Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYRVE3D1AN4Z1Q6ZM57MKZ

Run Details

Model:
GPT-5.1
Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.037240
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain sheeted across Camden High Street and turned the pavement into a ribbon of black glass. Headlights smeared into long, greasy streaks in the puddles. Harlow Quinn hunched deeper into her coat and watched the man across the road adjust his hood. Short. Olive skin. Curly dark hair flattened by the downpour. The Saint Christopher medallion flashed once at his throat when a bus roared past and washed him in white light. Herrera. He touched the scar along his left forearm as he checked his watch, sleeve dragged back for a second. That same nervous tic from the photos. The worn satchel thumped against his hip as he stepped off the curb. Her thumb rolled along the grooves of her own leather watchband. Eighteen months of dead ends and half-truths wrapped themselves around his name. Off-the-books medic. The clique’s quiet paramedic who never left a trace. The traffic light flicked red. He cut between a stopped taxi and a lorry. Her hand already closed around the radio on her belt. "Control, this is Quinn. I have Tomás Herrera, Camden High Street, heading north. Requesting—" Herrera glanced back. Their eyes met through the sheet of rain. His widened, the warmth in them iced over in an instant. He bolted. Harlow dropped the radio. "Tomás! Police. Stop!" Her boots hit the road hard, water exploding around her ankles. Horns blared as she sliced between bumpers. A driver leaned out his window and swore at her. She shoved off the bonnet of a hatchback and sprang after him. He moved fast for a man hauling a satchel. He wove through a knot of tourists huddled under a shop awning. An umbrella snapped in her face. "Watch it!" "Police!" Her voice ripped out of her throat, sharp as glass. "Move!" Bodies parted. A teenage girl yanked her friend out of Harlow’s path, eyes wide. Her feet hammered the slick pavement, muscles burning, lungs drawing in cold air laced with exhaust and fried food. Herrera glanced back again. His hood had slipped. Rain pinned dark curls to his forehead. His mouth twisted. "You don't want this, detective!" "Keep running," she called, breath cutting the words short, "and you'll find out exactly what I want." He veered left, away from the main drag. Past the last chain restaurant, past neon signs and kebab shops, into a narrow side street that stank of wet brick and spilled beer. Harlow followed. The city closed in. Flats loomed above, windows yellow and blind. The only light came from a single security lamp, its halo distorted by the rain. Herrera’s trainers slapped against the uneven stones, echo bouncing off the walls. Her own footfalls chased his rhythm. He hurdled a stack of empty crates. She ploughed straight through them. Plastic cracked. A crate tangled her ankle. She stumbled, caught herself on a graffiti-tagged wall, shoved off and kept going. "Stop!" The word tore loose, raw. He didn't. He darted past overflowing bins and a back door propped with a beer keg. Somewhere behind the door, music thumped, muffled and distant. The smell—stale beer, bleach, something sweet and rotting—rolled out in waves. Rain soaked through her shirt. Her leather watchband squelched against her skin. Her fingers went numb around the weight of her service pistol at her hip. He cut right at the end of the alley. She slid, boots fighting for grip, shoulder slamming into the corner of the wall. Pain flared down her arm. She pushed off and turned. The street beyond was near empty. A shuttered shopfront. A row of dark townhouses. In the distance, Camden’s lights glowed, blurred by the storm. Straight ahead, a rusted iron gate blocked off a descending set of stairs, brickwork cracked around the arch. Disused Tube entrance. She had clocked it in passing a dozen times. Boarded since before she joined the Met. Metal sign above, the old Underground roundel faded and pockmarked with rust. Herrera sprinted straight for it. "Dead end, Tomás!" Her voice bounced down the narrow way. He didn’t slow. The gate should have stopped him. It had a heavy chain twisted through the bars, a padlock thick as her thumb. He drew something from his pocket. Small. Bone pale. It gleamed wetly in his hand under the security light. He pressed it against the chain. Metal hissed. Harlow’s breath snagged. A sound like steam and whispering breath rolled over the rain. The chain sagged, links darkening as if they rusted in fast motion. The padlock buckled. The gate wobbled open half an inch under his push. "No way," she muttered. He threw her one last look over his shoulder. His chest rose and fell fast. "This is not your ground, detective." "You're carrying contraband," she fired back, rain dripping from her lashes. "Where you run, my ground follows." His jaw clenched. "Then you better pray you can still walk back up." He slipped through the gap and vanished down the stairs. The gate creaked as it swung shut behind him. Harlow reached it two heartbeats later. The chain hung slack, heavy and cold when she grabbed it. Solid. No break, no scorch, no mark. The padlock’s surface felt rough, flaking under her thumb. Orange rust dusted her skin. Her radio crackled behind her. "Quinn, you still with us? Status on Herrera?" She ignored it. Water beaded on the gate’s bars. Her reflection broke into fractured segments in the black glass of the stairwell below. No light. Nothing but shadow and the endless drip of water. Her fingers tightened. Unfamiliar territory. Doors that opened for bone-white tokens and shut again as if nothing had touched them. Morris had stood in a doorway like that. Different alley, different city block, same thin slice of darkness in front of him. Three years ago. Rain just as heavy. His shoulders relaxed as he turned to look back at her. "Don't follow," he had called, grin wide. "Paperwork can't take another miracle." He never walked back out. Her throat closed around the memory. The radio hissed again. "Detective Quinn, respond. Do you require assistance?" Assistance. A patrol car and two uniforms who would crank that padlock, find it stubborn and ordinary, and log the whole thing as a wild goose chase in the Camden rain. Herrera gone. Another ghost in a file. She pressed the transmit button without lifting the radio. "Control, suspect entered a building. I’m making enquiries. Stand by." "Copy, Quinn. Keep your radio live." She clipped it back to her belt. The rain softened here, as if the alley itself shielded the gate. Water still fell, but the sound dampened. The street noise on the main road faded to a distant hum. The air tasted old. Dust and copper and something faintly sweet that didn't belong to the city. Her hand found the gate’s edge. She pushed. It didn’t move. She set her shoulder into it. Rust groaned. The chain strained, metal grinding against metal. For a second, she felt resistance hold like bone under a boot. Then the gate shifted. An inch. Two. Cold breathed up from below, not the damp chill of a normal underground stair, but an absence, as if the air itself didn’t want to exist down there. Gooseflesh marched up her arms under the soaked fabric. A thin glow flickered deep below, not the steady yellow of Tube lights, but a shifting, many-coloured pulse, like candle flames seen through warped glass. Harlow drew her pistol and thumbed off the safety. The movement slid into place out of habit. Her hands stayed steady. The only tremor lived in the tight muscles around her jaw. She leaned in. A faint murmur rose from below. Voices, dozens at least. Bartering tones. Laughter. The clink of glass. Another sound threaded through them, low and constant, like a distant animal growl or an industrial generator. She couldn't pin it down. Herrera had disappeared into that. A sane detective would call it. Seal the area. Wait for a team. Wait for daylight. Wait for someone to draw a map of the unknown for her. Her boot already rested on the first step. "Tomás Herrera," she called, voice dropping in the shaft. "You are under arrest for obstruction and suspected trafficking of controlled substances. Come back up now." Silence answered. Then a single shout echoed faintly, distant enough that she couldn't catch the words. Laughter followed it. She muttered under her breath. "You wanted this case, Harlow. Stop flinching." Her watch ticked against her skin, the drumbeat of seconds clear under the hush. Rain tapped on metal above. The city felt very far away. The gate stood half-open. The rusted chain coiled like a dead snake around the bars. The doorway yawned black. Her breath went out in a slow stream. She tasted concrete dust and old oil on her tongue. "Control," she spoke into the radio, not taking her eyes from the light pulsing below, "signal might drop. I’m going underground." Before the response crackled back, she slipped through the gap, squared her shoulders to the dark, and descended into the hidden station.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1521
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1521
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"jaw clenched"
count1
6
word"fractured"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"warmth"
2"loomed"
3"echo"
4"weight"
5"jaw clenched"
6"fractured"
7"chill"
8"flickered"
9"pulse"
10"silence"
11"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences178
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences178
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences193
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1512
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1375
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.51
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden3
High1
Street1
Quinn1
Saint1
Christopher1
Bodies1
Harlow7
Tube2
Met1
Underground1
Silence1
Rain5
Herrera7
Wait3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Saint"
2"Christopher"
3"Bodies"
4"Harlow"
5"Tube"
6"Silence"
7"Rain"
8"Herrera"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences105
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
67.72% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.323
wordCount1512
matches
0"not the damp chill of a normal underground stair, but an absence, as if the air itself didn’t want to exist down t"
1"not the steady yellow of Tube lights, but a shifting, many-coloured pulse, like candle flames seen thr"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences193
matches
0"crank that padlock"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs89
mean16.99
std13.24
cv0.779
sampleLengths
042
130
21
339
434
514
610
714
83
919
102
114
123
1340
1427
152
1612
1733
1818
195
2017
2132
222
2344
2432
256
262
2734
2826
299
3024
3142
3231
335
3410
353
3621
3719
386
392
4039
414
4215
436
4417
453
4610
4710
489
4938
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences178
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs239
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences193
ratio0.005
matches
0"The smell—stale beer, bleach, something sweet and rotting—rolled out in waves."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1384
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.024566473988439308
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004335260115606936
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences193
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences193
mean7.83
std5.31
cv0.678
sampleLengths
016
19
217
31
42
57
620
71
819
97
1013
1111
1212
132
149
155
169
1710
1814
193
208
2111
222
234
243
2511
267
2710
2812
299
3012
316
322
3311
341
352
3612
3719
384
394
407
413
425
4317
448
4524
462
474
487
4915
58.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.38860103626943004
totalSentences193
uniqueOpeners75
65.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences153
matches
0"Somewhere behind the door, music"
1"Then the gate shifted."
2"Then a single shout echoed"
ratio0.02
60.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount61
totalSentences153
matches
0"He touched the scar along"
1"Her thumb rolled along the"
2"He cut between a stopped"
3"Her hand already closed around"
4"Their eyes met through the"
5"His widened, the warmth in"
6"Her boots hit the road"
7"She shoved off the bonnet"
8"He moved fast for a"
9"He wove through a knot"
10"Her voice ripped out of"
11"Her feet hammered the slick"
12"His hood had slipped."
13"His mouth twisted."
14"she called, breath cutting the"
15"He veered left, away from"
16"Her own footfalls chased his"
17"He hurdled a stack of"
18"She ploughed straight through them."
19"She stumbled, caught herself on"
ratio0.399
38.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount129
totalSentences153
matches
0"Rain sheeted across Camden High"
1"Headlights smeared into long, greasy"
2"Harlow Quinn hunched deeper into"
3"The Saint Christopher medallion flashed"
4"He touched the scar along"
5"That same nervous tic from"
6"The worn satchel thumped against"
7"Her thumb rolled along the"
8"The clique’s quiet paramedic who"
9"The traffic light flicked red."
10"He cut between a stopped"
11"Her hand already closed around"
12"Herrera glanced back."
13"Their eyes met through the"
14"His widened, the warmth in"
15"Harlow dropped the radio."
16"Her boots hit the road"
17"Horns blared as she sliced"
18"A driver leaned out his"
19"She shoved off the bonnet"
ratio0.843
32.68% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences153
matches
0"Before the response crackled back,"
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Doors that opened for bone-white tokens and shut again as if nothing had touched them."
1"A patrol car and two uniforms who would crank that padlock, find it stubborn and ordinary, and log the whole thing as a wild goose chase in the Camden rain."
2"Cold breathed up from below, not the damp chill of a normal underground stair, but an absence, as if the air itself didn’t want to exist down there."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she called, breath cutting the words short,"
1"The word tore, raw"
2"she called, voice dropping in the shaft"
3"she spoke, not taking her eyes from the light pulsing below,"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"he had (have)"
2"she spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.208
leniency0.417
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.25
83.5005%