Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYQ6HBBYGCGMFFNTZ7PXXG

Run Details

Duration:
3m 49s
Cost:
$0.001002
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The black iron gate groaned on rusted hinges. Rory shoved it open just wide enough to slip through, the sound too loud in the damp, still air of the park. She’d been here once before, in daylight. Eva had brought her, laughing, weaving between the ancient oaks, promising magic. It had just looked like a nice clearing then. Now, under a moonless sky, Richmond Park was a sea of ink, and the Fae Grove was a darker stain within it. She’d come back for Eva’s bracelet. A stupid, sentimental thing, a thin silver chain with a charm shaped like a music note. Eva had lost it last time they were here, laughing too hard to notice it slip from her wrist. Rory had seen it glint in the ferns but hadn’t bothered to pick it up. Now Eva was gone—not dead, just gone, vanished from her flat without a trace three days ago—and the bracelet felt like the last thread. Rory needed a thread. The standing stones were easy to find, even in the dark. They weren’t just stones; they were the petrified remains of enormous oaks, their bark-like textures frozen in grey stone, arranged in a rough circle. Passing between them was like pushing through a curtain of cold, thick water. The air inside the grove was different. Richer. Sweet with the scent of night-blooming flowers that had no business flowering in autumn. The wildflowers Eva had admired were still there, pale blobs of white and blue glowing with their own faint light against the dark grass. She flicked on her phone’s torch. The beam carved a shaky tunnel through the gloom, illuminating dewdrops on spiderwebs strung between ferns. The light felt invasive, a trespass. She switched it off, letting her eyes adjust. The grove’s own phosphorescence emerged—the soft glow of the flowers, a faint green shimmer from the lichen on the stones, the distant, cold gleam of stars seen through a gap in the canopy that hadn’t been there a moment ago. She walked to the center of the clearing, her trainers silent on the thick moss. This was where they’d sat. She crouched, sweeping her hands through the cool, damp grass. Her fingers brushed something metallic. The bracelet. She closed her fist around it, the tiny music note digging into her palm. A wave of relief, sharp and surprising, hit her. Then the pendant against her chest pulsed. It wasn’t a heartbeat. It was a sudden, localized flare of warmth, like a coal breathed to life beneath her sweater. She clutched at it through her clothes. The deep crimson gemstone, usually cool against her skin, was radiating a gentle heat. It cast a faint, bloody light onto her fingers. The instructions from the anonymous note left in her delivery bag had been simple: *Wear it. It will warn you.* She hadn’t asked what it would warn her about. A twig snapped. Her head jerked up. The sound came from the tree line, just beyond the northernmost standing stone. Not an animal sound. Too deliberate, too weighty. She held her breath, listening. The grove was never silent; there was always the whisper of leaves, the hum of insects. Now, there was nothing. An absolute, waiting quiet. She stood up slowly, pocketing the bracelet. The pendant’s warmth faded back to a dull, persistent thrum. A warning, then a retreat. She took a step back toward the way she’d come. From her left, a soft, wet sound. Like a foot being pulled from deep mud. She froze, her eyes straining. Nothing but shifting shadows. “Hello?” Her voice was thin, swallowed by the dense air. No answer. The silence pressed in again, heavier. Then the whispers started. Not from one direction. They seemed to come from the ground, from the air, from inside her own head. They were sibilant, wordless, the sound of dry leaves skittering over stone. They coiled around the edges of the clearing. Rory spun, trying to pinpoint the source, but it moved with her, always just behind her line of sight. A shape flitted between two stones. Tall, impossibly slender, a cutout of deeper darkness. It was there and then it was gone, so fast she doubted her eyes. The whispers sharpened, gained a teasing, melodic quality. They were laughing. “Who’s there?” she demanded, forcing steel into her tone. “Show yourself.” The laughter died. In its place, a single, clear note rang out, high and pure and utterly alien. It was the sound Eva’s charm might make if it could sing. It hung in the air, vibrating, and every flower in the grove turned toward it, their glowing faces like a crowd of pale, attentive spectators. The pendant burned. A searing, urgent heat that made her gasp. She fumbled with her collar, pulling the stone out. It wasn’t just glowing now; it was lit from within, pulsing with a slow, rhythmic crimson light that painted the moss and her own hands in shades of old blood. Something moved in the periphery of her vision, not flitting this time but gliding. She turned her head slowly, not wanting to startle whatever it was. Between the stones, a figure stood. It was tall and willowy, draped in shadows that clung to it like a robe. Its face was a pale oval, featureless save for two points of cold, blue light where eyes should be. It didn’t move. It just watched. The whispering began again, louder now, forming half-words she almost understood. *Stay… play… stray…* Rory took a step backward. The figure did not move. Another step. Her heel sank into something soft and wet. She looked down. The moss where she’d been standing was dry. Where she stood now, it was soaking, a dark patch spreading around her foot like a stain. She yanked her foot free with a wet squelch. When she looked up, the figure was closer. Not by walking. It was just nearer, as if the space between them had collapsed. It was now halfway across the clearing, its lightless eyes fixed on the Heartstone pulsing in her fist. The whispering became a chorus, a hundred voices murmuring in a language of rustling branches and trickling water. She caught a single word, clear as a bell amidst the chaos: *Mine.* The pendant wasn’t just a warning anymore. It was a beacon. She turned and ran. The standing stones seemed to shift as she sprinted toward them. The gap she’d entered through was no longer where it should be. The circle had tightened. The petrified trees loomed taller, their stony branches weaving together into a cage. She could see the ordinary darkness of Richmond Park beyond, but the way was barred. The wet, pulling sound came again, right behind her. She didn’t look back. She veered left, ducking under a low, twisted arch formed by two stones. The air here was frigid, and her breath plumed white. The whispering was inside the arch with her, bouncing off the stone, disorienting. She burst out the other side into the center of the grove again. She was running in circles. The figure stood in the exact spot where she’d found the bracelet. It was reaching down, its long, slender fingers—too many joints, too long—brushing the grass where she had crouched. It picked up something she’d missed: a hairpin, hers, fallen from her hair. It held the pin up to the starlight, turning it over. Then its head swiveled toward her. The blue points of light flared. Rory’s heart hammered against her ribs. She was trapped, panting, the warm pulse of the pendant the only constant in a world that had turned liquid and strange. The thing began to move toward her, not gliding now, but with a terrible, deliberate grace, each step silent. The whispering rose to a crescendo, a maddening, beautiful song that promised sleep, promised an end to running. She fumbled for her phone, her fingers numb. She swiped the screen, the light blinding. She pointed it at the advancing figure. The beam hit it full in the face. There was no face. Just a smooth, bone-white surface, like polished bark, and those two burning cobalt holes. It didn’t flinch. It didn’t stop. But in the harsh white light, Rory saw the truth. The figure wasn’t wearing shadows; its edges bled into the darkness, fraying like smoke. It was less a body and more a concentration of the grove’s wrongness, a shape cut from the fabric of this place. And it was between her and every exit. The singing coiled around her, sweet and heavy. Her limbs felt leaden. The urge to sit down in the soft moss, to listen, to let the song wash over her, was almost overpowering. The warmth of the pendant against her sternum was the only anchor. Then the song changed. A discordant note sliced through the melody. The figure halted, its head tilting like a bird’s. From outside the stone circle, from the real world, came a sound. The distant, angry buzz of a motorbike engine. A shouted laugh. Human sounds. Ordinary life. The connection shattered. The figure’s form wavered, the shadows that composed it thinning like mist in a sudden wind. The blue lights in its sockets flickered, dimmed. Rory didn’t wait. She turned and ran not for the stones, but for the space between them where the motorbike noise was loudest. She threw herself forward, not caring if it was stone or air. She stumbled, fell, and sprawled onto hard, cold earth. The scent of flowers and rich soil was gone, replaced by the smell of damp leaves and car exhaust. The whispers cut off as if a door had been slammed. She was on her hands and knees on a gravel path in Richmond Park, the iron gate ten feet behind her. The city glow painted the low clouds orange. She scrambled to her feet, her body trembling. She looked back at the grove. The standing stones were just vague, dark shapes in the night. No light came from within. No sound. It was just a copse of trees. She clutched the silver bracelet in one pocket. With her other hand, she pressed the Heartstone pendant against her skin. It was cool again, inert. A lifeless piece of crimson crystal on a silver chain. The motorbike sound faded into the distance. The normal night settled around her, cold and mundane and safe. She started walking, forcing one foot in front of the other, not yet running, not daring to look back again. The crescent scar on her wrist ached with a old, familiar pain.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:43:20.436Z" 2/19/2026, 12:43:20 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1774
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1774
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"charm"
count2
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count3
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"searing"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"amidst"
count1
11
word"beacon"
count1
12
word"loomed"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
14
word"shattered"
count1
15
word"wavered"
count1
16
word"flickered"
count1
17
word"crystal"
count1
18
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"charm"
1"glint"
2"flicked"
3"gloom"
4"pulsed"
5"warmth"
6"whisper"
7"silence"
8"searing"
9"rhythmic"
10"amidst"
11"beacon"
12"loomed"
13"pulse"
14"shattered"
15"wavered"
16"flickered"
17"crystal"
18"familiar"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"wave of emotion"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"A wave of relief"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences178
matches
0"A wave of relief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences178
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences179
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords10
totalWords1766
ratio0.006
matches
0"Wear it. It will warn you."
1"Stay… play… stray…"
2"Mine."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1761
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.45
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Richmond3
Park3
Fae1
Grove1
Eva6
Rory8
Heartstone2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Heartstone"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences128
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a nice clearing then"
1"felt like the last thread"
30.12% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.699
wordCount1766
matches
0"not flitting this time but gliding"
1"not gliding now, but with a terrible, deliberate grace, each step silent"
2"not for the stones, but for the space between them"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences179
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean37.57
std24.81
cv0.66
sampleLengths
080
184
294
376
467
580
63
754
832
924
1010
118
124
1358
1439
1511
1655
1750
1826
196
2054
2110
2247
2341
2431
2511
264
2755
2849
2918
3054
3112
3265
3322
348
3570
368
3745
3820
3927
4027
4135
4268
4339
4435
4518
4632
89.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences178
matches
0"was gone"
1"being pulled"
2"was gone"
3"was lit"
4"was barred"
5"was trapped"
6"was gone"
7"been slammed"
64.41% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs295
matches
0"was radiating"
1"were laughing"
2"was soaking"
3"was running"
4"was reaching"
5"wasn’t wearing"
31.13% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences179
ratio0.039
matches
0"Now Eva was gone—not dead, just gone, vanished from her flat without a trace three days ago—and the bracelet felt like the last thread."
1"They weren’t just stones; they were the petrified remains of enormous oaks, their bark-like textures frozen in grey stone, arranged in a rough circle."
2"The grove’s own phosphorescence emerged—the soft glow of the flowers, a faint green shimmer from the lichen on the stones, the distant, cold gleam of stars seen through a gap in the canopy that hadn’t been there a moment ago."
3"The grove was never silent; there was always the whisper of leaves, the hum of insects."
4"It wasn’t just glowing now; it was lit from within, pulsing with a slow, rhythmic crimson light that painted the moss and her own hands in shades of old blood."
5"It was reaching down, its long, slender fingers—too many joints, too long—brushing the grass where she had crouched."
6"The figure wasn’t wearing shadows; its edges bled into the darkness, fraying like smoke."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1769
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"smooth, bone-white surface,"
adverbCount69
adverbRatio0.03900508762012436
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00395703787450537
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences179
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences179
mean9.87
std6.29
cv0.638
sampleLengths
08
122
27
312
49
522
66
716
819
915
1024
114
1211
1324
1413
157
161
1714
1824
196
2016
216
228
2340
2415
255
2610
275
282
2914
309
317
324
3317
347
3514
369
3716
3813
393
404
4113
424
434
445
4516
464
474
487
4910
34.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats28
diversityRatio0.2346368715083799
totalSentences179
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences168
matches
0"Then the pendant against her"
1"Too deliberate, too weighty."
2"Then the whispers started."
3"Then its head swiveled toward"
4"Just a smooth, bone-white surface,"
5"Then the song changed."
ratio0.036
53.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount70
totalSentences168
matches
0"She’d been here once before,"
1"It had just looked like"
2"She’d come back for Eva’s"
3"They weren’t just stones; they"
4"She flicked on her phone’s"
5"She switched it off, letting"
6"She walked to the center"
7"She crouched, sweeping her hands"
8"Her fingers brushed something metallic."
9"She closed her fist around"
10"It wasn’t a heartbeat."
11"It was a sudden, localized"
12"She clutched at it through"
13"It cast a faint, bloody"
14"It will warn you.* She"
15"Her head jerked up."
16"She held her breath, listening."
17"She stood up slowly, pocketing"
18"She took a step back"
19"She froze, her eyes straining."
ratio0.417
40.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount141
totalSentences168
matches
0"The black iron gate groaned"
1"Rory shoved it open just"
2"She’d been here once before,"
3"Eva had brought her, laughing,"
4"It had just looked like"
5"She’d come back for Eva’s"
6"A stupid, sentimental thing, a"
7"Eva had lost it last"
8"Rory had seen it glint"
9"Rory needed a thread."
10"The standing stones were easy"
11"They weren’t just stones; they"
12"The air inside the grove"
13"The wildflowers Eva had admired"
14"She flicked on her phone’s"
15"The beam carved a shaky"
16"The light felt invasive, a"
17"She switched it off, letting"
18"The grove’s own phosphorescence emerged—the"
19"She walked to the center"
ratio0.839
89.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences168
matches
0"Now, under a moonless sky,"
1"Now Eva was gone—not dead,"
2"Now, there was nothing."
ratio0.018
96.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences77
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Sweet with the scent of night-blooming flowers that had no business flowering in autumn."
1"The grove’s own phosphorescence emerged—the soft glow of the flowers, a faint green shimmer from the lichen on the stones, the distant, cold gleam of stars seen…"
2"It wasn’t just glowing now; it was lit from within, pulsing with a slow, rhythmic crimson light that painted the moss and her own hands in shades of old blood."
3"She was trapped, panting, the warm pulse of the pendant the only constant in a world that had turned liquid and strange."
4"The whispering rose to a crescendo, a maddening, beautiful song that promised sleep, promised an end to running."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
80.0832%