Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYRPDV6V2X0D0DEJS4YWXX

Run Details

Duration:
3m 57s
Cost:
$0.019674
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Richmond Park stretched beyond the terrace in shades of autumn grey, but the space behind the standing stones existed in perpetual, impossible spring. Aurora’s boots crunched against frost-killed grass one moment, then sank into loam that smelled of crushed lavender and lightning the next. She stopped at the boundary. Three stones towered before them, ancient oaks transmuted into granite and bone. They formed a rough archway that framed nothing—until Aurora tilted her head. Then she saw the shimmer, a distortion like heat rising from asphalt in July, except the November air bit her lungs with cold reality. "The Veil frays here," Nyx said. Their voice carried on the wind from three directions at once, a whisper that curled around Aurora’s skull. "I can taste the edges." Aurora’s fingers found the silver chain at her throat. The Heartstone Pendant beat against her sternum, a tiny, persistent drum. Warmth flooded her chest, spreading outward until her fingertips buzzed. "It’s reacting." Isolde stepped between the stones. No footprints marked the frost behind her, nothing disturbed the silver hair that fell to her waist like spilled moonlight. "Everything reacts to truth eventually. The question is whether you flinch." "I don’t flinch," Aurora said. "Then enter," Isolde replied, and vanished between the pillars. Nyx flickered, their violet eyes glowing brighter as they compressed from a six-foot silhouette into something denser, more human-shaped. "Solid form chafes here. The shadows want me loose." "Stay close," Aurora said. "Trying," Nyx whispered, and drifted forward. Aurora crossed the threshold. Sound died. Not silencesilence had texture, had weight. This was the absence of acoustic logic. Her own heartbeat thundered in her left ear, then her right, then somewhere behind her spine. She gasped, and the air tasted of honey fermented centuries past, sweet and alcoholic and tinged with copper. She stumbled. Gravity pulled wrong here, a diagonal tug that made her reach for the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip. The moonsilver met her palm with a cold shock, anchoring her to her own bones. The leaf-shaped dagger glowed faintly, luminescence rippling across its edge like water disturbed by a stone. "Don’t draw it yet," Isolde called from ahead. The Seer stood twenty meters distant, though she’d only taken three steps. "The grove interprets blades as questions. You may not like the answers." "Helpful," Aurora muttered. She forced her legs to move. The ground breathed. She felt it through her soles—an expansion and contraction like massive lungs working beneath the soil. Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in colors that shifted when viewed directly. One blossom, star-shaped and deep crimson, turned ultraviolet when Aurora blinked. Another emitted a low hum, a B-flat that vibrated in her teeth. Nyx moved beside her, their form stuttering between solid and smoke. "Time pools here. Look at your watch." Aurora checked her phone. The screen displayed 3:47 PM, but the digits bled, liquid crystal dripping upward against gravity. She shoved the device into her pocket. "Right. No technology." "Technology works," Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes fixed on a point above the canopy where no sun hung. "It simply refuses to lie. The grove compels honesty. Even machines feel it." They walked deeper. The trees closed ranks behind them, not with hostility but with the inevitability of stages changing in a theater. Aurora reached out to touch a trunk. The bark moved under her fingertips, rippling like water, rough texture becoming smooth, becoming scaled, becoming bark again. She snatched her hand back. "Living wood," Nyx observed. Their shadow—normally a passive thing—stretched ahead of them, reaching toward the grove’s center while Nyx themselves lagged behind. "It remembers being saplings in the Fae Courts. It wants to go home." Aurora’s scar itched. The crescent mark on her left wrist, souvenir of a childhood fall from her father’s library ladder, burned with a sudden icy fire. She scratched at it, felt the raised flesh humming in resonance with the Heartstone at her throat. "You feel the binding," Isolde said. Not a question. "I feel like I’m standing in an electric current," Aurora said. Her hair stood on end, black strands lifting from her shoulders to drift in a wind that didn’t exist. "Is it always this... much?" "For the living? Yes." Isolde stepped over a root that hadn’t existed a second prior. "For the dead? Less. For Shades?" She glanced at Nyx. "It depends which century you listen to." Nyx laughed, a sound like dry reeds snapping. Their form split momentarily, two Nyxes walking side by side, then snapped back into one. "I hear 1643. The year I stopped being Aldric. The grove plays it on repeat like a favorite record." They entered a cathedral of trees. The canopy opened into a vault of amber sky—not the warm amber of Dymas, Aurora knew from description, but a shifting kaleidoscope of rose and gold that cast no shadows. Instead, the light pooled in the air itself, viscous and golden, filling the space between tree trunks like honey poured into water. Aurora moved forward, blade drawn now despite Isolde’s warning. The moonsilver carved through the thickened light, leaving trails of darkness that lingered too long. Her breath came hard. Each inhalation brought scents that triggered memories not her own—strawberries in winter, the salt of an ocean she’d never crossed, the particular ozone smell of her mother’s perfume from a bottle broken twenty years ago. "Memory pollen," Isolde said. She stood atop a rise of moss that glowed faintly blue, still leaving no depression in the vegetation. "The grove harvests moments. Yours, mine, the little deaths of insects. It composts them into beauty." "That’s not creepy at all," Aurora said. She climbed the rise, her boots sinking into the bioluminescent moss. Each step released puffs of silver spores that danced around her knees, whispering in voices too small to understand. At the summit, the grove revealed its heart. A circle of stones—smaller than the standing stones at the entrance, but older, worn smooth as river rock—enclosed a pool of absolute stillness. The water reflected nothing of the amber sky above. Instead, it showed stars. Hundreds of them, clustered in constellations that hurt to look at directly, burning with cold fire. Nyx reached the pool’s edge first. They knelt, shadow-form darkening the grass to charcoal. "I see the summoning circle. The one that broke me." Aurora looked. The water showed Nyx’s past: a stone cellar, candles, a younger face with human eyes screaming as shadows poured into his mouth. She looked away, throat tight. Isolde touched her shoulder. The Seer’s fingers held no warmth. "Look again. It shows truth, not merely history." Aurora forced her gaze back. Now the water showed Nyx as they were now—violet eyes, shifting form, ancient and ageless—and beside that image, a thread of silver light. A path. A possibility. "The future?" Aurora asked. "One of them," Isolde said. "The grove exists at the intersection of was, is, and might be. We stand in the grammarian’s nightmare. Past tense, present danger, future perfect." The Heartstone flared against Aurora’s chest, crimson light spilling through her fingers as she clutched it. The warmth became heat, became burning. She gasped, dropping to her knees at the pool’s edge. "Rory!" Nyx’s voice sharpened, losing its whisper-quality, becoming almost human in alarm. "The pendant," Aurora managed. "It’s... opening." The gem pulsed in time with the strange stars in the pool. The water rippled, not from wind but from resonance. The standing stones at the grove’s edge—distant now, impossibly far—began to hum in a chord that made Aurora’s bones ache. Isolde’s expression shifted, the first emotion Aurora had seen on the Fae woman’s face. Concern. Or calculation. With Isolde, the two looked identical. "We’ve been noticed," Isolde said. "By what?" Aurora stood, blade raised. The Fae-Forged Blade screamed in her hand, a silent vibration that traveled up her arm. The moonsilver glowed white-hot, cutting not just air but the very fabric of the grove’s reality. Nyx spun, their form expanding, becoming vast and terrible, a cloak of living night. "Something older than the exile. Something that was here before the Fae Courts cast you out, Seer." The amber sky darkened to bruised purple. The wildflowers closed their petals with sounds like shutters slamming. The moss beneath Aurora’s feet grew cold, freezing through her boots, gripping her ankles with tendrils of frost. Isolde spoke a word in a language that had no consonants. It hung in the air, visible as a spiral of silver smoke. "Run," she said. "Or stay. Both choices lead through the grove. Neither leads back." Aurora looked at the path ahead, past the pool, where the trees grew thicker and the light fell in beams that solidified into crystal pillars. She looked back at the entrance, now obscured by a wall of mist that hadn’t existed moments before. The scar on her wrist burned. The Heartstone burned. The blade sang. "Forward," Aurora said. Isolde smiled, showing teeth that seemed sharper now. "As you choose." They moved deeper into the alien dark, following the song of the blade, leaving the pool of stars to reflect only the empty sky.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.535
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1538
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1538
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"whisper"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"thundered"
count1
6
word"tinged"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count2
9
word"resonance"
count2
10
word"electric"
count1
11
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"warmth"
2"flickered"
3"silence"
4"weight"
5"thundered"
6"tinged"
7"vibrated"
8"crystal"
9"resonance"
10"electric"
11"kaleidoscope"
12"perfect"
13"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences121
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1515
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions74
wordCount1252
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.16
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Park1
Aurora27
July1
November1
Heartstone4
Pendant1
Isolde15
Nyx13
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Seer2
Nyxes1
Dymas1
Fae3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
4"Blade"
5"Seer"
6"Nyxes"
places
0"Park"
1"July"
globalScore0.422
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed sharper now"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.64
wordCount1515
matches
0"not with hostility but with the inevitability of stages changing in a theater"
1"not the warm amber of Dymas, Aurora knew from description, but a shifting kaleidoscope of rose"
2"not from wind but from resonance"
3"not just air but the very fabric of the grove’s reality"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean28.06
std16.36
cv0.583
sampleLengths
044
15
248
329
432
536
65
79
828
94
106
114
1249
1351
1432
159
1653
1718
1829
1932
2052
2135
2243
239
2435
2532
2642
2758
2863
2938
3037
318
3252
3324
3429
3518
3632
374
3829
3932
4012
416
4241
4323
445
4537
4631
4735
4837
4943
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs215
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences141
ratio0.064
matches
0"They formed a rough archway that framed nothing—until Aurora tilted her head."
1"Not silence—silence had texture, had weight."
2"She felt it through her soles—an expansion and contraction like massive lungs working beneath the soil."
3"Their shadow—normally a passive thing—stretched ahead of them, reaching toward the grove’s center while Nyx themselves lagged behind."
4"The canopy opened into a vault of amber sky—not the warm amber of Dymas, Aurora knew from description, but a shifting kaleidoscope of rose and gold that cast no shadows."
5"Each inhalation brought scents that triggered memories not her own—strawberries in winter, the salt of an ocean she’d never crossed, the particular ozone smell of her mother’s perfume from a bottle broken twenty years ago."
6"A circle of stones—smaller than the standing stones at the entrance, but older, worn smooth as river rock—enclosed a pool of absolute stillness."
7"Now the water showed Nyx as they were now—violet eyes, shifting form, ancient and ageless—and beside that image, a thread of silver light."
8"The standing stones at the grove’s edge—distant now, impossibly far—began to hum in a chord that made Aurora’s bones ache."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1275
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"against frost-killed grass"
1"becoming smooth, becoming scaled, becoming bark"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.025098039215686273
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.00784313725490196
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean10.74
std6.87
cv0.64
sampleLengths
023
121
25
312
412
524
66
718
85
99
1011
1110
122
135
1420
1511
165
179
1819
199
204
216
224
232
246
257
2616
2718
282
2918
3015
3116
328
3312
3412
353
366
373
3816
3911
4011
4112
4211
437
444
4515
467
473
4819
4913
53.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3829787234042553
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners54
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences99
matches
0"Then she saw the shimmer,"
1"Instead, the light pooled in"
2"Instead, it showed stars."
ratio0.03
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences99
matches
0"She stopped at the boundary."
1"They formed a rough archway"
2"Their voice carried on the"
3"Her own heartbeat thundered in"
4"She gasped, and the air"
5"She forced her legs to"
6"She felt it through her"
7"She shoved the device into"
8"They walked deeper."
9"She snatched her hand back."
10"Their shadow—normally a passive thing—stretched"
11"She scratched at it, felt"
12"Her hair stood on end,"
13"She glanced at Nyx"
14"Their form split momentarily, two"
15"They entered a cathedral of"
16"Her breath came hard."
17"She stood atop a rise"
18"She climbed the rise, her"
19"They knelt, shadow-form darkening the"
ratio0.253
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences99
matches
0"Richmond Park stretched beyond the"
1"Aurora’s boots crunched against frost-killed"
2"She stopped at the boundary."
3"They formed a rough archway"
4"Their voice carried on the"
5"Aurora’s fingers found the silver"
6"The Heartstone Pendant beat against"
7"Warmth flooded her chest, spreading"
8"Isolde stepped between the stones."
9"Isolde replied, and vanished between"
10"Nyx flickered, their violet eyes"
11"Nyx whispered, and drifted forward"
12"Aurora crossed the threshold."
13"This was the absence of"
14"Her own heartbeat thundered in"
15"She gasped, and the air"
16"Gravity pulled wrong here, a"
17"The moonsilver met her palm"
18"The leaf-shaped dagger glowed faintly,"
19"Isolde called from ahead"
ratio0.889
50.51% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"Now the water showed Nyx"
ratio0.01
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Aurora’s boots crunched against frost-killed grass one moment, then sank into loam that smelled of crushed lavender and lightning the next."
1"No footprints marked the frost behind her, nothing disturbed the silver hair that fell to her waist like spilled moonlight."
2"Gravity pulled wrong here, a diagonal tug that made her reach for the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip."
3"Her hair stood on end, black strands lifting from her shoulders to drift in a wind that didn’t exist."
4"The moonsilver carved through the thickened light, leaving trails of darkness that lingered too long."
5"Each inhalation brought scents that triggered memories not her own—strawberries in winter, the salt of an ocean she’d never crossed, the particular ozone smell …"
6"Each step released puffs of silver spores that danced around her knees, whispering in voices too small to understand."
7"Hundreds of them, clustered in constellations that hurt to look at directly, burning with cold fire."
8"The standing stones at the grove’s edge—distant now, impossibly far—began to hum in a chord that made Aurora’s bones ache."
9"The Fae-Forged Blade screamed in her hand, a silent vibration that traveled up her arm."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
80.23% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
2"Nyx observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.419
leniency0.837
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.14
78.8748%