Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYS50NR7AMCFKZ9NAK1ZFQ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 41s
Cost:
$0.004034
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gate stood exactly where Eva had described it, tucked between two ancient oaks whose branches intertwined overhead like clasped fingers. Aurora pressed her palm against the cold metal, feeling the familiar bite of rust under her skin. The Heartstone Pendant lay warm against her chest, pulsing in a slow rhythm that matched her heartbeat—or perhaps the other way around. "Behind the owl statue," Eva had said, her voice tight over the phone. "At the hollowed oak. You'll see." But there was no owl statue. No hollowed oak. Just this gate, rusted shut decades ago according to every park map Aurora had cross-referenced, yet here it stood slightly ajar, as if waiting. She squeezed through the gap. The path beyond was nothing like the orderly trails of Richmond Park. Wildflowers she couldn't name grew in tangled profusion, their colours wrong in the moonlight—blues too vivid, reds too deep, whites too luminous. The air tasted different too. Sweeter. Older. Like a room that had been closed for centuries. Her phone showed no signal. Full bars, then nothing, then full again, as though something were feeding on the frequency. The time flickered: 11:47 PM. Then 11:47 PM. Then 11:47 PM. Right. The time thing. Eva had warned her about that. "Just don't stay too long," Eva had said, and there was something in her voice Aurora hadn't liked. Something hollow. "However long it feels like you've been there, it's always longer outside. Don't forget that." Aurora walked on, her trainers silent on the moss-covered path. The trees thickened around her, their bark rough and ancient, carved with patterns that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly. She kept her eyes forward. Some instincts were worth listening to. The clearing opened without warning. It was smaller than she'd expected—a perfect circle of grass surrounded by standing stones, each one tall as a man and covered in the same shifting carvings. In the centre, a fire pit held cold ashes. No other people. No Eva. "You came." The voice came from everywhere and nowhere. Aurora spun, her hand going to the pepper spray in her jacket pocket, but there was only empty space behind her. "Did you think she would be here?" The voice was soft, almost amused. "Your friend. The one who called you." "Show yourself." Aurora's voice didn't waver. She'd dealt with worse than disembodied voices. Had dealt with Evan's voice in the dark for three years, had learned that staying calm was its own kind of weapon. A laugh, like wind through chimes. "But I am shown. I am everywhere here. You walked into my home, little human. The least you can do is look." She looked. The standing stones hadn't moved. But something had emerged from behind them—a figure that might have been a woman once, or still was, in the way that certain things in folklore were women: beautiful and terrible and not quite right. Her hair fell past her shoulders in waves of silver, her eyes were the colour of moss after rain, and her smile revealed too many teeth. "Eva sent me," Aurora said, because saying something felt better than saying nothing. "Eva." The figure tilted her head, bird-like. "Eva made a bargain. Eva gave something precious. Eva thought that would be enough." "What did she give?" "What everyone gives." The woman stepped closer, and Aurora noticed her feet weren't quite touching the ground. "Time. Love. Memories. All the little pieces that make a life worth living." Another step. "She came to me three months ago, desperate as you are now. Wanted to find something she'd lost." "What had she lost?" "You." The smile widened. "She lost you. In a way. Couldn't remember why she loved you anymore. Couldn't remember what you meant to her. So she came to me, and I gave her a gift." The woman's hand extended, impossibly long fingers reaching toward Aurora's face. "I gave her memories of you. Real ones. The ones she'd forgotten. But memories have prices, little human. And she couldn't pay." Aurora stepped back, her heel catching on a root. The pendant flared warm against her chest, and the woman flinched, her hand recoiling. "Interesting." The woman's eyes narrowed, focusing on the crimson glow beneath Aurora's shirt. "That's very interesting." "I'm leaving." Aurora turned toward the path. But the path was gone. In its place stood more trees, more darkness, more of those wrong-coloured flowers stretching toward a sky that had grown somehow darker. The standing stones seemed closer now, their carvings moving in her peripheral vision, and she could hear something—a sound like breathing, like whispering, like a thousand small voices talking just below the threshold of understanding. "You can't leave." The woman hadn't moved, but she was somehow in front of Aurora again. "Not without paying. That's how bargains work. That's how this place works." "I didn't make any bargain." "No. But you're here, aren't you? In my grove. Wearing a token from my realm." The woman's gaze burned into the pendant. "Someone gave you that. Someone who knew what it would do. Who knew it would draw you here, to me, to pay what others couldn't." The whispers grew louder. Aurora could feel them now, not just hear them—a pressure against her skull, trying to slip inside, trying to find the cracks Evan had left in her, the old wounds that never quite healed. "Get out of my head." She grabbed the pendant, feeling its heat pulse in response. The woman laughed again, but there was something different now. Something almost like fear. "Oh, little human. You have no idea what you're carrying. No idea what you've been carrying all along." She began to circle, her movement unnatural, boneless, like smoke given form. "That pendant was never meant to protect you. It was meant to mark you. To bring you here, to my grove, to pay the debts of those who came before." Behind Aurora, the standing stones creaked. She didn't turn. She could feel something else now—a presence at the edge of her vision, something massive and patient, something that had been waiting longer than the woman, longer than the grove itself. "Three people have stood where you're standing," the woman said. "Three people who wore that pendant. One ran. One fought. One begged." She paused, letting the silence stretch. "None of them left the way they came." Aurora's hand tightened around the pendant. She thought of Eva's voice on the phone, hollow and strange. She thought of the way Eva had looked at her last week, like she was a stranger, like she was trying to remember something just out of reach. "What do you want?" Aurora asked. "I want what everyone wants." The woman's smile was gentle now, almost kind, and that was worse than the teeth. "I want you to stay." The whispers hit a crescendo. The presence behind her moved, and Aurora felt breath on her neck—cold, ancient, wrong—while the woman's hand reached once more toward her face. She had seconds. Maybe less. Aurora did the only thing she could think of. She ripped the pendant from her neck and threw it at the woman's face, not to hurt, but to distract, and she ran. The stones rushed past her. The flowers grabbed at her ankles. The darkness lunged, and she felt something brush her cheek—cold, so cold—and then she was through the gate, gasping, her hands tearing on rust, her lungs burning with air that tasted normal again, ordinary again, blessedly wrong in its normalcy. She ran until her legs gave out, until she reached the main path, until she saw the distant glow of streetlights and the ordinary dark of a London night. The pendant was still in her hand. She didn't remember grabbing it. It pulsed faintly, cooling now, and when she looked back at the grove, there was nothing but trees. Ordinary trees. An ordinary gate, locked tight, with no gap, no path, no anything. Her phone buzzed. Three missed calls. Twelve texts. The first text was from Eva, sent six hours ago: *Rory, please. I don't know how much time I have. Don't come to the grove. Whatever you do, don't—* The rest were from other people. Numbers she didn't recognise. Asking where she was. Asking if she'd found what she was looking for. Asking if she was ready to come home yet. Aurora stared at her phone, her chest heaving, her cheek still cold where that breath had touched her. Somewhere behind her, in a place that shouldn't exist, a woman with too many teeth smiled at the place where a girl had been. "Next time," she whispered to the darkness, "I'll be faster." The grove settled into silence. The standing stones stopped their shifting. And somewhere in the space between heartbeats, the clock in Aurora's pocket finally ticked forward to 11:48.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The woman's hand extended impossibly [impossibly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.474
leniency0.947
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.053
93.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1494
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1494
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"normalcy"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"flickered"
2"perfect"
3"could feel"
4"pulse"
5"silence"
6"normalcy"
7"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences108
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords19
totalWords1480
ratio0.013
matches
0"Rory, please. I don't know how much time I have. Don't come to the grove. Whatever you do, don't—"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1131
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.86
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Eva8
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Aurora21
Richmond1
Park1
Evan2
London1
Asking3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
3"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.572
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"as if waiting"
1"patterns that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly"
2"quite touching the ground"
3"seemed closer now, their carvings moving in her peripheral vision, and she could hear something—a sound like breathing, like whispering, like a thousand small voices talking just below the threshold of understanding"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.676
wordCount1480
matches
0"not to hurt, but to distract"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean28.46
std18.69
cv0.657
sampleLengths
061
119
233
35
450
531
610
735
844
95
1041
112
1228
1320
1435
1528
162
1766
1813
1921
204
2150
224
2368
2423
2516
267
2762
2828
295
3047
3138
3215
3374
3440
3536
3645
376
3825
3928
405
4132
4251
4329
4444
458
4629
4732
4818
4924
98.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences108
matches
0"been closed"
1"was gone"
97.96% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs196
matches
0"were feeding"
1"was trying"
2"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences125
ratio0.08
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant lay warm against her chest, pulsing in a slow rhythm that matched her heartbeat—or perhaps the other way around."
1"Wildflowers she couldn't name grew in tangled profusion, their colours wrong in the moonlight—blues too vivid, reds too deep, whites too luminous."
2"It was smaller than she'd expected—a perfect circle of grass surrounded by standing stones, each one tall as a man and covered in the same shifting carvings."
3"But something had emerged from behind them—a figure that might have been a woman once, or still was, in the way that certain things in folklore were women: beautiful and terrible and not quite right."
4"The standing stones seemed closer now, their carvings moving in her peripheral vision, and she could hear something—a sound like breathing, like whispering, like a thousand small voices talking just below the threshold of understanding."
5"Aurora could feel them now, not just hear them—a pressure against her skull, trying to slip inside, trying to find the cracks Evan had left in her, the old wounds that never quite healed."
6"She could feel something else now—a presence at the edge of her vision, something massive and patient, something that had been waiting longer than the woman, longer than the grove itself."
7"The presence behind her moved, and Aurora felt breath on her neck—cold, ancient, wrong—while the woman's hand reached once more toward her face."
8"The darkness lunged, and she felt something brush her cheek—cold, so cold—and then she was through the gate, gasping, her hands tearing on rust, her lungs burning with air that tasted normal again, ordinary again, blessedly wrong in its normalcy."
9"Whatever you do, don't—*"
85.44% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1145
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay warm against her"
adverbCount57
adverbRatio0.04978165938864629
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008733624454148471
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean11.84
std9.42
cv0.795
sampleLengths
022
117
222
313
46
56
63
724
85
912
1022
115
121
131
149
155
1615
175
183
193
201
213
226
2318
242
2515
2610
2723
285
296
305
3127
329
333
342
352
367
3721
3813
397
406
417
4222
436
4422
452
465
4735
4826
4913
54.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences97
matches
0"Just this gate, rusted shut"
1"Then 11:47 PM."
2"Then 11:47 PM."
3"Somewhere behind her, in a"
ratio0.041
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences97
matches
0"She squeezed through the gap."
1"Her phone showed no signal."
2"She kept her eyes forward."
3"It was smaller than she'd"
4"She'd dealt with worse than"
5"Her hair fell past her"
6"She grabbed the pendant, feeling"
7"She began to circle, her"
8"She didn't turn."
9"She could feel something else"
10"She paused, letting the silence"
11"She thought of Eva's voice"
12"She thought of the way"
13"She had seconds."
14"She ripped the pendant from"
15"She ran until her legs"
16"She didn't remember grabbing it."
17"It pulsed faintly, cooling now,"
18"Her phone buzzed."
19"I don't know how much"
ratio0.216
68.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences97
matches
0"The iron gate stood exactly"
1"Aurora pressed her palm against"
2"The Heartstone Pendant lay warm"
3"Eva had said, her voice"
4"She squeezed through the gap."
5"The path beyond was nothing"
6"Wildflowers she couldn't name grew"
7"The air tasted different too."
8"Her phone showed no signal."
9"The time flickered: 11:47 PM."
10"The time thing."
11"Eva had warned her about"
12"Eva had said, and there"
13"Aurora walked on, her trainers"
14"The trees thickened around her,"
15"She kept her eyes forward."
16"Some instincts were worth listening"
17"The clearing opened without warning."
18"It was smaller than she'd"
19"The voice came from everywhere"
ratio0.784
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant lay warm against her chest, pulsing in a slow rhythm that matched her heartbeat—or perhaps the other way around."
1"Just this gate, rusted shut decades ago according to every park map Aurora had cross-referenced, yet here it stood slightly ajar, as if waiting."
2"Full bars, then nothing, then full again, as though something were feeding on the frequency."
3"But something had emerged from behind them—a figure that might have been a woman once, or still was, in the way that certain things in folklore were women: beau…"
4"In its place stood more trees, more darkness, more of those wrong-coloured flowers stretching toward a sky that had grown somehow darker."
5"The standing stones seemed closer now, their carvings moving in her peripheral vision, and she could hear something—a sound like breathing, like whispering, lik…"
6"She could feel something else now—a presence at the edge of her vision, something massive and patient, something that had been waiting longer than the woman, lo…"
7"The darkness lunged, and she felt something brush her cheek—cold, so cold—and then she was through the gate, gasping, her hands tearing on rust, her lungs burni…"
8"Somewhere behind her, in a place that shouldn't exist, a woman with too many teeth smiled at the place where a girl had been."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva had, her voice tight over the phone"
1"She began, her movement unnatural, boneless, like smoke given form"
71.05% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva had (have)"
1"Eva had (have)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.158
77.9583%