Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYS7M1PJ2G12RZCDHFQKZP

Run Details

Duration:
30.4s
Cost:
$0.003593
Provider:
WandB

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the pavement, turning London's streets into a maze of shimmering reflections. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed through puddles as she rounded the corner, her lungs burning with the exertion. Three blocks. She'd been chasing this suspect for three blocks through the downpour. The figure ahead moved with unnatural speed, darting between shadows with a fluidity that defied normal human capability. Quinn's sharp jaw clenched as she pushed harder, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her forehead. At forty-one, she still maintained the fitness that had served her throughout her eighteen years on the force. "Stop! Metropolitan Police!" Her voice cut through the drumming rain, a futile command that went unanswered. The suspect never looked back. They descended into Camden's labyrinth of alleys, the neon signs of pubs and shops bleeding color onto wet asphalt. The air thickened with the smell of wet brick and refuse. Quinn's worn leather watch caught the dim light as she checked it—23:47. Late enough for the streets to be mostly deserted, except for them. The suspect suddenly veered left, disappearing down a narrow stairwell that Quinn hadn't noticed before. An old Tube station entrance, boarded up years ago according to city records. Something wasn't right. Quinn hesitated at the top of the stairs, her training warring with instinct. Every fiber screamed that this was a trap. Her partner Morris had disappeared three years ago pursuing someone into circumstances just like this—unexplained, supernatural. She still didn't understand what had happened to him, only that the official report lied. Rainwater streamed down her neck as she descended the concrete steps. The air grew colder, damper. At the bottom, a metal door stood slightly ajar, emitting an eerie blue light. Quinn pressed her back against the brick wall, listening. Strange sounds drifted from within—whispers in languages she couldn't identify, the chime of bells, the occasional cry of something that wasn't human. She swallowed hard, her hand resting on the grip of her pistol. The bone token in the suspect's hand had been visible for just a second as they'd approached the door—a small, carved object that glowed faintly. Without it, entry might be impossible. Or deadly. Quinn reached into her coat pocket and pulled out a similar token, evidence bagged from a crime scene last month. Another unexplained element she'd kept off the books. She'd known it might lead somewhere important. The heavy door groaned as she pushed it open, revealing a world that shouldn't exist. The Veil Market sprawled through the abandoned Tube station, a cavernous space transformed into a bustling supernatural bazaar. Stalls lined the curved platforms, selling everything from glowing potions to bound grimoires. Creatures that defied classification browsed the wares alongside humans who seemed entirely too comfortable with their companions. Quinn's brown eyes widened despite herself. The sheer scale of the place was staggering. How had this operated beneath London undetected? The market moved every full moon, according to the limited intelligence she'd gathered, making it nearly impossible to track. Her suspect was already halfway across the main concourse, weaving through the crowd with practiced ease. Quinn pulled her collar up, trying to blend in as she began pursuit. The military precision of her movements contrasted with the chaotic flow of the market. A stall vendor with too many eyes locked onto her. "New here, detective? Don't see many of your kind below ground." Quinn kept walking, refusing to engage. She couldn't afford distractions. "Looking for someone?" the vendor called after her. "The one with the silver case? He trades in dark memories. Dangerous business that." Quinn's pulse quickened. The silver case—another piece of the puzzle she'd been tracking for months. Morris had been investigating it before he disappeared. The crowd thickened near the center of the market, making pursuit difficult. Strange smells assaulted her nostrils—sulfur, ozone, something like burnt sugar. A creature with ram's horns brushed past her, its hooves clicking on the tiled floor. "Police!" someone shouted in the crowd. "Undercover!" Panic rippled through the market. Stalls began closing, their owners vanishing merchandise with impossible speed. Her suspect glanced back, their eyes meeting for the first time. Recognition flashed across their face, followed by determination. They broke into a run, heading deeper into the station. Quinn followed, pushing through the sudden chaos. The choice had been made the moment she'd entered this place. There was no turning back now. The underground tunnels stretched before her, dark and foreboding, but the truth about Morris, about all the unexplained cases she'd been working, lay somewhere ahead. She pressed onward, the light of the market fading behind her as the chase continued into the unknown depths beneath London.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount786
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount786
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"jaw clenched"
count1
1
word"comfortable"
count1
2
word"practiced ease"
count1
3
word"chaotic"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"quickened"
count1
6
word"foreboding"
count1
7
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"comfortable"
2"practiced ease"
3"chaotic"
4"pulse"
5"quickened"
6"foreboding"
7"depths"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
98.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences64
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords777
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.35% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount744
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London3
Harlow1
Quinn12
Camden1
Tube2
Morris3
Veil1
Market1
Panic1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Market"
4"Panic"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
globalScore0.694
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like burnt sugar"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount777
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"screamed that this"
73.77% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean35.32
std14.42
cv0.408
sampleLengths
045
153
221
354
431
552
639
734
833
935
1063
1140
1243
1321
1410
1522
1623
1737
187
1944
2049
2121
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"been made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs134
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences67
ratio0.09
matches
0"Quinn's worn leather watch caught the dim light as she checked it—23:47."
1"Her partner Morris had disappeared three years ago pursuing someone into circumstances just like this—unexplained, supernatural."
2"Strange sounds drifted from within—whispers in languages she couldn't identify, the chime of bells, the occasional cry of something that wasn't human."
3"The bone token in the suspect's hand had been visible for just a second as they'd approached the door—a small, carved object that glowed faintly."
4"The silver case—another piece of the puzzle she'd been tracking for months."
5"Strange smells assaulted her nostrils—sulfur, ozone, something like burnt sugar."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount753
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.029216467463479414
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.01195219123505976
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean11.6
std5.52
cv0.476
sampleLengths
014
118
22
311
418
517
618
716
85
919
1011
1112
1212
1315
1413
153
1613
178
1816
1915
2011
215
2214
239
2422
2512
2625
276
282
2920
308
317
3215
3318
3413
3517
366
378
387
3919
4016
4113
4214
4310
4411
456
464
478
4814
493
75.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4626865671641791
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences62
matches
0"She'd been chasing this suspect"
1"Her voice cut through the"
2"They descended into Camden's labyrinth"
3"Her partner Morris had disappeared"
4"She still didn't understand what"
5"She swallowed hard, her hand"
6"She'd known it might lead"
7"Her suspect was already halfway"
8"She couldn't afford distractions."
9"Her suspect glanced back, their"
10"They broke into a run,"
11"She pressed onward, the light"
ratio0.194
24.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences62
matches
0"Rain lashed against the pavement,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed"
2"She'd been chasing this suspect"
3"The figure ahead moved with"
4"Quinn's sharp jaw clenched as"
5"Her voice cut through the"
6"The suspect never looked back."
7"They descended into Camden's labyrinth"
8"The air thickened with the"
9"Quinn's worn leather watch caught"
10"The suspect suddenly veered left,"
11"An old Tube station entrance,"
12"Something wasn't right."
13"Quinn hesitated at the top"
14"Every fiber screamed that this"
15"Her partner Morris had disappeared"
16"She still didn't understand what"
17"Rainwater streamed down her neck"
18"The air grew colder, damper."
19"Quinn pressed her back against"
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
17.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The figure ahead moved with unnatural speed, darting between shadows with a fluidity that defied normal human capability."
1"At forty-one, she still maintained the fitness that had served her throughout her eighteen years on the force."
2"Strange sounds drifted from within—whispers in languages she couldn't identify, the chime of bells, the occasional cry of something that wasn't human."
3"The bone token in the suspect's hand had been visible for just a second as they'd approached the door—a small, carved object that glowed faintly."
4"The heavy door groaned as she pushed it open, revealing a world that shouldn't exist."
5"Creatures that defied classification browsed the wares alongside humans who seemed entirely too comfortable with their companions."
6"Stalls began closing, their owners vanishing merchandise with impossible speed."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"someone shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.333
75.4057%