Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYQ9MVZ03DQ786J39KEQG0

Run Details

Duration:
32.4s
Cost:
$0.006386
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement, turning the Soho streets into slick mirrors that fractured the neon glare. Harlow Quinn pounded after the fleeing figure, her boots splashing through puddles that reflected the distorted red and blue of distant police lights she'd left blocks behind. Her breath came in sharp, controlled bursts, a rhythm drilled into her during years of service. The suspect, a blur of tattered denim and panic, vaulted over a discarded shopping cart. Quinn didn't slow. She planted a hand on the wet metal and launched herself over, landing with a heavy thud that sent shockwaves up her shins. "Stop!" she shouted, though the rain swallowed the command before it traveled ten feet. The suspect darted into an alleyway choked with overflowing bins. Quinn followed, her hand brushing the grip of her service weapon. The air here smelled of rotting vegetables and stale urine. The figure scrambled toward a rusted service door at the alley's end, fumbling with a key. Quinn closed the distance, her fingers inches from the suspect's jacket collar. The door groaned open, revealing not a basement or a storage room, but a steep, concrete staircase descending into absolute darkness. A draft billowed up from below, carrying scents that didn't belong in London: sulfur, dried herbs, and something metallic like old blood. The suspect disappeared down the stairs. Quinn halted at the threshold. Her training screamed at her to call for backup, to secure the perimeter, to wait for uniformed officers to sweep the area. But three years ago, waiting had gotten DS Morris killed. Waiting had left her with a cold case file and a ghost haunting her sleep. She checked her wrist. The worn leather of her watch felt rough against her skin. Time to think was time the suspect used to vanish. She stepped onto the first stair. The descent plunged her into a world devoid of streetlights. The only illumination came from bioluminescent fungi clinging to the damp brickwork, casting a sickly green glow that made the shadows stretch and writhe. The sound of the rain faded, replaced by a low, humming vibration that resonated in her teeth. The staircase ended at a heavy iron gate. Beyond it lay a cavernous space that hummed with activity. This was no abandoned Tube station. Stalls constructed from salvaged train carriages and driftwood lined the platform. Lanterns fueled by unknown substances cast flickering light over wares that defied logic. Jars containing swirling mist sat next to bundles of dried organs. A vendor with skin like polished obsidian haggled with a customer whose face shifted constantly, never settling on a single feature. Quinn pressed herself against the cold tile wall near the entrance. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird in a cage. Every instinct told her this place existed outside the law, outside reality itself. The suspect, a slight man with a hood pulled low, weaved through the crowd, heading deeper into the market. She needed to move. Standing still made her a target. Quinn adjusted her jacket, hiding the badge on her belt, and stepped onto the platform. The crowd parted around her, not out of politeness, but as if her very presence repelled them. Eyes, some human, some entirely black, tracked her movement. She kept her gaze forward, mimicking the purposeful stride of someone who belonged. "Fresh eyes," a voice rasped from a stall to her left. "See things others miss. Pay in memories or bone." Quinn ignored the speaker, a woman with fingers too long and too many joints. She focused on the suspect. He stopped at a stall draped in crimson velvet. The vendor, a massive man with tattoos that seemed to crawl across his skin, leaned forward. "You brought the token?" the vendor asked. His voice sounded like grinding stones. The suspect fumbled in his pocket and produced a small, white object. A knuckle. Human, by the look of it. The vendor took it, inspected it under a magnifying glass that glowed with inner fire, and nodded. He reached beneath the counter and produced a vial of liquid that seemed to boil without heat. As the transaction completed, the suspect turned. His eyes locked onto Quinn. Panic flared in his posture. He dropped the vial. It shattered on the floor, releasing a cloud of violet smoke that hissed as it touched the ground. Chaos erupted. Patrons scattered, knocking over displays. Glass shattered. The violet smoke expanded rapidly, eating away at the wooden stalls where it touched. Quinn drew her weapon, the familiar weight of the Glock grounding her in the madness. "Police! Don't move!" she barked, her voice cutting through the din. No one listened. The crowd surged, a river of fleeing bodies. The suspect bolted toward a tunnel at the far end of the platform, shoving a terrified family aside. Quinn gave chase, shouldering through the panic. A creature with wings like a bat swooped low, its talons grazing her shoulder. She ducked, rolled, and came up running. The suspect reached the tunnel entrance. A barrier of shimmering energy blocked the path. He slammed against it, bouncing back. He spun around, backing away as Quinn advanced. "Nowhere left to run," Quinn said, leveling her gun. "Hands where I can see them." The suspect raised his hands, trembling. "You don't understand. They'll kill us both if you bring me out of here." "Try me." Behind Quinn, the violet smoke coalesced into a shape. A wolf, but made of shadow and fire, emerged from the cloud. It let out a silent howl that vibrated in Quinn's skull. The crowd screamed, pressing further away from the beast. The suspect's eyes widened. "It's a Reaver. You triggered a ward." Quinn didn't take her eyes off the suspect. "Put your hands behind your head. Now." "If you arrest me, the bond breaks. The Reaver feeds on the broken bond." The shadow-wolf lunged. Quinn fired. The bullet passed through the creature's chest, dissipating the shadow for a split second before it reformed. It wasn't physical. Bullets wouldn't work. She holstered her weapon and grabbed a heavy iron candlestick from a nearby overturned stall. The wolf charged again. Quinn swung, connecting with the creature's snout. The impact jarred her arm, but the iron left a glowing scar on the shadow-flesh. The beast recoiled, snarling. "Move!" Quinn shouted at the suspect. They ran together toward the tunnel, the Reaver in hot pursuit. The barrier at the tunnel entrance pulsed. The suspect pulled a second token from his pocket, this one carved from dark wood. He slapped it against the energy field. The shimmer dissolved. They tumbled through the opening just as the wolf's jaws snapped shut on empty air. The barrier reformed behind them, sealing the market away. Silence returned, heavy and thick. They stood in a narrow maintenance corridor, the air stale and dusty. Emergency lights flickered overhead, casting long, erratic shadows. The sounds of the market were gone, replaced by the distant drip of water. Quinn spun around, pressing the suspect against the cold concrete wall. She pinned his wrists above his head, her forearm across his throat. "Who are you?" she demanded. "And what is that place?" The suspect gasped, struggling for breath. "Tomás. Tomás Herrera. And that... that was the Veil Market." "Why were you there?" "I needed supplies. For the clinic. Off-the-books stuff." Tomás's eyes darted to the side, avoiding her gaze. "People who can't go to hospitals. People like..." "Like what?" Quinn tightened her grip. "Speak clearly." "Like the ones the Market serves," Tomás whispered. "The ones your world refuses to acknowledge." Quinn studied his face. Olive skin, warm brown eyes filled with genuine fear, a scar running along his left forearm. He looked like a man pushed to the edge, not a hardened criminal. But he had led her into a nightmare. "You compromised a crime scene," Quinn said, her voice low and dangerous. "You led me into a den of... whatever that was. You're coming with me." "You can't take me back up there," Tomás said, his voice trembling. "Not yet. The Reaver marked you. If you go back into the normal streets, it will track the scent. It will find you. It will find everyone near you." Quinn hesitated. The logic sounded insane, yet she had just fought a shadow wolf with an iron candlestick. Rationality had left the building hours ago. "What do you suggest?" she asked, not releasing her hold. "There's a safe place. Nearby. A bar in Soho. The Raven's Nest. They have wards. Protection." Quinn narrowed her eyes. "Lead the way. One wrong move, Herrera, and I shoot." Tomás nodded, his Adam's apple bobbing. "Understood." They moved through the maintenance corridor, the drip of water echoing like gunshots in the silence. Quinn kept her hand near her holster, her senses hyper-alert. The city above felt miles away, a different planet entirely. She had crossed a line tonight, stepping from the known into the abyss. There was no going back to how things were. The corridor opened into a service elevator. Tomás punched a combination into the keypad. The doors groaned open, revealing a cramped cage smelling of oil and rust. "After you," Tomás said, stepping aside. Quinn entered first, backing into the corner, keeping him in her sights. The doors slid shut, enclosing them in metal. The elevator lurched upward, the cables singing a high-pitched whine. "If this is a trap," Quinn said, her voice echoing in the small space, "I promise you won't like the outcome." "It's not a trap," Tomás replied, leaning against the railing. He touched the Saint Christopher medallion around his neck. "It's survival. For both of us." The elevator dinged. The doors opened onto a dimly lit alley in Soho. Rain still fell, washing the grime from the bricks. The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest buzzed overhead, casting an eerie glow on the wet pavement. Tomás stepped out. Quinn followed, scanning the rooftops, the shadows, the empty street. Nothing moved. Yet. "Inside," Tomás urged, pushing open the heavy wooden door of the bar. Quinn crossed the threshold, the bell above the door chiming softly. The interior was warm, smelling of old wood and beer. Maps covered the walls, and black-and-white photographs watched from the dark corners. It looked like a normal pub, but the air felt charged, static clinging to her skin. A man behind the bar looked up. His eyes met Quinn's, and he froze. He knew. He saw the mark of the Reaver on her, the exhaustion in her posture, the gun at her hip. "We need the back room," Tomás said, his voice urgent. "Now." The bartender nodded slowly, his expression grim. He reached under the counter and pulled a specific book from a shelf. The bookcase swung inward, revealing a hidden passage. "Quickly," the bartender said. "The wards won't hold them off forever." Quinn followed Tomás into the secret room, her mind racing. The chase had ended, but the real danger had just begun. She stood in the center of the clandestine meeting space, rain dripping from her hair onto the rug, and waited for the world to make sense again. It didn't.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.475
leniency0.95
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1870
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"softly"
2"slowly"
3"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1870
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"resonated"
count1
2
word"constructed"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"shattered"
count2
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"charged"
count2
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"echoing"
count2
13
word"lurched"
count1
14
word"scanning"
count1
15
word"racing"
count1
16
word"clandestine"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"resonated"
2"constructed"
3"velvet"
4"shattered"
5"familiar"
6"weight"
7"vibrated"
8"charged"
9"pulsed"
10"silence"
11"flickered"
12"echoing"
13"lurched"
14"scanning"
15"racing"
16"clandestine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences166
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences166
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences187
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1862
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1608
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.99
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Quinn32
London1
Morris1
Tube1
Glock1
Reaver2
Tomás11
Adam1
Saint1
Christopher1
Raven1
Nest1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"Glock"
3"Tomás"
4"Adam"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Raven"
8"Nest"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.505
windowScore0.167
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences125
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"tattoos that seemed to crawl across his skin, leaned forward"
1"sounded like grinding stones"
2"liquid that seemed to boil without heat"
3"looked like a man pushed to the edge, not"
4"looked like a normal pub, but the air fel"
92.59% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.074
wordCount1862
matches
0"not a basement or a storage room, but a steep, concrete staircase descending into absolute darknes"
1"not out of politeness, but as if her very presence repelled them"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences187
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean29.09
std22.16
cv0.762
sampleLengths
0100
114
2102
36
477
56
669
762
855
910
1054
1120
1244
1313
1454
1539
162
1736
1811
1957
2028
2115
2220
232
2441
2511
2615
2714
2828
2945
306
3143
3224
3339
3423
3510
3616
374
3825
398
4015
4141
4226
4341
4425
4510
4616
4714
487
4958
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences166
matches
0"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs308
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences187
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1614
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.01982651796778191
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.006195786864931847
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences187
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences187
mean9.96
std5.51
cv0.553
sampleLengths
016
127
216
315
43
523
614
710
811
910
1016
1112
1221
1322
146
155
1622
1710
1815
194
2011
2110
226
2310
2424
2517
268
2710
286
2911
3013
3111
3221
3311
3412
3513
3619
374
386
3915
4017
419
4213
4311
449
4514
465
479
4816
497
52.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3582887700534759
totalSentences187
uniqueOpeners67
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences155
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences155
matches
0"Her breath came in sharp,"
1"She planted a hand on"
2"she shouted, though the rain"
3"Her training screamed at her"
4"She checked her wrist."
5"She stepped onto the first"
6"Her heart hammered against her"
7"She needed to move."
8"She kept her gaze forward,"
9"She focused on the suspect."
10"He stopped at a stall"
11"His voice sounded like grinding"
12"He reached beneath the counter"
13"His eyes locked onto Quinn."
14"He dropped the vial."
15"It shattered on the floor,"
16"she barked, her voice cutting"
17"She ducked, rolled, and came"
18"He slammed against it, bouncing"
19"He spun around, backing away"
ratio0.245
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount143
totalSentences155
matches
0"Harlow Quinn pounded after the"
1"Her breath came in sharp,"
2"The suspect, a blur of"
3"Quinn didn't slow."
4"She planted a hand on"
5"she shouted, though the rain"
6"The suspect darted into an"
7"Quinn followed, her hand brushing"
8"The air here smelled of"
9"The figure scrambled toward a"
10"Quinn closed the distance, her"
11"The door groaned open, revealing"
12"A draft billowed up from"
13"The suspect disappeared down the"
14"Quinn halted at the threshold."
15"Her training screamed at her"
16"Waiting had left her with"
17"She checked her wrist."
18"The worn leather of her"
19"She stepped onto the first"
ratio0.923
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences155
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.07% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences76
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Harlow Quinn pounded after the fleeing figure, her boots splashing through puddles that reflected the distorted red and blue of distant police lights she'd left…"
1"She planted a hand on the wet metal and launched herself over, landing with a heavy thud that sent shockwaves up her shins."
2"A draft billowed up from below, carrying scents that didn't belong in London: sulfur, dried herbs, and something metallic like old blood."
3"The only illumination came from bioluminescent fungi clinging to the damp brickwork, casting a sickly green glow that made the shadows stretch and writhe."
4"Lanterns fueled by unknown substances cast flickering light over wares that defied logic."
5"She kept her gaze forward, mimicking the purposeful stride of someone who belonged."
6"The vendor took it, inspected it under a magnifying glass that glowed with inner fire, and nodded."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she shouted, though the rain swallowed the command before it traveled ten feet"
1"she barked, her voice cutting through the din"
2"Quinn said, her voice low and dangerous"
3"Tomás said, his voice trembling"
4"she asked, not releasing her hold"
5"Quinn said, her voice echoing in the small space,"
6"Tomás said, his voice urgent"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
1"she barked (bark)"
2"Quinn shouted (shout)"
3"she demanded (demand)"
4"Tomás whispered (whisper)"
5"Tomás urged (urge)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.3
74.0569%