Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYTNTHJAFD6K8R2BR6QRRV

Run Details

Duration:
2m 11s
Cost:
$0.001774
Provider:
SambaNova

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
first drops of rain began to spatter against the windowpane. Aurora pulled the door open, a stack of takeaway menus in Moreau stood in the dim hallway, leaning on his ivory few strands of his platinum hair free from its usual severe sweep. Water droplets glistened on the shoulders himself around Rory’s ankles. “You’re not a prawn bhuna,” she finally said, her voice tighter of Marseille and Mayfair. He made no move to come in. He just stood there, a monument to inconvenientone amber, one infinite black—taking her in. She was university jumpers, a faint smear of flour on her cheek from helping Yu-Fei with the dumpling dough earlier. She suddenly felt painfully underdressed. “What are you doing here, Luc?” “I was in the neighbourhood.” “You’re never in this neighbourhood. Unless someone’s selling cursed artifacts or information on a to rain in the corridor.” She hesitated. Letting him in felt like unlocking a door she’d spent months nailing shut. But leaving him standing in the hall felt unnecessarily cruel, even for them. With a quiet sigh, she stepped back, pulling the door wider. “Watch the books,” she said, turning her back to him and navigating the labyrinth of precariously stacked volumes and unfurled scrolls that covered every available surface of Eva’s tiny precise, the tip of his cane tapping softly on the floorboards. He closed, practiced clicks that spoke of a man who understood the valuering like a small engine. “He remembers you,” Rory said, her back still to him as she fiddled with the kettle on a cluttered counter. “Cats are excellent bent, with a slight wince she didn’t miss, and scratched behind the tabby’s ears. “Unlike landed. She turned, leaning against the counter, arms crossed over her chest. “You didn’t come here to discuss Ptolemy’s philosophical insights. Or for curry. What do you want?” He straightened up, his gaze sweeping over the chaos of the room before settling back on her. The amber eye seemed to glow in the low light., surprised laugh escaped her. “You’ve got to be joking. You have a network of informants, thieves, and half-demons who owe you favours. You don’t need me.” “This is not a matter for my usual associates. It requires a particular.” He took a slow step further into the room, his night, it was stolen.” “Call the police. Or whatever supernatural equivalent you people have.” “It is not that simple. The text contains a binding ritual. A specific one. The kind that could of his earlier levity were gone. “The thief was an amateur. A human, scared, and now in possession of a weapon he does not comprehend. He is hiding, and he is panicking. A dangerous combination.” “And you think I can find him?” She shook her head. “Luc, I deliver noodles for a living. I’m not a detective.” “You see patterns others miss. You think in ways that are… delightfully oblique.” He gestured to the organised chaos of. And you know this city. The parts of it that do not appear on maps.” He was flattering her. He was always so good at that, finding the precise compliment that was also a manipulation. It had infuriated her then, and it infuriated her now because it still worked. A faint warmth spread through her chest, a traitorous response to his words. “Why you?” she asked, deflecting. “Why does the great Lucien Moreau care about a stolen book?” Something dark flickered in his eyes. “The collector was a friend.” The admission surprised her. Lucien didn’t have friends; he had assets and liabilities. “I’m sorry,” she said, the words coming out softer than she meant them to. He gave a slight, dismissive shake of his head. “The sentiment is noted, but unhelpful. What would be helpful is your assistance. The word he should not and unmakes himself, to her doorstep once more. “You left,” she said quietly, the words directed at the window. “You walked out that time has passed at all. Like you didn’t—” “I know, but she could feel the heat of him, smell the faint scent cutting through the smell of old paper and spices. “Do it.” She turned to face him. The space between them was electric, charged with all the things they hadn’t saidothered it. “Then why?” “Because it was the only way to keep you safe!” The words burst from him, uncharacteristically loud, raw. Ptolemy startled and darted under the table. Lucien’s hand was clenched white around the head of his cane. “The things I am involved in, the people… my absence was the only protection I could offer you. A clean break. A wall.” own anger rising to meet his. “I asked for honesty. For you to let me in. Just once.” “And what would you have had me say?” He took the final step, a Duke of Avaros who considers humanity a plac get a message to me? That every moment I spent with you was a risk I had no right to take?” His amber eye blazed. “You wanted a normal life, Rory. A life away from men like Evan. Awayd laid it all bare, the truth he’d always kept shrouded in mystery and half-answers. It was terrifying. It was the most honest thing he’d ever said to her. “You don’t get to make that choice for me,” she whispered, her voice trembling. “You don’t get to decide what’s too dangerous for me to know. What if I wanted to choose you anyway?” The fight seemed to drain out of him. The tension in his shoulders eased, and for the first time, he looked simply tired. “Then you would have been a fool. And I would have loved you for it.” The word hung in the air between them, vast and fragile. *Loved*. Past tense. A completed action. A door closed. The kettle chose that moment to scream, a shrill, mundane sound that shattered the intensity of the moment. Rory jumped, turning automatically to switch it off. Her hands were shaking. She kept her back to him, focusing on the simple task of making tea. Two mugs. Milk in both. No sugar for him. The habits of intimacy were still there, ingrained. She heard the soft tap of his cane as he moved to the small table, clearing a space among Eva’s papers to sit. The silence now was different, heavy with admission and the echo of that one, devastating word. She brought the mugs over, setting his down in front of him. She didn’t sit. “Tell me about the text,” she said, her voice all business, a feeble attempt to rebuild the walls he’d just dismantled. “What does it look like?”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
91.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she finally said [finally]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.486
leniency0.973
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.108
91.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1115
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1115
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"navigating"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"intensity"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"navigating"
1"warmth"
2"flickered"
3"could feel"
4"electric"
5"charged"
6"tension"
7"shattered"
8"intensity"
9"silence"
10"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
40.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences56
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences69
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1111
ratio0.001
matches
0"Loved"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount744
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.4
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Rory3
Marseille1
Mayfair1
Yu-Fei1
Eva2
Duke1
Avaros1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
places
0"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like unlocking a door she’d spent"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1111
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean30.03
std18.3
cv0.61
sampleLengths
053
115
246
36
45
519
639
757
820
946
1053
1127
1210
1353
1422
1535
1647
1716
1811
1913
2014
2135
2223
2325
2420
252
2659
2718
2889
2934
3038
3120
3230
3331
3439
3515
3626
92.73% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences56
matches
0"were gone"
1"was clenched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was flattering"
1"were shaking"
60.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences69
ratio0.029
matches
0"He just stood there, a monument to inconvenientone amber, one infinite black—taking her in."
1"The admission surprised her. Lucien didn’t have friends; he had assets and liabilities."
97.92% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount472
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.0423728813559322
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.019067796610169493
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean16.1
std11.41
cv0.708
sampleLengths
010
133
210
315
47
514
620
75
86
95
1019
112
1213
1313
1411
1540
1617
1720
1819
1911
2016
2117
2214
2322
2427
253
267
275
286
293
3010
3129
3211
3311
3420
355
3610
3747
3816
3911
4013
4114
4215
437
4413
4511
4612
4725
4820
492
57.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.43478260869565216
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
27.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences52
matches
0"she finally said, her voice"
1"He made no move to"
2"He just stood there, a"
3"She was university jumpers, a"
4"She suddenly felt painfully underdressed."
5"she said, turning her back"
6"He closed, practiced clicks that"
7"She turned, leaning against the"
8"He straightened up, his gaze"
9"He took a slow step"
10"She shook her head"
11"He gestured to the organised"
12"He was flattering her. He"
13"she asked, deflecting"
14"she said, the words coming"
15"He gave a slight, dismissive"
16"she said quietly, the words"
17"She turned to face him."
18"my absence was the only"
19"He took the final step,"
ratio0.481
65.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount41
totalSentences52
matches
0"Aurora pulled the door open,"
1"Water droplets glistened on the"
2"she finally said, her voice"
3"He made no move to"
4"He just stood there, a"
5"She was university jumpers, a"
6"She suddenly felt painfully underdressed."
7"she said, turning her back"
8"He closed, practiced clicks that"
9"Rory said, her back still"
10"She turned, leaning against the"
11"He straightened up, his gaze"
12"The amber eye seemed to"
13"He took a slow step"
14"The text contains a binding"
15"A specific one."
16"The kind that could of"
17"She shook her head"
18"He gestured to the organised"
19"The parts of it that"
ratio0.788
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He closed, practiced clicks that spoke of a man who understood the valuering like a small engine."
1"He was flattering her. He was always so good at that, finding the precise compliment that was also a manipulation. It had infuriated her then, and it infuriated…"
2"The kettle chose that moment to scream, a shrill, mundane sound that shattered the intensity of the moment. Rory jumped, turning automatically to switch it off.…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she finally said, her voice tighter of Marseille and Mayfair"
1"she said, the words coming out softer than she meant them to"
2"she said quietly, the words directed at the window"
3"she whispered, her voice trembling"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.216
leniency0.432
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.054
77.3559%