| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 75.35% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1217 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "really" | | 5 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1217 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "throb" | | 8 | "scanned" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "dance" | | 11 | "oppressive" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "rhythmic" | | 15 | "echoing" | | 16 | "vibrated" | | 17 | "velvet" | | 18 | "whimsical" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.31% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1209 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1208 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.33 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "London" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Aurora | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Isolde | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | English | 1 | | Rory | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 56.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "whites that seemed to radiate a soft light, reds the colour of spilled blood" | | 1 | "felt like a living coal" | | 2 | "blackness that seemed to drink the moonlight" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.827 | | wordCount | 1209 | | matches | | 0 | "not just quiet, but utterly devoid of movement" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 40.3 | | std | 24.75 | | cv | 0.614 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 73 | | 3 | 80 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 74 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 61 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 77 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 51 | | 20 | 52 | | 21 | 60 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 63 | | 24 | 53 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 58 | | 27 | 37 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 13 |
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| 99.51% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was defined" |
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| 10.61% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | | 0 | "was calling" | | 1 | "was listening" | | 2 | "was glowing" | | 3 | "was seeing" | | 4 | "was piling" |
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| 96.02% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 122 | | ratio | 0.016 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed everywhere, their colours vibrant even in the pale moonlight—blues so deep they were almost black, whites that seemed to radiate a soft light, reds the colour of spilled blood." | | 1 | "It wasn't just a vague paranoid sensation; it was a physical pressure, like a spotlight trained on her back." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1216 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.03536184210526316 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01069078947368421 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 122 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 122 | | mean | 9.91 | | std | 6.81 | | cv | 0.688 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 31.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 23 | | diversityRatio | 0.22950819672131148 | | totalSentences | 122 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 60.06% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the dead weight of" | | 1 | "Of course, there was no" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 75.86% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled the collar of" | | 1 | "It had been a faint," | | 2 | "It wasn’t a painful feeling," | | 3 | "She found the path she" | | 4 | "They marked the boundary." | | 5 | "Her cool-headed nature warred with" | | 6 | "She stepped between two of" | | 7 | "It was a solid, heavy" | | 8 | "They were beautiful." | | 9 | "She took a few steps" | | 10 | "She scanned the edge of" | | 11 | "It had come from the" | | 12 | "She stood perfectly still, listening." | | 13 | "It was listening too." | | 14 | "She could feel it." | | 15 | "She started walking again, toward" | | 16 | "It wasn't just a vague" | | 17 | "It came from behind her." | | 18 | "She spun around." | | 19 | "Their movement was slow, a" |
| | ratio | 0.36 | |
| 23.06% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 97 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "The London night bit at" | | 1 | "She pulled the collar of" | | 2 | "Every step on the dew-slicked" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant against her" | | 4 | "It had been a faint," | | 5 | "An hour ago, that thrum" | | 6 | "It wasn’t a painful feeling," | | 7 | "She found the path she" | | 8 | "The standing stones." | | 9 | "They marked the boundary." | | 10 | "This was Isolde’s grove." | | 11 | "The Fae Grove." | | 12 | "The place Eva had warned" | | 13 | "Rory hesitated, her hand instinctively" | | 14 | "The crimson stone felt hotter" | | 15 | "The pulse was stronger, a" | | 16 | "Whatever was calling to it," | | 17 | "Her cool-headed nature warred with" | | 18 | "She stepped between two of" | | 19 | "The change was immediate." |
| | ratio | 0.874 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 8.09% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled the collar of her jacket higher, her breath pluming in the weak moonlight filtering through Richmond Park’s skeletal winter trees." | | 1 | "An hour ago, that thrum had become a pulse, a steady, insistent beat that pulled her west, out of the city and into the park’s sprawling darkness." | | 2 | "But her curiosity, that relentless engine that had driven her through law school and out of a bad relationship, won." | | 3 | "Wildflowers bloomed everywhere, their colours vibrant even in the pale moonlight—blues so deep they were almost black, whites that seemed to radiate a soft ligh…" | | 4 | "Their movement was slow, a collective, hypnotic dance that made her head swim." | | 5 | "A shadow, detached from its owner, stretching and writhing with an impossible fluidity." | | 6 | "The low hum she’d mistaken for her own heartbeat was louder here, a resonant thrumming that vibrated up her arm from the stone." | | 7 | "From within that fissure, the sepulchral cold emanated, along with a velvet blackness that seemed to drink the moonlight." | | 8 | "It coalesced, forming a shape that had no shape, a presence that was defined by its utter lack of light or substance." | | 9 | "The Heartstone pendant, which had been burning with heat, suddenly turned ice-cold in her grasp." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |