| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.424 | | leniency | 0.848 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 77.66% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1119 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.91% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1119 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "stark" | | 3 | "sanctuary" | | 4 | "predator" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "vibrated" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "raced" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "tinged" | | 12 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "a flicker of amusement" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1112 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 812 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.99 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Eva | 4 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Moreau | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Lucien | 8 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Golden" | | 1 | "Brick" | | 2 | "Lane" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed carved from the shadows of the cramped Brick Lane staircase" | | 1 | "felt like a fragile shield" | | 2 | "something like old leather and cold rain, in" | | 3 | "air that seemed to surround him" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 37.07 | | std | 22.45 | | cv | 0.606 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 94 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 80 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 55 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 59 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 36 | | 25 | 59 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 31 |
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| 99.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 122 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "Slicked-back blond hair caught the light, and his eyes—one a warm, predatory amber, the other a void of absolute black—fixed on me." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 818 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.029339853300733496 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009779951100244499 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 13.24 | | std | 8.24 | | cv | 0.623 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 53.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.36904761904761907 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 29.52% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "I stared at the three" | | 1 | "I pulled the chain free" | | 2 | "He stood in the dingy" | | 3 | "His suit was immaculate, the" | | 4 | "My name was a soft," | | 5 | "He didn't smile." | | 6 | "He never smiled." | | 7 | "I kept my voice level," | | 8 | "He gestured with the ivory" | | 9 | "I didn't move" | | 10 | "He tilted his head, a" | | 11 | "His gaze swept over the" | | 12 | "He ran a gloved finger" | | 13 | "he said, the word dripping" | | 14 | "I crossed my arms, a" | | 15 | "My heart hammered against my" | | 16 | "He turned from the bookshelf," | | 17 | "I felt a cold dread" | | 18 | "He took a step closer," | | 19 | "My abusive ex, the reason" |
| | ratio | 0.476 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock echoed through the" | | 1 | "This was a knock that" | | 2 | "I stared at the three" | | 3 | "Eva knew better than to" | | 4 | "I pulled the chain free" | | 5 | "The door swung open with" | | 6 | "He stood in the dingy" | | 7 | "His suit was immaculate, the" | | 8 | "My name was a soft," | | 9 | "He didn't smile." | | 10 | "He never smiled." | | 11 | "I kept my voice level," | | 12 | "The cluttered sanctuary of books" | | 13 | "He gestured with the ivory" | | 14 | "I didn't move" | | 15 | "He tilted his head, a" | | 16 | "The scent of his cologne," | | 17 | "Ptolemy, Eva's fat tabby cat," | | 18 | "A low hiss vibrated from" | | 19 | "Lucien ignored the cat." |
| | ratio | 0.921 | |
| 79.37% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Before I could reply, he" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 93.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open with a low groan, revealing a figure that seemed carved from the shadows of the cramped Brick Lane staircase." | | 1 | "Ptolemy, Eva's fat tabby cat, who had been dozing on a stack of ancient-looking maps, arched his back, his fur bristling into a ridge." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "I kept, my body blocking the entrance to the flat" | | 1 | "Lucien continued, his voice dropping to a low, confidential tone" | | 2 | "I said, my voice shaking with a defiance I no longer felt" | | 3 | "Lucien countered, his tone soft but the barb sharp as glass" | | 4 | "Lucien said, his voice utterly calm" |
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| 89.39% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien continued (continue)" | | 1 | "I whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.152 | | leniency | 0.303 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.121 | |