| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He gestured around [around]" | | 1 | "her eyes cracked just [just]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.227 | | leniency | 0.455 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 88.86% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1347 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 29.47% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1347 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "electric" | | 1 | "sense of" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "unreadable" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "methodical" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "gleaming" | | 10 | "unspoken" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "profound" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "flicker" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "t with pity" | | 1 | "A flicker of surprise" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 132 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1333 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1026 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.49 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Silas | 5 | | London | 2 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Underground | 1 | | Prague | 1 | | Rory | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Blackwood" | | 5 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Prague" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like an intruder in a place that w" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1333 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 25.15 | | std | 21.37 | | cv | 0.849 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 88 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 81 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 81 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 54 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 55 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 37 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 53 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 29 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 161 | | matches | | 0 | "weren't saying" | | 1 | "was holding" |
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| 99.57% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 132 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "The familiar scent hit her first—a mix of old wood, polished leather, and the faint, ghostly trace of pipe tobacco Silas used to indulge in." | | 1 | "His limp wasn't just an injury; it was a monument to a life he'd lost, a price he'd paid." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1038 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.03757225433526012 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012524084778420038 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 132 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 132 | | mean | 10.1 | | std | 6.33 | | cv | 0.627 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 36.11% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.30303030303030304 | | totalSentences | 132 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 34.72% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Then he gave a single," |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d taken the flat above" | | 1 | "She used the back alley." | | 2 | "She pushed the heavy wooden" | | 3 | "He was thinner, too." | | 4 | "He didn't startle." | | 5 | "He never did." | | 6 | "He just held her gaze," | | 7 | "She felt like an intruder" | | 8 | "She stopped a few feet" | | 9 | "His voice was a low" | | 10 | "She slid onto the stool." | | 11 | "He picked up another glass," | | 12 | "It wasn't an uncomfortable silence," | | 13 | "It was a silence filled" | | 14 | "He watched her, his gaze" | | 15 | "He saw the small, crescent-shaped" | | 16 | "He’d seen it a hundred" | | 17 | "It looked like a marker." | | 18 | "He didn't say it with" | | 19 | "It was a statement of" |
| | ratio | 0.563 | |
| 12.08% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon sign of" | | 1 | "Rory hadn’t stood under it" | | 2 | "She’d taken the flat above" | | 3 | "She used the back alley." | | 4 | "Tonight, something had pulled her" | | 5 | "A perverse sense of curiosity," | | 6 | "She pushed the heavy wooden" | | 7 | "The familiar scent hit her" | | 8 | "The lighting was low, casting" | | 9 | "The maps, yellowed and creased," | | 10 | "The grey in his auburn" | | 11 | "He was thinner, too." | | 12 | "Silas Blackwood looked up, and" | | 13 | "He didn't startle." | | 14 | "He never did." | | 15 | "He just held her gaze," | | 16 | "Rory walked towards him, her" | | 17 | "She felt like an intruder" | | 18 | "She stopped a few feet" | | 19 | "His voice was a low" |
| | ratio | 0.896 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "On the walls, the black-and-white photographs of a bygone London stared down, their subjects frozen in a time that felt more real than the present." | | 1 | "It was a statement of fact, an observation from a man who made his living reading the fine print of people's lives." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she repeated, her voice flat" | | 1 | "He straightened up, his hand resting on the edge of the bar" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.045 | | leniency | 0.091 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.045 | |