Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYTN8ZMFK4XAAKPJB7ZQC4

Run Details

Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.006014
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement, turning the London street into a river of reflected neon. Harlow Quinn's boots struck the wet cobblestones, each impact sending spray up to her ankles. The suspect—dark jacket, hood pulled low—tore through a gap between two kebab shops, and Quinn followed without breaking stride. Sixteen years on the force had taught her how to read a runner. This one knew the terrain, knew which alleyways connected and which dead-ended into brick walls. He'd anticipated her route before she'd chosen it. "Stop! Police!" The figure didn't even glance back. Just pushed harder, weaving between dumpsters and stacked crates with the confidence of someone walking to their own front door. Quinn's lungs burned. Three weeks of paperwork had softened her edge, and she felt it now in the way her legs protested each sprint. The worn leather watch on her left wrist jolted against her wrist bone with every pump of her arm. She ignored it. Focused on the back of that hood, the splash of footsteps ahead. They burst onto Chalk Farm Road together—her quarry first, then Quinn half a second later. Late-night traffic swished past. A black cab's headlights carved through the downpour. The suspect dodged between a bus and a parked delivery van, vanishing toward the old Tube station entrance. Quinn didn't hesitate. She barrelled into the road. Horns blared. Tyres screeched against wet tarmac. "Get out of the—" Someone's curse dissolved into the noise of the storm. The station entrance gaped like a wound in the pavement. The yellow signage had faded to illegibility, and construction barriers blocked the main turnstiles. But the suspect had already slipped through a gap where the boarding had been pried loose, just enough for a body to squeeze through. Quinn's torch beam cut through the darkness as she descended the broken escalator. Water dripped somewhere ahead, a rhythmic plink-plink-plink that echoed off tiles. The air changed as she went deeper—warmer, thicker, carrying an undertone of something metallic and something else she couldn't name. Her radio crackled. Static. Then nothing. She pulled it from her shoulder, tapped it twice. Dead air. The platform stretched before her, empty and silent. Advertising posters from another decade peeled from the walls, promoting concerts and West End shows that had long since closed. Her torch swept left, right, catching glimpses of graffiti and the glint of broken glass. A sound. Footsteps, but wrong somehow—too light, too quick, like they weren't quite touching the ground. Quinn moved forward, staying close to the wall. Her free hand rested on her hip, near the weight of her service weapon. She hadn't drawn it yet. Something told her that down here, it might not matter. "You're making a mistake." The voice came from everywhere and nowhere. Quinn spun, torch cutting arcs through the darkness. "Come out. Now." A laugh. Soft, almost gentle. "You don't even know where 'out' is, Detective." The suspect stepped into her light. But he wasn't running anymore. He stood at the far end of the platform, right where the tunnel mouth opened into blackness, and he was smiling. "I told you to stop." "And I told you you're making a mistake." He tilted his head. Water dripped from his hood, but his face remained shadowed. "The Market isn't for your kind." "What market?" The smile widened. "Go home, Detective. Forget tonight. Forget the chase. Forget you ever saw me." "I don't forget." "No. I didn't think you would." He reached into his jacket, and Quinn's hand moved to her weapon. But he only withdrew something small and white, holding it up between two fingers. A bone. Carved into the shape of a token. "This is your one chance. Walk away." "Or what?" The tunnel behind him flickered. Not with light—with something else. Colour that had no name bled through the darkness, and Quinn felt her stomach lurch as reality seemed to fold at the edges. "Or you'll see things you can't unsee." He tucked the token away. "And they'll see you too." He stepped backward into the tunnel, and the darkness swallowed him whole. Not gradually—instantly. One moment he was there, the next, gone. As if the air itself had opened up and closed around him. Quinn stood alone on the platform. Rain drummed above her head, muffled now by layers of concrete and earth. Her torch beam reached into the tunnel mouth and found nothing but tracks and shadow. Her heartbeat counted off the seconds. One. Two. Three. Morris had chased someone through these same kind of shadows, three years ago. Had stood at the edge of something he didn't understand, same as she did now. And Morris had stepped forward. They'd found his body three days later. No marks. No wounds. Just an expression of absolute terror frozen on his face, his eyes wide and fixed on something no one else could see. Quinn touched the watch on her wrist. The leather was soft from years of handling, worn smooth at the edges. Morris had given it to her on her first day as his partner. 'So you'll always know when it's time to go home,' he'd said. The deadline on her current case was forty-eight hours. A missing persons report that had turned into something else, something with threads leading to half a dozen other disappearances. All of them connected to this area. All of them connected to people who'd vanished near abandoned stations, forgotten tunnels, places the city had tried to bury. Her quarry was gone. She could climb back up to the street, call in support, wait for backup. Do everything by the book, the way the department expected. The tunnel flickered again. That same impossible colour, bleeding through the edges of the world. Quinn thought of Morris. Thought of the look on his face when they'd found him. Thought of the reports she'd filed that no one had read, the questions she'd asked that no one had answered. She stepped forward. The darkness parted like a curtain.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1012
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1012
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"footsteps"
count2
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"glint"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count2
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"lurch"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"rhythmic"
2"echoed"
3"glint"
4"weight"
5"flickered"
6"stomach"
7"lurch"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
97.74% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1000
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.02% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount903
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.44
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Quinn13
Chalk1
Farm1
Road1
Tube1
West1
End1
Water2
Morris4
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Water"
2"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Chalk"
2"Farm"
3"Road"
4"West"
5"End"
globalScore0.78
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite touching the ground"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1000
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean23.81
std17.09
cv0.718
sampleLengths
048
136
22
326
458
545
615
74
89
948
1044
116
1211
1343
1416
1537
164
1715
183
1913
2032
215
2228
232
2416
253
2648
272
2833
2917
3034
3134
329
3333
3433
3545
3656
3728
3815
3935
403
416
97.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"been pried"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs145
matches
0"wasn't running"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences109
ratio0.055
matches
0"The suspect—dark jacket, hood pulled low—tore through a gap between two kebab shops, and Quinn followed without breaking stride."
1"They burst onto Chalk Farm Road together—her quarry first, then Quinn half a second later."
2"The air changed as she went deeper—warmer, thicker, carrying an undertone of something metallic and something else she couldn't name."
3"Footsteps, but wrong somehow—too light, too quick, like they weren't quite touching the ground."
4"Not with light—with something else."
5"Not gradually—instantly."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount771
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"deeper—warmer, thicker, carrying"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03372243839169909
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0038910505836575876
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean9.17
std6.1
cv0.665
sampleLengths
014
115
219
313
415
58
62
76
820
93
1021
1119
123
1312
1415
154
168
1718
183
195
202
215
224
239
2410
2514
2624
2713
2811
2920
303
311
322
339
342
358
3620
3715
382
3914
408
4114
425
4310
444
457
468
473
482
493
71.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.45871559633027525
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners50
81.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"Just pushed harder, weaving between"
1"Just an expression of absolute"
ratio0.024
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences82
matches
0"He'd anticipated her route before"
1"She ignored it."
2"They burst onto Chalk Farm"
3"She barrelled into the road."
4"Her radio crackled."
5"She pulled it from her"
6"Her torch swept left, right,"
7"Her free hand rested on"
8"She hadn't drawn it yet."
9"He stood at the far"
10"He tilted his head"
11"He reached into his jacket,"
12"He tucked the token away"
13"He stepped backward into the"
14"Her torch beam reached into"
15"Her heartbeat counted off the"
16"They'd found his body three"
17"Her quarry was gone."
18"She could climb back up"
19"She stepped forward."
ratio0.244
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences82
matches
0"Harlow Quinn's boots struck the"
1"The suspect—dark jacket, hood pulled"
2"This one knew the terrain,"
3"He'd anticipated her route before"
4"The figure didn't even glance"
5"Quinn's lungs burned."
6"The worn leather watch on"
7"She ignored it."
8"They burst onto Chalk Farm"
9"A black cab's headlights carved"
10"The suspect dodged between a"
11"Quinn didn't hesitate."
12"She barrelled into the road."
13"Tyres screeched against wet tarmac."
14"Someone's curse dissolved into the"
15"The station entrance gaped like"
16"The yellow signage had faded"
17"Quinn's torch beam cut through"
18"Water dripped somewhere ahead, a"
19"The air changed as she"
ratio0.707
60.98% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"As if the air itself"
ratio0.012
93.02% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Water dripped somewhere ahead, a rhythmic plink-plink-plink that echoed off tiles."
1"Advertising posters from another decade peeled from the walls, promoting concerts and West End shows that had long since closed."
2"All of them connected to people who'd vanished near abandoned stations, forgotten tunnels, places the city had tried to bury."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.8465%