Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYSBFWE2DRV4MN0S6A9C42

Run Details

Duration:
1m 8s
Cost:
$0.006304
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The London night bit at Aurora’s exposed skin, a sharp, damp cold that promised rain. She pulled the collar of her jacket higher, her breath pluming in the weak moonlight filtering through Richmond Park’s skeletal winter trees. Every step on the dew-slicked grass was a soft crunch, the only sound in an unnatural quiet. No cars. No distant city hum. Just the dead weight of silence. The Heartstone pendant against her sternum was the reason she was here. It had been a faint, persistent warmth all day, a low-level thrum she’d almost gotten used to. An hour ago, that thrum had become a pulse, a steady, insistent beat that pulled her west, out of the city and into the park’s sprawling darkness. It wasn’t a painful feeling, but it was demanding. A summons. She found the path she wasn’t supposed to know about, a faint deer track leading into a denser copse of ancient oaks. And then she saw them. The standing stones. Seven monoliths of dark, gnarled oak, each one the height of a man, arranged in a rough circle. They marked the boundary. This was Isolde’s grove. The Fae Grove. The place Eva had warned her about with a strange seriousness in her eyes. Rory hesitated, her hand instinctively going to the pendant. The crimson stone felt hotter now, almost uncomfortably so. The pulse was stronger, a frantic beat against her fingertips. Whatever was calling to it, it was in there. Her cool-headed nature warred with a primal instinct to turn back, to run back to the familiar, noisy safety of the London streets. But her curiosity, that relentless engine that had driven her through law school and out of a bad relationship, won. She stepped between two of the oak pillars. The change was immediate. The air grew still, not just quiet, but utterly devoid of movement. The faint breeze that had been at her back vanished. The temperature, already cold, dropped several degrees, seeping into her bones. The silence deepened, pressing in on her eardrums. It was a solid, heavy thing. The grove was just as the stories described. A perfect circular clearing, carpeted in a thick, lush moss. Wildflowers bloomed everywhere, their colours vibrant even in the pale moonlight—blues so deep they were almost black, whites that seemed to radiate a soft light, reds the colour of spilled blood. They were beautiful. And they were wrong. Nothing bloomed like this in the dead of English winter. A knot of unease tightened in her stomach. The pendant’s heat intensified, a sharp, insistent throb against her skin. She took a few steps deeper into the clearing, her boots sinking silently into the moss. The flowers seemed to lean toward her, their heads tracking her movement. A sound. A soft rustle from her left. Rory froze, every muscle tensed. She scanned the edge of the clearing, where the deep shadows of the oaks bled into the night. Nothing. No wind. Not a single leaf stirred on any of the trees. The sound hadn't come from the trees. It had come from the flowers. She stood perfectly still, listening. The silence returned, thicker than before. It was listening too. She could feel it. She started walking again, toward the centre of the grove, drawn by the frantic beating of the Heartstone. With every step, the feeling of being watched grew stronger. It wasn't just a vague paranoid sensation; it was a physical pressure, like a spotlight trained on her back. The hairs on her arms and the back of her neck stood on end. Another sound. A soft, clicking noise, like dry twigs snapping. It came from behind her. She spun around. The clearing was empty. The flowers swayed gently, though there was no wind. Their movement was slow, a collective, hypnotic dance that made her head swim. But the sound… it was gone. “Hello?” Her voice was a croak, swallowed by the oppressive silence. No answer. Of course, there was no answer. She looked down at the pendant. It was glowing now, a faint, sickly crimson light visible through the thin fabric of her shirt. The heat was a low burn. She pulled it out, the silver chain cold against her fingers while the stone itself felt like a living coal. The light pulsed in time with the beat she felt, pointing like a compass toward the largest of the standing stones on the far side of the grove. That was it. The source. As she turned to face it, a flicker of movement at the very edge of her vision caught her attention. A shadow, detached from its owner, stretching and writhing with an impossible fluidity. It was there and gone in a second, melting back into the darkness between two of the oaks. Rory’s heart hammered against her ribs. This was beyond strange. This was dangerous. Her mind, usually a fortress of logic, struggled to categorize what she was seeing. A trick of the light? A stress-induced hallucination? She didn’t believe in either, not really. She believed in evidence. And the evidence was piling up. She forced herself to keep moving, one foot in front of the other, toward the stone the pendant indicated. The air grew colder still, and a new scent joined the smell of damp earth and cloying floral perfume. It was the smell of an old tomb, of dust and cold stone and the long-dead. It was the smell of absence. The clicking sound returned, closer this time. It was a dry, rhythmic clatter, like someone tapping their long fingernails together. It seemed to come from all directions at once, echoing strangely in the sound-proofed air. She reached the central stone. It was immense, wider than she was, with a surface like gnarled, aged skin. The pendant in her hand was almost too hot to hold now, its crimson light a frantic strobe against the darkness. The low hum she’d mistaken for her own heartbeat was louder here, a resonant thrumming that vibrated up her arm from the stone. She saw it then. A crack in the ancient oak, a jagged line that ran from the base to about chest height. It wasn’t a natural split. The edges were too sharp, too dark. From within that fissure, the sepulchral cold emanated, along with a velvet blackness that seemed to drink the moonlight. The clicking stopped. The silence that rushed back in was absolute, a vacuum. Rory stared into the crack. The blackness within it wasn’t empty. It stirred. It wasn't a movement of a thing, but a movement of the darkness itself, a slow, deliberate swirling like smoke in a vacuum. It coalesced, forming a shape that had no shape, a presence that was defined by its utter lack of light or substance. A wave of pure, animal terror washed over her, so cold and complete it was almost paralyzing. This wasn't Fae magic, not the tricky, whimsical power Eva spoke of. This was something else. Something ancient. Something hungry. The Heartstone pendant, which had been burning with heat, suddenly turned ice-cold in her grasp. The crimson light died, leaving only the deep, lifeless gem. The pulse stopped. And from the crack in the stone, the darkness began to seep out.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1217
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"perfectly"
2"gently"
3"very"
4"really"
5"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1217
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silence"
count5
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count3
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"throb"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"dance"
count1
11
word"oppressive"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"rhythmic"
count1
15
word"echoing"
count1
16
word"vibrated"
count1
17
word"velvet"
count1
18
word"whimsical"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"warmth"
3"pulse"
4"familiar"
5"perfect"
6"stomach"
7"throb"
8"scanned"
9"could feel"
10"dance"
11"oppressive"
12"pulsed"
13"flicker"
14"rhythmic"
15"echoing"
16"vibrated"
17"velvet"
18"whimsical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
84.31% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences122
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1209
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1208
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.33
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"London"
discoveredNames
London2
Aurora1
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone3
Isolde1
Fae2
Grove1
Eva2
English1
Rory4
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Isolde"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
56.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"whites that seemed to radiate a soft light, reds the colour of spilled blood"
1"felt like a living coal"
2"blackness that seemed to drink the moonlight"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.827
wordCount1209
matches
0"not just quiet, but utterly devoid of movement"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean40.3
std24.75
cv0.614
sampleLengths
066
167
273
380
48
551
674
739
82
96
1049
1119
1261
1315
143
1532
1619
1777
185
1951
2052
2160
2235
2363
2453
2513
2658
2737
2828
2913
99.51% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences122
matches
0"was gone"
1"was defined"
10.61% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs176
matches
0"was calling"
1"was listening"
2"was glowing"
3"was seeing"
4"was piling"
96.02% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences122
ratio0.016
matches
0"Wildflowers bloomed everywhere, their colours vibrant even in the pale moonlight—blues so deep they were almost black, whites that seemed to radiate a soft light, reds the colour of spilled blood."
1"It wasn't just a vague paranoid sensation; it was a physical pressure, like a spotlight trained on her back."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1216
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.03536184210526316
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.01069078947368421
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean9.91
std6.81
cv0.688
sampleLengths
015
122
217
32
44
56
612
717
827
99
102
1122
125
133
1418
154
164
173
1814
199
209
2110
229
2323
2420
258
264
2712
2810
2911
308
316
328
3310
3431
353
364
3710
388
3911
4016
4112
422
436
445
4518
461
472
4810
497
31.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.22950819672131148
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners28
60.06% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences111
matches
0"Just the dead weight of"
1"Of course, there was no"
ratio0.018
75.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences111
matches
0"She pulled the collar of"
1"It had been a faint,"
2"It wasn’t a painful feeling,"
3"She found the path she"
4"They marked the boundary."
5"Her cool-headed nature warred with"
6"She stepped between two of"
7"It was a solid, heavy"
8"They were beautiful."
9"She took a few steps"
10"She scanned the edge of"
11"It had come from the"
12"She stood perfectly still, listening."
13"It was listening too."
14"She could feel it."
15"She started walking again, toward"
16"It wasn't just a vague"
17"It came from behind her."
18"She spun around."
19"Their movement was slow, a"
ratio0.36
23.06% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount97
totalSentences111
matches
0"The London night bit at"
1"She pulled the collar of"
2"Every step on the dew-slicked"
3"The Heartstone pendant against her"
4"It had been a faint,"
5"An hour ago, that thrum"
6"It wasn’t a painful feeling,"
7"She found the path she"
8"The standing stones."
9"They marked the boundary."
10"This was Isolde’s grove."
11"The Fae Grove."
12"The place Eva had warned"
13"Rory hesitated, her hand instinctively"
14"The crimson stone felt hotter"
15"The pulse was stronger, a"
16"Whatever was calling to it,"
17"Her cool-headed nature warred with"
18"She stepped between two of"
19"The change was immediate."
ratio0.874
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
8.09% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"She pulled the collar of her jacket higher, her breath pluming in the weak moonlight filtering through Richmond Park’s skeletal winter trees."
1"An hour ago, that thrum had become a pulse, a steady, insistent beat that pulled her west, out of the city and into the park’s sprawling darkness."
2"But her curiosity, that relentless engine that had driven her through law school and out of a bad relationship, won."
3"Wildflowers bloomed everywhere, their colours vibrant even in the pale moonlight—blues so deep they were almost black, whites that seemed to radiate a soft ligh…"
4"Their movement was slow, a collective, hypnotic dance that made her head swim."
5"A shadow, detached from its owner, stretching and writhing with an impossible fluidity."
6"The low hum she’d mistaken for her own heartbeat was louder here, a resonant thrumming that vibrated up her arm from the stone."
7"From within that fissure, the sepulchral cold emanated, along with a velvet blackness that seemed to drink the moonlight."
8"It coalesced, forming a shape that had no shape, a presence that was defined by its utter lack of light or substance."
9"The Heartstone pendant, which had been burning with heat, suddenly turned ice-cold in her grasp."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.3419%