Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYQ6A2YAP6KNAGF196S2FH

Run Details

Duration:
58.6s
Cost:
$0.011257
Provider:
Venice

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement of Soho, turning the uneven cobblestones into slick, black mirrors. Detective Harlow Quinn vaulted a pile of refuse bags, the plastic tearing beneath her boots, scattering wet rot across the alley. Her breath hitched in her chest, sharp and hot, but she kept her eyes locked on the figure darting ahead. The suspect wore a oversized hoodie, sodden and clinging to a wiry frame. He wasn’t running with the panic of a petty thief; he moved with the desperate precision of prey that knew exactly what kind of predator hunted him. Quinn checked her wrist. The worn leather strap of her watch was dark with water, but the face glowed faint in the gloom. Past midnight. The streets were empty, save for the occasional taxi blaring past on the main thoroughfare. He feinted left, towards a dead end of brickwork, then scrambled up a rusted drainpipe. Quinn skidded to a halt, mud splashing her trench coat. She watched him pull himself onto the roof. Not fast enough. She took a running start, finding purchase on the damp brick, and hauled herself up. Her muscles burned, shoulders screaming as she swung a leg over the parapet. He was already gone, vanished into the labyrinth of rooftops. She stood, wiping rain from her eyes. The salt-and-pepper stubble on her sharp jaw usually made her look imposing, but tonight she just felt cold. Down below, the neon green sign of The Raven's Nest buzzed in the drizzle. Silas’s place. The centre of the web. A noise drew her attention. Metal grating shifting. Over the edge of the next building. She sprinted, leaping the narrow gap between the terraces. Her boots landed heavily on the tarred gravel. Below, the hooded figure had dropped into a service yard leading to the old Tube stations. Quinn peered over the ledge. He stood before a boarded-up entrance. An abandoned station, condemned decades ago. He didn’t force the boards. He knocked. Three distinct raps, rhythmic and practiced. A section of the wood slid aside. A hand伸出 from the darkness, pale under the streetlights. The hooded figure pressed something into the hand—a small, white object. A token carved from bone. Quinn’s heart hammered against her ribs. This wasn’t a drug deal. It was something else. She had seen these signs before, in the file of DS Morris. The unexplained circumstances. The blood that didn’t match the victims. The boards groaned open, revealing a gaping maw of darkness. The suspect slipped inside. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She moved to the fire escape, descending the ladder in rapid clatter of metal on metal. She hit the pavement running. The entrance yawned before her, smelling of ozone and damp earth. She stepped into the tunnel. The air grew heavy, stifling. The darkness here wasn't merely the absence of light; it felt like a physical weight, pressing against her skin. Ahead, the faint flicker of torchlight bobbed around a bend. She moved silently, hand hovering over the grip of her service weapon. She cleared the bend and stopped. The tunnel opened up. It wasn’t a maintenance room. It was a bazaar. The Veil Market. Stalls carved out of the rough rock walls lined a subterranean cavern. The ceiling was lost in shadows, illuminated only by the strange, bioluminescent glow of the merchandise. Quinn stared, her analytical mind scrambling to categorize the impossible. On a table to her left, jars containing shifting smoke sat next to piles of teeth that looked human but far too large. A vendor, whose skin seemed to ripple like oil on water, haggled with a woman wrapped in rags. No one screamed. No one ran. They simply watched her with the detached curiosity of fish observing a fly fallen into their tank. Quinn spotted the hoodie. He was at a stall further down, panting, clutching his side. A man stood opposite him. This new figure turned. He wore a crisp, white shirt stained with dark fluids, sleeves rolled to the elbows. Olive skin, dark curly hair. A Saint Christopher medallion glinted at his throat. Tomás Herrera. Quinn knew the face from the intelligence reports. The former paramedic. The back-alley butcher. The suspect grabbed Herrera by the collar. Herrera didn't flinch. He simply looked at the boy’s side, where a dark stain was spreading. He reached out, his fingers brushing the wound. Quinn stepped forward, her boots crunching on the gravelly floor. "Metropolitan Police!" Quinn’s voice cut through the hum of the market. "Nobody move!" The crowd shifted, a ripple of unease passing through them. The vendor with the rippling skin slipped a dagger under his table. Herrera didn't turn. He continued to inspect the wound on the suspect’s ribs. "Step away from him, Herrera." The paramedic sighed, a sound of long-suffering patience. He finally turned, warm brown eyes meeting Quinn’s gaze. He held up his hands. They were smeared with red, but there was something else in the blood. Silver flecks. "Detective," Herrera said. His accent was thick, lilting, Seville sunshine in a damp London basement. "You are trespassing." "I'm pursuing a suspect." Quinn kept her weapon raised but low, ready. "He’s under arrest. And you’re coming in for questioning." The hooded figure whimpered and tried to back away, but Herrera caught his arm, not with aggression, but with a gentle, firm grip. "He is hurt," Herrera said. "If you take him now, he dies before you reach the street." "He’s a criminal." "He is a courier. And he has been cut by a shade blade." Herrera gestured to the wound. Quinn risked a glance. The skin around the gash wasn't knitting; it was turning black, veins spreading like ink in water. She had seen wounds like this once before. On Morris. "Fix him," Quinn said, keeping her aim steady. "Then we talk." Herrera turned back to the boy. He reached into a leather satchel at his waist and pulled out a vial of glowing blue liquid. He uncorked it with his teeth. "Drink." The boy hesitated. Herrera tipped the vial to his lips. The boy gagged, swallowed, and slumped against the table. The black veins receded, pulling back like frightened worms. Quinn watched the exchange with a cold knot forming in her stomach. This wasn't medicine. It was alchemy. Magic. The things she had spent three years denying were real, standing right in front of her. "Who supplied the blade?" Quinn asked. Herrera wiped his hands on a rag, revealing a long, pale scar running along his left forearm. A knife attack, the file said. Looked more like a claw mark. "That is not your concern," Herrera said. "This place is not for your kind, Detective. You walk on the edge of a knife you cannot see." "I see plenty." She gestured to the stalls around them. "I see unlicensed pharmaceuticals. I see contraband." "You see what your mind allows you to see." Herrera walked around the table, closing the distance between them. He didn't walk with a fighter's stance, but with the calm of a man who knows death intimately and has already dismissed it. "Go back upstairs. The rain is washing the streets clean. Forget you saw the boy." "I can't do that." "Then you have a choice." Herrera stopped five feet away. He gestured deeper into the market, past the stalls, towards a tunnel that sloped downward into absolute darkness. "He is running to the Deep Wards. You follow him there, and you will not find your way back. You will become part of the inventory." Quinn looked past him. The boy had recovered enough to stand. He looked at Quinn, terror in his eyes, then bolted toward the dark tunnel. He vanished into the black. "Last chance," Herrera said softly. "The Market moves at the full moon. You have until dawn to find your way out, or you stay until the next cycle. If you go down there, there is no law. No backup. Just us." The silence of the cavern stretched tight. The oil-skinned vendor laughed, a wet, gurgling sound. Other patrons whispered, eyes glinting in the semi-darkness. Quinn checked her watch again. The second hand ticked, relentless. She holstered her weapon. She wasn't here to arrest a ghost. She was here to find the truth about Morris. She looked at the dark tunnel where the suspect had fled, then back at Herrera's impassive face. "If I go down there," Quinn said, "are you coming with me?" Herrera smiled. It wasn't a friendly smile. "No. But I will be the one who stitches you back together when you return. If there is enough left to stitch." Quinn turned toward the tunnel. The air coming from it was freezing, carrying the scent of old copper and something rotting. She took a deep breath of the stale, recycled air and stepped into the unknown.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Herrera walked around [around]"
1"Herrera said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.143
96.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1480
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1480
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"predator"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"imposing"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"maw"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"predator"
1"gloom"
2"imposing"
3"rhythmic"
4"maw"
5"weight"
6"flicker"
7"stomach"
8"silence"
9"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences146
matches
0"a ripple of unease"
93.93% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences146
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
99.16% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences161
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0.006
matches
0"A hand伸出 from the darkness, pale under the streetlights."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1472
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1242
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.77
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn22
Raven1
Nest1
Tube1
Morris3
Veil1
Market1
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera17
Seville1
London1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Morris"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Herrera"
places
0"Soho"
1"Seville"
2"London"
globalScore0.614
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a physical weight, pressing a"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.679
wordCount1472
matches
0"not with aggression, but with a gentle, firm grip"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences161
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean24.95
std13.58
cv0.544
sampleLengths
055
140
240
336
438
546
615
733
830
916
1016
1137
1214
1335
1439
1518
1613
173
1838
1941
2023
2120
2232
2316
2431
2510
2613
2735
285
2937
3018
3121
3223
3317
343
3518
3631
3711
3830
391
4028
4135
426
4329
4426
4517
4657
474
4854
4930
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences146
matches
0"was lost"
1"were smeared"
80.95% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs224
matches
0"wasn’t running"
1"was spreading"
2"was turning"
71.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences161
ratio0.025
matches
0"He wasn’t running with the panic of a petty thief; he moved with the desperate precision of prey that knew exactly what kind of predator hunted him."
1"The hooded figure pressed something into the hand—a small, white object."
2"The darkness here wasn't merely the absence of light; it felt like a physical weight, pressing against her skin."
3"The skin around the gash wasn't knitting; it was turning black, veins spreading like ink in water."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1250
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.0304
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.012
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences161
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences161
mean9.14
std6.13
cv0.671
sampleLengths
014
121
220
313
427
54
619
72
815
915
1010
118
123
1315
1413
1510
167
1718
1814
192
205
215
223
237
249
258
2616
275
286
296
305
312
326
337
349
3511
365
376
385
394
4012
413
427
4310
444
453
4616
475
4811
495
33.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats26
diversityRatio0.2795031055900621
totalSentences161
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
ratio0
81.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences133
matches
0"Her breath hitched in her"
1"He wasn’t running with the"
2"He feinted left, towards a"
3"She watched him pull himself"
4"She took a running start,"
5"Her muscles burned, shoulders screaming"
6"He was already gone, vanished"
7"She stood, wiping rain from"
8"She sprinted, leaping the narrow"
9"Her boots landed heavily on"
10"He stood before a boarded-up"
11"He didn’t force the boards."
12"It was something else."
13"She had seen these signs"
14"She moved to the fire"
15"She hit the pavement running."
16"She stepped into the tunnel."
17"She moved silently, hand hovering"
18"She cleared the bend and"
19"It wasn’t a maintenance room."
ratio0.346
5.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount121
totalSentences133
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn vaulted a"
1"Her breath hitched in her"
2"The suspect wore a oversized"
3"He wasn’t running with the"
4"Quinn checked her wrist."
5"The worn leather strap of"
6"The streets were empty, save"
7"He feinted left, towards a"
8"Quinn skidded to a halt,"
9"She watched him pull himself"
10"She took a running start,"
11"Her muscles burned, shoulders screaming"
12"He was already gone, vanished"
13"She stood, wiping rain from"
14"The salt-and-pepper stubble on her"
15"The centre of the web."
16"A noise drew her attention."
17"Metal grating shifting."
18"She sprinted, leaping the narrow"
19"Her boots landed heavily on"
ratio0.91
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn vaulted a pile of refuse bags, the plastic tearing beneath her boots, scattering wet rot across the alley."
1"He wasn’t running with the panic of a petty thief; he moved with the desperate precision of prey that knew exactly what kind of predator hunted him."
2"On a table to her left, jars containing shifting smoke sat next to piles of teeth that looked human but far too large."
3"He didn't walk with a fighter's stance, but with the calm of a man who knows death intimately and has already dismissed it."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn kept, ready"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.6301%