| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.92% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1101 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.80% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1101 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "tension" | | 11 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.47% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" | | 3 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 114 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1080 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 991 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.4 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | October | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 4 | | Like | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 74.24% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite music, not quite voices" | | 1 | "not quite voices" | | 2 | "Something between the two that made her eyes wa" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1080 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.66% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 30 | | std | 14.44 | | cv | 0.481 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 60 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 53 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 44 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 182 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 114 | | ratio | 0.07 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant against her chest pulsed warm—too warm for comfort." | | 1 | "The wildflowers that supposedly bloomed year-round were there, but wrong—their petals too pale, their stems bending away from her as she passed." | | 2 | "Both directions looked identical—narrow trails disappearing into darkness thick as tar." | | 3 | "Every tree ahead of her had the same scar—a vertical gash in the bark, weeping something dark that glistened in light that came from nowhere." | | 4 | "A sound drifted through the trees—not quite music, not quite voices." | | 5 | "The darkness there wasn't empty—it had texture, weight." | | 6 | "No—not rustled." | | 7 | "When it spoke again, the voice came from everywhere—the trees, the earth, the air itself." |
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| 86.63% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1012 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "familiar becoming foreign, paths" |
| | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.04841897233201581 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010869565217391304 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 114 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 114 | | mean | 9.47 | | std | 6.78 | | cv | 0.715 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 60.82% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.41228070175438597 | | totalSentences | 114 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the distant hum of" | | 1 | "Just her own breathing, too" | | 2 | "Even her breathing." |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd come alone." | | 1 | "Her voice came out smaller" | | 2 | "She cleared her throat, tried" | | 3 | "She froze, scanning the darkness" | | 4 | "She kept her voice steady" | | 5 | "She touched it through her" | | 6 | "She chose left on instinct," | | 7 | "she muttered, more to hear" | | 8 | "She'd passed this spot before." | | 9 | "She was sure of it." | | 10 | "She pulled it out from" | | 11 | "It reminded her of wine" | | 12 | "She dug her nails into" | | 13 | "Her voice cracked on the" | | 14 | "She held up the pendant" | | 15 | "Its glow painted her hand" | | 16 | "They groaned, wood straining like" | | 17 | "She stumbled, caught herself against" | | 18 | "She jerked her hand back." | | 19 | "Her own heartbeat tried to" |
| | ratio | 0.261 | |
| 56.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed against" | | 1 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter," | | 2 | "The pendant against her chest" | | 3 | "She'd come alone." | | 4 | "Eva would have tried to" | | 5 | "The message had been specific:" | | 6 | "The moment her foot crossed" | | 7 | "The wind died." | | 8 | "Her voice came out smaller" | | 9 | "She cleared her throat, tried" | | 10 | "Aurora moved deeper into the" | | 11 | "The wildflowers that supposedly bloomed" | | 12 | "The sweet scent they gave" | | 13 | "A branch snapped somewhere to" | | 14 | "She froze, scanning the darkness" | | 15 | "The shadows seemed to shift," | | 16 | "She kept her voice steady" | | 17 | "The pendant grew warmer." | | 18 | "She touched it through her" | | 19 | "The path forked ahead." |
| | ratio | 0.807 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 94.16% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed against the moonless sky, their ancient oak forms twisted into shapes that hurt to look at directly." | | 1 | "She touched it through her shirt, felt it pulse in a rhythm that didn't match her heartbeat." | | 2 | "The crimson stone glowed brighter than she'd ever seen it, casting shadows that moved independent of its light." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.067 | | leniency | 0.133 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |