| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.353 | | leniency | 0.706 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.39% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1742 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 42.59% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1742 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "echo" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "could feel" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 172 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 172 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 182 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1754 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.01% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1667 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.14 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | London | 1 | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 2 | | Rory | 19 | | Hel | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | October | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | Somehow | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.93 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 2.94% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed feeble against the darkness pressing in from all sides, and the battery icon had turned an angry red sometime during her walk from the bus stop" | | 1 | "sound that seemed to come from much too far away" | | 2 | "seemed muffled contained" | | 3 | "felt like exactly the wrong thing to do" | | 4 | "seemed closer than they'd been a moment ago" | | 5 | "seemed made of angles rather than curves" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.57 | | wordCount | 1754 | | matches | | 0 | "not the ordinary stillness of a forest at night, but something held, deliberate, as if everything around her had" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 182 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 78 | | mean | 22.49 | | std | 18.83 | | cv | 0.837 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 53 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 54 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 50 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 44 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 43 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 32 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 40 | | 42 | 54 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 45 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 34 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 29 |
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| 97.10% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "were gone" | | 1 | "was crisscrossed" | | 2 | "been laid" | | 3 | "was lost" | | 4 | "been arranged" |
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| 79.66% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 277 | | matches | | 0 | "was opening" | | 1 | "was hiding" | | 2 | "was waiting" | | 3 | "was making" | | 4 | "wasn't looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 182 | | ratio | 0.077 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva had been clear — the pendant's warmth meant a Hel portal was opening somewhere nearby." | | 1 | "Somewhere beyond the trees, an owl called — a low, resonant sound that seemed to come from much too far away." | | 2 | "Not colder, not warmer — different." | | 3 | "Her voice came out wrong — flattened, stripped of echo." | | 4 | "The stillness had a quality she couldn't name — not the ordinary stillness of a forest at night, but something held, deliberate, as if everything around her had paused and was waiting." | | 5 | "Not the warmth of the pendant — she would have welcomed that." | | 6 | "Her shadow moved wrong — the arm that hung at her side in the light stretched at an impossible angle, fingers elongated into something with too many joints." | | 7 | "A voice — low, genderless, familiar in a way that made her stomach clench." | | 8 | "Her boot caught on something — a root, a stone — and she went down hard on one knee." | | 9 | "Her hand found the object beside her — smooth, curved, the size of a man's rib." | | 10 | "In the silence that followed, she became aware of a new sound — soft, wet, regular." | | 11 | "It had the shape of a person, roughly — two arms, two legs, a head — but the proportions were wrong." | | 12 | "The gemstone flared hot against her palm — burning hot, suddenly alive with the crimson glow she'd almost forgotten." | | 13 | "Its eyeless face turned toward the gemstone, and something flickered across its features — recognition, perhaps." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1655 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 66 | | adverbRatio | 0.03987915407854985 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011480362537764351 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 182 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 182 | | mean | 9.64 | | std | 7.51 | | cv | 0.78 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 44.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.3131868131868132 | | totalSentences | 182 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 86.02% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere beyond the trees, an" | | 1 | "Then, from directly behind:" | | 2 | "Only now the thread had" | | 3 | "Directly to her left." |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "She thumbed the screen off" | | 1 | "She'd felt its warmth fade" | | 2 | "She could see the gap" | | 3 | "She shouldn't have come alone." | | 4 | "Her own breathing seemed muffled," | | 5 | "She took another step." | | 6 | "Her voice came out wrong" | | 7 | "She pulled out her phone" | | 8 | "She'd been walking for at" | | 9 | "She turned in a slow" | | 10 | "She kept her voice level" | | 11 | "She started walking." | | 12 | "It wasn't that late." | | 13 | "She didn't turn." | | 14 | "Their glow strengthened, casting her" | | 15 | "Her shadow moved wrong —" | | 16 | "Her shadow stopped a half-second" | | 17 | "She didn't phrase it as" | | 18 | "She pushed away from the" | | 19 | "Her boot caught on something" |
| | ratio | 0.271 | |
| 43.87% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 129 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose against" | | 1 | "Rory checked her phone." | | 2 | "The screen's glow seemed feeble" | | 3 | "She thumbed the screen off" | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant hung cold" | | 5 | "She'd felt its warmth fade" | | 6 | "The grove waited beyond the" | | 7 | "She could see the gap" | | 8 | "She shouldn't have come alone." | | 9 | "The thought arrived with the" | | 10 | "Eva had been clear —" | | 11 | "The pendant had led her" | | 12 | "That was the plan." | | 13 | "That was the whole reason" | | 14 | "Rory stepped between the standing" | | 15 | "The air changed." | | 16 | "The sounds of the city" | | 17 | "Her own breathing seemed muffled," | | 18 | "The grove spread before her," | | 19 | "She took another step." |
| | ratio | 0.832 | |
| 96.77% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it sat dormant against" | | 1 | "Now she couldn't find it" | | 2 | "If she'd come in from" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 45.45% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere beyond the trees, an owl called — a low, resonant sound that seemed to come from much too far away." | | 1 | "The grove spread before her, a perfect circle of wildflowers that shouldn't have been blooming in October." | | 2 | "The stillness had a quality she couldn't name — not the ordinary stillness of a forest at night, but something held, deliberate, as if everything around her had…" | | 3 | "Her shadow moved wrong — the arm that hung at her side in the light stretched at an impossible angle, fingers elongated into something with too many joints." | | 4 | "A voice — low, genderless, familiar in a way that made her stomach clench." | | 5 | "Ribs, vertebrae, a partial skull still bearing teeth that gleamed in the mushroom-light." | | 6 | "Only now the thread had snapped, and she was lost in a grove that shouldn't exist, surrounded by trees that moved when she wasn't looking and bones that had bee…" | | 7 | "In the silence that followed, she became aware of a new sound — soft, wet, regular." | | 8 | "Its skin was the colour of old milk, stretched tight over a frame that seemed made of angles rather than curves." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.118 | | leniency | 0.235 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |