Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYQBYPN99NTBG6P9P2F5RR

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Duration:
30.3s
Cost:
$0.003563
Provider:
WandB

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The crescent moon hung low over Richmond Park as Aurora Carter slipped through the iron gates, the Heartstone pendant warm against her collarbone. She pulled her jacket tighter against the autumn chill, checking over her shoulder one last time before following the crumbling path into the trees. The pendant had been pulsing steadily since sunset, a silent alarm she couldn't ignore. The ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled surfaces gleaming wetly in the moonlight. Something was wrong. The wildflowers that should carpet the grove year-round had withered, their petals curled inward like clenched fists. The air hung heavy and still, devoid of the usual nighttime rustle of small creatures. Even the wind seemed to avoid this place. Rory stepped between the standing stones, the temperature dropping several degrees. The pendant grew hotter, its crimson glow visible against the black fabric of her shirt. She unclasped it, holding it out like a compass. The light pulsed faster, casting bloody shadows across the trampled grass. "Hello?" she called, her voice swallowed by the unnatural silence. "Is someone there?" A twig snapped to her left. Rory spun around, heart pounding against her ribs. Nothing. Just the dark trees pressing in, their branches twisted into unnatural shapes. She told herself it was just an animal, but the pendant's frantic pulse told a different story. She pressed on toward the center of the grove, where the veil between worlds thinnest. The pendant's heat became almost unbearable, forcing her to stuff it back into her shirt. The temperature continued to drop, her breath fogging in the air despite the mild evening. The first whisper came from behind her, barely audible over her own footsteps. Rory stopped, listening. Nothing. She began walking again, faster now. Another whisper, closer this time. Words she couldn't quite make out, layered over each other like static. She broke into a run, heading for the far side of the clearing where the boundary stones marked the way out. The pendant burned against her skin. The whispers grew louder, forming into something almost like her name, but not quite. "Aurora... Aurora..." Rory stumbled over something soft and yielding. She looked down, bile rising in her throat. A perfect circle of dead wildflowers, their stems broken at unnatural angles. She hadn't seen it when she entered. Movement at the edge of her vision. Rory spun around, fists raised. A shadow detached itself from the trees, tall and slender and wrong. It had too many joints, folding in ways that made her eyes ache. The pendant's glow intensified, illuminating the creature's face—or what should have been a face. Instead, there was only a smooth expanse of pale skin, featureless except for a single dark hole where a mouth should be. Rory backed away slowly, her mind racing. The creature mimicked her movements, its limbs bending backward as it mirrored her retreat. The whispers intensified, now clearly calling her name in a voice that sounded like her own but corrupted. The creature lunged. Rory dodged, rolling across the damp earth and coming up near a standing stone. Her fingers scrabbled against the rough bark, searching for the handholds Eva had shown her months ago—the emergency escape route. The pendant seared her skin, its light now blinding. The creature was upon her, its too-long fingers reaching for her throat. Rory found the hidden notch in the stone and pressed. The world tilted sideways, colors bleeding into each other as the grove's magic fought against her escape. The creature's fingers brushed her cheek, cold as death. She tumbled through the opening, the standing stone sealing shut behind her with a sound like grinding teeth. Rory lay gasping on the normal forest floor, the pendant still burning against her skin. The moon looked different here—higher, brighter, somehow more real. But the whispers followed her out, faint now but still present. They curled around the edges of her consciousness, waiting. The pendant's glow faded, but its warmth remained, a constant reminder that whatever she had encountered wasn't finished with her yet.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount678
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount678
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"pounding"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"loomed"
2"gleaming"
3"pulsed"
4"silence"
5"pounding"
6"pulse"
7"whisper"
8"footsteps"
9"perfect"
10"racing"
11"warmth"
12"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences59
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords673
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount667
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.35
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora1
Carter1
Heartstone1
Eva1
Rory9
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.825
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite make out, layered over each other like static"
1"not quite"
2"sounded like her own but corrupted"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount673
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
38.62% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean44.87
std12.8
cv0.285
sampleLengths
061
158
246
313
444
545
640
743
834
973
1039
1146
1248
1342
1441
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs111
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences59
ratio0.051
matches
0"The pendant's glow intensified, illuminating the creature's face—or what should have been a face."
1"Her fingers scrabbled against the rough bark, searching for the handholds Eva had shown her months ago—the emergency escape route."
2"The moon looked different here—higher, brighter, somehow more real."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount672
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03869047619047619
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008928571428571428
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences59
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences59
mean11.41
std5.64
cv0.495
sampleLengths
023
124
214
315
43
517
615
78
811
915
109
1111
1210
133
146
158
161
1712
1817
1915
2015
2115
2213
233
241
256
265
2712
2821
296
3014
312
327
338
3412
357
367
375
3812
3913
4014
4122
427
4314
4418
453
4614
4720
489
4912
36.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3220338983050847
totalSentences59
uniqueOpeners19
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences55
matches
0"Even the wind seemed to"
1"Just the dark trees pressing"
2"Instead, there was only a"
ratio0.055
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences55
matches
0"She pulled her jacket tighter"
1"She unclasped it, holding it"
2"she called, her voice swallowed"
3"She told herself it was"
4"She pressed on toward the"
5"She began walking again, faster"
6"She broke into a run,"
7"She looked down, bile rising"
8"She hadn't seen it when"
9"It had too many joints,"
10"Her fingers scrabbled against the"
11"She tumbled through the opening,"
12"They curled around the edges"
ratio0.236
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences55
matches
0"The crescent moon hung low"
1"She pulled her jacket tighter"
2"The pendant had been pulsing"
3"The ancient oak standing stones"
4"Something was wrong."
5"The wildflowers that should carpet"
6"The air hung heavy and"
7"Rory stepped between the standing"
8"The pendant grew hotter, its"
9"She unclasped it, holding it"
10"The light pulsed faster, casting"
11"she called, her voice swallowed"
12"A twig snapped to her"
13"Rory spun around, heart pounding"
14"She told herself it was"
15"She pressed on toward the"
16"The pendant's heat became almost"
17"The temperature continued to drop,"
18"The first whisper came from"
19"Rory stopped, listening."
ratio0.927
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The wildflowers that should carpet the grove year-round had withered, their petals curled inward like clenched fists."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.3502%