Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYS6A77WK0X041Q9XBKFQ1

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Duration:
37.0s
Cost:
$0.009114
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest hummed, a low electric thrum against the damp Soho night. Rory hadn’t stood under it in three years. Not since the week she’d packed a single bag and fled her old life, leaving Eva to handle the fallout. She’d taken the flat above the bar because it was cheap and available, a desperate, last-minute choice. For the first six months, she’d treated the place like a fortress, its entrance a hostile border she never crossed. She used the back alley. Tonight, something had pulled her to the front. A perverse sense of curiosity, or maybe just the bone-deep weariness of a twelve-hour delivery shift. She pushed the heavy wooden door. The familiar scent hit her first—a mix of old wood, polished leather, and the faint, ghostly trace of pipe tobacco Silas used to indulge in. The lighting was low, casting long shadows from the tables that were mostly empty. On the walls, the black-and-white photographs of a bygone London stared down, their subjects frozen in a time that felt more real than the present. The maps, yellowed and creased, promised adventures that would never happen. Behind the bar, a figure moved with a slow, deliberate grace. Polishing a glass with a white cloth. The grey in his auburn hair was more pronounced than she remembered, a web of silver catching the dim light. He was thinner, too. As he turned to place the glass on a shelf, she saw the slight, almost imperceptible hitch in his left leg. The limp. Silas Blackwood looked up, and his hazel eyes found hers in the gloom. He didn't startle. He never did. He just held her gaze, his expression unreadable. Then he gave a single, slow nod, and placed the cloth on the bar. Rory walked towards him, her footsteps the only sound. She felt like an intruder in a place that was, technically, part of her home. She stopped a few feet from the bar, her hand resting on the back of a stool. "It's quiet." "A Tuesday." His voice was a low rumble, unchanged by the years. "They're usually quiet. Brings out the ghosts." She slid onto the stool. The worn leather was cool against her thighs. "I wouldn't know." He picked up another glass, a heavy tumbler, and began his methodical polishing. "No. You wouldn't." Silence stretched between them, thick and heavy. It wasn't an uncomfortable silence, not entirely. It was a silence filled with everything they weren't saying. Three years of it. He watched her, his gaze moving from her face, down to her hands where they rested on the bar. He saw the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a pale white line against her skin. He’d seen it a hundred times before, but tonight it looked different. It looked like a marker. "You look tired, Rory." "A long day." "Every day is a long day for you now, isn't it?" He didn't say it with pity. It was a statement of fact, an observation from a man who made his living reading the fine print of people's lives. She shrugged, a gesture that felt too casual, too forced. "It pays the bills. Most of them, anyway." "And the others?" A muscle in her jaw tightened. "I'm working on it." He set the glass down, perfect and gleaming. The silver signet ring on his right hand flashed. "I heard about Cardiff. From your father." Rory’s head snapped up. Her bright blue eyes, usually so cool and guarded, held a flash of panic. "You talked to my dad?" "Brendan and I go back a ways. He called. He was worried." Silas leaned forward slightly, his forearms on the bar. The movement caused a faint wince that he concealed almost instantly. "He said you left. Didn't say where. Just… left." The air crackled. The unspoken name hung between them, a toxic presence. Evan. "I left," she repeated, her voice flat. "You ran." There was no accusation in his tone. He was simply correcting the record. She looked away, her gaze fixing on a map of the London Underground from the 1940s. The familiar stations were all there, but the lines were different. The connections had changed. "What's the difference?" "Running is a reaction. Leaving is a decision." He paused, letting the words land. "You were always a decision-maker. Quick. Out of the box. That's what I liked about you." "I'm not that person anymore." "Nobody is who they were at twenty-two." He straightened up, his hand resting on the edge of the bar. "But the bones are the same. The foundation. You can't just pour new concrete over a cracked slab and expect it to hold." Her fingers curled into a fist on the polished wood. "What do you want, Si?" He used the old nickname, a small, sharp twist of the knife. "I want to know why you've been living above my head for three years and haven't once walked down those stairs until tonight." "I've been busy." "You've been hiding." He gestured around the empty bar. "This is a good place for it. I should know." The weight of his own past, of that botched operation in Prague, settled in the space between them. His limp wasn't just an injury; it was a monument to a life he'd lost, a price he'd paid. He was as much a prisoner in this bar as she was in the flat above it. She let out a breath she hadn't realised she was holding. It shuddered out of her, a sound of profound exhaustion. "I didn't think you'd want to see me." "Why wouldn't I?" "Because I was stupid." Her voice was barely a whisper now. "Because I let it happen. Because I cut everyone off. Eva, my parents… you." "I was your employer, Rory. You delivered food for me." "You were more than that and you know it." She finally looked at him again, and the guardedness in her eyes cracked, just for a second. A glimpse of the scared twenty-two-year-old she'd been. "You taught me how to spot a lie. How to see the angles. And I still… I just didn't see it." Silas’s expression softened. The lines around his eyes seemed to deepen. "We rarely see the things we don't want to. Especially when they're standing right in front of us, smiling." He reached under the bar and brought out a bottle of whiskey, a twelve-year-old single malt he kept for special occasions. He poured a measure into two of the spotless tumblers. He slid one across to her. "On the house." Rory stared at the glass, the amber liquid catching the light. It was an offering. A truce. A return to a time when their conversations were about strategy and puzzles, not regret and scars. She thought of the empty flat upstairs, of the single box she still hadn't unpacked from three years ago. She wrapped her fingers around the glass, the coolness a small anchor in the sea of memory. She didn't drink. She just held it. "I should go." "The night is young." "So am I." She managed a small, sad smile. "Or I'm supposed to be." She slid off the stool. As she turned to leave, she stopped. Her hand hovered over the bar. "Si?" He looked up from his own untouched glass. "Your knee. Is it worse?" He considered the question, his head tilted slightly. A flicker of surprise in his eyes, followed by something else. A quiet acknowledgement. He saw her. He really saw her. "Some days," he said. Rory nodded once, a slow, understanding gesture. She turned and walked away, her footsteps fading into the quiet of the bar. The heavy door swung shut, cutting off the hum of the neon sign from the inside. Silas stood alone in the dim light. He looked at the two glasses of whiskey on the bar, one full, one untouched, standing like two ghosts in an empty room.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured around [around]"
1"her eyes cracked just [just]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.227
leniency0.455
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.091
88.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1347
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1347
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"sense of"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count2
6
word"methodical"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"gleaming"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"profound"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"sense of"
2"familiar"
3"gloom"
4"unreadable"
5"footsteps"
6"methodical"
7"silence"
8"perfect"
9"gleaming"
10"unspoken"
11"weight"
12"profound"
13"whisper"
14"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences100
matches
0"t with pity"
1"A flicker of surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1333
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1026
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Eva1
Silas5
London2
Blackwood1
Underground1
Prague1
Rory5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Eva"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like an intruder in a place that w"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1333
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean25.15
std21.37
cv0.849
sampleLengths
088
124
281
365
441
541
62
719
816
916
1081
114
123
1339
1418
153
1610
1724
1823
1941
2013
217
2215
2334
2430
255
2642
2715
2835
293
3019
3154
3229
333
3425
3510
3655
3730
3837
393
4053
4124
423
434
4414
4518
461
478
485
4929
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs161
matches
0"weren't saying"
1"was holding"
99.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences132
ratio0.015
matches
0"The familiar scent hit her first—a mix of old wood, polished leather, and the faint, ghostly trace of pipe tobacco Silas used to indulge in."
1"His limp wasn't just an injury; it was a monument to a life he'd lost, a price he'd paid."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1038
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.03757225433526012
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.012524084778420038
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean10.1
std6.33
cv0.627
sampleLengths
018
18
220
317
420
55
68
716
86
925
1014
1125
1211
1311
147
1520
164
1721
182
1913
203
213
228
2314
249
2515
2617
272
2812
297
305
318
323
3313
343
357
367
3710
384
3919
4017
4112
425
434
443
4517
4622
4710
488
493
36.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.30303030303030304
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners40
34.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"Then he gave a single,"
ratio0.01
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences96
matches
0"She’d taken the flat above"
1"She used the back alley."
2"She pushed the heavy wooden"
3"He was thinner, too."
4"He didn't startle."
5"He never did."
6"He just held her gaze,"
7"She felt like an intruder"
8"She stopped a few feet"
9"His voice was a low"
10"She slid onto the stool."
11"He picked up another glass,"
12"It wasn't an uncomfortable silence,"
13"It was a silence filled"
14"He watched her, his gaze"
15"He saw the small, crescent-shaped"
16"He’d seen it a hundred"
17"It looked like a marker."
18"He didn't say it with"
19"It was a statement of"
ratio0.563
12.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences96
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory hadn’t stood under it"
2"She’d taken the flat above"
3"She used the back alley."
4"Tonight, something had pulled her"
5"A perverse sense of curiosity,"
6"She pushed the heavy wooden"
7"The familiar scent hit her"
8"The lighting was low, casting"
9"The maps, yellowed and creased,"
10"The grey in his auburn"
11"He was thinner, too."
12"Silas Blackwood looked up, and"
13"He didn't startle."
14"He never did."
15"He just held her gaze,"
16"Rory walked towards him, her"
17"She felt like an intruder"
18"She stopped a few feet"
19"His voice was a low"
ratio0.896
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"On the walls, the black-and-white photographs of a bygone London stared down, their subjects frozen in a time that felt more real than the present."
1"It was a statement of fact, an observation from a man who made his living reading the fine print of people's lives."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she repeated, her voice flat"
1"He straightened up, his hand resting on the edge of the bar"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.045
leniency0.091
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.045
80.6607%