| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her fingers closed around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.314 | | leniency | 0.627 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.039 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2223 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.77% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2223 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "wavered" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "flicked" | | 7 | "comforting" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "chill" | | 10 | "perfect" | | 11 | "fluttered" | | 12 | "crystal" | | 13 | "stomach" | | 14 | "glistening" | | 15 | "lurched" | | 16 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 194 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 194 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 229 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2214 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 62 | | wordCount | 1929 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.09 | | worstName | "Nyx" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Underground | 2 | | Nyx | 21 | | Rory | 19 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Veil | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Closer | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Victorian | 1 | | Penarth | 1 | | Pier | 1 | | Cold | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Veil" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Cold" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.956 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 137 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "something like birds drifted above the viney" | | 1 | "not quite words, more like the scrape of knives in a drawer" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 0.903 | | wordCount | 2214 | | matches | | 0 | "not with plants but with tables" | | 1 | "not with sound, but with shivers" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 229 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 115 | | mean | 19.25 | | std | 17.51 | | cv | 0.91 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 41 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 44 | | 41 | 67 | | 42 | 31 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 63 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 194 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 302 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 229 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1937 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slender leaf-shaped dagger" |
| | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.02219927723283428 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002065049044914817 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 229 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 229 | | mean | 9.67 | | std | 6.31 | | cv | 0.653 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 68.12% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.44541484716157204 | | totalSentences | 229 | | uniqueOpeners | 102 | |
| 38.54% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the chairs." | | 1 | "Then she stepped through the" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "Her whisper bounced off the" | | 1 | "It beat once, a slow" | | 2 | "Her fingers closed around the" | | 3 | "Their form stretched upward, taller," | | 4 | "She flicked her gaze over" | | 5 | "She lifted the dagger and" | | 6 | "She slid the Fae blade" | | 7 | "They leaned into the tear" | | 8 | "They stood on a ridge." | | 9 | "Her voice came out rough" | | 10 | "They trailed strips of torn" | | 11 | "They started down the path" | | 12 | "Her toe kicked the edge." | | 13 | "It plucked up the sugar" | | 14 | "They moved on." | | 15 | "Her stomach clenched." | | 16 | "She had eaten half a" | | 17 | "Her pendant burned against her" | | 18 | "She glanced sideways at them." | | 19 | "They walked along a terrace" |
| | ratio | 0.208 | |
| 55.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 140 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned platform breathed damp." | | 1 | "Water dripped from the curved" | | 2 | "A rusted sign still clung" | | 3 | "Rory shifted the strap of" | | 4 | "Her whisper bounced off the" | | 5 | "A strand of Nyx’s shadow" | | 6 | "The violet glow of their" | | 7 | "Nyx glanced toward the far" | | 8 | "Rory followed their gaze." | | 9 | "The brick wavered." | | 10 | "A patch the size of" | | 11 | "The Heartstone against her chest" | | 12 | "It beat once, a slow" | | 13 | "Her fingers closed around the" | | 14 | "The tiny crimson gem gave" | | 15 | "Nyx drifted closer to the" | | 16 | "Their form stretched upward, taller," | | 17 | "The graffiti’s colours bled in" | | 18 | "Rory stepped up beside them," | | 19 | "She flicked her gaze over" |
| | ratio | 0.809 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 74.01% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The wall’s bricks bent away from the centre, not moving yet not fixed, as if something inside pushed to escape." | | 1 | "Cold soaked into her palm from the hilt, a fierce, clean bite that fought the Heartstone’s heat." | | 2 | "Damp chill from the Underground faded under a sunless heat that smelled of baking bread." | | 3 | "Some bunches dripped juice before anyone touched them, clear streams that stained the soil rust." | | 4 | "Rory’s boots sank into ground that felt less like dirt and more like packed sponge cake." | | 5 | "Something fried in batter that crunched in her teeth without touching her tongue." | | 6 | "Nyx’s shadow lengthened over the edge of the terrace and pooled down the wall, a dark tongue that lapped at the bottom floor." | | 7 | "Rory drew one breath of air that did not smell of meat." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.039 | | leniency | 0.078 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.078 | |