| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 73.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1297 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1297 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "perfect" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "coded" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "tracing" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "shattered" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "echo" | | 12 | "scanning" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "searing" | | 16 | "resolved" | | 17 | "electric" | | 18 | "down her spine" | | 19 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 115 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 26 | | totalWords | 1294 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove. Isolde’s place. If you need to disappear, truly disappear, go there. But only at the turning of the moon." | | 1 | "crunch" | | 2 | "Laila" | | 3 | "moved" | | 4 | "Laila. Stay." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1288 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.47 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Rory | 6 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Silas | 1 | | Tonight | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Golden" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 67.58% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed deeper now, solid" | | 1 | "looked like tattered cobwebs or moss" | | 2 | "seemed thinner" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.091 | | wordCount | 1294 | | matches | | 0 | "not from the woods but from the clearing itself" | | 1 | "not reflecting the moon but generating its own" | | 2 | "not for the rhododendron thicket, but for the opposite side of the Grove" | | 3 | "not into the familiar park, but into a tunnel of gnarled, blackened branches" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 44.62 | | std | 24.51 | | cv | 0.549 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 72 | | 3 | 92 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 92 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 76 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 82 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 67 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 39 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | |
| 23.63% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "was keeping" | | 2 | "was turning" | | 3 | "was rotating" | | 4 | "was burning" |
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| 93.17% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 115 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers—foxglove, nightshade, something with petals like spilled blood—glowed with a faint, moon-fed luminescence, blooming in defiance of the season." | | 1 | "The park around them should have been alive with night sounds—the hoot of an owl, the rustle of creatures in the undergrowth." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1298 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "faint, moon-fed luminescence," |
| | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.030046224961479198 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012326656394453005 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 115 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 115 | | mean | 11.25 | | std | 7.61 | | cv | 0.676 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 35.94% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.30434782608695654 | | totalSentences | 115 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 95.24% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Too tall for a deer." | | 1 | "Just the deep black between" | | 2 | "Slowly, impossibly, the massive monolith" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 48.57% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "It smelled of wet earth" | | 1 | "She pushed through a thicket" | | 2 | "It was smaller than she’d" | | 3 | "She’d come because of the" | | 4 | "It had pulled her here," | | 5 | "She took a step onto" | | 6 | "It was springy, soft, swallowing" | | 7 | "It wasn't a smell or" | | 8 | "It was a pressure, a" | | 9 | "They trembled, yes, but in" | | 10 | "she whispered, the words swallowed" | | 11 | "She moved toward the standing" | | 12 | "Her reason was simple, a" | | 13 | "It had saved her life" | | 14 | "Her heart hammered against her" | | 15 | "She didn’t turn her head." | | 16 | "She stood perfectly still, her" | | 17 | "She was alone on the" | | 18 | "She knew she was." | | 19 | "She’d swept the entire circle" |
| | ratio | 0.429 | |
| 40.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "It smelled of wet earth" | | 2 | "She pushed through a thicket" | | 3 | "The Fae Grove." | | 4 | "It was smaller than she’d" | | 5 | "A perfect circle of impossibly" | | 6 | "Wildflowers—foxglove, nightshade, something with petals" | | 7 | "Rory’s breath fogged in the" | | 8 | "She’d come because of the" | | 9 | "It had pulled her here," | | 10 | "Eva’s texts, frantic and coded," | | 11 | "She took a step onto" | | 12 | "It was springy, soft, swallowing" | | 13 | "The wrongness hit her immediately." | | 14 | "It wasn't a smell or" | | 15 | "It was a pressure, a" | | 16 | "A twig snapped somewhere to" | | 17 | "Rory froze, her hand going" | | 18 | "A fox, a badger." | | 19 | "Richmond Park was full of" |
| | ratio | 0.838 | |
| 95.24% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Because for three nights now," | | 1 | "If you need to disappear," |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 80.20% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "A perfect circle of impossibly green grass, surrounded by a ring of ancient oak trunks that seemed less like trees and more like silent, weathered sentinels." | | 1 | "It was a slithering, vertical motion, as if a column of darkness peeled itself away from a tree trunk and slid, soundless, to the next." | | 2 | "It drifted, the lower half of its form dissolving into mist and reforming with each movement." | | 3 | "She stumbled, the pendant’s light flaring, casting her own monstrous, leaping shadow ahead of her." | | 4 | "She burst through the ring of oaks, not into the familiar park, but into a tunnel of gnarled, blackened branches that hadn't been there before." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, the words swallowed by the dense air" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |