Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYS41AQ7FVWA36SD34DSP4

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Duration:
7.3s
Cost:
$0.000280
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest smelled like old wood polish and spilled beer, the kind of place where time settled into the grooves of the bar like sediment. Aurora Carter pushed open the heavy oak door, the green neon sign flickering above her like a watchful eye. She’d been here a thousand times, but never as Rory, the delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress, not as the woman who’d fled Cardiff five years ago. She scanned the low-ceilinged room, the dim light catching the dust motes dancing in the air. There, near the back, slumped on a stool, was Silas Blackwood. His grey-streaked auburn hair was neatly trimmed, the same salt-and-pepper beard framing his face, but the slight limp in his left leg was more pronounced, a familiar rhythm she’d last seen in his father’s study. The silver signet ring on his right hand glinted under the bar’s single pendant light. “Silas?” Her voice was a low murmur, cutting through the muffled jazz. He didn’t look up, but his head tilted slightly, that familiar, unreadable expression settling over his hazel eyes. He pushed his glasses up his nose, the action precise, almost mechanical. “Rory?” The name rolled off his tongue, not quite a question, more like a statement of fact. “Long time.” She slid onto the stool beside him, the worn leather creaking. “Five years. You look… different.” The words felt clumsy, but she couldn’t find a better way to start. He didn’t flinch. “Age does that to everyone, Rory.” He took a slow sip of his whiskey, the amber liquid disappearing into the dark depths of the glass. “You look… well. Busy.” His gaze drifted to her shoulder, lingering on the plain black jacket of her delivery uniform. “Still delivering for the Empress?” “Part-time,” she admitted, pushing her glasses up again. “Between shifts, I help out at the bar.” She gestured vaguely towards the door above. “Silas’s place.” A small, tight smile touched her lips. “Same old haunt.” He nodded, a ghost of a smile touching his own lips. “Never changed, did it? The Nest.” He tapped the signet ring. “Still wearing that?” The question hung in the air, heavy with unspoken history. She looked down, her fingers brushing the smooth silver. “It’s… a reminder.” A reminder of who I used to be, she thought, but didn’t say it aloud. “And you?” she countered, her voice softer now. “Still running the nest?” “Retired,” he said, the word tasting bitter. “Field work’s done. The Prague thing…” He trailed off, the memory of that botched op in the Czech capital a shadow in his eyes. “The limp’s a souvenir.” He shifted slightly, the movement careful. “But the bar… it’s still here. Still a front.” He met her gaze, the hazel eyes sharp and assessing. “You look like you’ve been running too, Rory.” “Running?” She laughed, a short, sharp sound. “More like… surviving.” She pushed her hair back from her forehead, the straight black strands falling back into place. “Cardiff’s a long way from Soho, Silas. And Evan…” She stopped, the name a lump in her throat. “He’s gone. Left me for someone else.” The admission felt like tearing open a wound she’d tried to stitch shut. “Eva dragged me here. Said I needed a fresh start.” She took a deep breath, the scent of stale smoke and whiskey filling her lungs. “Working for Yu-Fei… it’s honest. The Empress feeds people. That’s something.” She looked at him, really looked at him. “You? You’re just… Silas. Still the Spymaster, even in retirement.” He didn’t deny it. “The network’s still there, Rory. The contacts. The… information.” He tapped the signet ring again. “It’s a tool. Like any other.” He studied her face, the bright blue eyes that had always been so sharp now holding a weary intelligence. “You’ve changed, Rory. Not just the uniform. You’re… calmer. Less… reactive.” His voice was gentle, almost fond. “Eva said you were brilliant, quick-thinking. Still are, I bet.” He paused, his gaze drifting to the hidden bookshelf behind the bar. “But the weight… it’s different now, isn’t it?” She didn’t answer immediately. The weight of five years, the choices she’d made, the life she’d built in London, felt like a physical thing pressing down on her shoulders. “Different,” she agreed finally, her voice barely above a whisper. “Less… frantic. More… settled.” She looked at the neon sign, the green light pulsing softly. “But settled doesn’t mean easy, Silas. Not when you’re carrying ghosts.” She met his eyes again, the blue meeting the hazel. “Or secrets.” The unspoken regret hung between them, thick and palpable, a shared understanding that neither could quite articulate, but both felt deeply. The past wasn’t gone; it was just quieter now, a low hum beneath the surface of the present.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
62.07% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"He shifted slightly [slightly]"
2"The admission felt like [like]"
3"she agreed finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.784
leniency1
rawRatio0.138
effectiveRatio0.138
68.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount802
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount802
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"dancing"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"mechanical"
count1
5
word"depths"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count2
7
word"reminder"
count2
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"palpable"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"dancing"
2"familiar"
3"unreadable"
4"mechanical"
5"depths"
6"unspoken"
7"reminder"
8"weight"
9"whisper"
10"palpable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences47
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences54
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords795
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount598
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.17
worstName"Raven"
maxWindowNameDensity0
worstWindowName(null)
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Rory1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff1
Silas1
Blackwood1
Czech1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Cheung"
6"Silas"
7"Blackwood"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Czech"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"smelled like old wood polish and spilled b"
1"not quite a question, more like a statement of fact"
2"felt like tearing open a wound she’d tr"
3"felt like a physical thing pressing dow"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount795
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
63.36% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs9
mean88.33
std32.84
cv0.372
sampleLengths
0150
161
282
335
474
568
6118
791
8116
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs90
matches(empty)
89.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences54
ratio0.019
matches
0"The past wasn’t gone; it was just quieter now, a low hum beneath the surface of the present."
95.82% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount603
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.04477611940298507
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01658374792703151
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences54
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences54
mean14.72
std7.4
cv0.503
sampleLengths
026
119
228
316
411
535
615
712
818
912
1017
112
1211
1318
143
1525
1620
175
188
1915
209
213
2211
2311
2413
259
2618
278
284
297
3024
3110
3219
338
347
3519
3618
3720
3825
3919
4010
414
4215
4325
4417
4522
468
474
4825
4910
88.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5555555555555556
totalSentences54
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences47
matches
0"She’d been here a thousand"
1"She scanned the low-ceilinged room,"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
3"Her voice was a low"
4"He didn’t look up, but"
5"He pushed his glasses up"
6"She slid onto the stool"
7"He didn’t flinch."
8"He took a slow sip"
9"His gaze drifted to her"
10"she admitted, pushing her glasses"
11"She gestured vaguely towards the"
12"He nodded, a ghost of"
13"He tapped the signet ring"
14"She looked down, her fingers"
15"she countered, her voice softer"
16"he said, the word tasting"
17"He trailed off, the memory"
18"He shifted slightly, the movement"
19"He met her gaze, the"
ratio0.723
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences47
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled like"
1"Aurora Carter pushed open the"
2"She’d been here a thousand"
3"She scanned the low-ceilinged room,"
4"There, near the back, slumped"
5"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
6"The silver signet ring on"
7"Her voice was a low"
8"He didn’t look up, but"
9"He pushed his glasses up"
10"The name rolled off his"
11"She slid onto the stool"
12"The words felt clumsy, but"
13"He didn’t flinch."
14"He took a slow sip"
15"His gaze drifted to her"
16"she admitted, pushing her glasses"
17"She gestured vaguely towards the"
18"A small, tight smile touched"
19"He nodded, a ghost of"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She’d been here a thousand times, but never as Rory, the delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress, not as the woman who’d fled Cardiff five years ago."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"The name rolled, not quite a question, more like a statement of fact"
1"she countered, her voice softer now"
2"he said, the word tasting bitter"
3"She stopped, the name a lump in her throat"
4"She took, the scent of stale smoke and whiskey filling her lungs"
5"He paused, his gaze drifting to the hidden bookshelf behind the bar"
6"she agreed finally, her voice barely above a whisper"
7"She looked, the green light pulsing softly"
68.92% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
2"she agreed finally (agree)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.108
leniency0.216
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.162
71.0744%