Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYRQM8387X6Q66GEDHBVYG

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Duration:
49.0s
Cost:
$0.006456
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose against the night sky like the ribs of something long dead and incompletely buried. Rory checked her phone. 11:47 PM. The screen's glow seemed feeble against the darkness pressing in from all sides, and the battery icon had turned an angry red sometime during her walk from the bus stop. She thumbed the screen off and tucked it into her jacket pocket. The Heartstone pendant hung cold against her sternum, its silver chain biting into the back of her neck. She'd felt its warmth fade three hours ago, that subtle pulse of heat that had drawn her across London like a thread pulling through fabric. Now it sat dormant against her skin, and she stood at the edge of Richmond Park with nothing but dead warmth and a growing knot in her stomach. The grove waited beyond the ancient oaks. She could see the gap between two of the standing stones, a slice of darkness marginally deeper than the darkness surrounding it. She shouldn't have come alone. The thought arrived with the clarity of truth, and Rory pushed it aside. Eva had been clear — the pendant's warmth meant a Hel portal was opening somewhere nearby. The pendant had led her here. That was the plan. That was the whole reason she'd taken the late shift, told Silas she'd be late tomorrow, caught the last bus out to Richmond. But the pendant had gone cold the moment she'd stepped off at the stop near the park entrance. Wind stirred the grass at her feet. Somewhere beyond the trees, an owl called — a low, resonant sound that seemed to come from much too far away. Rory stepped between the standing stones. The air changed. Not colder, not warmer — different. Thinner, somehow, as if she'd stepped into a room where the atmosphere had been partially drained. The sounds of the city that had followed her from the bus stop, distant traffic and the hum of streetlights, vanished entirely. Her own breathing seemed muffled, contained. The grove spread before her, a perfect circle of wildflowers that shouldn't have been blooming in October. White petals caught light from no visible source, and the stems swayed in a breeze she couldn't feel against her skin. She took another step. The grass beneath her boots made no sound. "Hello?" Her voice came out wrong — flattened, stripped of echo. The word existed only directly in front of her face and then died. Rory walked forward. The wildflowers gave way to bare earth after perhaps twenty paces, and the trees that ringed the clearing seemed to lean inward, their branches tangling overhead into a lattice that blocked out the stars. The moon had been half-full when she'd entered the park. Now she couldn't find it at all. She pulled out her phone again. No signal. The time read 11:47 PM. Same as before. She'd been walking for at least a minute. The time should have changed. The pendant remained cold against her chest. Rory reached up and touched the gemstone, running her thumb across its smooth surface. Nothing. No warmth, no pulse, no faint inner glow. Whatever had drawn her here had either stopped or was hiding. She turned in a slow circle, taking in the grove. The standing stones were gone. The gap she'd walked through had sealed itself, leaving only unbroken tree line in every direction. "Okay." She kept her voice level. "Okay. This is fine." A branch cracked somewhere to her left. Rory spun toward the sound. Nothing moved among the trees. The stillness had a quality she couldn't name — not the ordinary stillness of a forest at night, but something held, deliberate, as if everything around her had paused and was waiting. She started walking. No point standing still. If she'd come in from the north, south should lead her out. The trees weren't that thick, and Richmond Park was crisscrossed with paths. Someone would be walking a dog, jogging, something. It wasn't that late. The ground sloped downward. Rory hadn't remembered any hills in the grove, but she kept moving, picking her way between the trees. Moss carpeted the earth here, silent under her boots. The wildflowers had vanished, replaced by pale mushrooms that grew in perfect circles, their caps luminescent in the darkness. The air grew warmer. Not the warmth of the pendant — she would have welcomed that. This was damp and organic, the heat of a greenhouse or a closed room. Rory unzipped her jacket, her skin prickling with sweat despite the October chill she'd felt outside the stones. Another sound. This time to her right. She didn't turn. Kept walking. Whatever was making the noise wanted her to look, and looking felt like exactly the wrong thing to do. The mushrooms thickened. Their glow strengthened, casting her shadow long and distorted across the ground. Her shadow moved wrong — the arm that hung at her side in the light stretched at an impossible angle, fingers elongated into something with too many joints. Rory stopped walking. Her shadow stopped a half-second later. "Someone's there." She didn't phrase it as a question. The words fell into the warm air and hung there, unmoving. Silence answered her. Then, from directly behind: "You came." Rory whirled. The trees stood empty, their branches motionless. The mushrooms glowed steadily. The moss showed no footprints, no disturbed earth, no evidence that anyone had ever stood where she now looked. But she'd heard it. A voice — low, genderless, familiar in a way that made her stomach clench. Not Eva's voice. Not anyone's voice she could place. "Who's there?" The trees seemed closer than they'd been a moment ago. The gap between their trunks had narrowed, branches extending toward her like fingers reaching across a table. "You weren't supposed to come alone." The voice came from everywhere now. From the moss beneath her feet, the mushrooms, the bark of the surrounding oaks. Rory backed up until her shoulders hit a trunk. The bark was warm against her spine. Pulsing faintly, like skin. She pushed away from the tree, stumbling forward. Her boot caught on something — a root, a stone — and she went down hard on one knee. The moss cushioned her fall, but her hands sank into it up to the wrists, and when she tried to pull them free, the ground held fast. "Let go." The moss released her. Rory scrambled backward, her heart slamming against her ribs. She got her feet under her and ran. The trees blurred past. Branches whipped at her face and arms, leaving thin lines of fire across her skin. She didn't slow down. The pendant bounced against her chest, still cold, useless, and she wanted to rip it off and throw it into the darkness. A root caught her ankle. Rory fell. The earth rushed up to meet her, and she rolled, coming up against something hard and unyielding. She lay still for a moment, breathing hard, tasting copper where she'd bitten her tongue. The thing she'd hit was warm. She sat up slowly. Her hand found the object beside her — smooth, curved, the size of a man's rib. Bone. Bleached clean and arranged in a perfect semi-circle. More bones extended beyond it. Ribs, vertebrae, a partial skull still bearing teeth that gleamed in the mushroom-light. The skeleton had been laid out with care, each bone in its proper place, as if someone had been in the process of assembling it when they'd stopped. Or waiting to add to it. Rory rose to her feet. Her hands shook. She could feel the edges of herself fraying, panic nibbling at the cool rationality she'd always prided herself on. She'd come here because the pendant warmed. That was the only reason. The pendant had led her toward Hel portals, toward danger, and she'd followed it like a thread through a labyrinth. Only now the thread had snapped, and she was lost in a grove that shouldn't exist, surrounded by trees that moved when she wasn't looking and bones that had been arranged with deliberate care. A sound rose from somewhere deeper in the forest. Humming. The tune was old, something her grandmother might have sung. A lullaby. The notes drifted between the trees, unhurried, patient. Coming closer. Rory's back hit another tree. She hadn't meant to retreat. Her legs had made the decision without consulting her brain. The humming stopped. In the silence that followed, she became aware of a new sound — soft, wet, regular. Breathing. Close. Directly to her left. She turned her head. The thing stood not three feet away. It had the shape of a person, roughly — two arms, two legs, a head — but the proportions were wrong. Limbs too long, joints bending in directions they shouldn't. Its skin was the colour of old milk, stretched tight over a frame that seemed made of angles rather than curves. It had no eyes, no nose, only a mouth that opened slightly as she watched, revealing teeth that went back further than any mouth should allow. "You came," it said, in the same voice as before. "We've been waiting." Rory's hand found the pendant. The gemstone flared hot against her palm — burning hot, suddenly alive with the crimson glow she'd almost forgotten. The creature took a step toward her. The pendant pulsed. And the creature stopped. Its eyeless face turned toward the gemstone, and something flickered across its features — recognition, perhaps. Or hunger. "Where did you get that?" Rory didn't answer. She held the pendant tighter, the metal biting into her fingers, the heat spreading up her wrist and into her arm. The creature's head tilted. A smile spread across its face, too wide, too knowing. "It doesn't matter," it said. "You're already here. You came alone. And time moves differently in the grove, little carrier. Your people won't find you for days yet. Weeks. Maybe longer." It took another step. Rory raised the pendant between them. The glow intensified, casting red light across the creature's pale features. It didn't recoil. Didn't slow. "But they gave you that for a reason. Didn't they?" Its hand reached toward her. The fingers were too long, too jointed, the skin almost translucent. "Who are you?" Rory's voice came out steady. Somehow. The creature paused. Its smile widened further, splitting the corners of its mouth. "I'm the one who watches the door." It leaned closer. "And you, Aurora Carter, just walked through it."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.353
leniency0.706
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1742
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1742
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"warmth"
count5
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"stomach"
count2
3
word"perfect"
count3
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulse"
2"stomach"
3"perfect"
4"echo"
5"chill"
6"silence"
7"familiar"
8"could feel"
9"pulsed"
10"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences172
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences172
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences182
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1754
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.01% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1667
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.14
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
London1
Richmond3
Park2
Rory19
Hel2
Silas1
October2
Eva2
Somehow1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Eva"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Hel"
globalScore0.93
windowScore1
2.94% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"seemed feeble against the darkness pressing in from all sides, and the battery icon had turned an angry red sometime during her walk from the bus stop"
1"sound that seemed to come from much too far away"
2"seemed muffled contained"
3"felt like exactly the wrong thing to do"
4"seemed closer than they'd been a moment ago"
5"seemed made of angles rather than curves"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.57
wordCount1754
matches
0"not the ordinary stillness of a forest at night, but something held, deliberate, as if everything around her had"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences182
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean22.49
std18.83
cv0.837
sampleLengths
018
148
271
329
45
562
618
728
86
953
1038
1112
121
1323
1454
1513
163
1713
1841
1931
2010
217
2242
233
2440
2550
264
2744
287
2924
3043
313
326
3320
343
356
3632
3727
382
3927
406
4140
4254
432
4421
4545
465
4734
486
4929
97.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences172
matches
0"were gone"
1"was crisscrossed"
2"been laid"
3"was lost"
4"been arranged"
79.66% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs277
matches
0"was opening"
1"was hiding"
2"was waiting"
3"was making"
4"wasn't looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences182
ratio0.077
matches
0"Eva had been clear — the pendant's warmth meant a Hel portal was opening somewhere nearby."
1"Somewhere beyond the trees, an owl called — a low, resonant sound that seemed to come from much too far away."
2"Not colder, not warmer — different."
3"Her voice came out wrong — flattened, stripped of echo."
4"The stillness had a quality she couldn't name — not the ordinary stillness of a forest at night, but something held, deliberate, as if everything around her had paused and was waiting."
5"Not the warmth of the pendant — she would have welcomed that."
6"Her shadow moved wrong — the arm that hung at her side in the light stretched at an impossible angle, fingers elongated into something with too many joints."
7"A voice — low, genderless, familiar in a way that made her stomach clench."
8"Her boot caught on something — a root, a stone — and she went down hard on one knee."
9"Her hand found the object beside her — smooth, curved, the size of a man's rib."
10"In the silence that followed, she became aware of a new sound — soft, wet, regular."
11"It had the shape of a person, roughly — two arms, two legs, a head — but the proportions were wrong."
12"The gemstone flared hot against her palm — burning hot, suddenly alive with the crimson glow she'd almost forgotten."
13"Its eyeless face turned toward the gemstone, and something flickered across its features — recognition, perhaps."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1655
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount66
adverbRatio0.03987915407854985
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.011480362537764351
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences182
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences182
mean9.64
std7.51
cv0.78
sampleLengths
018
14
22
330
412
518
625
728
87
922
105
1113
1216
136
144
1523
1618
177
1821
196
203
216
2216
2322
246
2517
2621
274
288
291
3010
3113
323
3334
3410
357
366
372
385
393
408
415
427
4314
441
458
4611
4710
485
4916
44.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3131868131868132
totalSentences182
uniqueOpeners57
86.02% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences155
matches
0"Somewhere beyond the trees, an"
1"Then, from directly behind:"
2"Only now the thread had"
3"Directly to her left."
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences155
matches
0"She thumbed the screen off"
1"She'd felt its warmth fade"
2"She could see the gap"
3"She shouldn't have come alone."
4"Her own breathing seemed muffled,"
5"She took another step."
6"Her voice came out wrong"
7"She pulled out her phone"
8"She'd been walking for at"
9"She turned in a slow"
10"She kept her voice level"
11"She started walking."
12"It wasn't that late."
13"She didn't turn."
14"Their glow strengthened, casting her"
15"Her shadow moved wrong —"
16"Her shadow stopped a half-second"
17"She didn't phrase it as"
18"She pushed away from the"
19"Her boot caught on something"
ratio0.271
43.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount129
totalSentences155
matches
0"The standing stones rose against"
1"Rory checked her phone."
2"The screen's glow seemed feeble"
3"She thumbed the screen off"
4"The Heartstone pendant hung cold"
5"She'd felt its warmth fade"
6"The grove waited beyond the"
7"She could see the gap"
8"She shouldn't have come alone."
9"The thought arrived with the"
10"Eva had been clear —"
11"The pendant had led her"
12"That was the plan."
13"That was the whole reason"
14"Rory stepped between the standing"
15"The air changed."
16"The sounds of the city"
17"Her own breathing seemed muffled,"
18"The grove spread before her,"
19"She took another step."
ratio0.832
96.77% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences155
matches
0"Now it sat dormant against"
1"Now she couldn't find it"
2"If she'd come in from"
ratio0.019
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Somewhere beyond the trees, an owl called — a low, resonant sound that seemed to come from much too far away."
1"The grove spread before her, a perfect circle of wildflowers that shouldn't have been blooming in October."
2"The stillness had a quality she couldn't name — not the ordinary stillness of a forest at night, but something held, deliberate, as if everything around her had…"
3"Her shadow moved wrong — the arm that hung at her side in the light stretched at an impossible angle, fingers elongated into something with too many joints."
4"A voice — low, genderless, familiar in a way that made her stomach clench."
5"Ribs, vertebrae, a partial skull still bearing teeth that gleamed in the mushroom-light."
6"Only now the thread had snapped, and she was lost in a grove that shouldn't exist, surrounded by trees that moved when she wasn't looking and bones that had bee…"
7"In the silence that followed, she became aware of a new sound — soft, wet, regular."
8"Its skin was the colour of old milk, stretched tight over a frame that seemed made of angles rather than curves."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.235
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.1110%