| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 86.07% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1077 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "deliberately" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1077 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "profound" | | 4 | "roaring" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "oppressive" | | 8 | "gloom" | | 9 | "throb" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "flicker" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "dancing" | | 15 | "searing" | | 16 | "could feel" | | 17 | "silk" | | 18 | "stomach" | | 19 | "hulking" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.18% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1072 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 1071 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.37 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 75.37% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite decipher" | | 1 | "blackness that seemed to drink the faint light around it" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.933 | | wordCount | 1072 | | matches | | 0 | "not the reflective green of a fox's eyes, but the deep, malevolent red of embers burning in a forge" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 19 | | mean | 56.42 | | std | 29.69 | | cv | 0.526 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 97 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 79 | | 5 | 82 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 69 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 76 | | 10 | 80 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 57 | | 13 | 114 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 45 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 56 |
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| 97.20% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "being watched" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 148 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1076 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.032527881040892194 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00929368029739777 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 12.18 | | std | 7.44 | | cv | 0.611 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 53.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.36363636363636365 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, last night, it had" | | 1 | "Just a cluster of pale," | | 2 | "Just empty, cloying air." |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 72.38% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "She ignored the sting of" | | 1 | "She paused, listening." | | 2 | "She scanned the oppressive darkness" | | 3 | "Their branches clawed at the" | | 4 | "She held her breath, straining" | | 5 | "She took a slow, deliberate" | | 6 | "Their colours were too vibrant" | | 7 | "It was all wrong." | | 8 | "It was the reason she" | | 9 | "She whipped her head around," | | 10 | "Her heart hammered against her" | | 11 | "She was not a woman" | | 12 | "He had taught her the" | | 13 | "It was so faint she" | | 14 | "It was everywhere and nowhere" | | 15 | "It was hot now, the" | | 16 | "She took a stumbling step" | | 17 | "She could feel it now." | | 18 | "She backed away towards what" | | 19 | "They slid over her skin" |
| | ratio | 0.369 | |
| 67.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The thorns clutched at her" | | 1 | "Rory pushed through another curtain" | | 2 | "She ignored the sting of" | | 3 | "The air in the Grove" | | 4 | "She paused, listening." | | 5 | "The silence was wrong." | | 6 | "Richmond Park should have been" | | 7 | "Here, in this hidden pocket" | | 8 | "The kind of profound quiet" | | 9 | "A sharp crack echoed from" | | 10 | "This sound was wetter, heavier." | | 11 | "Rory froze, her body tensing." | | 12 | "She scanned the oppressive darkness" | | 13 | "Their branches clawed at the" | | 14 | "She held her breath, straining" | | 15 | "The silence rushed back in," | | 16 | "She took a slow, deliberate" | | 17 | "Wildflowers brushed against her shin," | | 18 | "Foxgloves and bluebells, blooming together" | | 19 | "Their colours were too vibrant" |
| | ratio | 0.786 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The undeniable certainty of being watched by something that held itself in the spaces between the trees, in the suffocating silence." | | 1 | "It flowed, an amorphous patch of blackness that seemed to drink the faint light around it." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |