Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYTNDXX0XYSPD9SRM1XK89

Run Details

Duration:
40.0s
Cost:
$0.037880
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The old clock above the bar ticked with a slow, deliberate cadence, each second a drop of amber into the pool of a quiet Tuesday evening. Rory swirled the last of her whisky, the ice cubes clinking like tired bells. The Raven’s Nest smelled of damp wool, spilled beer, and the ghost of a thousand cigarettes smoked before the ban. It was a scent she had come to associate with safety. Old maps, their continents faded and seas yellowed, covered the walls between stark black-and-white photographs of London in a forgotten era. Behind the polished oak bar, Silas Blackwood moved with the quiet economy of a man comfortable in his own skin. He wiped down a glass, the cloth moving in smooth, practiced circles. His gaze, a warm hazel, flickered towards Rory for a moment, a silent question. She gave a faint nod, and he turned back to his work, the rhythm of the bar undisturbed. Her shift had been long, the London drizzle relentless, but here, cocooned in the low light and the gentle murmur of the few other patrons, the city's chill began to recede. She traced the crescent scar on her wrist with her thumb, a mindless habit. Then the door opened, letting in a slice of wet Soho night and a man who did not belong. He was a slash of charcoal grey in a world of worn leather and wood. His suit was sharp, tailored in a way that spoke of money and ambition. His hair, once a shaggy mess, was now cut close and styled with precision. He paused for a moment, his eyes adjusting to the gloom, and Rory’s breath caught in her throat. The glass grew slick in her hand. It felt as if all the air had been sucked from the room, leaving only the frantic drumbeat in her ears. His eyes swept the bar and then they found hers. Recognition dawned, slow at first, then sharp. A flicker of something unreadable—surprise, maybe something else—crossed his features before settling into a mask of cool composure. Evan. He straightened his tie, a small, nervous gesture that was so familiar it made her stomach clench. Then he started towards her. Each step he took on the creaking floorboards was a step back in time. She was suddenly back in Cardiff, in a cramped university flat, the air thick with unspoken things. Silas looked up, his movements ceasing. He registered the man’s approach, registered the sudden tension in Rory’s shoulders, and his expression hardened just a fraction. He placed the clean glass down on the bar with a quiet, definitive click. Evan stopped at her table. He smelled of expensive cologne and rain. “Rory? Aurora Carter. I don’t believe it.” His voice was deeper than she remembered, smoother. The Welsh lilt she once found charming was gone, sanded away and replaced by a polished London accent. “Evan.” She kept her own voice flat, a stone skipping across a frozen lake. She did not stand. She did not invite him to sit. A smile touched his lips, but it didn't reach his eyes. “What are the odds? Of all the gin joints in all the world. You look… well, you look the same.” “You don’t.” It was the truth. The boy she knew was buried deep beneath this man in the expensive suit. He gave a short laugh, pulling out the chair opposite her without asking. It scraped against the floor, a jarring sound in the quiet bar. He sat, placing his hands on the table. A heavy, silver watch gleamed on his wrist. "Life moves on. I'm with Abernathy & Finch now. Corporate law. Made partner last year. In town for a big merger." He said it all with an air of practiced ease, a recited list of accomplishments. He was waiting for her to be impressed. When she said nothing, just watched him, a sliver of impatience entered his eyes. "And you? Still in London? Eva mentioned you were somewhere around here." "I live upstairs." She gestured vaguely with her head. "Upstairs?" He glanced around the pub, a faint look of disdain touching his features. "Right. I remember. You were always one for these… atmospheric places." The word hung in the air, weighted with condescension. He saw an old, dusty pub. She saw a sanctuary. "I work nearby," she offered, the words feeling like a concession. "Delivery rider for the Golden Empress." Evan’s smile tightened. "A delivery rider. Right. Well, it's good to keep busy, I suppose. I always thought you'd follow your father's footsteps. You were top of the class in Pre-Law, remember? You had a brilliant mind." He spoke of her past self like a prize she had carelessly discarded. He looked at her, really looked at her then, and his gaze was an assessment. He was measuring the distance between the girl he knew and the woman in front of him. "I found it wasn't for me." "Or you let things get in the way. We were kids, Rory. We were a mess. I was a mess. I know that." His voice dropped, taking on a confidential tone that made the hairs on her arms stand up. It was the same tone he used right before the apologies began, the ones that always circled back to being her fault. "I'm not that person anymore. People change." "Yes, they do." Across the room, she saw Silas wipe the same spot on the bar again and again, his attention fixed. He wasn't looking at them, but she knew he was listening to every word. The knowledge was a small, solid anchor in the churning sea of her past. Evan leaned forward, his voice a low coax. "Cardiff feels like a lifetime ago. I regret a lot of things. The way it ended… it was my fault. I was under so much pressure from my father, from the course load. I didn't handle it well." He was rewriting history, painting it in shades of youthful folly and academic stress. He had neatly edited out the shouting that curdled the air, the slammed doors, the cold, deliberate silences that lasted for days. He had forgotten the way he would grip her wrist, just a little too tight. "We all have regrets," she said. The whisky was a bitter memory on her tongue. "I just want you to know that. That I'm sorry." He reached across the table, his hand moving to cover hers. She pulled her hand back before he could touch her, the movement quick and sharp. She tucked it into her lap, her fingers finding the familiar, raised line of the scar. His eyes followed the motion and for a moment, the polished facade cracked. A flicker of the old anger, the possessive frustration, flashed in his eyes before he masked it again. "Still jumpy," he murmured, a soft accusation. "Just careful." He leaned back in his chair, the veneer of contrition falling away to reveal something harder beneath. "Look, I get it. But you can't spend your life delivering takeaways from a Chinese restaurant because you're scared. That's not the woman I knew. The woman I knew was going to argue cases in front of the High Court. She was brilliant. What happened to her?" His words were meant to sound like a challenge, like an appeal to a better self he thought he owned. But all Rory heard was the same old refrain: a demand that she be the person he wanted, not the person she was. She picked up her glass and drained the last of the melted ice and whiskey. The cold liquid did nothing to numb the old, familiar ache. She placed the empty tumbler on the table with a soft thud. "She grew up." "Is that what this is? Hiding out in a dive bar, running from your potential?" The question was a blade, aimed for a place he thought was still wounded. He didn't know that the wound had scarred over, tough and resilient. "This isn't hiding, Evan." She met his gaze, her own clear and steady. The bright blue of her eyes held no fear, only a profound and weary finality. "This is my life. The one I chose. Not the one you or my father or anyone else planned for me." She pushed her chair back, the sound echoing the one he had made moments before. But where his had been an intrusion, hers was a declaration. "It was… something," she said, the words deliberately neutral, "seeing you again."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
51.85% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"He glanced around [around]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.148
89.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1430
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
2"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1430
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"comfortable"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count2
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count3
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"lilt"
count1
13
word"practiced ease"
count1
14
word"sanctuary"
count1
15
word"footsteps"
count1
16
word"churning"
count1
17
word"facade"
count1
18
word"potential"
count1
19
word"profound"
count1
20
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"comfortable"
2"flickered"
3"chill"
4"traced"
5"gloom"
6"flicker"
7"unreadable"
8"familiar"
9"stomach"
10"unspoken"
11"tension"
12"lilt"
13"practiced ease"
14"sanctuary"
15"footsteps"
16"churning"
17"facade"
18"potential"
19"profound"
20"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1426
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1114
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.45
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"London"
discoveredNames
Tuesday1
Raven1
Nest1
London3
Silas3
Blackwood1
Rory5
Soho1
Cardiff1
Welsh1
Evan4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1426
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"know that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean33.16
std25.39
cv0.766
sampleLengths
092
1109
219
389
458
570
612
77
826
925
1031
1120
1262
1337
1412
159
1625
1719
1817
1937
2045
216
2223
2339
247
253
2647
2746
2851
2915
3021
3162
327
332
3464
3543
3638
373
3815
3926
4049
4126
4212
88.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences86
matches
0"been sucked"
1"was gone"
2"was buried"
3"were meant"
18.84% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs184
matches
0"was waiting"
1"was measuring"
2"was listening"
3"was rewriting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences103
ratio0.01
matches
0"A flicker of something unreadable—surprise, maybe something else—crossed his features before settling into a mask of cool composure."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1118
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03220035778175313
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008050089445438283
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean13.84
std7.31
cv0.528
sampleLengths
026
114
220
311
421
520
612
714
818
931
1014
1119
1215
1314
1414
1518
167
1721
1810
197
2018
211
2217
235
2414
2517
266
2719
2814
295
307
317
328
3318
3414
354
367
3711
3820
396
4014
4113
4212
438
448
4521
4615
478
4814
4912
46.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.33980582524271846
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners35
79.37% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"Then the door opened, letting"
1"Then he started towards her."
ratio0.024
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences84
matches
0"It was a scent she"
1"He wiped down a glass,"
2"His gaze, a warm hazel,"
3"She gave a faint nod,"
4"Her shift had been long,"
5"She traced the crescent scar"
6"He was a slash of"
7"His suit was sharp, tailored"
8"His hair, once a shaggy"
9"He paused for a moment,"
10"It felt as if all"
11"His eyes swept the bar"
12"He straightened his tie, a"
13"She was suddenly back in"
14"He registered the man’s approach,"
15"He placed the clean glass"
16"He smelled of expensive cologne"
17"His voice was deeper than"
18"She kept her own voice"
19"She did not stand."
ratio0.643
7.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences84
matches
0"The old clock above the"
1"Rory swirled the last of"
2"The Raven’s Nest smelled of"
3"It was a scent she"
4"He wiped down a glass,"
5"His gaze, a warm hazel,"
6"She gave a faint nod,"
7"Her shift had been long,"
8"She traced the crescent scar"
9"He was a slash of"
10"His suit was sharp, tailored"
11"His hair, once a shaggy"
12"He paused for a moment,"
13"The glass grew slick in"
14"It felt as if all"
15"His eyes swept the bar"
16"Recognition dawned, slow at first,"
17"A flicker of something unreadable—surprise,"
18"He straightened his tie, a"
19"Each step he took on"
ratio0.905
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He straightened his tie, a small, nervous gesture that was so familiar it made her stomach clench."
1"He had neatly edited out the shouting that curdled the air, the slammed doors, the cold, deliberate silences that lasted for days."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"She kept, a stone skipping across a frozen lake"
1"He reached, his hand moving to cover hers"
2"she said, the words deliberately neutral,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.074
76.6380%