Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYTDJV10H0HB2HXB75Q12P

Run Details

Duration:
2m 41s
Cost:
$0.025524
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first deadbolt clicked. Then the second. Then the third. Rory’s fingers hesitated on the latch. Through the peephole, the corridor distorted Lucien’s silhouette into a funhouse smear of charcoal grey and bone-white, but she knew the posture. That arrogant lean against the doorframe, the ivory handle of his cane tapping a slow rhythm against the skirting board. She pulled the door open. Curry spices from the restaurant below wafted up, mingling with the cardamom tea cooling on Eva’s cluttered desk. Lucien didn’t straighten immediately. He studied her through those mismatched eyes—one the colour of old whiskey, the other a void that drank the hallway light—and let the silence stretch until it hummed. “You’ve changed the locks.” He tilted his head, platinum hair catching the bare bulb overhead. “I added a third.” Rory kept her hand on the door, blocking the entrance. Her left wrist itched where the crescent scar sat, a childhood souvenir that always flared when he was near. “Eva’s research notes are confidential. Not that you’d respect that.” “And here I thought you were avoiding me.” Behind her, Ptolemy wound between her ankles, his tabby tail brushing her calves. The cat froze when he spotted the stranger, ears flattening. Lucien’s gaze dropped to the feline, then tracked back up to her face. He hadn’t shaved. Platinum hair swept back from his forehead with the kind of precision that required product and time, but shadow darkened his jawline. It made him look human. Breakable. She knew better. “May I come in?” He asked it like a formality, already shifting his weight to step forward. Rory didn’t move. “You didn’t call.” “You changed your number.” “Twice.” The corner of his mouth twitched. Not quite a smile. “Then this visit qualifies as unannounced.” “And unwanted?” “That remains to be seen.” She should shut the door. She should slide all three deadbolts home and return to the stack of delivery manifests she’d been decoding for Yu-Fei, or to the scrolls Eva had left scattered across every flat surface like autumn leaves. Instead, her fingers released their white-knuckled grip on the doorframe. Lucien stepped across the threshold. The cane tapped once, twice, against the worn floorboards. In the cramped space of Eva’s flat, he filled the room, too sharp-edged for the teetering piles of books and the low ceiling. He smelled of rain and something darker—ink, perhaps, or the particular ozone scent that clung to half-demons when they traveled between realms. Ptolemy hissed and darted behind the sofa. “You’re house-sitting.” He surveyed the chaos. Scrolls unrolled across the kitchen counter. Takeaway containers from the Golden Empress stacked by the sink. Her leather jacket slung over a chair that groaned under the weight of Eva’s occult library. “Eva’s in Marrakech.” Rory closed the door but didn’t lock it. The click of the latch sounded final anyway. “Chasing a lead on the Avaros treaty.” “Convenient.” “For whom?” He turned, and suddenly they were close. Too close. The flat forced proximity, but he closed the gap with intent. She could see the flecks of gold in the amber eye, the way the black one reflected her own face back at her—pale, guarded, her dark hair falling across her shoulders exactly as he used to push it aside. Shadows bruised the skin beneath her eyes. “You haven’t been sleeping.” “You’re armed.” His hand drifted to the cane. The ivory handle was carved in the shape of a serpent, its mouth open to reveal the blade concealed within. “Old habits.” “Like showing up uninvited?” “Like protecting what’s mine.” The word hung between them, heavy and dangerous. Rory’s breath caught. She stepped back, her heel knocking against Eva’s desk. A stack of papers slid, fluttering to the floor like wounded birds. “I’m not yours,” she said, but her voice lacked conviction. It sounded like a question. Lucien tilted his head, studying her with the intensity he usually reserved for encrypted ledgers or blood contracts. “No. You ran. To London. To Eva. To this—” He gestured at the cramped flat, the curry-house vibrations shaking the floorboards as a lorry passed below, “—hiding place.” “It’s not hiding when you’re surviving.” “Is that what you call it?” He reached out, not touching her, but close enough that she felt the heat radiating from his palm. “Working for Yu-Fei, dodging your father’s calls, jumping at shadows. You left Cardiff because of Evan, but you left Marseille because of me.” The scar on her wrist throbbed. She folded her arms, hiding it. “You lied.” “I omitted.” “You nearly got me killed in that summoning circle.” “And you saved my life in it.” His hand closed the gap, fingers brushing her elbow. The touch burned through the cotton of her shirt. “Doesn’t that count for something?” Rory turned to the window. Through the glass, Brick Lane sprawled grey and rain-slicked. She remembered the heat of Marseille, the way Lucien had looked at her across the candlelight of his mother’s restaurant, before she’d learned what he was, before the demon blood in his veins had manifested in ways that terrified her. Before he’d chosen his father’s realm over her safety, or so she’d thought. “You didn’t come after me.” “I gave you space.” “Seven months?” “I was negotiating your safety with the Avaros court.” His fingers tightened, not painful, but insistent. He turned her gently to face him. “The mark Evan left on you wasn’t just emotional, Rory. It was magical. You know that now. You’ve been reading Eva’s books.” She stiffened. “How did you—” “The scar.” His thumb traced the air above her left wrist, never quite making contact. “It’s darker. Angrier. The curse is waking up because you’re in London, close to the ley lines, and because—” He stopped. “Because what?” His jaw tightened. “Because you’re afraid. And fear feeds it.” She laughed, sharp and bitter. “Well, I have plenty of that, don’t I? Fear of my ex. Fear of demons. Fear of—” She caught herself, but the damage was done. “Of me?” The room had grown smaller. The books pressed in from all sides, witnesses to this reunion. Ptolemy peeked out from behind the sofa, green eyes luminous in the dim light filtering through the grimy windows. “Yes,” she whispered. Lucien withdrew his hand. He walked to the desk, his cane clicking, and picked up a photograph tucked between two grimoires. It showed them in Marseille, her head on his shoulder, both of them smiling at something off-camera. “You’re preparing to fight it,” he said quietly. “The curse. Alone.” “I don’t have anyone else.” “You have me.” “You said you were negotiating. That sounds like business.” She moved toward him, anger sparking in her chest, hot and welcome. “Everything with you is business. Information broker. Fixer. Half-demon prince playing at being human in tailored suits.” He slammed the photograph down. The frame cracked. “I tore apart three treaties to find a loophole that would let me walk away from Avaros without starting a war,” he said, his voice low and lethal. “I spent six months in a silver cage because my father didn’t approve of my methods. I came here—” He gestured at the door, at the three deadbolts, “—the moment they released me, and you think this is business?” Rory stared at him. His shirt collar was too tight. She could see the edge of scarring there, silver against his skin, where no charcoal suit could hide it. “You’re hurt.” “I’m furious.” He closed the distance again, crowding her against the desk. Papers crinkled behind her. His breath was warm against her forehead. “You ran without giving me a chance to explain. You left me in that circle with a binding spell half-complete and took the backlash in that scar. I can see the magic in it, Rory. I can see you carrying my failure on your skin.” She reached up, not thinking, and touched his face. The stubble was rough, real. He leaned into her palm, his eyes fluttering shut, and for a moment the hard edges fell away. He was just Lucien, the man who’d taught her to pick locks and cook coq au vin, who’d held her while she cried about Evan before either of them knew the abuse had left magical fingerprints. “I didn’t know,” she said. “I know.” He caught her hand, turned it, pressed his lips to the crescent scar. The gesture made her shiver. “I know. But I’m here now, unannounced and possibly unwelcome, to finish what we started. To break the curse. To—” “To what?” His heterochromatic eyes opened, fixed on hers with an intensity that stopped her heart. “To beg, if necessary.” Outside, a car alarm blared on Brick Lane. The curry house below began prepping for the dinner rush, spices swirling up through the floorboards. Ptolemy jumped onto the desk between them, breaking the spell, and Lucien laughed—startled and open. The cat head-butted his hand, demanding attention. Rory stared at the animal. “He likes you.” “Animals know.” Lucien scratched behind the cat’s ears with his free hand, the other still holding her wrist, thumb circling the scar. “They know when someone belongs.” “I told you—” “I’m not talking about possession, Aurora.” He used her full name, rare and formal, cutting through her protest. “I’m talking about the place where the story continues. The flat with three deadbolts because you’re terrified but you keep opening the door anyway. The scrolls scattered everywhere because you never stop fighting. The scar that matches the shape of my teeth from where I bit my own lip watching you take that hit for me.” He lifted her hand, pressed it flat against his chest. His heart hammered against her palm, fast and human. “This is where I belong,” he said. “Here. With you. Even if you slide all three locks and tell me to walk back down to the curry house and keep going.” Rory looked at him—the demon eye and the human one, the bruises he hid under his collar, the rain drying in his platinum hair. She thought of the empty flat above Silas’ bar, the solitary deliveries for Yu-Fei, the months of jumping at shadows. She didn’t step back.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:43:26.177Z" 2/19/2026, 12:43:26 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.735
rawRatio0.04
effectiveRatio0.029
94.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1716
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1716
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"intensity"
count2
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"solitary"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"intensity"
3"throbbed"
4"traced"
5"solitary"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences155
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1696
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1155
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien10
Eva5
Rory9
Ptolemy4
Yu-Fei1
Scrolls1
Golden1
Empress1
Brick2
Lane2
Marseille2
Papers1
Evan1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Empress"
5"Papers"
6"Evan"
places
0"Golden"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
23.11% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.769
wordCount1696
matches
0"not yours,” she said, but her voice lacked conviction"
1"not touching her, but close enough"
2"not painful, but insistent"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences155
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean22.32
std21.05
cv0.943
sampleLengths
058
15
250
315
443
58
623
747
817
96
104
111
1216
132
145
1550
1659
177
1838
1926
201
212
2259
2311
242
2528
264
274
2832
2915
3046
316
3247
3314
342
359
3630
3767
385
394
402
4145
425
4336
442
4510
4630
472
4835
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"was carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
50.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences155
ratio0.032
matches
0"He studied her through those mismatched eyes—one the colour of old whiskey, the other a void that drank the hallway light—and let the silence stretch until it hummed."
1"He smelled of rain and something darker—ink, perhaps, or the particular ozone scent that clung to half-demons when they traveled between realms."
2"She could see the flecks of gold in the amber eye, the way the black one reflected her own face back at her—pale, guarded, her dark hair falling across her shoulders exactly as he used to push it aside."
3"Ptolemy jumped onto the desk between them, breaking the spell, and Lucien laughed—startled and open."
4"Rory looked at him—the demon eye and the human one, the bruises he hid under his collar, the rain drying in his platinum hair."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1166
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.026586620926243566
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005145797598627788
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences155
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences155
mean10.94
std9.7
cv0.886
sampleLengths
04
13
23
36
422
520
65
718
84
928
1015
1114
1219
1310
148
1513
1610
1713
183
1922
205
211
223
2317
243
253
264
271
286
294
306
312
325
335
3435
3510
365
379
3823
3922
407
416
426
4310
4416
4511
468
477
481
492
49.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.34838709677419355
totalSentences155
uniqueOpeners54
96.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences104
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Then the third."
2"Instead, her fingers released their"
ratio0.029
23.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences104
matches
0"She pulled the door open."
1"He studied her through those"
2"He tilted his head, platinum"
3"Her left wrist itched where"
4"He hadn’t shaved."
5"It made him look human."
6"She knew better."
7"He asked it like a"
8"She should shut the door."
9"She should slide all three"
10"He smelled of rain and"
11"He surveyed the chaos"
12"Her leather jacket slung over"
13"He turned, and suddenly they"
14"She could see the flecks"
15"His hand drifted to the"
16"She stepped back, her heel"
17"she said, but her voice"
18"It sounded like a question."
19"He gestured at the cramped"
ratio0.49
8.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences104
matches
0"The first deadbolt clicked."
1"Rory’s fingers hesitated on the"
2"That arrogant lean against the"
3"She pulled the door open."
4"Curry spices from the restaurant"
5"Lucien didn’t straighten immediately."
6"He studied her through those"
7"He tilted his head, platinum"
8"Rory kept her hand on"
9"Her left wrist itched where"
10"The cat froze when he"
11"Lucien’s gaze dropped to the"
12"He hadn’t shaved."
13"Platinum hair swept back from"
14"It made him look human."
15"She knew better."
16"He asked it like a"
17"Rory didn’t move."
18"The corner of his mouth"
19"She should shut the door."
ratio0.904
48.08% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"Before he’d chosen his father’s"
ratio0.01
61.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He smelled of rain and something darker—ink, perhaps, or the particular ozone scent that clung to half-demons when they traveled between realms."
1"Her leather jacket slung over a chair that groaned under the weight of Eva’s occult library."
2"She remembered the heat of Marseille, the way Lucien had looked at her across the candlelight of his mother’s restaurant, before she’d learned what he was, befo…"
3"His heterochromatic eyes opened, fixed on hers with an intensity that stopped her heart."
5.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she said, but her voice lacked conviction"
1"His hand closed, fingers brushing her elbow"
2"His fingers tightened, not painful, but insistent"
3"His thumb traced, never quite making contact"
4"She caught, but the damage was done"
5"he said, his voice low and lethal"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.103
leniency0.206
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.029
81.2241%