Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYS7DJCXSP8675TZXCNBWN

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Duration:
1m 12s
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$0.011580
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SiliconFlow

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Water dripped from the arched brick ceiling of the abandoned Tube station, the sound rhythmic and echoing in the cavernous dark. The air smelled of ozone, wet rot, and the metallic tang of old blood. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the yellow police tape, her boots crunching on the debris-strewn concrete. She clicked the stopwatch on her wrist, the habit ingrained from eighteen years on the force, though there was no need to time the entry. Fluorescent lights on tripods bathed the platform in a harsh, clinical white, pushing back the shadows of the disused tunnel. In the centre of the illumination lay a body. DC Hayes stood by the corpse, a clipboard in one hand and a look of mild nausea on his face. He straightened as Harlow approached. "Detective. Messy one." Harlow ignored the pleasantry and stopped at the victim's feet. Male, mid-thirties, dressed in a bespoke suit that had seen better days. The fabric was torn at the chest, revealing a gaping wound. "ID?" "Wallet in the pocket. Julian Thorne. Address in Kensington. High-end corporate fixer." Hayes flipped a page on his clipboard. "Looks like a mugging gone wrong, or maybe a deal turned sour. This place isn't exactly tourist territory. He probably came down here to buy something illegal and got double-crossed." Harlow crouched. The knees of her trousers hit the damp ground. She didn't touch the body yet. She looked at the surrounding area. The platform was cluttered with old advertising posters from the nineties, peeling and faded. Dust lay thick on the rails, undisturbed except for a chaotic scuffle near the body. "Double-crossed?" "See the wallet?" Hayes pointed with his pen. "Cash and cards are still there. But the watch is gone. A Patek Philippe, judging by the tan line on his wrist. Cheap thief, left the money, took the timepiece." Harlow leaned closer to the wound. It wasn't a clean stab. The skin was jagged, as if something had twisted inside the chest cavity, but there was no bruising around the entry point. No defensive marks on the hands. "He didn't fight for his watch?" "Maybe he was drunk. Toxicology will tell us." "He's not drunk." Harlow reached into her pocket and pulled on a pair of nitrile gloves. She lifted the dead man's arm. It was stiff, rigor mortis setting in, but not fully established. The arm flopped back to the concrete with a heavy thud. She turned her attention to the victim's jacket. The lining had been ripped open, not from the outside, but from the inside out. The fabric was shredded by something pushing through the layers of wool and silk. "Eva." She spoke without looking up. From the shadows of the tunnel entrance, a woman stepped forward. Eva Kowalski adjusted her round glasses, her fingers white-knuckled around the strap of a worn leather satchel. She looked pale, her freckles standing out against the stark lighting. "Yes, Detective?" "You told me this location. The Veil Market. It moves." "Yes. Every full moon. Tonight is the new moon, so... it shouldn't be here. It moved three nights ago." "So the market is gone." "The physical stalls are gone. But the residue..." Eva tucked a strand of curly red hair behind her ear, her eyes darting around the platform. "It lingers. Like smoke in a curtain." Hayes scoffed. "Residue. Right. We're looking for a guy with a knife, not smoke." Harlow ignored him and pointed to the victim's chest. "Eva, look at the wound. No arterial spray. If the heart was pierced, this wall should be painted red." Eva approached tentatively. She peered at the tear in the suit, her nose wrinkling. She leaned in closer, hovering inches above the corpse. "It's not a knife wound," Eva whispered. "The edges are cauterized. And... do you smell that?" Harlow inhaled. Beneath the copper of blood was a scent like burnt sugar and sulfur. "Sulfur," Harlow said. "Ectoplasmic burn," Eva corrected, though she kept her voice low. "Magical discharge. High voltage." Hayes shook his head. "I'll stick to the knife theory, thanks. Maybe a heated blade." "He came for the market," Harlow said, standing up. She scanned the floor again, looking past the yellow tape. "He brought a guide. He brought a key." She walked toward the pile of rubbish swept into the corner of the platform near the ticket booth. Something glinted in the harsh light. Harlow kicked aside a soggy cardboard box. A small object lay in the grime. She picked it up. It was heavy, warm to the touch despite the chill of the underground station. A brass compass, no larger than a pocket watch. Green corrosion bloomed across the casing, but the face was clean, etched with intricate symbols that seemed to shift in the light. "Detective, you shouldn't touch that," Eva warned, stepping closer. "It's a Veil Compass. It tunes into rifts." Harlow held it up to the light. The needle inside didn't point north. It spun erratically, twitching like a trapped insect, before snapping to a stop. It pointed directly at the blank brick wall of the tunnel. "He was using this to find the entrance," Harlow said. "He knew the Market moved. He was tracking it." "Tracking it?" Hayes walked over, frowning. "It's a compass. Points north. That wall is east." "It points to what he's looking for," Harlow said. She held the compass steady. The needle vibrated against the glass. "He found a rift. Or he thought he did." "Maybe the seller didn't want to be found," Hayes suggested. "Stabbed him and left." "Look at his hands, Hayes." Harlow gestured to the corpse. Hayes looked. The dead man's fingers were curled into a claw. Clutched tightly in his right palm was a small, white object. Harlow pried the fingers open. A bone token fell onto her glove. Smooth, carved, stained with age. "A bone token," Eva said, her breath hitching. "Entry fee for the Market. He had it." "So he got in," Harlow said. She dropped the token into an evidence bag. "He paid the fee. He walked through the Veil. And something came back out with him. Or he came back wrong." She held up the brass compass again. The needle was now spinning counter-clockwise, a slow, lazy rotation that made the hairs on her arms stand up. "This isn't a robbery, Hayes. The watch wasn't taken by a thief." She pointed to the victim's wrist. The tan line was there, but the skin beneath was unblemished. No marks from a watch clasp. "He wasn't wearing a watch. The tan line is fake. Spray-on make-up or a bad sunbed session. He wanted us to think he was a wealthy mark." Hayes blinked, looking at the wrist, then back at the compass. "So who is he?" "A hunter," Eva said softly. She was looking at the symbols on the compass casing, fear widening her green eyes. "That compass is Shade-crafted. It's used to track entities that don't want to be found. He wasn't here to buy. He was here to poach." Harlow closed her fist around the compass. The warmth seeped into her skin, pulsing in time with a faint, low-frequency hum coming from the tunnel wall. "He followed something through the rift," Harlow said, her voice hard. "He underestimated it. It didn't stab him, Hayes. It reached through the protection he thought he had and took him apart from the inside." She looked at the brick wall where the compass pointed. The mortar between the bricks was black, scorched. "The evidence adds up if you stop looking for a human killer." Harlow pulled the radio from her shoulder. "This is a containment issue. Seal the station. No one enters or leaves." "And the body?" Hayes asked, his voice wavering slightly. "Leave it." Harlow clipped the radio back onto her lapel. She turned to Eva. "You said the Market moves. Where does it go next?" Eva swallowed hard, clutching her satchel tighter. "It... it depends on the alignment. But usually... usually it goes where the veil is thinnest." "Where is that?" "The British Museum. Restricted archives." Harlow nodded once. She dropped the compass into her pocket. The hum grew louder, echoing in the silence of the tube station. "Let's go."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.31
leniency0.621
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.034
89.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1385
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1385
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count2
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"wavering"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"echoing"
2"chaotic"
3"silk"
4"stark"
5"scanned"
6"chill"
7"etched"
8"intricate"
9"vibrated"
10"warmth"
11"wavering"
12"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences98
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1374
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
24.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount873
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.52
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow22
Quinn1
Hayes10
Kowalski1
Eva10
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Hayes"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.24
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"symbols that seemed to shift in the light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.728
wordCount1374
matches
0"not from the outside, but from the inside out"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean20.82
std16.18
cv0.777
sampleLengths
076
129
225
33
433
51
612
77
830
952
101
1138
1239
136
148
153
1678
171
185
1939
202
2110
2219
235
2432
2514
269
2719
2823
2916
3015
313
3214
3315
3427
3538
3649
3717
3837
3919
4015
4129
4214
435
445
4522
4617
4716
4835
4926
83.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences98
matches
0"was torn"
1"was jagged"
2"been ripped"
3"was shredded"
4"were curled"
5"was unblemished"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs153
matches
0"was looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences138
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount878
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"harsh, clinical white, pushing"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.025056947608200455
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009111617312072893
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean9.96
std6.17
cv0.62
sampleLengths
021
114
216
325
420
59
620
75
83
910
1012
1111
121
1312
147
1530
162
179
186
196
2014
2115
221
238
2430
256
265
2722
286
296
308
313
3213
336
3411
3511
368
3715
3814
391
405
4111
4217
4311
442
4510
4619
475
4825
497
50.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.34057971014492755
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences88
matches
0"She clicked the stopwatch on"
1"He straightened as Harlow approached."
2"She didn't touch the body"
3"She looked at the surrounding"
4"It wasn't a clean stab."
5"She lifted the dead man's"
6"It was stiff, rigor mortis"
7"She turned her attention to"
8"She spoke without looking up."
9"She looked pale, her freckles"
10"She peered at the tear"
11"She leaned in closer, hovering"
12"She scanned the floor again,"
13"She walked toward the pile"
14"She picked it up."
15"It was heavy, warm to"
16"It spun erratically, twitching like"
17"It pointed directly at the"
18"She held the compass steady."
19"She dropped the token into"
ratio0.295
16.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences88
matches
0"Water dripped from the arched"
1"The air smelled of ozone,"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
3"She clicked the stopwatch on"
4"DC Hayes stood by the"
5"He straightened as Harlow approached."
6"Harlow ignored the pleasantry and"
7"The fabric was torn at"
8"Hayes flipped a page on"
9"The knees of her trousers"
10"She didn't touch the body"
11"She looked at the surrounding"
12"The platform was cluttered with"
13"Dust lay thick on the"
14"Hayes pointed with his pen"
15"Harlow leaned closer to the"
16"It wasn't a clean stab."
17"The skin was jagged, as"
18"Harlow reached into her pocket"
19"She lifted the dead man's"
ratio0.886
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Male, mid-thirties, dressed in a bespoke suit that had seen better days."
1"Green corrosion bloomed across the casing, but the face was clean, etched with intricate symbols that seemed to shift in the light."
2"The needle was now spinning counter-clockwise, a slow, lazy rotation that made the hairs on her arms stand up."
3"The warmth seeped into her skin, pulsing in time with a faint, low-frequency hum coming from the tunnel wall."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Eva tucked, her eyes darting around the platform"
1"Eva said, her breath hitching"
2"Harlow said, her voice hard"
3"Hayes asked, his voice wavering slightly"
81.03% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
1"Eva corrected (correct)"
2"Eva warned (warn)"
3"Hayes suggested (suggest)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.224
leniency0.448
rawRatio0.308
effectiveRatio0.138
78.8627%