"They formed a rough archway that framed nothing—until Aurora tilted her head."
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"Not silence—silence had texture, had weight."
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"She felt it through her soles—an expansion and contraction like massive lungs working beneath the soil."
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"Their shadow—normally a passive thing—stretched ahead of them, reaching toward the grove’s center while Nyx themselves lagged behind."
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"The canopy opened into a vault of amber sky—not the warm amber of Dymas, Aurora knew from description, but a shifting kaleidoscope of rose and gold that cast no shadows."
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"Each inhalation brought scents that triggered memories not her own—strawberries in winter, the salt of an ocean she’d never crossed, the particular ozone smell of her mother’s perfume from a bottle broken twenty years ago."
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"A circle of stones—smaller than the standing stones at the entrance, but older, worn smooth as river rock—enclosed a pool of absolute stillness."
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"Now the water showed Nyx as they were now—violet eyes, shifting form, ancient and ageless—and beside that image, a thread of silver light."
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"The standing stones at the grove’s edge—distant now, impossibly far—began to hum in a chord that made Aurora’s bones ache."
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"Aurora’s boots crunched against frost-killed grass one moment, then sank into loam that smelled of crushed lavender and lightning the next."
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"No footprints marked the frost behind her, nothing disturbed the silver hair that fell to her waist like spilled moonlight."
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"Gravity pulled wrong here, a diagonal tug that made her reach for the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip."
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"Her hair stood on end, black strands lifting from her shoulders to drift in a wind that didn’t exist."
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"The moonsilver carved through the thickened light, leaving trails of darkness that lingered too long."
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"Each inhalation brought scents that triggered memories not her own—strawberries in winter, the salt of an ocean she’d never crossed, the particular ozone smell …"
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"Each step released puffs of silver spores that danced around her knees, whispering in voices too small to understand."
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"Hundreds of them, clustered in constellations that hurt to look at directly, burning with cold fire."
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"The standing stones at the grove’s edge—distant now, impossibly far—began to hum in a chord that made Aurora’s bones ache."
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"The Fae-Forged Blade screamed in her hand, a silent vibration that traveled up her arm."