Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYRH53ZFJDS9MPTTMPMJ3X

Run Details

Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.002553
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy thunk that always sounded more final than it was. Rory pulled the door open, the familiar scent of cumin and turmeric from the curry house below washing over her. She expected Eva, maybe soaked from the sudden autumn downpour, juggling takeaway containers and an armful of new books. Instead, the figure leaning against the doorframe was a stark silhouette against the gloom of the stairwell. Raindrops glistened on the shoulders of a charcoal suit jacket, perfectly tailored. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place despite the weather. One hand rested on an ivory-handled cane, the other held a leather briefcase. Lucien Moreau. Her breath hitched, a tiny, involuntary sound lost in the distant honk of a Brick Lane taxi. Three years. Three years since she’d watched him walk away from Silas’s bar, the tap of his cane on the cobblestones echoing long after he’d turned the corner. “Aurora.” His voice was a low baritone, unchanged, a rumble that had once felt like a secret shared just with her. She didn’t move, her grip tightening on the edge of the door. Her knuckles whitened around the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. “Lucien.” “May I come in?” His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one a bottomless black—held hers. The amber one seemed to catch the weak hall light, glinting with a warmth the black one swallowed whole. “It’s rather wet out here.” “Is it.” It wasn’t a question. She remained a barrier between him and the cluttered sanctuary of Eva’s flat. Ptolemy the tabby wound himself between her ankles, his tail brushing her calf, a silent question. Lucien’s gaze flickered down to the cat, then back to her face. A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “He remembers me.” “He’s a cat. He remembers whoever might have a spare piece of chicken.” She finally stepped back, the movement stiff. The space she made was minimal, forcing him to turn sideways to slip past her. The scent of his cologne—bergamot and something darker, smoky, like old books and embers—cut through the spice-heavy air. It was a scent that belonged to a different life, a life of whispered deals in shadowy corners and the dangerous thrill of the world beneath London’s surface. He moved with a controlled grace, the tap of his cane on the worn floorboards a soft counterpoint to his steps. He surveyed the room, taking in the towers of books threatening to topple from every surface, the scrolls unfurled across the small dining table, the notes pinned to the wallpaper. His expression was unreadable. “Eva’s… research continues to expand,” he remarked, his tone dry. “It’s her flat.” Rory closed the door, sliding all three deadbolts back into place with a series of decisive clicks. The sound felt like she was locking the past in with her. She turned to face him, crossing her arms over her chest. “What are you doing here, Luc?” He turned from his inspection of a medieval bestiary lying open on the arm of the sofa. “Is it so strange that I would wish to see you?” “Yes.” The word came out flat, hard. “It is. You made it very clear that… associations like ours were a complication. Your word, I believe.” “Circumstances change.” He leaned his cane against the sofa and placed the briefcase on the only clear spot on the coffee table, displacing a stack of Eva’s notes. “I require your particular talents.” A harsh laugh escaped her. “My talents? You mean my ability to deliver curry without spilling the dal? I’m out, Lucien. I left that world behind. On your advice, if you’ll recall.” His jaw tightened almost imperceptibly. “The world has a way of pulling one back in, *ma chère*. Especially when one has a mind that sees the patterns others miss.” “Flattery? That’s new.” She didn’t move from her spot by the door, a good ten feet of littered floor space between them. Ptolemy jumped onto the table, sniffing curiously at the briefcase. “Whatever it is, the answer is no. You can turn around and walk right back out.” He ignored her, unlatching the briefcase with a quiet click. He withdrew a single, sealed manila envelope. “A delivery. But not for Yu-Fei Cheung.” “I don’t care.” “It needs to go to a bookbinder in Bloomsbury. A discreet man. He will be expecting it tomorrow evening.” Lucien held the envelope out. When she didn’t move to take it, he sighed, a soft, weary sound. “Aurora. Please.” The ‘please’ did it. It was a word he used sparingly, a crack in the polished marble of his composure. She walked forward, her sneakers silent on the floor. She stopped just short of reaching for the envelope, her bright blue eyes fixed on his mismatched ones. The proximity was a shock to her system. She could see the fine lines at the corners of his eyes that hadn’t been there three years ago, the faint shadow of stubble along his jaw. “Why me?” Her voice was quieter now. “You have a dozen runners who are faster, stronger, and don’t ask inconvenient questions.” “Because they are not you.” His gaze was intense, stripping away her defenses layer by layer. “This is not a simple parcel. It contains a fragment of a binding contract. A very old, very dangerous one. The kind with clauses written in blood and loopholes that can unravel a soul. I need someone who can think, not just run. If something goes wrong… if the delivery is intercepted… I need someone who can understand what they are looking at and get it to safety.” “And you thought of me.” She shook her head, a bitter taste in her mouth. “After all this time. You just show up here, in the one place I felt safe from all of… that. You drag it right back to my doorstep.” “There is no one else I trust.” The statement hung in the air, thick and heavy. It was the thing left unsaid, the hurt that had festered for three years. Trust. He’d walked away claiming a lack of it was for her own good, a necessary severance to protect her from the dangers that clung to him. “You have a funny way of showing it,” she whispered, her gaze dropping from his eyes to the envelope. Her fingers itched to take it, not out of obligation, but out of the old, damnable curiosity he had always been able to spark in her. A contract that could unravel a soul. “I know.” He took a half-step closer, closing the gap. The smoky scent of him was overwhelming now. “What I said back then… the things I did… it was never about trust. Not in you.” Her eyes flicked back up to his. “Then what was it about?” He was silent for a long moment, his amber eye seeming to glow in the dim light of the flat. The black one was a void, hiding everything. “Fear,” he said, the word so quiet it was almost inaudible. The admission was like a physical blow. Lucien Moreau, the unflappable fixer, the half-demon who navigated the underworld with a smirk and a sharp blade, admitting to fear. Her carefully maintained anger began to crumble, revealing the raw ache beneath. “You were a complication, Aurora,” he continued, his voice rough. “The most beautiful, infuriating, brilliant complication I had ever encountered. And my world… it grinds complications into dust. I thought if I pushed you away, I could keep you safe. I thought it was the right thing to do.” “You didn’t give me a choice.” The hurt was naked in her voice now. “You just decided what was best for me and left.” “I know.” He lifted his hand, slowly, giving her every chance to pull away. His fingers, cool despite the room’s warmth, brushed against the crescent scar on her wrist. The touch was feather-light, a brand that sent a shock through her entire body. It was an intimate gesture, a reminder of a night years ago when he’d found her trembling after a close call, his thumb tracing that same scar until her breathing calmed. “It was the greatest mistake of my long life.” She didn’t pull away. She couldn’t. The space between them crackled with the ghosts of every unspoken word, every touch they’d denied themselves. The rain pattered against the window, a steady rhythm sealing them in this bubble of charged silence. He was close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, the impossible depth of the black one. His gaze dropped to her lips for a fraction of a second before meeting her eyes again, a question in them. The envelope was forgotten, the delivery, the dangerous contract. All that existed was the three years of silence and the inch of space between their bodies. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic drum echoing the tap of the rain. The cool-headed logic she prided herself on had evaporated, leaving only a raw, yearning need. Her fingers uncurled from her tight fist. She didn’t take the envelope. Instead, her hand rose, hovering in the air before her fingertips came to rest on the damp lapel of his charcoal jacket. The fabric was finely woven, cold from the rain, but she could feel the solid warmth of him beneath it. “Luc…” His name was a sigh, a surrender. The distance vanished. His free hand came up to cradle the side of her face, his thumb stroking her cheekbone. The touch was still gentle, but there was a desperate edge to it now, a hunger held in check by a thread. His eyes searched hers, waiting for permission, for a sign. She gave it to him by rising onto her toes, her eyes fluttering closed. The kiss was not gentle. It was three years of pent-up longing, a collision of relief and anger and a love that had never truly died. It was the taste of rain and bergamot and the faint, metallic hint of the world he inhabited. His arm wrapped around her waist, pulling her flush against him, the ivory handle of his cane digging lightly into her back. Her hands slid up to tangle in the slick perfection of his hair, ruining it, and she didn’t care. The briefcase, Ptolemy’s indignant meow, the entire city of London outside—it all melted away into the heat of his mouth on hers.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.31
leniency0.619
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1768
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count3
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
5
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"very"
2"carefully"
3"slowly"
4"truly"
5"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1768
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count2
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count3
6
word"sanctuary"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"marble"
count1
10
word"unravel"
count2
11
word"flicked"
count1
12
word"navigated"
count1
13
word"reminder"
count1
14
word"tracing"
count1
15
word"unspoken"
count1
16
word"charged"
count1
17
word"silence"
count2
18
word"yearning"
count1
19
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"stark"
2"gloom"
3"echoing"
4"glinting"
5"warmth"
6"sanctuary"
7"flickered"
8"unreadable"
9"marble"
10"unravel"
11"flicked"
12"navigated"
13"reminder"
14"tracing"
15"unspoken"
16"charged"
17"silence"
18"yearning"
19"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen68
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1754
ratio0.001
matches
0"ma chère"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1336
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.3
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Moreau2
Brick1
Lane1
Silas1
London2
Rory2
Ptolemy3
Lucien4
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
89.76% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a secret shared just with her"
1"felt like she was locking the past in w"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.57
wordCount1754
matches
0"not out of obligation, but out of the old, damnable curiosity he had always been able t"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean39.86
std23.03
cv0.578
sampleLengths
056
158
22
345
421
525
637
735
823
981
1055
1110
1249
1328
1425
1533
1632
1729
1848
1924
203
2139
2282
2321
2484
2543
267
2750
2852
2935
3012
3139
3240
3349
3424
3583
3640
3744
3856
3954
408
4152
4214
43107
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was forgotten"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs194
matches
0"was locking"
72.60% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences122
ratio0.025
matches
0"“May I come in?” His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one a bottomless black—held hers."
1"The scent of his cologne—bergamot and something darker, smoky, like old books and embers—cut through the spice-heavy air."
2"The briefcase, Ptolemy’s indignant meow, the entire city of London outside—it all melted away into the heat of his mouth on hers."
87.24% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount783
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"beautiful, infuriating, brilliant complication"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.04086845466155811
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006385696040868455
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean14.38
std9
cv0.626
sampleLengths
017
120
219
317
412
516
613
72
817
92
1026
1121
1212
1312
141
1513
1619
175
186
1913
2016
2112
228
233
2420
2515
2618
2728
2821
2930
304
3110
3220
3312
3411
356
3617
3711
387
3918
4028
415
425
4327
445
4524
4622
4710
4816
4910
42.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3114754098360656
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences95
matches
0"Instead, the figure leaning against"
1"All that existed was the"
2"Instead, her hand rose, hovering"
ratio0.032
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences95
matches
0"She expected Eva, maybe soaked"
1"His platinum blond hair was"
2"Her breath hitched, a tiny,"
3"His voice was a low"
4"She didn’t move, her grip"
5"Her knuckles whitened around the"
6"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
7"It wasn’t a question"
8"She remained a barrier between"
9"She finally stepped back, the"
10"It was a scent that"
11"He moved with a controlled"
12"He surveyed the room, taking"
13"His expression was unreadable."
14"he remarked, his tone dry"
15"She turned to face him,"
16"He turned from his inspection"
17"He leaned his cane against"
18"His jaw tightened almost imperceptibly."
19"She didn’t move from her"
ratio0.589
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences95
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"She expected Eva, maybe soaked"
3"Raindrops glistened on the shoulders"
4"His platinum blond hair was"
5"Her breath hitched, a tiny,"
6"His voice was a low"
7"She didn’t move, her grip"
8"Her knuckles whitened around the"
9"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
10"The amber one seemed to"
11"It wasn’t a question"
12"She remained a barrier between"
13"Ptolemy the tabby wound himself"
14"Lucien’s gaze flickered down to"
15"A ghost of a smile"
16"She finally stepped back, the"
17"The space she made was"
18"The scent of his cologne—bergamot"
19"It was a scent that"
ratio0.937
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"It was a scent that belonged to a different life, a life of whispered deals in shadowy corners and the dangerous thrill of the world beneath London’s surface."
1"She could see the fine lines at the corners of his eyes that hadn’t been there three years ago, the faint shadow of stubble along his jaw."
2"He’d walked away claiming a lack of it was for her own good, a necessary severance to protect her from the dangers that clung to him."
3"Lucien Moreau, the unflappable fixer, the half-demon who navigated the underworld with a smirk and a sharp blade, admitting to fear."
4"The touch was feather-light, a brand that sent a shock through her entire body."
5"She gave it to him by rising onto her toes, her eyes fluttering closed."
6"It was three years of pent-up longing, a collision of relief and anger and a love that had never truly died."
7"His arm wrapped around her waist, pulling her flush against him, the ivory handle of his cane digging lightly into her back."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he remarked, his tone dry"
1"The word came out, hard"
2"she whispered, her gaze dropping from his eyes to the envelope"
3"he continued, his voice rough"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.071
leniency0.143
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.095
77.9410%