| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 917 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 917 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "profound" | | 9 | "resonated" | | 10 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 913 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 9 | | wordCount | 910 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.33 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a fever dream" | | 1 | "felt like it had been violated, and it" | | 2 | "looked like a clenched fist, seemed to li" | | 3 | "looked like a clot of dried blood in the" | | 4 | "felt like it was trying to pry her thou" |
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| 90.47% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.095 | | wordCount | 913 | | matches | | 0 | "Not one, but a dozen silent watchers" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 53.71 | | std | 32.1 | | cv | 0.598 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 92 | | 2 | 95 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 82 | | 6 | 76 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 73 | | 9 | 76 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 75 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 87 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 69 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 132 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "Her own quiet footsteps, the whisper of denim as her legs moved—they were absent." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 914 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.037199124726477024 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009846827133479213 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 10.87 | | std | 6.41 | | cv | 0.59 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 34.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.30952380952380953 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Still like a held breath." | | 1 | "Just a chip of cold" | | 2 | "Directly behind her." | | 3 | "Then the sound came." |
| | ratio | 0.052 | |
| 32.99% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "It offered no warmth, only" | | 1 | "Their vibrancy felt like a" | | 2 | "She moved towards the centre," | | 3 | "Her own quiet footsteps, the" | | 4 | "She fumbled inside her jacket," | | 5 | "It lay against her skin," | | 6 | "It had never been like" | | 7 | "It was a fox." | | 8 | "She repeated the rationalisation in" | | 9 | "It felt like it had" | | 10 | "She forced her feet to" | | 11 | "Her gaze swept the perimeter," | | 12 | "It flowed, stretching a tendril" | | 13 | "she whispered, her voice a" | | 14 | "She blinked hard, rubbing her" | | 15 | "Her heart hammered a frantic" | | 16 | "It was a trick of" | | 17 | "It wasn't a rustle or" | | 18 | "It was a low thrum" | | 19 | "It resonated in her teeth," |
| | ratio | 0.468 | |
| 18.44% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon was a shard" | | 1 | "It offered no warmth, only" | | 2 | "Aurora pushed through a final" | | 3 | "The Fae Grove." | | 4 | "Richmond Park fell away behind" | | 5 | "Here, inside the circle of" | | 6 | "The standing stones, hulks of" | | 7 | "Wildflowers, a riot of impossible" | | 8 | "Their vibrancy felt like a" | | 9 | "She moved towards the centre," | | 10 | "The tread of her soles" | | 11 | "Her own quiet footsteps, the" | | 12 | "The grove absorbed all noise," | | 13 | "She fumbled inside her jacket," | | 14 | "It lay against her skin," | | 15 | "A knot of unease tightened" | | 16 | "It had never been like" | | 17 | "The sound was a whip" | | 18 | "Aurora froze, her body rigid." | | 19 | "Every muscle screamed to turn," |
| | ratio | 0.883 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 79.37% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "It resonated in her teeth, a dissonant hum that crawled up her spine and settled at the base of her skull." | | 1 | "The chill was a needlepoint that sank into her chest, spreading a spiderweb of frost through her veins." | | 2 | "The low humming sharpened, condensing into something that scraped at the edges of hearing." | | 3 | "It spoke, but the words were broken, inverted, a meaningless and terrifying babble that felt like it was trying to pry her thoughts apart." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |