Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYPRV6T5N1PNTY6E7369P6

Run Details

Duration:
1m 16s
Cost:
$0.000822
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park after midnight was a damp, living thing. It smelled of wet earth and cold stone, a sharp contrast to the petrol-and-grease scent of the city Rory had left behind. She pushed through a thicket of rhododendron, the branches clawing at her leather jacket, and emerged into the clearing she’d seen only in grainy, frantic photographs. The Fae Grove. It was smaller than she’d imagined. A perfect circle of impossibly green grass, surrounded by a ring of ancient oak trunks that seemed less like trees and more like silent, weathered sentinels. Wildflowers—foxglove, nightshade, something with petals like spilled blood—glowed with a faint, moon-fed luminescence, blooming in defiance of the season. In the center stood three rough-hewn standing stones, their surfaces carved with spirals and knotwork worn smooth by centuries. The boundary. Rory’s breath fogged in the chill. She’d come because of the pendant. Because for three nights now, waking in the flat above Silas’s bar to the sound of the last drunks stumbling home, the stone at her throat had pulsed with a warmth like a slow, steady heartbeat. It had pulled her here, a silent, insistent compass needle. Eva’s texts, frantic and coded, had mentioned this place. *The Grove. Isolde’s place. If you need to disappear, truly disappear, go there. But only at the turning of the moon.* Tonight was the turning. She took a step onto the grass. It was springy, soft, swallowing the sound of her boots. The wrongness hit her immediately. It wasn't a smell or a sight. It was a pressure, a silent hum in the fillings of her teeth, a sensation of being watched from every shadow between the stones. A twig snapped somewhere to her left, back in the rhododendron thicket. Rory froze, her hand going to the warm lump of the Heartstone under her sweater. An animal. A fox, a badger. Richmond Park was full of them. The wind sighed through the oaks, but the air in the Grove itself was still. Dead still. The sighing sound didn’t match the motion of the leaves she could see at the clearing’s edge. They trembled, yes, but in a different rhythm, out of sync. “Just the wind,” she whispered, the words swallowed by the dense air. She moved toward the standing stones. Her reason was simple, a thread she clung to: find a way to sever the connection. The pendant was a gift, an anonymous package left for her at the Golden Empress a month after she’d fled Cardiff. It had saved her life once, glowing like a hot coal when a slick-faced man with Evan’s eyes had followed her down an alley. But gifts from strangers came with strings. Lately, the warmth felt less like protection and more like a tether. A leash someone else was holding. As she reached the central stone, her fingers tracing the cold spiral, she saw it. A flicker of movement at the very corner of her right eye. A shape, darker than the surrounding night, slipping behind one of the oak sentinels. Tall. Too tall for a deer. Her heart hammered against her ribs. She didn’t turn her head. She stood perfectly still, her gaze fixed on the spiral under her fingertips, using her periphery. Nothing. Just the deep black between the trees. A sound then, not from the woods but from the clearing itself. A soft, wet *crunch*. Like someone stepping on a rotten apple. Rory’s blood went cold. She was alone on the perfect grass. She knew she was. She’d swept the entire circle with her eyes. The sound had come from right beside her. She forced herself to look down. At her feet, nestled in the glowing grass, was a cluster of white mushrooms. They were shattered, their caps burst open, oozing a pale, phosphorescent fluid that smoked faintly on the cold ground. They hadn’t been there a moment ago. The pendant flared against her skin, a sudden, painful heat. She gasped, fumbling under her layers to pull it out. The deep crimson gem pulsed with a faint inner light, not reflecting the moon but generating its own. It thrummed in time with the pressure in her teeth. A whisper curled through the still air. Not words. The memory of words, the echo of a sigh given shape. It came from everywhere and nowhere, weaving between the standing stones. It sounded like her name. Not “Rory.” Not “Aurora.” But *Laila*. A name she hadn’t used since she was seven, since the summer she got the crescent scar on her wrist, a name only her mother used when she was very sad or very angry. “No,” she said, louder this time, her voice cracking. She backed away from the stones, her eyes scanning the ring of oaks. The shadows between them seemed deeper now, solid. One of them *moved*. It wasn’t a shift of light. It was a slithering, vertical motion, as if a column of darkness peeled itself away from a tree trunk and slid, soundless, to the next. The wrongness was in the silence. The park around them should have been alive with night sounds—the hoot of an owl, the rustle of creatures in the undergrowth. Here, there was only the hum, the pressure, and the soft, wet sound of things growing and dying too fast. She watched as a trumpet-shaped flower near her foot withered from vibrant purple to desiccated grey in the space of a breath, while another budded, bloomed, and dropped its petals in a silent cascade. She was not alone. The certainty was a stone in her gut. The thing in the shadows was keeping pace with her as she edged along the perimeter of the clearing, putting the standing stones between her and it. She could feel its attention, a cold, pinpoint focus like the touch of an icicle on the nape of her neck. A low, grinding noise started, the sound of stone grating on stone. Rory looked back at the central standing stone. It was turning. Slowly, impossibly, the massive monolith was rotating on its base, the spiral carving now a twisted, spiraling vortex in the moonlight. The Heartstone was burning her now, the silver chain searing her skin. She went to tear it off, but her fingers wouldn’t obey. They clutched the gem, holding it tight, as if it were the only anchor in a tilting world. The whisper came again, clearer now. *Laila. Stay.* From the deepest shadow between two oaks, a shape resolved. It was tall and thin, draped in what looked like tattered cobwebs or moss. It had no face, only a smooth, pale oval where a face should be, reflecting the sickly glow of the dying and blooming flowers. It didn't walk. It drifted, the lower half of its form dissolving into mist and reforming with each movement. Rory’s cool-headedness, her out-of-the-box thinking, shattered. Primal fear, cold and electric, shot down her spine. She turned and ran, not for the rhododendron thicket, but for the opposite side of the Grove, where the trees seemed thinner. The grass, so soft before, tangled around her ankles like clutching fingers. The wildflowers lashed at her calves, their stems suddenly tough as wire. She stumbled, the pendant’s light flaring, casting her own monstrous, leaping shadow ahead of her. The grinding of the stone ceased. The silence that followed was worse. It was the silence of a held breath. She burst through the ring of oaks, not into the familiar park, but into a tunnel of gnarled, blackened branches that hadn't been there before. The path sloped downward, the air growing colder, smelling of deep water and forgotten roots. Behind her, from the Grove, came a single, clear sound. A footstep on the soft, crushing grass.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1304
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count3
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"very"
2"perfectly"
3"slowly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1304
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"perfect"
count2
1
word"sentinels"
count2
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"coded"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count2
10
word"whisper"
count2
11
word"echo"
count1
12
word"scanning"
count1
13
word"silence"
count3
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"searing"
count1
16
word"resolved"
count1
17
word"electric"
count1
18
word"down her spine"
count1
19
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"sentinels"
2"chill"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"coded"
6"trembled"
7"tracing"
8"flicker"
9"shattered"
10"whisper"
11"echo"
12"scanning"
13"silence"
14"could feel"
15"searing"
16"resolved"
17"electric"
18"down her spine"
19"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood went cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences115
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords26
totalWords1294
ratio0.02
matches
0"The Grove. Isolde’s place. If you need to disappear, truly disappear, go there. But only at the turning of the moon."
1"crunch"
2"Laila"
3"moved"
4"Laila. Stay."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1288
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.47
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Rory6
Fae1
Grove5
Silas1
Tonight1
Heartstone2
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff1
Evan1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Golden"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
67.58% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed deeper now, solid"
1"looked like tattered cobwebs or moss"
2"seemed thinner"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords3.091
wordCount1294
matches
0"not from the woods but from the clearing itself"
1"not reflecting the moon but generating its own"
2"not for the rhododendron thicket, but for the opposite side of the Grove"
3"not into the familiar park, but into a tunnel of gnarled, blackened branches"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean44.62
std24.51
cv0.549
sampleLengths
060
13
272
392
453
539
645
712
892
947
1035
1154
1246
1348
1476
159
1656
1782
1812
1948
2044
2141
228
2367
2437
2539
2620
2750
287
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"were shattered"
23.63% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs189
matches
0"was holding"
1"was keeping"
2"was turning"
3"was rotating"
4"was burning"
93.17% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences115
ratio0.017
matches
0"Wildflowers—foxglove, nightshade, something with petals like spilled blood—glowed with a faint, moon-fed luminescence, blooming in defiance of the season."
1"The park around them should have been alive with night sounds—the hoot of an owl, the rustle of creatures in the undergrowth."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1298
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint, moon-fed luminescence,"
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.030046224961479198
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.012326656394453005
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean11.25
std7.61
cv0.676
sampleLengths
012
122
226
33
46
526
619
719
82
96
106
1136
1210
139
142
152
169
1712
187
1910
205
217
2224
2312
2415
252
264
276
2815
292
3017
3111
3212
336
3416
3521
3624
377
3812
396
4015
4112
4214
431
445
456
465
4716
481
497
35.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.30434782608695654
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners35
95.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences105
matches
0"Too tall for a deer."
1"Just the deep black between"
2"Slowly, impossibly, the massive monolith"
ratio0.029
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences105
matches
0"It smelled of wet earth"
1"She pushed through a thicket"
2"It was smaller than she’d"
3"She’d come because of the"
4"It had pulled her here,"
5"She took a step onto"
6"It was springy, soft, swallowing"
7"It wasn't a smell or"
8"It was a pressure, a"
9"They trembled, yes, but in"
10"she whispered, the words swallowed"
11"She moved toward the standing"
12"Her reason was simple, a"
13"It had saved her life"
14"Her heart hammered against her"
15"She didn’t turn her head."
16"She stood perfectly still, her"
17"She was alone on the"
18"She knew she was."
19"She’d swept the entire circle"
ratio0.429
40.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences105
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"It smelled of wet earth"
2"She pushed through a thicket"
3"The Fae Grove."
4"It was smaller than she’d"
5"A perfect circle of impossibly"
6"Wildflowers—foxglove, nightshade, something with petals"
7"Rory’s breath fogged in the"
8"She’d come because of the"
9"It had pulled her here,"
10"Eva’s texts, frantic and coded,"
11"She took a step onto"
12"It was springy, soft, swallowing"
13"The wrongness hit her immediately."
14"It wasn't a smell or"
15"It was a pressure, a"
16"A twig snapped somewhere to"
17"Rory froze, her hand going"
18"A fox, a badger."
19"Richmond Park was full of"
ratio0.838
95.24% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"Because for three nights now,"
1"If you need to disappear,"
ratio0.019
80.20% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"A perfect circle of impossibly green grass, surrounded by a ring of ancient oak trunks that seemed less like trees and more like silent, weathered sentinels."
1"It was a slithering, vertical motion, as if a column of darkness peeled itself away from a tree trunk and slid, soundless, to the next."
2"It drifted, the lower half of its form dissolving into mist and reforming with each movement."
3"She stumbled, the pendant’s light flaring, casting her own monstrous, leaping shadow ahead of her."
4"She burst through the ring of oaks, not into the familiar park, but into a tunnel of gnarled, blackened branches that hadn't been there before."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she whispered, the words swallowed by the dense air"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
74.9228%