Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYVHZWW6MRH49GGQWYKJ0A

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2m 17s
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$0.001779
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt clicked. The chain rattled—a sharp, metallic staccato against the heavy timber of the doorframe. Rory didn't open it all the way. She stood just a crack away, fingers white-knuckled around the brass handle, her breathing steady despite the hammering in her chest. "Lucien." She didn't say his last name. No need for formality when the copper tang of his cologne hit her instantly. Sandalwood and old dust, mixed with the sharp scent of adrenaline. "I know you're in there, Rory." The accent was still a French velvet, smooth but undeniably dangerous. "Your heartbeat is loud enough to wake the neighbours." She tightened her grip. "If you're here to take a delivery, you're too late. Yu-Fei's already sent the staff home." "I'm not here for curry." He didn't knock again. His knuckles grazed the wood, a deliberate, slow movement that sent a shiver down her spine. The deadbolt jiggled. It hadn't been secured from the inside. Rory stepped back, her sneaker scuffing against the worn linoleum of the hallway. Her apartment was twenty steps up, separate from Eva's place on the other side of the landing. Ptolemy, her tabby cat, slid into the gap between her and the intruder, hissing—a low, guttural sound that stopped the door from opening any further. "Go away," she whispered. "If I leave now, someone else will find you. And I imagine they won't be as... polite." The chain pulled taut with a metallic *clink*. Rory didn't fight it. She knew better. She turned her back on the door and paced into the cramped living room, clutching her phone in her pocket like a shield. The flat smelled of stale takeout and freshly ground coffee. Shadows stretched across the floorboards, dipping under the low ceiling. It was small. Cramped. But it was hers. A silhouette filled the hallway beyond the threshold. Rory stopped at the edge of the rug. She looked at the door, then back at him. Lucien Moreau. He stood there like he owned the city, not just a flat above a curry house on Brick Lane. His tailored charcoal suit was immaculate, the lines sharp enough to cut glass, contrasting sharply with the peeling paint and exposed brick of the tenement building. He held an ivory-handled cane in one hand, the tip tapping a rhythmic *tick-tock* against the floorboards. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, revealing a high, pale forehead. But it was his face that stopped her. One amber eye, the other deep black, watched her with an intensity that felt like a physical weight. "Who is it?" Eva’s voice drifted up from the floor below—a casual question about returning a book. Lucien didn't look down. He just kept his eyes on Rory. "Tell her you're taking a shower." Rory flinched. "You can't just barge in." "I already have." He took a step forward. The flat groaned under his presence. Rory felt the temperature drop. A draft, unnatural and biting, cut through her thin t-shirt. It wasn't coming from the window. "I have three deadbolts, Lucien," she said, her voice steadier than she felt. "And a charm Eva bought me in Camden." "Charm rattles," he murmured. "I tried it. Just now." A chill crept up her neck. She rubbed her left wrist, where the small crescent-shaped scar from a childhood bicycle accident lay hidden beneath her sleeve. "What do you want?" She turned around, facing the window where the London lights blurred into streaks of yellow and red. "You're a fixer, right? An information broker. I'm nobody. I deliver dumplings. I read law journals I'll never pass." "Nobody stays nobody for long, darling." He moved then. Not running, but gliding. The silence of the room swallowed the sound of his shoes on the floorboards. He stopped at her side, too close. Rory refused to breathe. She stared at the cityscape, at the twinkling expanse of the Thames in the distance. It looked beautiful. Invincible. "I didn't come here to discuss your career aspirations." His hand raised. She expected him to touch her, to pull her hair back, to invade her personal space the way she imagined a predator would. Instead, he hovered his fingers near her ear, inches away from the fresh bruise blossoming on her jawline—a souvenir from her ex, Evan. His breath hitched. "I hear he's trying to track you down again," Lucien said. His voice dropped an octave, darkening into something gravelly and rough. "Leeds. He hired a tracker from Manchester. Or maybe it was Sheffield. The South definitely isn't his element." "He doesn't know I'm here," Rory said. "I changed my plates. I laid false trails through Cardiff." "Did he check your mother?" The question landed like a bullet. Rory stiffened. She turned to face him, eyes wide. "Evan wouldn't do that. He's a coward." "He's angry. And he's greedy." Lucien leaned back against the wall, crossing his ankles. The ivory handle of his cane gleamed under the glow of the overhead bulb. "He knows you have leverage. He knows where your loyalty truly lies." "I don't have loyalty," Rory snapped, the words tumbling out before she could stop them. "I have survival." "Survival requires resources." Lucien’s black eye narrowed, the amber one flickering with a strange, predatory light. "And right now, you're running on fumes. That job at Yu-Fei's pays a pittance, Rory. And I know about the money from the flat sale." Rory went cold. "It's in a Swiss account." "I'm not the police. I know how to cross borders. I know how to clean gold." "Then why are you talking to me?" "Because I'm the only person who can keep the wolves at bay." He straightened up, the lazy pose vanishing, replaced by the rigid posture of a man on a mission. "Evan is dangerous. Worse than dangerous. He's stupid enough to involve... others." "Others?" "The kind that eat baristas for breakfast." Rory felt a surge of panic, but beneath it, a darker, thrilling current of fear. He wasn't lying. His eyes—the heterochromatic set—were terrifyingly honest. "You're asking for a favour." "I'm offering a partnership." "A partnership?" Rory laughed, a harsh, brittle sound. "You left months ago. You didn't even send a postcard. You disappeared into the London underworld, the half-demon fixer who drinks champagne with the prince of hell, and now you walk in here like we're old lovers?" "You think I left for fun?" "Exactly." Lucien moved closer again, trapping her against the window pane. The glass was cold against her back. He towered over her, his shadow swallowing her small frame. The scent of him was overpowering now, a mix of expensive cologne and raw, unfiltered demon magic. "I left because I thought you were safe." His voice cracked, just for a second. He cleared his throat, the mask slipping back into place. "I thought Evan was finished with you. I thought you would stay small. Stay safe. Become a lawyer. Have a garden." "I almost did." "A mistake." He reached out, his fingers brushing against her cheek. His skin was warm, impossibly so. "You belong in the dark, Rory. You belong with me." "That's not what I want." "Then maybe you need to be taught what you want." A low growl vibrated in his chest, more animal than human. The air between them tasted of ozone. The deadbolt rattled again behind them. Harder this time. Someone was trying to turn it from the outside. Rory’s heart hammered against her ribs. "He found me." "Not yet." Lucien didn't look at the door. He looked at her mouth. "But he's coming. And when he does, that flat door won't hold him. I won't be here to stop him." The cane tip clicked on the floorboards. He tapped it twice. A signal. "One night," Lucien said. "Just one. Help me get the information I need to shut Evan down permanently. And I’ll walk out of your life and never look back." Rory looked at the door. She looked at the scar on her wrist. She thought of the fear she felt every time the phone rang. The loneliness of the flat above the curry house. "What information?" "I need a lead on his assets," Lucien said smoothly. "A paper trail. Somewhere he thinks he's hidden it." "And if I say no?" Lucien tilted his head, a cruel smile touching his lips. "Then I call the tracker on the other side of that door, tell him exactly where the warm body is hiding in East London, and I watch from a safe distance while he breaks down every lock you own." Rory stared at him. The timer was ticking. Behind her, the handle turned with a sickening *clunk*. The lock wasn't holding. "Did you bring the money?" she asked. "I brought the knowledge you need to find the money." Rory reached into her pocket and pulled out a key. She didn't hand it to him. She turned to the deadbolt, her movements quick and practiced. She slid the lock home. The handle jiggled, futilely, against the metal. She turned back to Lucien. "I'll do it." A slow, appreciative grin spread across his face. The menace evaporated, replaced by a hungry intensity that made her knees weak. He took the key from her hand, but instead of leaving, he stepped closer, crowding her against the window one last time. "Don't disappoint me, Rory," he murmured, pressing his forehead against hers. The amber eye gleamed in the dark. "Or next time, I won't be the only monster at your door."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
78.79% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"She turned around [around]"
1"Lucien leaned back [back]"
2"His voice cracked just [just]"
3"Lucien said smoothly [smoothly]"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.288
leniency0.576
rawRatio0.211
effectiveRatio0.121
93.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1598
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1598
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"down her spine"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"intensity"
count2
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"charm"
count2
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"predator"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"down her spine"
2"rhythmic"
3"intensity"
4"weight"
5"charm"
6"chill"
7"silence"
8"predator"
9"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences120
matches
0"a surge of panic"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences120
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences166
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1586
ratio0.002
matches
0"clink"
1"tick-tock"
2"clunk"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1027
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.75
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
French1
Eva2
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien11
Rory18
London1
Thames1
Evan1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
3"Thames"
globalScore0.624
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a physical weight"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.631
wordCount1586
matches
0"Not running, but gliding"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences166
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean20.33
std15.55
cv0.765
sampleLengths
016
128
21
331
426
520
65
730
855
94
1017
1138
1228
138
1417
152
1662
1738
1817
1917
207
213
2232
2321
249
2526
2640
276
2828
2923
309
3149
323
3340
3417
355
3615
377
3840
3918
4041
418
4216
437
4442
451
467
4724
485
494
99.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences120
matches
0"been secured"
1"was slicked"
10.61% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs176
matches
0"wasn't coming"
1"wasn't lying"
2"was trying"
3"was ticking"
4"wasn't holding"
56.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences166
ratio0.03
matches
0"The chain rattled—a sharp, metallic staccato against the heavy timber of the doorframe."
1"Ptolemy, her tabby cat, slid into the gap between her and the intruder, hissing—a low, guttural sound that stopped the door from opening any further."
2"\"Who is it?\" Eva’s voice drifted up from the floor below—a casual question about returning a book."
3"Instead, he hovered his fingers near her ear, inches away from the fresh bruise blossoming on her jawline—a souvenir from her ex, Evan."
4"His eyes—the heterochromatic set—were terrifyingly honest."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1036
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.037644787644787646
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008687258687258687
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences166
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences166
mean9.55
std6.86
cv0.718
sampleLengths
03
113
27
321
41
56
614
711
817
99
104
1116
125
134
1416
153
167
1713
1817
1925
204
2117
228
234
243
2523
2610
2710
283
291
304
318
328
339
342
3519
3626
3717
3812
398
4018
4117
424
437
446
452
465
473
485
496
44.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.2710843373493976
totalSentences166
uniqueOpeners45
30.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"Instead, he hovered his fingers"
ratio0.009
42.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences108
matches
0"She stood just a crack"
1"She didn't say his last"
2"She tightened her grip."
3"He didn't knock again."
4"His knuckles grazed the wood,"
5"It hadn't been secured from"
6"Her apartment was twenty steps"
7"She knew better."
8"She turned her back on"
9"It was small."
10"She looked at the door,"
11"He stood there like he"
12"His tailored charcoal suit was"
13"He held an ivory-handled cane"
14"His platinum blond hair was"
15"He just kept his eyes"
16"He took a step forward."
17"It wasn't coming from the"
18"she said, her voice steadier"
19"She rubbed her left wrist,"
ratio0.444
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount100
totalSentences108
matches
0"The deadbolt clicked."
1"The chain rattled—a sharp, metallic"
2"Rory didn't open it all"
3"She stood just a crack"
4"She didn't say his last"
5"Sandalwood and old dust, mixed"
6"The accent was still a"
7"She tightened her grip."
8"He didn't knock again."
9"His knuckles grazed the wood,"
10"The deadbolt jiggled."
11"It hadn't been secured from"
12"Rory stepped back, her sneaker"
13"Her apartment was twenty steps"
14"Ptolemy, her tabby cat, slid"
15"The chain pulled taut with"
16"Rory didn't fight it."
17"She knew better."
18"She turned her back on"
19"The flat smelled of stale"
ratio0.926
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"His knuckles grazed the wood, a deliberate, slow movement that sent a shiver down her spine."
1"Ptolemy, her tabby cat, slid into the gap between her and the intruder, hissing—a low, guttural sound that stopped the door from opening any further."
2"One amber eye, the other deep black, watched her with an intensity that felt like a physical weight."
3"The menace evaporated, replaced by a hungry intensity that made her knees weak."
46.05% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
1"Rory snapped, the words tumbling out before she could stop them"
2"He reached out, his fingers brushing against her cheek"
74.24% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"Rory snapped (snap)"
3"Rory laughed (laugh)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.152
74.9085%