| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.545 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.06% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1254 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1254 | | totalAiIsms | 38 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "oppressive" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "scanned" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "gloom" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "racing" | | 12 | "flicker" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "pounding" | | 15 | "could feel" | | 16 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "f with fear" | | 1 | "e with disbelief" |
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| 14.29% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "managed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1250 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1221 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.98 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 12 | | Rory | 8 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 68.48% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a promise, or maybe a warning" | | 1 | "growl that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 2 | "as though studying her, before taking a single step forward" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1250 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 41.67 | | std | 21.89 | | cv | 0.525 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 76 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 78 | | 7 | 59 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 60 | | 10 | 74 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 59 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 47 | | 26 | 40 | | 27 | 37 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 49 |
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| 94.74% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "been dipped" | | 1 | "were gone" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 83.55% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 229 | | matches | | 0 | "was imagining" | | 1 | "was messing" | | 2 | "were deafening" | | 3 | "was standing" |
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| 61.22% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "A sound cut through the silence—a low, guttural growl that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once." | | 1 | "There was nothing there—just shadows and trees and the endless, oppressive dark." | | 2 | "Her eyes snapped open just as something moved in front of her—a figure, tall and shadowed, standing between the trees." |
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| 80.14% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1225 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "resting warm against her" | | 1 | "louder, denser, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 60 | | adverbRatio | 0.04897959183673469 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017959183673469388 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 11.9 | | std | 5.16 | | cv | 0.433 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 34.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.24761904761904763 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 68.03% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Only a wall of trees" | | 1 | "Just the trees, their branches" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 52.65% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here for" | | 1 | "She glanced over her shoulder," | | 2 | "she muttered under her breath," | | 3 | "She moved forward, her boots" | | 4 | "She ignored them, focusing on" | | 5 | "It pulsed rhythmically now, a" | | 6 | "Her breath caught in her" | | 7 | "She was imagining things, that" | | 8 | "She pressed on, her pace" | | 9 | "Her breath misted in front" | | 10 | "She rubbed her arms, her" | | 11 | "She strained her eyes, trying" | | 12 | "she demanded, her voice steadier" | | 13 | "Its warmth surged, pulsing against" | | 14 | "She scanned the shadows again," | | 15 | "She turned sharply, but whatever" | | 16 | "Her breath came in short," | | 17 | "She forced herself to move" | | 18 | "She swore she heard her" | | 19 | "She froze, her blood turning" |
| | ratio | 0.418 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 92 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter tightened her jacket" | | 1 | "The air hummed with a" | | 2 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their" | | 4 | "She had come here for" | | 5 | "The pendant had led her," | | 6 | "The weight of it against" | | 7 | "Rory wasn’t sure which anymore." | | 8 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 9 | "The hum in the air" | | 10 | "The Grove seemed to stretch" | | 11 | "She glanced over her shoulder," | | 12 | "she muttered under her breath," | | 13 | "She moved forward, her boots" | | 14 | "The wildflowers seemed to lean" | | 15 | "She ignored them, focusing on" | | 16 | "It pulsed rhythmically now, a" | | 17 | "A rustle in the undergrowth" | | 18 | "Her breath caught in her" | | 19 | "The trees stood silent, their" |
| | ratio | 0.939 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 68.23% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hummed with a low, almost imperceptible vibration that made her teeth ache." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their petals unnaturally vibrant even in the dim light, as though they’d been dipped in moonlight itself." | | 2 | "The words echoed strangely, bouncing off the trees in a way that made them sound distorted, almost alien." | | 3 | "The trees seemed to shift around her, their branches twisting and curling as though alive." | | 4 | "Just the trees, their branches reaching like claws, their shadows twisting and writhing like living things." | | 5 | "The wildflowers wilted, their petals curling inward as though ashamed." | | 6 | "The warmth of the pendant spread through her chest, soothing her racing heart." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she demanded, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 1 | "she called, her voice trembling despite her best efforts" | | 2 | "she shouted, her voice breaking" | | 3 | "she whispered, her voice barely audible" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "she shouted (shout)" | | 4 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.545 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.833 | | effectiveRatio | 0.833 | |