Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
187
glossingSentenceCount
14
matches
0
"as if listening for a signal she’d known to expect"
1
"quite take, then spoke again, the words clipped and practical"
2
"as if listening when she spoke"
3
"tasted like old copper and wild sugar, th"
4
"something akin to a sentence, something she cou"
5
"as if listening for what she would do next"
6
"quite there, lingered for a heartbeat before dissolving into the night’s velvet"
7
"as if approving a chorus that carried the cadence of a vow"
8
"It was as if someone or something had stood here before, listening to someone else’s breaths, accepting the rhythm of a life spent listening and waiting for a moment when the listening would become louder than the voice"
9
"felt like a hinge turning slowly in a s"
10
"quite a shadow because it had intent, a suggestion of a shape that pressed against the boundary of sight and insisted it not be ignored"
11
"as if listening to the words she spoke aloud, as if the grove itself leaned in to catch their meaning"
"Time stalked differently here; an hour inside could be minutes outside, the legend said, and Rory had learned to listen for the between-places as if it wore a throat and breathed in the same room."
1
"The warmth wasn’t threatening, not yet, but it kept time with something else in the air—something old and patient, something that preferred to wait."
2
"The wildflowers watched in their still, bright way; their faces—if one could call them that—didn’t move, but they seemed to study her with a kind of patient curiosity."
3
"The wrongness wasn’t in sound alone; it was in what didn’t happen—no animal skittering, no night insects thrumming in a chorus, only the soft, patient fabric of the dark and a breath she could almost hear, as if the night itself was exhaling through her own lungs."
4
"The warmth touched the skin at the back of her neck, then spread, as if she’d brushed against something tiny and patient—an invitation, not a threat."
5
"Then a sound arrived—soft, almost like a whisper carried on a breeze that wasn’t there."
6
"The Grove’s edge did not invite; it suggested an invitation and then withheld, with a trickster’s patience."
7
"The odd sensation sent a tingle down her spine, a reminder that the place did not simply contain her; it watched her, evaluated her choices, weighed the stones around her as if they formed a jury."
8
"One step, then another, and a shape moved again—this time more certain, more corporeal, though still not fully seen."
9
"It wasn’t a threat—more like a patient librarian turning a page—yet the sound felt intimate, as if the forest had moved closer for a moment to listen to the exchange."
10
"The note wasn’t a threat; it was a ladder, a way to climb without the ground offering a grip."
11
"In response, the light moved—a fraction of an inch, then another—the way a cautious creature inches forward, never taking a direct threat head-on but always advancing, always testing."
12
"It wasn’t Gaelic or English or a Fae-inflected dialect; it was a pattern, a rhythm of breath and gravity that suggested a location rather than an utterance."
13
"From the corner of her eye, a movement—thin, quick, too deliberate to be a creature—slid along the boundary stones and vanished into the darkness between two of the standing stones."
14
"“I want the reason, and I’ll pay whatever price the grove asks.” It wasn’t bravado; it was a practical decision, a line drawn in the earth’s own dust where a map should have appeared but hadn’t."
15
"The pendant’s glow intensified just enough to sketch a map of the room—lingering shadows, a niche in the wall where roots pressed through, a small stone basin carved into the floor, dry now but once filled with rain that tasted of copper and earth."
16
"The whisper changed then, softened into a murmur that seemed less about menace and more about companionship—an invitation to finish what she’d started."
17
"And then something moved in the corner of the chamber—the faintest arc of shadow, a silhouette that wasn’t quite a shadow because it had intent, a suggestion of a shape that pressed against the boundary of sight and insisted it not be ignored."
18
"“What you are,” she said, not to the silhouette, but to the room itself, to the century-old silence that kept the grove’s secrets until someone asked—“is it worth the price?”"
19
"“I came for truth, and I’ll take it in the form you give it.” The Heartstone flared once, a bright, stubborn flare, then settled into a slow, unwavering glow that suggested the night’s answer would arrive not as a thunderclap but as something she would have to walk toward—one careful step at a time."
20
"And Rory, with the pendant’s warmth warming her skin and a new ache of resolve drilling into the marrow of her resolve, found that the night’s wrongness had shifted into something nearly solid—an upcoming moment that would define what she did next, not what she thought about it."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
161
technicalSentenceCount
51
matches
0
"Time stalked differently here; an hour inside could be minutes outside, the legend said, and Rory had learned to listen for the between-places as if it wore a t…"
1
"The standing stones stood like patient judges, ancient oak roots curling around their bases, roots that remembered footsteps long dead."
2
"The warmth wasn’t threatening, not yet, but it kept time with something else in the air—something old and patient, something that preferred to wait."
3
"The wildflowers watched in their still, bright way; their faces—if one could call them that—didn’t move, but they seemed to study her with a kind of patient cur…"
4
"The grove smelled faintly of rain and something sweeter, something that prickled her throat and made her tongue feel unfamiliar."
5
"The first sound came as a mistake: a branch snapping somewhere to her left, brittle and sudden, followed by nothing but the hush of leaves that did not rustle i…"
6
"The Heartstone warmed more insistently against her chest, and the pendant’s glow shifted from a quiet internal glow to something that breathed along her sightli…"
7
"The scent wasn’t dangerous, but it was private, as if the forest kept its own weather and manners."
8
"The wrongness wasn’t in sound alone; it was in what didn’t happen—no animal skittering, no night insects thrumming in a chorus, only the soft, patient fabric of…"
9
"The warmth touched the skin at the back of her neck, then spread, as if she’d brushed against something tiny and patient—an invitation, not a threat."
10
"She tightened her grip on the chain, and the Heartstone throbbed in response, a small, insistence that said, You are not alone here, not yet."
11
"The grove remained silent for longer than she could bear, a patient thing that preferred to wait until attention wandered."
12
"One of them, a pale, almost translucent petal, seemed to tilt as if listening when she spoke."
13
"The words sounded hollow in her own ears, as if she were recording someone else’s sentence and listening to it echo back."
14
"The Heartstone shifted in its cradle, now showing a faint inner glow that poured through the gem in a way that made the red look almost alive, as if two crimson…"
15
"The air tasted coppery and sweet at the same time, an impossible combination that prickled the tissue of her lips."
16
"It wasn’t a threat—more like a patient librarian turning a page—yet the sound felt intimate, as if the forest had moved closer for a moment to listen to the exc…"
17
"She turned her head just enough to catch a glimpse of movement at the very edge of her vision, a shape that might have been a tree limb or might have been a fin…"
18
"The pendant answered not with a direct line but with a subtle shift in temperature, a warmer surge that crawled up toward her cheek."
19
"The crimsón gem acquired a warmer glow, a feverish warmth that spread through her collarbone and radiated outward in a kind of a halo that didn’t glow so much a…"
20
"A voice whispered inside her skull, not a sound but a suggestion, a direction that did not shout so much as coax."
21
"She widened her stance, feet planted, and took a measured step toward the grove’s interior, toward a place where the standing stones had formed a rough circle t…"
22
"The pendant flickered, then steadied, the glow coalescing into a narrow shaft of red light that stabbed into the earth’s dark, pointing toward something beneath…"
23
"Not violently, not like an earthquake, but a small, patient tremor, as though the earth itself exhaled through its layers, a slow churning of soil and stone."
24
"A shallow scent rose, metallic and sweet, the smell of something ancient waking, something that wouldn’t be rushed."
25
"It traced a line through the grass, stepping between two small wildflowers, and then it vanished beneath a knot of roots, as if it had punched a doorway through…"
26
"The Heartstone remained active, a bright ember in a quiet furnace, its warmth soaking into her bones, past the ribcage and into her shoulders, as if someone had…"
27
"The tree’s trunk bore ancient knotholes, like eyes that had watched countless seasons of grief and joy pass through the Grove’s rooms."
28
"It seemed to exhale back at her, a soft, intimate breath that carried the skeletal scent of old forest and damp stone."
29
"The impression of a body, the shape of a person who wasn’t quite there, lingered for a heartbeat before dissolving into the night’s velvet."
30
"The whispering rose again, a chorus of the wild and the old, and with it came a quiet realization: something was preparing to reveal its face in a way that woul…"
31
"The Heartstone’s warmth spread across her ribs, and for a moment the world felt almost ordinary, as if the grove might be only a very old building, the sort tha…"
32
"Rory lowered her head and stepped down, feet finding solid earth, hands brushing against fern fronds that pressed back with surprising warmth."
33
"Rory’d come here for a reason, and the reason was about to reveal itself in a manner both intimate and terrible, the kind of revelation that would force her to …"
34
"It bore the faint imprint of footsteps that hadn’t cared for distance, of breath that hadn’t worried about tempo."
35
"It was as if someone or something had stood here before, listening to someone else’s breaths, accepting the rhythm of a life spent listening and waiting for a m…"
36
"The chamber answered with nothing more dramatic than a soft click, a nearly imperceptible shift in the air as if a hidden latch slid into place somewhere above …"
37
"The pendant’s glow intensified just enough to sketch a map of the room—lingering shadows, a niche in the wall where roots pressed through, a small stone basin c…"
38
"The surface showed no reflection, only the red glow bending across it like blood in water, like a secret that preferred to remain unseen unless someone pressed …"
39
"The small chamber grew cooler again, as if a window had opened into another season, but the heartstone’s warmth stayed, a stubborn beacon."
40
"The tree above her, through the root-hinged logistics of the grove, seemed to tilt a fraction in acknowledgment, as if it had seen hundreds of people arrive wit…"
41
"And then something moved in the corner of the chamber—the faintest arc of shadow, a silhouette that wasn’t quite a shadow because it had intent, a suggestion of…"
42
"It did not dislodge, did not vanish, only grew marginally clearer, the edge of a form that could have been a man or a tree or a memory standing there in quiet d…"
43
"The Heartstone pulsed with a steady, patient rhythm, and the chamber’s air settled into a deeper, older stillness, the sort that happens when someone makes a ch…"
44
"The pendant’s glow reflected in her eyes, turning them into twin lanterns within a face that had learned how to resist spectacle for years."
45
"The last thing she did before the scene’s line froze in place was to lift the pendant, to cradle it with both hands and press the cool metal against her sternum…"
46
"The Heartstone’s warmth intensified, and the chamber’s walls shivered with the quiet sound of carved roots rearranging themselves as if the space itself were ad…"
47
"Finally, she whispered the simplest thing she could, the sentence that felt true enough to anchor her future, the line that might keep her from stumbling into a…"
48
"The chamber, for all its old age, seemed to lean closer as if listening to the sound of her breath."
49
"And Rory, with the pendant’s warmth warming her skin and a new ache of resolve drilling into the marrow of her resolve, found that the night’s wrongness had shi…"
50
"Then, when she finally did, it was in the plainest, most unavoidable tone she could manage, the tone of someone who would not pretend the answer wasn’t staring …"