Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYV35M5Z08W7WR9AGKGVFX

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Duration:
54.6s
Cost:
$0.128865

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones loomed against the moonless sky, their ancient oak forms twisted into shapes that hurt to look at directly. Aurora pulled her jacket tighter, the October wind cutting through the thin fabric as she stepped past the boundary into the Fae Grove. The pendant against her chest pulsed warm—too warm for comfort. She'd come alone. Eva would have tried to stop her, and Silas... well, Silas would have insisted on coming along, and that would have defeated the purpose. The message had been specific: midnight, the grove, come alone if you want answers about the pendant. The moment her foot crossed between the stones, the temperature dropped ten degrees. The wind died. Even the distant hum of London traffic vanished, replaced by a silence so complete it pressed against her eardrums. "Hello?" Her voice came out smaller than intended. She cleared her throat, tried again. "I'm here. Like you asked." Nothing. Just her own breathing, too loud in the stillness. Aurora moved deeper into the grove, following the dirt path that wound between trees she didn't recognize. The wildflowers that supposedly bloomed year-round were there, but wrong—their petals too pale, their stems bending away from her as she passed. The sweet scent they gave off made her stomach turn. A branch snapped somewhere to her left. She froze, scanning the darkness between the trees. The shadows seemed to shift, rearranging themselves when she wasn't looking directly at them. "I know someone's there." She kept her voice steady despite the hammering in her chest. "You asked me to come. Here I am." The pendant grew warmer. She touched it through her shirt, felt it pulse in a rhythm that didn't match her heartbeat. One-two-three. Pause. One-two-three. Like a waltz played too slow. The path forked ahead. Both directions looked identical—narrow trails disappearing into darkness thick as tar. She chose left on instinct, each step taking her further from the standing stones, further from any chance of running back to the real world. Time felt wrong here. Had she been walking for minutes? Hours? The watch on her wrist had stopped at 12:01, the second hand twitching between one moment and the next but never moving forward. "This is taking the piss," she muttered, more to hear a human voice than anything else. "Cryptic messages, midnight meetings—" The words died in her throat. Every tree ahead of her had the same scar—a vertical gash in the bark, weeping something dark that glistened in light that came from nowhere. She'd passed this spot before. She was sure of it. But the path behind her stretched back differently than she remembered, curving right where it should have gone straight. The pendant burned now, hot enough to hurt. She pulled it out from under her shirt, the chain catching on her collar. The crimson stone glowed brighter than she'd ever seen it, casting shadows that moved independent of its light. A sound drifted through the trees—not quite music, not quite voices. It reminded her of wine glasses singing when you ran a wet finger around the rim, but layered, harmonizing in ways that human voices couldn't achieve. The melody pulled at something behind her ribs, made her feet want to leave the path. She dug her nails into her palms. "No. Not happening." The singing stopped. The silence rushed back like water filling a vacuum, and with it came the certainty that whatever had been singing was now listening. Watching. Aurora turned in a slow circle, trying to see into the spaces between the trees. The darkness there wasn't empty—it had texture, weight. It breathed. "I'm not here to play games." Her voice cracked on the last word. "Someone sent me a note. Said you had information about this." She held up the pendant. Its glow painted her hand red. "About where it came from. What it means." The trees rustled despite the absence of wind. No—not rustled. They groaned, wood straining like ship masts in a storm. One by one, starting from somewhere far ahead and rolling toward her like a wave, they began to lean. Not falling, just... tilting. Bowing. The path at her feet started to shift. Soil ran like water, reforming into a new direction. She stumbled, caught herself against a tree trunk that felt too warm, too soft. Like skin. She jerked her hand back. Where her palm had touched, the bark showed an imprint that slowly filled itself in, healing over like flesh. The pendant's rhythm changed. Faster now. One-two-three-four-five. Pause. One-two-three-four-five. Her own heartbeat tried to match it, sending spikes of adrenaline through her system. Movement in her peripheral vision. She spun toward it, saw nothing but trees that hadn't been there before. Or had they? The grove rearranged itself with each blink, familiar becoming foreign, paths multiplying and disappearing. "Enough!" The shout tore from her throat. "I came here in good faith. If you have something to tell me, then—" Every sound stopped. Even her breathing. The world held its breath, and in that perfect silence, she heard it. Footsteps. Not on the path. Not between the trees. Underneath. Like someone walking in a room below, if below could exist in a forest floor made of dirt and root. The footfalls matched the pendant's rhythm, getting closer with each beat. Aurora backed away, but the path behind her had vanished. Trees pressed in from all sides, their trunks so close she could barely turn around. The pendant seared her chest now, its glow bright enough to throw her shadow in multiple directions at once. The footsteps stopped directly beneath her. The ground under her feet felt thin as paper, ready to tear and drop her through to whatever waited below. She held perfectly still, afraid that any movement would break the surface tension keeping her above that underneath place. A whisper rose from the earth, words in a language that predated human speech. But somehow, impossibly, she understood. "You wear the heart of a dead god." The pendant cracked. A hairline fracture split across its surface, and through that tiny break, something leaked out. Not light. Not exactly shadow. Something between the two that made her eyes water to perceive. "Who are you?" Her whisper barely disturbed the air. The ground shuddered. Whatever stood beneath her had moved, shifted its impossible weight. When it spoke again, the voice came from everywhere—the trees, the earth, the air itself. "The question, little thief, is who are you?"
total_cost0.128865

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1101
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1101
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count2
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count2
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pulsed"
2"silence"
3"stomach"
4"scanning"
5"pulse"
6"weight"
7"familiar"
8"perfect"
9"footsteps"
10"tension"
11"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
75.47% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
3"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1080
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount991
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.4
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
October1
Fae1
Grove1
Silas2
London1
Aurora4
Like3
persons
0"Silas"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
74.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite music, not quite voices"
1"not quite voices"
2"Something between the two that made her eyes wa"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1080
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
94.66% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean30
std14.44
cv0.481
sampleLengths
054
144
235
319
410
549
629
723
830
940
1034
1120
1260
1340
1453
1510
1627
1725
1843
1944
2033
2124
2223
2335
2421
2519
261
2740
2844
2945
3019
318
3234
339
3428
358
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs182
matches
0"wasn't looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences114
ratio0.07
matches
0"The pendant against her chest pulsed warm—too warm for comfort."
1"The wildflowers that supposedly bloomed year-round were there, but wrong—their petals too pale, their stems bending away from her as she passed."
2"Both directions looked identical—narrow trails disappearing into darkness thick as tar."
3"Every tree ahead of her had the same scar—a vertical gash in the bark, weeping something dark that glistened in light that came from nowhere."
4"A sound drifted through the trees—not quite music, not quite voices."
5"The darkness there wasn't empty—it had texture, weight."
6"No—not rustled."
7"When it spoke again, the voice came from everywhere—the trees, the earth, the air itself."
86.63% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1012
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"familiar becoming foreign, paths"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.04841897233201581
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010869565217391304
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean9.47
std6.78
cv0.715
sampleLengths
021
123
210
33
49
515
617
713
83
919
108
116
125
131
149
1517
1622
1710
187
198
2014
2115
228
234
2417
251
261
271
286
294
3011
3125
324
336
341
3523
3616
374
386
3925
405
415
4219
438
4414
4518
4611
4726
4816
497
60.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.41228070175438597
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences88
matches
0"Even the distant hum of"
1"Just her own breathing, too"
2"Even her breathing."
ratio0.034
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences88
matches
0"She'd come alone."
1"Her voice came out smaller"
2"She cleared her throat, tried"
3"She froze, scanning the darkness"
4"She kept her voice steady"
5"She touched it through her"
6"She chose left on instinct,"
7"she muttered, more to hear"
8"She'd passed this spot before."
9"She was sure of it."
10"She pulled it out from"
11"It reminded her of wine"
12"She dug her nails into"
13"Her voice cracked on the"
14"She held up the pendant"
15"Its glow painted her hand"
16"They groaned, wood straining like"
17"She stumbled, caught herself against"
18"She jerked her hand back."
19"Her own heartbeat tried to"
ratio0.261
56.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences88
matches
0"The standing stones loomed against"
1"Aurora pulled her jacket tighter,"
2"The pendant against her chest"
3"She'd come alone."
4"Eva would have tried to"
5"The message had been specific:"
6"The moment her foot crossed"
7"The wind died."
8"Her voice came out smaller"
9"She cleared her throat, tried"
10"Aurora moved deeper into the"
11"The wildflowers that supposedly bloomed"
12"The sweet scent they gave"
13"A branch snapped somewhere to"
14"She froze, scanning the darkness"
15"The shadows seemed to shift,"
16"She kept her voice steady"
17"The pendant grew warmer."
18"She touched it through her"
19"The path forked ahead."
ratio0.807
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
94.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The standing stones loomed against the moonless sky, their ancient oak forms twisted into shapes that hurt to look at directly."
1"She touched it through her shirt, felt it pulse in a rhythm that didn't match her heartbeat."
2"The crimson stone glowed brighter than she'd ever seen it, casting shadows that moved independent of its light."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.133
84.6541%