Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYSP1PVJAEERZ2BDBE5EMY

Run Details

Duration:
9.5s
Cost:
$0.002346

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came sharp and staccato, three precise raps that cut through the quiet of her flat. Aurora froze, takeout container halfway to her mouth, chopsticks suspended in midair. She knew that rhythm. No one else knocked like that. Slowly, she set down her dinner and approached the door. Her heart thundered against her ribcage, a betraying rhythm that suggested her body remembered what her mind wanted to forget. Lucien. When she opened the door, he looked exactly the same. Charcoal suit impeccable, platinum hair slicked back, those mismatched eyes — one amber, one black — sizing her up with surgical precision. "You're not welcome here," Aurora said, her voice flat. A slight smile. "Ah, but I'm not asking permission." He stepped forward. She didn't move, blocking the doorway. Their bodies nearly touched, a charged proximity that crackled with unresolved tension. "How did you find me?" The question was more accusation than inquiry. Lucien's ivory-handled cane tapped against the doorframe. "In my line of work, finding people is... elementary." The half-demon fixer looked past her, scanning the cramped flat. His gaze lingered on the scattered research papers, the half-eaten takeout, the signs of a life carefully reconstructed after their last disastrous encounter. "May I?" he asked, already moving inside. Aurora's hand reflexively touched the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist — a nervous tell she'd never quite conquered. "You're not staying," she said. But they both knew that was a lie.
total_cost0.0023455999999999998

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
58.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount243
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount243
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"thundered"
count1
1
word"charged"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"encounter"
count1
highlights
0"thundered"
1"charged"
2"tension"
3"scanning"
4"encounter"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences22
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences22
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences24
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords242
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
79.58% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions5
wordCount213
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity1.41
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Lucien2
Aurora3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.796
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences15
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount242
matches(empty)
27.78% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences24
matches
0"knew that rhythm"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean16.13
std10.3
cv0.639
sampleLengths
029
110
230
31
432
59
69
721
812
916
1033
117
1220
135
148
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences22
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs37
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences24
ratio0.083
matches
0"Charcoal suit impeccable, platinum hair slicked back, those mismatched eyes — one amber, one black — sizing her up with surgical precision."
1"Aurora's hand reflexively touched the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist — a nervous tell she'd never quite conquered."
85.31% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount214
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.04672897196261682
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.02336448598130841
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences24
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences24
mean10.08
std6.08
cv0.603
sampleLengths
017
112
24
36
410
520
61
710
822
99
103
116
123
136
1412
1512
167
179
1810
1923
207
2120
225
238
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.7916666666666666
totalSentences24
uniqueOpeners19
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences20
matches
0"Slowly, she set down her"
ratio0.05
80.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences20
matches
0"She knew that rhythm."
1"Her heart thundered against her"
2"He stepped forward."
3"She didn't move, blocking the"
4"Their bodies nearly touched, a"
5"His gaze lingered on the"
6"he asked, already moving inside"
ratio0.35
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount16
totalSentences20
matches
0"The knock came sharp and"
1"Aurora froze, takeout container halfway"
2"She knew that rhythm."
3"Her heart thundered against her"
4"Charcoal suit impeccable, platinum hair"
5"Aurora said, her voice flat"
6"A slight smile."
7"He stepped forward."
8"She didn't move, blocking the"
9"Their bodies nearly touched, a"
10"The question was more accusation"
11"Lucien's ivory-handled cane tapped against"
12"The half-demon fixer looked past"
13"His gaze lingered on the"
14"he asked, already moving inside"
15"Aurora's hand reflexively touched the"
ratio0.8
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences20
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences10
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The knock came sharp and staccato, three precise raps that cut through the quiet of her flat."
1"Her heart thundered against her ribcage, a betraying rhythm that suggested her body remembered what her mind wanted to forget."
2"Their bodies nearly touched, a charged proximity that crackled with unresolved tension."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Aurora said, her voice flat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.3837%