Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYR66R5A7B8X4D03G1AEX8

Run Details

Duration:
37.5s
Cost:
$0.026586

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door chime of The Raven's Nest barely registered above the low murmur of evening conversation when Rory glanced up from her pint. She'd come down from her flat seeking the familiar comfort of Silas's domain after another soul-crushing day of delivering lukewarm takeaway across London's grey sprawl. The bar's dim lighting and weathered photographs usually offered sanctuary from the world's sharp edges. Then she saw him. Marcus Sullivan sat hunched over a whisky at the far end of the bar, his once-golden hair now thin and prematurely grey. The boy who'd scaled Cardiff's rooftops with her, who'd shared stolen cigarettes behind the university library, who'd sworn they'd conquer the world together—that boy had been replaced by something hollowed out and careful. "Marcus?" He turned at her voice, and for a heartbeat his face lit up with the smile she remembered. Then something shuttered behind his eyes. "Bloody hell. Rory Carter." His Welsh accent had flattened into something more polished, more London. "What are the chances?" She approached slowly, reading the tension in his shoulders. "About the same as finding you in a Soho dive, I'd say. Last I heard you were making waves at some posh firm in Canary Wharf." "Was." He gestured to the empty stool beside him. "Past tense being the operative phrase." She perched on the edge of the seat, maintaining distance. Up close, she could see the fine lines around his eyes, the way his expensive suit hung loose on a frame that had lost weight it couldn't afford to lose. "Want to talk about it?" "Not particularly." He drained his glass and signalled Silas for another. "What about you? Last thing I remember, you were dead set on following your old man into law." "Also past tense." She traced the rim of her pint glass. "Turns out I'm better at delivering Chinese food than defending the innocent." Marcus laughed, but it came out bitter. "Christ, we really buggered it up, didn't we? Remember when we had it all sorted? You were going to be the barrister who actually gave a damn, and I was going to be the investment banker with a conscience." "Banker with a conscience. There's an oxymoron for you." "Yeah, well. Turns out conscience is a luxury you can't afford when you're drowning." Silas appeared with Marcus's refill, his hazel eyes taking in the scene with practiced discretion. He'd been in intelligence long enough to recognise the particular weight of old friendships under strain. "Drowning?" Rory kept her voice neutral, but her grip tightened on her glass. Marcus stared into his whisky like it held answers. "Started small. Client entertainment, they called it. Just a bit of powder to keep the long hours bearable. Then the hours got longer, the deals got bigger, and the powder got... necessary." The admission hung between them like smoke. Rory felt something crack in her chest—not surprise, exactly, but the confirmation of fears she'd buried deep. "Marcus—" "Don't." His voice carried an edge she'd never heard before. "Don't give me the concerned friend routine. We both know where that leads." "Where it leads?" "To you disappearing again. Just like you did with Evan." The name hit her like a slap. She'd never told Marcus about the bruises, the way Evan's hands left marks that makeup couldn't quite cover. But Marcus had eyes, had always been too perceptive for his own good. "That was different." "Was it? You vanished overnight, Rory. One day we're mates, the next you've fled to London without so much as a goodbye text. Left the rest of us to wonder what we'd done wrong." She wanted to explain about the hospital visits disguised as clumsiness, about the way Evan's apologies came with flowers and promises that lasted exactly until the next time. Instead, she found herself studying the photographs on the wall behind Marcus—black and white faces from decades past, frozen in moments of supposed happiness. "I couldn't stay." "You couldn't trust us, you mean." The accusation stung because it carried truth. She'd been so deep in shame, so convinced that leaving was the only solution, that she'd never considered the collateral damage of her silence. "Eva knew," she said quietly. "Eva helped me get out." "Eva." Marcus's laugh held no humour. "Of course she did. Saint Eva, always ready to rescue everyone except herself." "What's that supposed to mean?" But Marcus was already reaching for his wallet, pulling out notes with the mechanical precision of someone who'd practised the gesture of leaving. "Doesn't matter now, does it? We all made our choices." "Marcus, wait—" He stood, swaying slightly. The whisky or exhaustion, she couldn't tell which. "You know what the worst part is? I used to think about calling you. When things got bad, when the walls started closing in. I'd look up your number, start dialling, then remember how easy it was for you to cut us all off." "It wasn't easy." "Wasn't it?" He buttoned his coat with deliberate care. "Because from where I'm sitting, it looked pretty bloody effortless." She watched him move toward the door, each step measured and careful. He paused at the threshold, one hand on the brass handle, and for a moment she thought he might turn back. Might bridge the gap that six years and poor choices had carved between them. "Take care of yourself, Rory." The door closed behind him with a soft click, leaving her alone with the weight of everything unsaid. Silas materialised beside her, his presence solid and reassuring. "Old friend?" "Used to be." She pushed her half-empty pint away. "We had all these plans, you know? We were going to change the world." "Plans have a way of surviving contact with reality about as well as battle strategies do." She looked up at him, taking in the silver threading through his beard, the lines that spoke of harder choices than she'd ever had to make. "Any regrets about how yours turned out?" Silas considered this, his signet ring catching the bar's amber light as he wiped down glasses. "Plenty. But regret's just another word for experience, isn't it? The trick is learning to carry the weight without letting it crush you." Through the window, she could see Marcus's silhouette disappearing into the London night, shoulders hunched against the October chill. Six years ago, they'd been invincible. Now they were just two people who'd learned that growing up meant growing apart, that some distances couldn't be measured in miles.
total_cost0.026586

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.233
leniency0.465
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.047
86.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1087
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
2"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1087
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"weight"
count4
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"mechanical"
count1
7
word"effortless"
count1
8
word"measured"
count2
9
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"sanctuary"
2"tension"
3"weight"
4"traced"
5"silence"
6"mechanical"
7"effortless"
8"measured"
9"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences47
matches
0"p in shame"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences47
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1081
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount663
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.51
worstName"Marcus"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Marcus"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory3
Silas5
London3
Sullivan1
Cardiff1
Welsh1
Marcus10
Evan2
October1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Sullivan"
5"Marcus"
6"Evan"
7"October"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.746
windowScore0.667
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite cover"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.925
wordCount1081
matches
0"not surprise, exactly, but the confirmation of fears she'd buried deep"
41.67% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences80
matches
0"marks that makeup"
1"convinced that leaving"
2"learned that growing"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean23
std17.21
cv0.748
sampleLengths
063
14
255
31
424
519
635
715
840
95
1029
1123
1246
139
1414
1531
1613
1741
1824
191
2023
213
2210
2338
243
2534
2652
273
286
2931
3010
3119
325
3333
342
3556
363
3719
3847
395
4027
412
4223
4316
4433
4539
4647
97.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences47
matches
0"been replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs113
matches(empty)
35.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences80
ratio0.038
matches
0"The boy who'd scaled Cardiff's rooftops with her, who'd shared stolen cigarettes behind the university library, who'd sworn they'd conquer the world together—that boy had been replaced by something hollowed out and careful."
1"Rory felt something crack in her chest—not surprise, exactly, but the confirmation of fears she'd buried deep."
2"Instead, she found herself studying the photographs on the wall behind Marcus—black and white faces from decades past, frozen in moments of supposed happiness."
99.69% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount669
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.04035874439461883
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.013452914798206279
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean13.51
std9.28
cv0.687
sampleLengths
023
125
215
34
422
533
61
718
86
915
104
119
1226
139
146
1510
1630
175
1811
1918
2011
2112
227
2339
249
2514
2615
2716
2813
299
3032
317
3217
331
3410
3513
363
3710
387
3918
4013
413
4234
4328
4424
453
466
477
4824
495
94.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5875
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences47
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Then something shuttered behind his"
2"Instead, she found herself studying"
ratio0.064
49.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences47
matches
0"She'd come down from her"
1"He turned at her voice,"
2"His Welsh accent had flattened"
3"She approached slowly, reading the"
4"He gestured to the empty"
5"She perched on the edge"
6"He drained his glass and"
7"She traced the rim of"
8"He'd been in intelligence long"
9"His voice carried an edge"
10"She'd never told Marcus about"
11"She wanted to explain about"
12"She'd been so deep in"
13"she said quietly"
14"He stood, swaying slightly."
15"He buttoned his coat with"
16"She watched him move toward"
17"He paused at the threshold,"
18"She pushed her half-empty pint"
19"She looked up at him,"
ratio0.426
66.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences47
matches
0"The door chime of The"
1"She'd come down from her"
2"The bar's dim lighting and"
3"Marcus Sullivan sat hunched over"
4"The boy who'd scaled Cardiff's"
5"He turned at her voice,"
6"His Welsh accent had flattened"
7"She approached slowly, reading the"
8"He gestured to the empty"
9"She perched on the edge"
10"He drained his glass and"
11"She traced the rim of"
12"Marcus laughed, but it came"
13"Silas appeared with Marcus's refill,"
14"He'd been in intelligence long"
15"Rory kept her voice neutral,"
16"Marcus stared into his whisky"
17"The admission hung between them"
18"Rory felt something crack in"
19"His voice carried an edge"
ratio0.787
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences47
matches
0"Now they were just two"
ratio0.021
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The boy who'd scaled Cardiff's rooftops with her, who'd shared stolen cigarettes behind the university library, who'd sworn they'd conquer the world together—th…"
1"Up close, she could see the fine lines around his eyes, the way his expensive suit hung loose on a frame that had lost weight it couldn't afford to lose."
2"But Marcus was already reaching for his wallet, pulling out notes with the mechanical precision of someone who'd practised the gesture of leaving."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory kept, but her grip tightened on her glass"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.023
leniency0.047
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.9225%