Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYSZC4NC2WNBDEVNF0FMSY

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48.4s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened with a creak that echoed through the narrow hallway, and Rory's breath caught in her throat. Lucien stood there, immaculate as ever in his tailored charcoal suit, platinum hair gleaming under the harsh fluorescent light. His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her face with an intensity that made her stomach clench. "Hello, Aurora." The sound of her full name on his lips sent a familiar shiver down her spine. She gripped the door frame tighter, knuckles white against the chipped paint. "What are you doing here?" "May I come in?" He gestured with his ivory-handled cane toward the chaos behind her. "Unless you prefer conducting business in the hallway where Mrs. Patel downstairs can hear every word." Business. Of course. Rory stepped aside, the movement sharp and reluctant. Lucien moved past her into Eva's cramped flat, his presence immediately making the book-cluttered space feel even smaller. She caught a whiff of his cologne—something expensive and foreign that reminded her of midnight conversations and choices she'd rather forget. "Eva's not here." She closed the door but didn't engage the deadbolts. "She's at the British Library until closing." "I know." Lucien set his cane against the wall and surveyed the organised chaos of scrolls and research notes covering every surface. Ptolemy emerged from beneath a stack of books, tail twitching as he approached the newcomer with feline curiosity. "I came to see you." The words hit her like ice water. Rory crossed her arms, a defensive barrier against the memories threatening to surface. "We agreed—" "We agreed on many things." He picked up a leather-bound journal from the coffee table, fingers tracing its worn cover. "Most of which we've both found difficult to honour." "Don't." Her voice came out sharper than intended. "Don't do that thing where you speak in riddles and expect me to decode whatever game you're playing." Lucien's amber eye caught hers while the black one remained unreadable. "No games, ma chérie. Not tonight." The endearment hit like a physical blow. How many times had he whispered it against her skin in the dark corners of London's supernatural underworld? How many times had she pretended it meant nothing while her pulse quickened at the sound? "Then why are you here?" He set the journal down carefully, movements precise as always. "There's been a development. Something that requires your particular skills." "My skills." Rory laughed, the sound bitter in the small space. "Right. Because that's all this is about, isn't it? What I can do for the great Lucien Moreau." "That's not—" He stopped, jaw tightening. "You know that's not fair." "Fair?" The word exploded from her lips. "You want to talk about fair? You disappeared for three months, Luc. Three months without a word, without explanation. I thought you were dead." "You thought, or you hoped?" The question hung between them like a blade. Rory felt heat rise in her cheeks, anger and something else she refused to name warring in her chest. "Get out." "Aurora—" "I said get out." She moved toward the door, hand reaching for the handle. "Whatever job you're peddling, find someone else. I'm done being your convenient little problem-solver." Lucien's hand caught her wrist, fingers wrapping around the small crescent scar there. The touch was gentle, achingly familiar, and she hated how her body betrayed her by not pulling away. "I had no choice." His voice dropped to barely above a whisper. "The Contract of Avaros—" "Don't." She yanked her wrist free, the absence of his touch immediate and unwelcome. "Don't use demon politics as an excuse for being a coward." His heterochromatic eyes flashed dangerously. "Careful, ma chérie. You know nothing about what I've sacrificed." "Sacrificed?" Rory spun to face him fully, months of hurt and confusion finally finding their voice. "You want to talk about sacrifice? I gave up everything for you. My safety, my peace of mind, my bloody sanity. I walked into Hell itself because you asked me to." "And you walked out again." "Barely." The memory of sulfur and screaming echoed in her mind. "And when I did, you were gone. No goodbye, no explanation. Just your pretty words about keeping me safe while you vanished like smoke." Lucien stepped closer, close enough that she could see the gold flecks in his amber eye. "Keeping you safe was never just words." "Then why does it feel like abandonment?" The question stripped bare, raw and honest in the space between them. Lucien's composure cracked, something vulnerable flickering across his features before he shuttered it away. "Because perhaps it was." The admission knocked the air from her lungs. She'd expected denial, deflection—the elegant verbal dancing he excelled at. Not this stark honesty that cut deeper than any lie. "Then why are you here?" Her voice came out smaller than she intended. "Why now?" Lucien reached into his jacket and withdrew a photograph—black and white, grainy with age. He held it out to her, and after a moment's hesitation, she took it. The image showed a symbol carved into stone, intricate and definitely occult. "Because three days ago, this appeared on the walls of seven churches across London. All consecrated ground. All places that should be protected from demonic interference." Rory studied the photograph, her analytical mind already working despite the emotional turmoil. The symbol was unlike anything in Eva's extensive research collection—ancient but wrong somehow, as if the very lines hurt to look at directly. "What is it?" "A summoning mark. But not for anything from Avaros or the other known realms." Lucien moved to stand beside her, their shoulders almost touching as he pointed to specific elements of the carving. "The geometric patterns, the way the lines intersect—this is calling something that shouldn't exist." Despite herself, Rory found her irritation sharpening into focus. Puzzles had always been her weakness, and this one hummed with dangerous potential. "Who's doing the summoning?" "That's what I need to find out." His voice carried the weight of genuine concern. "And I need someone I can trust absolutely." The words hung in the air between them, loaded with history and implication. Rory looked up to find him watching her intently, both eyes serious now. "Trust." She tested the word like wine gone sour. "Funny how you only remember that when you need something." "Aurora." Her name was soft on his lips, stripped of its usual formal pronunciation. "What happened between us—" "Was a mistake." She handed back the photograph, fingers careful not to touch his. "We both know that." But even as she said it, her body betrayed her with memories—his hands in her hair, his voice whispering promises in French she pretended not to understand, the way he'd looked at her like she was something precious and dangerous all at once. Lucien pocketed the photograph, movements deliberate. "Perhaps. But mistakes have a way of becoming necessary, don't they?" Before she could respond, Ptolemy wound between their legs with a purr, breaking the tension that had been building like a storm. Rory seized the distraction, bending to scratch behind the tabby's ears. "You should go." She didn't look up. "Eva will be back soon." "Will you consider it?" His voice carried that persuasive tone she remembered too well. "The case, I mean." Rory straightened slowly, meeting his mismatched gaze with all the steel she could muster. "I'll consider it. But not for you." Something that might have been hurt flickered across his features. "For whom, then?" "For the seven churches full of people who don't deserve to die because some amateur occultist is playing with forces they don't understand." Lucien nodded slowly, retrieving his cane from where he'd propped it against the wall. "Of course. Always the hero, aren't you, ma chérie?" The endearment stung worse this time, carrying as it did the weight of everything unsaid between them. "Don't call me that." She followed him to the door, hand hovering over the deadbolts. "Not anymore." He paused in the doorway, silhouette cutting a sharp line against the fluorescent-lit hallway. "For what it's worth," he said without turning around, "leaving you was the hardest thing I've ever done." "Then why did you do it?" But the hallway was empty, and Rory was left staring at nothing but shadows and the lingering scent of expensive cologne.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She handed back [back]"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.324
leniency0.647
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.029
82.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1397
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"very"
3"slowly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1397
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"intensity"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"down her spine"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"quickened"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"dancing"
count1
12
word"stark"
count1
13
word"intricate"
count1
14
word"potential"
count1
15
word"carried the weight"
count1
16
word"absolutely"
count1
17
word"implication"
count1
18
word"tension"
count1
19
word"flickered"
count1
20
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"gleaming"
2"intensity"
3"stomach"
4"familiar"
5"down her spine"
6"tracing"
7"unreadable"
8"pulse"
9"quickened"
10"whisper"
11"dancing"
12"stark"
13"intricate"
14"potential"
15"carried the weight"
16"absolutely"
17"implication"
18"tension"
19"flickered"
20"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1384
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.04% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount896
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.34
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Business1
Eva2
Lucien11
Ptolemy2
London1
Despite1
French1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"French"
globalScore0.83
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1384
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean21.97
std12.84
cv0.585
sampleLengths
055
12
228
35
431
550
619
745
822
929
1026
1117
1241
135
1420
1529
1611
1731
185
1927
202
211
2228
2331
2416
2525
2615
2747
285
2935
3023
317
3226
334
3428
3515
3640
3726
3836
393
4047
4122
424
4323
4426
4519
4618
4718
4843
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"was left"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs148
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences116
ratio0.052
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her face with an intensity that made her stomach clench."
1"She caught a whiff of his cologne—something expensive and foreign that reminded her of midnight conversations and choices she'd rather forget."
2"She'd expected denial, deflection—the elegant verbal dancing he excelled at."
3"Lucien reached into his jacket and withdrew a photograph—black and white, grainy with age."
4"The symbol was unlike anything in Eva's extensive research collection—ancient but wrong somehow, as if the very lines hurt to look at directly."
5"But even as she said it, her body betrayed her with memories—his hands in her hair, his voice whispering promises in French she pretended not to understand, the way he'd looked at her like she was something precious and dangerous all at once."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount907
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03638368246968027
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.013230429988974642
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean11.93
std7.07
cv0.593
sampleLengths
019
119
217
32
416
512
65
715
816
91
102
118
1218
1321
1412
157
1622
1718
185
197
2013
212
2220
239
248
2518
2611
276
287
2918
3016
315
3210
3310
3411
3518
366
375
387
3924
405
418
4219
432
441
4514
4614
4713
4818
4912
68.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4396551724137931
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners51
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences69
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one"
1"She gripped the door frame"
2"He gestured with his ivory-handled"
3"She caught a whiff of"
4"She closed the door but"
5"He picked up a leather-bound"
6"Her voice came out sharper"
7"He set the journal down"
8"He stopped, jaw tightening"
9"She moved toward the door,"
10"His voice dropped to barely"
11"She yanked her wrist free,"
12"His heterochromatic eyes flashed dangerously."
13"She'd expected denial, deflection—the elegant"
14"Her voice came out smaller"
15"He held it out to"
16"His voice carried the weight"
17"She tested the word like"
18"Her name was soft on"
19"She handed back the photograph,"
ratio0.362
10.72% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences69
matches
0"The door opened with a"
1"Lucien stood there, immaculate as"
2"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one"
3"The sound of her full"
4"She gripped the door frame"
5"He gestured with his ivory-handled"
6"Rory stepped aside, the movement"
7"Lucien moved past her into"
8"She caught a whiff of"
9"She closed the door but"
10"Lucien set his cane against"
11"Ptolemy emerged from beneath a"
12"The words hit her like"
13"Rory crossed her arms, a"
14"He picked up a leather-bound"
15"Her voice came out sharper"
16"Lucien's amber eye caught hers"
17"The endearment hit like a"
18"He set the journal down"
19"Rory laughed, the sound bitter"
ratio0.899
72.46% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Before she could respond, Ptolemy"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her face with an intensity that made her stomach clench."
1"The symbol was unlike anything in Eva's extensive research collection—ancient but wrong somehow, as if the very lines hurt to look at directly."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"He picked up, fingers tracing its worn cover"
1"He stopped, jaw tightening"
2"She yanked, the absence of his touch immediate and unwelcome"
3"She handed back, fingers careful not to touch his"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.059
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.029
80.7759%