| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.05% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2021 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 77.73% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2021 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "mosaic" | | 1 | "efficient" | | 2 | "comfortable" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "magnetic" | | 5 | "processed" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "unsettled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 154 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 154 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "appeared to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 188 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 2021 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1584 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.95 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 15 | | Callum | 1 | | Pryce | 9 | | Southwark | 1 | | Breitling | 1 | | Morris | 4 | | Bermondsey | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Pryce" | | 3 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 77.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like an expensive wool overcoat no" | | 1 | "smelled like coffee and the kind of afters" | | 2 | "quite a laugh" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2021 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 188 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 72 | | mean | 28.07 | | std | 26.59 | | cv | 0.947 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 81 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 64 | | 7 | 89 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 61 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 88 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 48 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 55 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 83 | | 37 | 39 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 65 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 75 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 88 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 41 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 91.59% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 154 | | matches | | 0 | "were closed" | | 1 | "was etched" | | 2 | "been swept" | | 3 | "been scored" | | 4 | "been caught" | | 5 | "been clenched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 265 | | matches | | 0 | "was looking" | | 1 | "was adjusting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 188 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "Beneath that, something else — a sweetness like burnt cloves that she filed away and didn't mention." | | 1 | "The skin of his chest was unmarked except for a pattern of raised welts that formed something geometric — concentric circles, or close to it, radiating outward from the sternum." | | 2 | "Pried the left one open — rigor hadn't fully set, which meant he'd died within the last few hours." | | 3 | "The face was etched with symbols she didn't recognize — not numerals, not cardinal points." | | 4 | "Folding tables lined the walls in two neat rows, their surfaces bare but marked with rings — cup stains, or the residue of containers recently removed." | | 5 | "The grooves were fresh — pale where the glaze had been scored away, no dirt settled in the channels." | | 6 | "Under the floodlight it had a sheen that blood never carried — iridescent, shifting between deep red and something closer to violet as the angle changed." | | 7 | "She'd learned this trick early in her career — the crime scene as a photograph, all of it at once instead of piece by piece." | | 8 | "It was surprise — the wide, stupid surprise of a man who'd been caught off guard by something he should have expected." | | 9 | "The burnt-clove smell was fading — or she was adjusting to it — and the floodlight buzzed and flickered once, casting a stutter of shadow across the tiled walls." | | 10 | "The token was roughly circular, about the size of a fifty-pence piece, and bore a symbol on one face — the same vertical line through three bars." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1583 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same burnt-clove sweetness." |
| | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.033480732785849655 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011370814908401769 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 188 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 188 | | mean | 10.75 | | std | 8.3 | | cv | 0.772 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 47.16% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 23 | | diversityRatio | 0.35638297872340424 | | totalSentences | 188 | | uniqueOpeners | 67 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "His eyes were open." | | 1 | "His mouth was open." | | 2 | "His hands were closed into" | | 3 | "She turned his head." | | 4 | "She unbuttoned the overcoat, then" | | 5 | "She leaned closer." | | 6 | "She examined the dead man's" | | 7 | "She worked the thumb free" | | 8 | "She tilted it under the" | | 9 | "They might have been decorative," | | 10 | "It pointed directly at the" | | 11 | "He smelled like coffee and" | | 12 | "She didn't answer that." | | 13 | "She placed the compass into" | | 14 | "She photographed it with her" | | 15 | "He ambled over." | | 16 | "He looked down." | | 17 | "She ran her gloved finger" | | 18 | "she said, standing" | | 19 | "She walked him back to" |
| | ratio | 0.275 | |
| 50.58% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 113 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "The platform tiles still bore" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under" | | 2 | "The air tasted of copper" | | 3 | "The victim was male, mid-thirties," | | 4 | "His eyes were open." | | 5 | "His mouth was open." | | 6 | "His hands were closed into" | | 7 | "Quinn crouched beside him, pulling" | | 8 | "She turned his head." | | 9 | "She unbuttoned the overcoat, then" | | 10 | "The skin of his chest" | | 11 | "The skin had simply *risen*," | | 12 | "She leaned closer." | | 13 | "The welts were warm." | | 14 | "The voice came from behind" | | 15 | "DS Callum Pryce, on loan" | | 16 | "Quinn didn't look up." | | 17 | "She examined the dead man's" | | 18 | "The right fist resisted more," | | 19 | "She worked the thumb free" |
| | ratio | 0.819 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The platform tiles still bore their original cream-and-green pattern, though decades of abandonment had cracked and shifted them into something that resembled a…" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the police tape strung between two rusted pillars and stepped onto the platform of the disused station, her shoes crunching …" | | 2 | "The victim was male, mid-thirties, dressed in what looked like an expensive wool overcoat now ruined by the pool of dark liquid that had spread from beneath his…" | | 3 | "The skin of his chest was unmarked except for a pattern of raised welts that formed something geometric — concentric circles, or close to it, radiating outward …" | | 4 | "DS Callum Pryce, on loan from Southwark, stood with his arms folded and his expression already settled into the comfortable groove of a man who'd reached his co…" | | 5 | "Smaller than a pocket watch, its casing thick with verdigris, the kind of patina that took years to develop." | | 6 | "Inside the clean circle, scratched into the tile with something sharp, was a symbol that matched one of the markings on the compass face." | | 7 | "It was surprise — the wide, stupid surprise of a man who'd been caught off guard by something he should have expected." | | 8 | "Three years and two months ago, in a warehouse in Bermondsey that had smelled of the same burnt-clove sweetness." | | 9 | "A market that materialized in an abandoned station and then vanished, leaving one body behind." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.176 | | leniency | 0.353 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.039 | |