Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYSAGMDBHAE7QZ7JXVBEZ3

Run Details

Duration:
3m 42s
Cost:
$0.004186
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts slid back, one after another, the metal clunks echoing in the narrow hallway. Aurora Carter pulled the door open and the smell of cumin and rain rushed in. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, water dripping from the hem of his charcoal suit onto the worn linoleum. His platinum hair stuck to his forehead, darkened by the downpour outside. He leaned on the ivory handle of his cane, the tip tapping once against the floorboard. Aurora gripped the edge of the door, her knuckles white. She did not step back. Lucien lifted his head. The amber eye caught the hallway light while the black one swallowed it. "You changed the locks." "I changed everything." Aurora turned and walked into the room, leaving the door open. Lucien followed. He closed the door behind him and engaged the top bolt, then the middle, then the bottom. The sound sealed them inside. The flat smelled of old paper and the curry house below. Stacks of books and scrolls covered every surface, leaving only narrow paths to walk. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, sat atop a pile of research notes on the kitchen counter. The cat stared at Lucien, tail twitching, then let out a low growl. Lucien ignored the animal. He navigated the clutter without knocking anything over, his movements precise. He stopped in the centre of the room, the cane hooking over his wrist. "Eva told me you were here." "Eva talks too much." Aurora moved to the kitchen counter, putting the granite slab between them. She crossed her arms over her chest. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist peeked out from her sleeve. Lucien's gaze dropped to the mark, then returned to her face. "You look well." "Get to the point, Lucien." He reached into his jacket pocket and pulled out a folded envelope. He placed it on top of a stack of hardbacks near his hand. "There is a situation. Avaros bleeds into the city. More than before." "That sounds like a problem for your kind." "Our kind," Lucien corrected. His voice stayed low, smooth like polished stone. "You carry the mark. You know what happens when the veil thins." Aurora picked up the envelope. She did not open it. She held it by the corner, as if it might burn her. "I left that life. I left you." "You ran." "I walked away." Lucien stepped around the counter. Aurora held her ground. He stopped inches from her, close enough that she could smell the rain on his wool coat and the faint scent of sandalwood beneath it. He towered over her, five foot eleven to her five foot six, but she did not tilt her head up. "You fled to Cardiff. Then to London. Now you hide in a flat above a curry house with three deadbolts on the door." "I live here." "You survive here." Lucien reached out. His fingers hovered near her wrist, over the scar. He did not touch her. The heat radiating from his hand prickled her skin. She pulled her arm back. "Don't." "You flinch." "I react." Lucien dropped his hand. He turned away, walking toward the window. The glass rattled in the frame as thunder rolled over Brick Lane. He looked out at the wet street below, his reflection ghostly against the dark pane. "I did not come to argue about where you sleep." "Then why did you come?" Lucien turned back. The heterochromatic eyes narrowed. "Because they found you. The ones who hunt the bloodlines. They know you are in London. They know you are with Eva." Aurora pushed off the counter. She walked to the pile of scrolls near the sofa and began to gather them, stacking them with sharp, jerky movements. "I can handle myself." "You deliver noodles for the Golden Empress. You wear a helmet and ride a bicycle in the rain." "It pays the rent." "It makes you visible." Lucien walked toward her. He stopped when his shoes touched the hem of her jeans. He reached out and took the stack of scrolls from her hands. He placed them back on the table. "Look at me, Rory." She kept her eyes on the scrolls. "Aurora." "Rory." Lucien caught her chin. His grip was firm, not painful. He forced her to meet his gaze. The amber eye burned. The black one remained void. "They will not stop at delivery routes. They will come here. They will use Eva. They will use the cat." Ptolemy yowled from the counter. Aurora slapped his hand away. She stepped back until her legs hit the sofa. She sank onto the cushion, the upholstery creaking. "You left me in Marseille." "I saved you in Marseille." "You left." Lucien unbuttoned his suit jacket. He sat on the coffee table opposite her, the wood groaning under his weight. He rested his elbows on his knees, the cane lying across his thighs. "My father sent hunters. I drew them away. If I stayed, you would be dead." "You could have told me." "Would you have listened?" Aurora looked at the envelope on the stack of books. The paper was thick, cream-coloured, embossed with a seal she did not recognise but felt in her bones. A low hum vibrated in her chest, right where her ribs met. "What is in the letter?" "Names. Locations. Safe houses." "And the cost?" Lucien smiled. It did not reach his eyes. "You know there is always a cost." "I'm not going back to Avaros." "No. But you must stop running. Stand and fight." Aurora stood up. She walked to the window and looked out. The rain streaked the glass, blurring the lights of the passing cars below. Her reflection stared back, black hair framing a pale face, blue eyes wide. "I built a life here. A normal life." "There is no normal for us." Lucien stood. He picked up the cane. The blade inside clicked softly within the sheath. He walked to the door and placed his hand on the middle deadbolt. "I will be at the bar. Silas' place. Tonight. Midnight." "I'm not coming." Lucien paused. He looked over his shoulder. The light from the hallway cut across his face, highlighting the sharp line of his jaw. "You will come. Because you know I am the only one who can keep you alive." He unlocked the top bolt. "Wait." Lucien stopped. He did not turn around. Aurora walked toward him. She stopped behind him, close enough to feel the heat of his body but not touching. "Why now? Why come back after six months?" Lucien turned. He stepped into her space again. The air between them crackled, heavy with unsaid words and old hunger. He reached out and tucked a strand of straight black hair behind her ear. His fingers lingered on her cheek. "Because I dreamed of your death." Aurora caught his wrist. Her fingers wrapped around the pulse point. It beat slow, too slow for a human. "Was I dead in the dream?" "You were screaming." Lucien pulled his hand away. He finished unlocking the door. He opened it, letting the sound of the rain and the city flood back into the cramped flat. Ptolemy jumped down from the counter and wound himself around Aurora's ankles. "Midnight, Rory." Lucien stepped out into the hallway. He pulled the door shut, leaving Aurora standing in the silence of the room. The lock clicked. Then the second. Then the third. She stood alone with the smell of cumin and the envelope on the table. She looked at the window. Her reflection stared back, but for a second, the blue eyes looked black. She turned away from the glass and walked to the table. She picked up the envelope. She ran her thumb over the seal. The paper felt warm. She tore it open.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.019
leniency0.038
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1305
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1305
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"navigated"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"navigated"
2"weight"
3"vibrated"
4"pulse"
5"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences111
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences163
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1303
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
41.30% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount966
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.17
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
Lucien21
Brick1
Lane1
Aurora14
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Aurora"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.413
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1303
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences163
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs83
mean15.7
std18.31
cv1.166
sampleLengths
077
115
217
34
43
588
629
76
84
942
103
115
1225
1312
148
1524
1622
177
182
193
2054
2123
223
233
2431
251
262
272
2838
2910
305
317
3222
3326
344
3518
364
374
3834
394
407
411
421
4326
4420
455
4622
475
485
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs166
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences163
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount968
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.027892561983471075
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0030991735537190084
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences163
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences163
mean7.99
std5.2
cv0.651
sampleLengths
015
115
219
312
416
510
65
74
813
94
103
1111
122
1317
145
1511
1614
1715
1813
194
2011
2114
226
234
2412
257
2612
2711
283
295
3012
3113
3212
338
344
358
3612
375
385
3912
407
412
423
435
444
4525
4620
4723
483
493
38.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.2147239263803681
totalSentences163
uniqueOpeners35
64.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences104
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Then the third."
ratio0.019
12.31% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences104
matches
0"His platinum hair stuck to"
1"He leaned on the ivory"
2"She did not step back."
3"He closed the door behind"
4"He navigated the clutter without"
5"He stopped in the centre"
6"She crossed her arms over"
7"He reached into his jacket"
8"He placed it on top"
9"His voice stayed low, smooth"
10"She did not open it."
11"She held it by the"
12"He stopped inches from her,"
13"He towered over her, five"
14"His fingers hovered near her"
15"He did not touch her."
16"She pulled her arm back."
17"He turned away, walking toward"
18"He looked out at the"
19"She walked to the pile"
ratio0.519
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount101
totalSentences104
matches
0"Aurora Carter pulled the door"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"His platinum hair stuck to"
3"He leaned on the ivory"
4"Aurora gripped the edge of"
5"She did not step back."
6"Lucien lifted his head."
7"The amber eye caught the"
8"Aurora turned and walked into"
9"He closed the door behind"
10"The sound sealed them inside."
11"The flat smelled of old"
12"Stacks of books and scrolls"
13"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, sat"
14"The cat stared at Lucien,"
15"Lucien ignored the animal."
16"He navigated the clutter without"
17"He stopped in the centre"
18"Aurora moved to the kitchen"
19"She crossed her arms over"
ratio0.971
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.019
leniency0.038
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.038
84.3284%