Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYT5B9C8AQB72Q4QHT2GS5

Run Details

Duration:
1m 23s
Cost:
$0.009601
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Water dripped somewhere in the darkness, a rhythmic tapping that echoed off the curved, tiled walls of the abandoned station. The air here tasted of ozone and old iron, a metallic tang that clung to the back of the throat. Harlow Quinn adjusted her cuffs, the leather of her watch strap snapping against her wrist. She hated the underground. It smelled of secrets kept too long. She stepped over a discarded ticket barrier, rusted into a permanent sculpture of refusal, and moved deeper into the platform where the emergency lighting cast long, sickly orange shadows. "You're late." Eva Kowalski stood near the edge of the tracks, her back to the tunnel mouth. She hugged her worn leather satchel tight against her chest, her round glasses reflecting the flickering light. A strand of curly red hair escaped her clip, and she tucked it behind her ear with a trembling hand. "Traffic on the Euston Road. And the token took three minutes to find." Harlow stopped beside her. She didn't look at the body yet. She looked at the floor. Dust. Lots of it. Undisturbed except for a single set of footprints leading to the centre of the platform. Eva’s. "He's fresh," Eva murmured, her voice barely rising above the drip of the water. "Rigor hasn't even set in properly." Harlow finally directed her gaze to the victim. A man, perhaps fifty, dressed in a pinstripe suit that cost more than Harlow earned in a month. He lay on his back, arms spread wide in a grotesque imitation of a snow angel. But it was the head that drew the eye. It was turned completely backward, the neck a shattered ruin of vertebrae and flesh, facing the tunnel mouth while his chest stared up at the soot-stained ceiling. "Neck snapped," Harlow said, her voice flat. "Clean break." "It's not that simple." Eva shifted her weight, scuffing the dusty tiles with her boot. "Look at the pattern on the floor. The chalk." Harlow knelt. Her knees popped, a loud sound in the silence. She pulled a small penlight from her pocket and clicked it on. A white circle of illumination cut through the gloom. Around the body, someone had drawn a intricate series of lines. Sharp angles, intersecting circles, symbols that looked like nothing Harlow had seen in her eighteen years on the force. They glowed faintly, a pale phosphorescence that seemed to pulse with the rhythm of the dripping water. "Alchemy," Eva said, leaning in. "Old stuff. Pre-Roman. This isn't just a murder, Harlow. It's a containment breach." "A containment breach that twists a man's head one hundred and eighty degrees?" "The backlash from a failed extraction." Eva opened her satchel, pulling out a heavy, leather-bound book. She flipped through pages filled with diagrams that made Harlow’s eyes water. "If you try to pull something through the Veil without a proper anchor, the physical reality snaps back. The kinetic energy has to go somewhere." "So the Veil killed him?" "The Veil, or his own incompetence." Eva licked her thumb, turning another page. "He was a fence, we know that. He tried to smuggle something out of the Market, something volatile. The wards activated." Harlow stood up. She shone her light on the corpse's hands. They were empty. The fingers were curled, clawing at the air. She looked at the chalk lines again. They were precise, carefully drawn, but there was a smudge. Right near the victim's left foot. "Who found him?" "A Rat-catcher. Scavenging for scrap down the deep vents. He saw the glow and ran." "He touch anything?" "No. He was too terrified." Harlow walked a slow circle around the body. She kept her light on the ground. The dust layer was thick, a grey blanket over the old Victorian tiles. It was perfect. Pristine. Except for Eva’s prints and the victim’s dragged path. "Eva." "Hmm?" "Magic backlash. Does it leave footprints?" "What? No. It's energy. Kinetic discharge." "Does it weigh anything?" "The energy? No. Why?" Harlow pointed her light at the victim's chest. The pinstripe suit was soaked with blood, but the fabric around the shoulders was torn. Not sliced. Torn. As if something heavy had been hooked there. "If the kinetic energy snapped his neck," Harlow said, stepping closer to the wall, "it throws him backward. Physics still applies, even down here." "He fell." "He didn't fall. He was placed." Eva looked up from her book, frowning. "The position is consistent with a vertical force spike. The chalk aligns with the fracture points." "The chalk aligns with the narrative someone wants you to see." Harlow moved to the tunnel entrance, a few yards away from the body. She ran her hand along the soot-stained brickwork. "You said he tried to smuggle something out. What if he was successful?" "Then the Market would have taken his soul. They wouldn't leave the body." "Exactly. They wouldn't leave the body." Harlow crouched by the tunnel wall. "Look here." Eva sighed, closed her book, and walked over. "What am I looking at?" "Scuff marks. Deep ones. Someone braced here." "Probably the victim. He was struggling with the spell." "He was wearing loafers, Evie. Italian leather. Thin soles. These marks were made by boots. Heavy, treaded boots. Someone stood here, pushing against this wall for leverage." Harlow returned to the body. She knelt again, ignoring the smell of copper and bowel. She grabbed the victim’s jacket lapel and pulled the torso slightly to the side. "What are you doing? You're disturbing the scene!" "I'm looking for the bruising." "Eva, shut up and look." Harlow pointed the penlight at the man's back, right between the shoulder blades. "There. See that discolouration?" A dark, mottled patch of skin, shaped like a heel mark. "Someone stood on him." "Stood on him?" "To hold him down. While they twisted his head." Eva adjusted her glasses, squinting. "But... the chalk. The sigils. They're active. You can feel the hum in the air." "Those aren't containment sigils. They're a distraction." Harlow stood and brushed the dust from her trousers. "A magic trick. No pun intended. The killer draws some pretty lights on the floor, breaks a neck, and waits for the first occultist to come along and scream 'backlash'." "So it's a mundane murder?" "There's nothing mundane about the Veil Market, Eva. But the method? The method is human." Harlow walked back to the victim's pockets. She patted them down methodically. Wallet, keys, a handkerchief. She felt something hard and small in the breast pocket. She pulled it out. A small brass compass. The face was etched with protective sigils, green with verdigris. The needle spun wildly, twitching like a trapped insect. "Is that...?" "A Veil Compass." Harlow held it up. "Points to rifts. Or portals." Eva reached for it, her eyes wide. "That's high-tier contraband. That alone is worth five years in a Hole." "It's broken." Harlow watched the needle. It wasn't spinning north. It wasn't spinning toward the tunnel. It was spinning in a tight, frantic circle, pointing nowhere. "It's not broken." Eva took it gently from Harlow's hand. She turned it over. "The mechanism is fine. It's just confused. There's too much interference. Too many residual energies." "Or it's pointing at something very close." Harlow looked around the platform again. Her eyes narrowed. "If he was killed for this, or he was using this to find something..." "It tracks supernatural energy," Eva said. "If the killer has whatever the victim stole, the Compass should point to them." "Unless the killer is the source." Harlow scanned the darkness of the station. The flickering orange lights cast deep shadows in the corners where the curved walls met the ceiling. Rats scuttled in the distance. The dripping water continued its relentless counting. "Eva, get behind me." "What? Why?" "Turn the Compass off." "I can't just turn it off. It's not a—" "Eva. Cover the face. Now." Eva slapped a hand over the brass face. The sudden silence seemed to amplify the sound of breathing that wasn't theirs. Harlow drew her service weapon, a heavy black automatic. She aimed it at the empty space near the ticket barrier. "The dust," Harlow whispered. "What?" "The footprints. There was only the victim's. And yours." "Yes?" "There's no exit track. Our killer stood on the victim, twisted his head, drew the chalk... and then vanished." "Portals," Eva breathed. "He used a portal." "Maybe. Or maybe he's still here." Harlow gestured with the barrel of the gun toward the shadows behind the barrier. "That compass wasn't spinning, Evie. It was oscillating. Between two points." "The body and the wall," Eva realized. "Exactly. And I didn't see a rift in the wall." A sound scraped across the tiles—the distinctive grate of a boot heel dragging over stone. It came from directly above them. Harlow looked up. On the top of the arched tunnel entrance, clinging to the brickwork like a spider, a figure crouched. It wore a tattered coat that blended with the soot. Goggles reflected the dim light from above. The figure smiled, a flash of white teeth in the gloom, and raised a hand. In its palm, a small, jagged piece of bone began to glow. "Down!" Harlow grabbed Eva by the shoulder and shoved her toward the ground.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:43:17.742Z" 2/19/2026, 12:43:17 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Harlow looked around [around]"
dialogueSentences80
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.025
83.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1551
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"carefully"
2"slightly"
3"gently"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1551
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"gloom"
count2
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"pristine"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"scanned"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"echoed"
2"shattered"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"gloom"
6"intricate"
7"pulse"
8"perfect"
9"pristine"
10"etched"
11"scanned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
88.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences106
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences166
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1545
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount942
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.97
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Quinn1
Kowalski1
Harlow28
Eva18
Victorian1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Kowalski"
2"Harlow"
3"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.014
windowScore0
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like nothing Harlow had seen in he"
1"phosphorescence that seemed to pulse with the rhythm of the dripping water"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1545
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences166
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs89
mean17.36
std15.24
cv0.878
sampleLengths
066
129
22
352
413
536
620
78
870
99
1024
1132
1247
1318
1413
1553
165
1734
1839
196
203
2115
223
235
2441
251
261
276
286
294
304
3134
3224
332
346
3523
3645
3713
3814
3913
407
419
4227
4329
448
455
4622
4711
484
493
88.71% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences106
matches
0"was turned"
1"were curled"
2"was torn"
3"been hooked"
4"was etched"
75.78% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs161
matches
0"wasn't spinning"
1"wasn't spinning"
2"was spinning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences166
ratio0.006
matches
0"A sound scraped across the tiles—the distinctive grate of a boot heel dragging over stone."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount946
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"long, sickly orange shadows."
1"heavy, leather-bound book."
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02748414376321353
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.012684989429175475
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences166
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences166
mean9.31
std6.15
cv0.661
sampleLengths
020
120
215
34
47
529
62
715
817
920
1013
114
127
135
141
153
1615
171
1814
196
208
2118
2216
239
2427
257
262
2715
289
292
309
3112
329
3311
3419
3517
365
3713
3813
3916
4012
4125
425
4313
4421
453
468
473
488
497
56.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3795180722891566
totalSentences166
uniqueOpeners63
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences96
matches
0"She hated the underground."
1"It smelled of secrets kept"
2"She stepped over a discarded"
3"She hugged her worn leather"
4"She didn't look at the"
5"She looked at the floor."
6"He lay on his back,"
7"It was turned completely backward,"
8"Her knees popped, a loud"
9"She pulled a small penlight"
10"They glowed faintly, a pale"
11"She flipped through pages filled"
12"She shone her light on"
13"They were empty."
14"She looked at the chalk"
15"They were precise, carefully drawn,"
16"She kept her light on"
17"It was perfect."
18"She ran her hand along"
19"She knelt again, ignoring the"
ratio0.333
6.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences96
matches
0"Water dripped somewhere in the"
1"The air here tasted of"
2"Harlow Quinn adjusted her cuffs,"
3"She hated the underground."
4"It smelled of secrets kept"
5"She stepped over a discarded"
6"Eva Kowalski stood near the"
7"She hugged her worn leather"
8"A strand of curly red"
9"Harlow stopped beside her."
10"She didn't look at the"
11"She looked at the floor."
12"Lots of it."
13"Eva murmured, her voice barely"
14"Harlow finally directed her gaze"
15"A man, perhaps fifty, dressed"
16"He lay on his back,"
17"It was turned completely backward,"
18"Harlow said, her voice flat"
19"Eva shifted her weight, scuffing"
ratio0.906
52.08% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"As if something heavy had"
ratio0.01
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Water dripped somewhere in the darkness, a rhythmic tapping that echoed off the curved, tiled walls of the abandoned station."
1"Sharp angles, intersecting circles, symbols that looked like nothing Harlow had seen in her eighteen years on the force."
2"She flipped through pages filled with diagrams that made Harlow’s eyes water."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva murmured, her voice barely rising above the drip of the water"
1"Harlow said, her voice flat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva murmured (murmur)"
1"Harlow whispered (whisper)"
2"Eva breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences80
tagDensity0.088
leniency0.175
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.075
80.6568%