself"
14"not tight enough to smother but tight enough to keep the air from escaping, to keep the mome"
15"not out of fear but out of a need to be level with the truth they’d prepared to"
16"not with fear but with a deliberate, unyielding stare"
17"not to the silhouette, but to the room itself, to the century-old silence"
18"not as a thunderclap but as something she would have to walk toward"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences198
matches
0"accept that the"
1"found that the"
51.04% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean62.3
std20.47
cv0.329
sampleLengths
074
187
231
370
43
569
670
769
854
972
1028
1138
1258
1344
1486
1560
1662
1736
1866
1966
2073
2130
22108
2368
2459
2587
2677
2754
2871
2962
3052
3199
3248
3372
3423
3560
3686
3787
3853
3981
4060
4154
4293
4366
4453
4573
4661
4774
4877
4944
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences194
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount9
totalVerbs652
matches
0"were explaining"
1"wasn’t threatening"
2"was exhaling"
3"were recording"
4"was happening"
5"was preparing"
6"wasn’t trying"
7"were adjusting"
8"wasn’t staring"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount19
semicolonCount8
flaggedSentences21
totalSentences198
ratio0.106
matches
0"Time stalked differently here; an hour inside could be minutes outside, the legend said, and Rory had learned to listen for the between-places as if it wore a throat and breathed in the same room."
1"The warmth wasn’t threatening, not yet, but it kept time with something else in the air—something old and patient, something that preferred to wait."
2"The wildflowers watched in their still, bright way; their faces—if one could call them that—didn’t move, but they seemed to study her with a kind of patient curiosity."
3"The wrongness wasn’t in sound alone; it was in what didn’t happen—no animal skittering, no night insects thrumming in a chorus, only the soft, patient fabric of the dark and a breath she could almost hear, as if the night itself was exhaling through her own lungs."
4"The warmth touched the skin at the back of her neck, then spread, as if she’d brushed against something tiny and patient—an invitation, not a threat."
5"Then a sound arrived—soft, almost like a whisper carried on a breeze that wasn’t there."
6"The Grove’s edge did not invite; it suggested an invitation and then withheld, with a trickster’s patience."
7"The odd sensation sent a tingle down her spine, a reminder that the place did not simply contain her; it watched her, evaluated her choices, weighed the stones around her as if they formed a jury."
8"One step, then another, and a shape moved again—this time more certain, more corporeal, though still not fully seen."
9"It wasn’t a threat—more like a patient librarian turning a page—yet the sound felt intimate, as if the forest had moved closer for a moment to listen to the exchange."
10"The note wasn’t a threat; it was a ladder, a way to climb without the ground offering a grip."
11"In response, the light moved—a fraction of an inch, then another—the way a cautious creature inches forward, never taking a direct threat head-on but always advancing, always testing."
12"It wasn’t Gaelic or English or a Fae-inflected dialect; it was a pattern, a rhythm of breath and gravity that suggested a location rather than an utterance."
13"From the corner of her eye, a movement—thin, quick, too deliberate to be a creature—slid along the boundary stones and vanished into the darkness between two of the standing stones."
14"“I want the reason, and I’ll pay whatever price the grove asks.” It wasn’t bravado; it was a practical decision, a line drawn in the earth’s own dust where a map should have appeared but hadn’t."
15"The pendant’s glow intensified just enough to sketch a map of the room—lingering shadows, a niche in the wall where roots pressed through, a small stone basin carved into the floor, dry now but once filled with rain that tasted of copper and earth."
16"The whisper changed then, softened into a murmur that seemed less about menace and more about companionship—an invitation to finish what she’d started."
17"And then something moved in the corner of the chamber—the faintest arc of shadow, a silhouette that wasn’t quite a shadow because it had intent, a suggestion of a shape that pressed against the boundary of sight and insisted it not be ignored."
18"“What you are,” she said, not to the silhouette, but to the room itself, to the century-old silence that kept the grove’s secrets until someone asked—“is it worth the price?”"
19"“I came for truth, and I’ll take it in the form you give it.” The Heartstone flared once, a bright, stubborn flare, then settled into a slow, unwavering glow that suggested the night’s answer would arrive not as a thunderclap but as something she would have to walk toward—one careful step at a time."
20"And Rory, with the pendant’s warmth warming her skin and a new ache of resolve drilling into the marrow of her resolve, found that the night’s wrongness had shifted into something nearly solid—an upcoming moment that would define what she did next, not what she thought about it."
80.69% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount4073
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"resting warm against her"
1"gentle, pressed against her"
2"single clear directive: Stop"
adverbCount169
adverbRatio0.041492757181438744
lyAdverbCount42
lyAdverbRatio0.010311809477043948
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences198
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences198
mean23.28
std10.57
cv0.454
sampleLengths
016
123
235
320
425
517
625
731
817
929
1024
113
1221
1328
1420
1537
1616
1717
1835
1921
2013
2118
2218
2318
2425
2547
2616
2712
2812
2926
302
3131
3225
3326
3418
3520
3615
3722
3829
397
4015
4112
4226
438
4417
4520
4617
4714
4822
493
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats53
diversityRatio0.14646464646464646
totalSentences198
uniqueOpeners29
69.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences193
matches
0"Then a sound arrived—soft, almost"
1"Then the hollow beneath the"
2"Finally, she whispered the simplest"
3"Then, when she finally did,"
ratio0.021
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences193
matches
0"I came here for a"
1"Its crimson gem pulsed with"
2"She stepped inside."
3"It wasn’t a gale or"
4"She paused, face tilting toward"
5"she murmured into the darkness,"
6"She tightened her grip on"
7"she tried, though she knew"
8"It drifted from the boundary"
9"It wasn’t language so much"
10"She did not move toward"
11"she said softly, as if"
12"she whispered, trying to keep"
13"It wasn’t a threat—more like"
14"She turned her head just"
15"It vanished when she fixed"
16"It’s what you do with"
17"It wasn’t a line she"
18"It wasn’t a map in"
19"She did not move toward"
ratio0.29
6.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount175
totalSentences193
matches
0"The night pressed in like"
1"The Fae Grove lay beyond"
2"Time stalked differently here; an"
3"The standing stones stood like"
4"Wildflowers bloomed where a chill"
5"Moonlight poured through branches with"
6"Rory stood at the lip"
7"I came here for a"
8"The pendant wasn’t a weapon,"
9"Its crimson gem pulsed with"
10"The warmth wasn’t threatening, not"
11"She stepped inside."
12"The air thickened, like syrup"
13"The wildflowers watched in their"
14"The grove smelled faintly of"
15"The first sound came as"
16"It wasn’t a gale or"
17"She paused, face tilting toward"
18"The Heartstone warmed more insistently"
19"A pulse of warmth crawled"
ratio0.907
77.72% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences193
matches
0"If the grove could speak"
1"If she had been someone"
2"If she had been someone"
ratio0.016
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences161
technicalSentenceCount51
matches
0"Time stalked differently here; an hour inside could be minutes outside, the legend said, and Rory had learned to listen for the between-places as if it wore a t…"
1"The standing stones stood like patient judges, ancient oak roots curling around their bases, roots that remembered footsteps long dead."
2"The warmth wasn’t threatening, not yet, but it kept time with something else in the air—something old and patient, something that preferred to wait."
3"The wildflowers watched in their still, bright way; their faces—if one could call them that—didn’t move, but they seemed to study her with a kind of patient cur…"
4"The grove smelled faintly of rain and something sweeter, something that prickled her throat and made her tongue feel unfamiliar."
5"The first sound came as a mistake: a branch snapping somewhere to her left, brittle and sudden, followed by nothing but the hush of leaves that did not rustle i…"
6"The Heartstone warmed more insistently against her chest, and the pendant’s glow shifted from a quiet internal glow to something that breathed along her sightli…"
7"The scent wasn’t dangerous, but it was private, as if the forest kept its own weather and manners."
8"The wrongness wasn’t in sound alone; it was in what didn’t happen—no animal skittering, no night insects thrumming in a chorus, only the soft, patient fabric of…"
9"The warmth touched the skin at the back of her neck, then spread, as if she’d brushed against something tiny and patient—an invitation, not a threat."
10"She tightened her grip on the chain, and the Heartstone throbbed in response, a small, insistence that said, You are not alone here, not yet."
11"The grove remained silent for longer than she could bear, a patient thing that preferred to wait until attention wandered."
12"One of them, a pale, almost translucent petal, seemed to tilt as if listening when she spoke."
13"The words sounded hollow in her own ears, as if she were recording someone else’s sentence and listening to it echo back."
14"The Heartstone shifted in its cradle, now showing a faint inner glow that poured through the gem in a way that made the red look almost alive, as if two crimson…"
15"The air tasted coppery and sweet at the same time, an impossible combination that prickled the tissue of her lips."
16"It wasn’t a threat—more like a patient librarian turning a page—yet the sound felt intimate, as if the forest had moved closer for a moment to listen to the exc…"
17"She turned her head just enough to catch a glimpse of movement at the very edge of her vision, a shape that might have been a tree limb or might have been a fin…"
18"The pendant answered not with a direct line but with a subtle shift in temperature, a warmer surge that crawled up toward her cheek."
19"The crimsón gem acquired a warmer glow, a feverish warmth that spread through her collarbone and radiated outward in a kind of a halo that didn’t glow so much a…"
20"A voice whispered inside her skull, not a sound but a suggestion, a direction that did not shout so much as coax."
21"She widened her stance, feet planted, and took a measured step toward the grove’s interior, toward a place where the standing stones had formed a rough circle t…"
22"The pendant flickered, then steadied, the glow coalescing into a narrow shaft of red light that stabbed into the earth’s dark, pointing toward something beneath…"
23"Not violently, not like an earthquake, but a small, patient tremor, as though the earth itself exhaled through its layers, a slow churning of soil and stone."
24"A shallow scent rose, metallic and sweet, the smell of something ancient waking, something that wouldn’t be rushed."
25"It traced a line through the grass, stepping between two small wildflowers, and then it vanished beneath a knot of roots, as if it had punched a doorway through…"
26"The Heartstone remained active, a bright ember in a quiet furnace, its warmth soaking into her bones, past the ribcage and into her shoulders, as if someone had…"
27"The tree’s trunk bore ancient knotholes, like eyes that had watched countless seasons of grief and joy pass through the Grove’s rooms."
28"It seemed to exhale back at her, a soft, intimate breath that carried the skeletal scent of old forest and damp stone."
29"The impression of a body, the shape of a person who wasn’t quite there, lingered for a heartbeat before dissolving into the night’s velvet."
30"The whispering rose again, a chorus of the wild and the old, and with it came a quiet realization: something was preparing to reveal its face in a way that woul…"
31"The Heartstone’s warmth spread across her ribs, and for a moment the world felt almost ordinary, as if the grove might be only a very old building, the sort tha…"
32"Rory lowered her head and stepped down, feet finding solid earth, hands brushing against fern fronds that pressed back with surprising warmth."
33"Rory’d come here for a reason, and the reason was about to reveal itself in a manner both intimate and terrible, the kind of revelation that would force her to …"
34"It bore the faint imprint of footsteps that hadn’t cared for distance, of breath that hadn’t worried about tempo."
35"It was as if someone or something had stood here before, listening to someone else’s breaths, accepting the rhythm of a life spent listening and waiting for a m…"
36"The chamber answered with nothing more dramatic than a soft click, a nearly imperceptible shift in the air as if a hidden latch slid into place somewhere above …"
37"The pendant’s glow intensified just enough to sketch a map of the room—lingering shadows, a niche in the wall where roots pressed through, a small stone basin c…"
38"The surface showed no reflection, only the red glow bending across it like blood in water, like a secret that preferred to remain unseen unless someone pressed …"
39"The small chamber grew cooler again, as if a window had opened into another season, but the heartstone’s warmth stayed, a stubborn beacon."
40"The tree above her, through the root-hinged logistics of the grove, seemed to tilt a fraction in acknowledgment, as if it had seen hundreds of people arrive wit…"
41"And then something moved in the corner of the chamber—the faintest arc of shadow, a silhouette that wasn’t quite a shadow because it had intent, a suggestion of…"
42"It did not dislodge, did not vanish, only grew marginally clearer, the edge of a form that could have been a man or a tree or a memory standing there in quiet d…"
43"The Heartstone pulsed with a steady, patient rhythm, and the chamber’s air settled into a deeper, older stillness, the sort that happens when someone makes a ch…"
44"The pendant’s glow reflected in her eyes, turning them into twin lanterns within a face that had learned how to resist spectacle for years."
45"The last thing she did before the scene’s line froze in place was to lift the pendant, to cradle it with both hands and press the cool metal against her sternum…"
46"The Heartstone’s warmth intensified, and the chamber’s walls shivered with the quiet sound of carved roots rearranging themselves as if the space itself were ad…"
47"Finally, she whispered the simplest thing she could, the sentence that felt true enough to anchor her future, the line that might keep her from stumbling into a…"
48"The chamber, for all its old age, seemed to lean closer as if listening to the sound of her breath."
49"And Rory, with the pendant’s warmth warming her skin and a new ache of resolve drilling into the marrow of her resolve, found that the night’s wrongness had shi…"
50"Then, when she finally did, it was in the plainest, most unavoidable tone she could manage, the tone of someone who would not pretend the answer wasn’t staring …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she said softly, as if to remind herself of the grove’s nature"
1"she whispered, trying to keep the line between courage and folly clean"
2"she whispered, and the word sounded hollow, almost ceremonial, as if she had spoken a spell rather than a sentence aloud"
3"she murmured, and the words felt like a hinge turning slowly in a sealed door"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she murmured (murmur)"
4"Rory repeated softly (repeat)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.579
leniency1
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.455
61.7692%