| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde's laugh chimed like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.48 | | leniency | 0.96 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.08 | |
| 95.64% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1146 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.28% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1146 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "searing" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "throbbed" | | 11 | "traced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1124 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 912 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 2.08 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Rory | 19 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | December | 1 | | London | 2 | | Nyx | 8 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Half-Fae | 2 | | Morse | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Varga" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "Isolde" | | 7 | "Half-Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.458 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.559 | | wordCount | 1124 | | matches | | 0 | "not whether you enter, but whether you will be rethreaded whole" | | 1 | "Not the clean cold of December London, but a thick warmth" | | 2 | "Not the searing heat it used near Hel portals, but something gentler, as if the stone recognized kin" | | 3 | "not Richmond Park but a different angle of the same clearing, rotated ninety degre" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 36.26 | | std | 19.82 | | cv | 0.547 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 71 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 76 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 35 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 60 | | 30 | 45 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.085 | | matches | | 0 | "colors assaulted her—violets too deep for the season, golds that hummed audibly, greens that shifted when viewed peripherally." | | 1 | "The amber sky of the parchment she'd read about in her research had no place here; instead, the canopy above blazed with a perpetual sunset that cast no shadows." | | 2 | "Rory noted the details with the precision that had earned her scholarship to Cardiff—observation as defense against panic." | | 3 | "Their fingers—dark as the space between stars—passed through the petals." | | 4 | "Rory caught movement in her peripheral vision—figures watching from behind bark-folds, eyes like fireflies that extinguished when faced directly." | | 5 | "Upon it lay a map drawn in light—shifting lines that redrawn themselves as Rory watched, showing streets she recognized from London overlaid with paths that walked through walls and under rivers." | | 6 | "\"This is the between,\" Nyx said, their voice hushed with something Rory hadn't heard before—awe, perhaps, or hunger." | | 7 | "Rory gripped Nyx's shoulder—solid for now, cold as the blade at her hip—and pulled." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 932 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.022532188841201718 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0075107296137339056 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 11.96 | | std | 7.05 | | cv | 0.589 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 73.40% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.44680851063829785 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Their form flickered at the" | | 1 | "Her silver hair flowed waist-deep" | | 2 | "she said, the words falling" | | 3 | "Their silhouette, usually a fluid" | | 4 | "They walked deeper." | | 5 | "Her wrist itched where the" | | 6 | "she called back, her voice" | | 7 | "Their fingers—dark as the space" | | 8 | "They now formed a circle" | | 9 | "Her stomach twisted, but she" | | 10 | "Her lavender eyes reflected no" | | 11 | "It throbbed in triplets, a" | | 12 | "They reached the grove's heart." | | 13 | "Her fingertips traced the light-lines," | | 14 | "she said without looking at" |
| | ratio | 0.208 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed from" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter hung back, her" | | 2 | "The gemstone pressed hot against" | | 3 | "Their form flickered at the" | | 4 | "Isolde Varga stepped through the" | | 5 | "Her silver hair flowed waist-deep" | | 6 | "she said, the words falling" | | 7 | "Rory's palm sweated against the" | | 8 | "Isolde had pressed the moonsilver" | | 9 | "The temperature dropped." | | 10 | "colors assaulted her—violets too deep" | | 11 | "The amber sky of the" | | 12 | "Nyx had gone rigid beside" | | 13 | "Their silhouette, usually a fluid" | | 14 | "They walked deeper." | | 15 | "The wildflowers underfoot bloomed in" | | 16 | "Rory noted the details with" | | 17 | "Her wrist itched where the" | | 18 | "Isolde drifted ahead, her ethereal" | | 19 | "she called back, her voice" |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 69.44% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The gemstone pressed hot against her sternum, a warning heartbeat that matched the pulse in her throat." | | 1 | "Her silver hair flowed waist-deep and caught light that wasn't there, each strand refracting pale lavender from her eyes." | | 2 | "Their silhouette, usually a fluid smoke-dark outline, now held edges too sharp, angles that hurt to follow." | | 3 | "Rory noted the details with the precision that had earned her scholarship to Cardiff—observation as defense against panic." | | 4 | "Not the searing heat it used near Hel portals, but something gentler, as if the stone recognized kin." | | 5 | "Rory caught movement in her peripheral vision—figures watching from behind bark-folds, eyes like fireflies that extinguished when faced directly." | | 6 | "Upon it lay a map drawn in light—shifting lines that redrawn themselves as Rory watched, showing streets she recognized from London overlaid with paths that wal…" | | 7 | "Nyx had begun to fade, their form stretching toward the obsidian table as if gravity pulled stronger there." | | 8 | "Rory stepped through, her breath returning in a rush, her shadow reappearing at her feet like a loyal hound." | | 9 | "Nyx collapsed into their usual fluid form, gasping shadows that tasted of oak and old magic." | | 10 | "Isolde waited in the real grass now, leaving faint impressions where she stood, her riddles temporarily spent, her lavender eyes fixed on the amber sky of a sun…" |
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| 83.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, the words falling like stones into still water" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she called back (call back)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Isolde's laugh chimed like (chime)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.48 | | leniency | 0.96 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.32 | |