Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYPTJNWMSPR1XD9VW2J636

Run Details

Duration:
1m 53s
Cost:
$0.016851
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain fell in sheets. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots cratered the puddles on Camden High Street, each impact sending filthy water arching toward her trousers. She ignored the soak creeping up her calves. Her eyes locked on the figure fifty yards ahead—a man in a charcoal coat who moved with the fluidity of mercury, slipping between late-night pedestrians who stumbled from pubs and curry houses. She pumped her arms. The worn leather watch on her left wrist slid toward her elbow, its familiar weight a tether to the eighteen years of service that had carved the sharp lines of her jaw into permanent resolve. Three years since DS Morris had vanished into darkness like this. Three years of case files gathering dust while the department whispered about stress leave and breakdowns. She knew better. She knew the dark had teeth. The green neon of The Raven's Nest had disappeared behind her seven blocks ago. She’d been watching the entrance from a doorway across the street, collar up against the downpour, when the figure emerged. He’d sensed her immediately—she’d seen it in the snap of his head, the tension in his shoulders. Then he’d run. "Metropolitan Police!" Her voice cracked against the wet stone. The suspect cut left. Quinn followed, her military precision calculating the angle of pursuit. She shaved seconds off the corner, boots squeaking against wet pavement. The alley narrowed. Brick walls hemmed them in, graffiti bleeding down the mortar in the downpour. Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close to her scalp, offered no resistance to the rain; water rivulets traced the contours of her skull and dripped from her brow. The figure didn't break stride. Instead, he accelerated. His coat flared behind him like wings, and for a moment—just a fraction of a heartbeat—Quinn saw something wrong with his silhouette. Too many angles. Too much shadow clinging to his frame where light should have touched. She pushed harder. Her lungs burned. The scar tissue from last year's stabbing pulled tight across her abdomen, a silvered memory of a Kensington ambush that had never made sense until she'd started connecting the dots. Dots that led here, to Camden, to this chase that had started outside a Soho bar with old maps hanging on its walls. The suspect vaulted a chain-link fence. Quinn grabbed the links, metal biting her palms, and hauled herself over. Her trousers snagged. She ripped them free, landed hard on the other side. Pain spiked through her ankle. She ran through it. They emerged onto a side street deserted except for a single streetlamp buzzing its death throes. The light caught the suspect's profile—olive skin, dark curls plastered to his forehead, a flash of silver at his throat. Saint Christopher. She filed the detail away, another piece for the puzzle she'd been assembling since Morris had whispered "the Veil" into his radio three seconds before static swallowed his voice. He darted toward the mouth of an abandoned Tube station. Quinn's breath hitched. She recognized the architecture—the Edwardian facade, the boarded windows, the ghost of white tiles visible where the plywood had peeled. This station had closed in the seventies, buried under redevelopment plans that never materialized. But the boards over the entrance hung loose tonight. One plank swung on a single nail, creaking in the wind that tunneled down from the High Street. The suspect vanished into the darkness beyond. She reached the entrance thirty seconds later. Her hand found the loose plank. Cold air exhaled from the gap, carrying scents of copper and myrrh and something else—something that smelled like ozone before a lightning strike. Her fingers traced the wood. Splinters bit her skin. Below, she heard footsteps descending. Then voices. Many voices. The susurration of commerce, but wrong somehow. The rhythms didn't match any market she'd ever surveilled. No casual browsing. No laughter. Just urgent whispers and the clink of glass on glass. Quinn checked her watch. The dial glowed 11:47. The full moon hung somewhere above the cloud cover; she could feel its pull in her joints, an ache she'd learned to associate with the strange cases. The ones that ended with reports redacted by men in suits who didn't exist. She peered through the gap. Stairs descended into pitch, broken by intermittent flashes of bioluminescent blue that pulsed against the tile walls. She saw shadows moving—too tall, too angular, wrong proportions that triggered primal alarms in her hindbrain. She saw a woman with serpentine hair haggling over a jar that glowed with imprisoned starlight. She saw a man hand over what looked like a vertebra—white and carved with sigils—to a guard who stepped aside and let him pass. Bone token. Entry requirement. Quinn had none. She had her service weapon, cold and heavy against her ribs. She had eighteen years of instinct. She had the memory of Morris's last transmission playing on loop in her temporal lobe. The rain intensified behind her, drumming a funeral march on the pavement. Water streamed down her face, salt on her lips. She could retreat. Call it in. Wait for backup that would arrive too late, that would find nothing but rats and rust. She could return to her flat in Clapham, pour whiskey into a tumbler, and pretend the world consisted only of what the Metropolitan Police handbook described. Or she could step into the dark. Her hand moved to the loose plank. She pulled. The nail screeched in protest, then surrendered. The opening widened. The scent of the underground rushed up to meet her—ancient and electric and hungry. From below came the bustle of the Veil Market, stripped of humanity. No music. No casual conversation. Just the snap of transactions, the rustle of fabric that sounded too much like scales, the wet clicking of tongues that hadn't spoken English in centuries, or ever. Quinn adjusted her stance. Her sharp jaw tightened. She thought of the case files stacked on her desk, each one marked with Morris's handwriting. She thought of the Saint Christopher medallion she'd found in his locker, still warm when she'd retrieved it, though he'd been missing six hours. She thought of the leather watch on her wrist, ticking away the seconds of her life she'd dedicated to finding truth in a city built on secrets. Her fingers curled around the plank's edge. Splinters bit deep. She didn't flinch. The darkness below shifted. Something with too many joints scuttled across her peripheral vision. The scent of alchemical fires—sulfur and lavender—burned her nostrils. She had no bone token. She had no sanction. She had only the certainty that if she turned back now, she would never learn what had swallowed DS Morris whole, and the next body might be hers. Quinn gripped her service weapon, checked the chamber by feel alone. The metal was cold. Real. Grounding. Below, the suspect's footsteps faded into the cacophony of the Market. Soon, he would be gone. The trail would vanish like Morris had vanished. She pulled the plank wider. The gap gaped, dark and inviting as a grave. She stepped forward.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1191
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1191
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"resolve"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"calculating"
count1
5
word"traced"
count2
6
word"facade"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count2
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"electric"
count1
11
word"cacophony"
count1
12
word"grave"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"resolve"
3"tension"
4"calculating"
5"traced"
6"facade"
7"footsteps"
8"could feel"
9"pulsed"
10"electric"
11"cacophony"
12"grave"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences115
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1174
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1170
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn9
Camden2
High2
Street2
Morris6
Raven1
Nest1
Kensington1
Soho1
Christopher2
Tube1
Edwardian1
Clapham1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Veil1
Market2
English1
Saint2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Raven"
4"Nest"
5"Christopher"
6"Market"
7"Saint"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Kensington"
4"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
75.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smelled like ozone before a lightning stri"
1"looked like a vertebra—white and carved w"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1174
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean39.13
std24.72
cv0.632
sampleLengths
065
175
254
32
475
545
659
740
867
910
1064
117
1245
1340
1449
1578
164
1735
1869
197
2033
2145
2275
2313
2423
2537
2617
2724
2814
293
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs197
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences116
ratio0.103
matches
0"Her eyes locked on the figure fifty yards ahead—a man in a charcoal coat who moved with the fluidity of mercury, slipping between late-night pedestrians who stumbled from pubs and curry houses."
1"He’d sensed her immediately—she’d seen it in the snap of his head, the tension in his shoulders."
2"Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close to her scalp, offered no resistance to the rain; water rivulets traced the contours of her skull and dripped from her brow."
3"His coat flared behind him like wings, and for a moment—just a fraction of a heartbeat—Quinn saw something wrong with his silhouette."
4"The light caught the suspect's profile—olive skin, dark curls plastered to his forehead, a flash of silver at his throat."
5"She recognized the architecture—the Edwardian facade, the boarded windows, the ghost of white tiles visible where the plywood had peeled."
6"Cold air exhaled from the gap, carrying scents of copper and myrrh and something else—something that smelled like ozone before a lightning strike."
7"The full moon hung somewhere above the cloud cover; she could feel its pull in her joints, an ache she'd learned to associate with the strange cases."
8"She saw shadows moving—too tall, too angular, wrong proportions that triggered primal alarms in her hindbrain."
9"She saw a man hand over what looked like a vertebra—white and carved with sigils—to a guard who stepped aside and let him pass."
10"The scent of the underground rushed up to meet her—ancient and electric and hungry."
11"The scent of alchemical fires—sulfur and lavender—burned her nostrils."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1187
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.02864363942712721
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002527379949452401
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean10.12
std8.2
cv0.81
sampleLengths
05
120
28
332
44
535
611
716
83
96
1014
1120
1217
133
142
157
164
1710
1811
193
2013
2127
225
233
2422
253
2612
273
283
2930
3023
316
3212
333
3410
355
364
3716
3820
392
4029
4110
423
4320
4414
459
4618
477
487
496
39.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.3275862068965517
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences105
matches
0"Then he’d run."
1"Instead, he accelerated."
2"Too many angles."
3"Too much shadow clinging to"
4"Just urgent whispers and the"
5"Just the snap of transactions,"
ratio0.057
52.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences105
matches
0"She ignored the soak creeping"
1"Her eyes locked on the"
2"She pumped her arms."
3"She knew better."
4"She knew the dark had"
5"She’d been watching the entrance"
6"He’d sensed her immediately—she’d seen"
7"Her voice cracked against the"
8"She shaved seconds off the"
9"Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close"
10"His coat flared behind him"
11"She pushed harder."
12"Her lungs burned."
13"Her trousers snagged."
14"She ripped them free, landed"
15"She ran through it."
16"They emerged onto a side"
17"She filed the detail away,"
18"He darted toward the mouth"
19"She recognized the architecture—the Edwardian"
ratio0.419
55.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences105
matches
0"The rain fell in sheets."
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots cratered"
2"She ignored the soak creeping"
3"Her eyes locked on the"
4"She pumped her arms."
5"The worn leather watch on"
6"She knew better."
7"She knew the dark had"
8"The green neon of The"
9"She’d been watching the entrance"
10"He’d sensed her immediately—she’d seen"
11"Her voice cracked against the"
12"The suspect cut left."
13"Quinn followed, her military precision"
14"She shaved seconds off the"
15"The alley narrowed."
16"Brick walls hemmed them in,"
17"Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close"
18"The figure didn't break stride."
19"His coat flared behind him"
ratio0.81
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Her eyes locked on the figure fifty yards ahead—a man in a charcoal coat who moved with the fluidity of mercury, slipping between late-night pedestrians who stu…"
1"The worn leather watch on her left wrist slid toward her elbow, its familiar weight a tether to the eighteen years of service that had carved the sharp lines of…"
2"The scar tissue from last year's stabbing pulled tight across her abdomen, a silvered memory of a Kensington ambush that had never made sense until she'd starte…"
3"Cold air exhaled from the gap, carrying scents of copper and myrrh and something else—something that smelled like ozone before a lightning strike."
4"She saw shadows moving—too tall, too angular, wrong proportions that triggered primal alarms in her hindbrain."
5"She saw a woman with serpentine hair haggling over a jar that glowed with imprisoned starlight."
6"Just the snap of transactions, the rustle of fabric that sounded too much like scales, the wet clicking of tongues that hadn't spoken English in centuries, or e…"
7"She thought of the leather watch on her wrist, ticking away the seconds of her life she'd dedicated to finding truth in a city built on secrets."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.7637%