Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYVJAA3GTWVG099AQP1F1V

Run Details

Duration:
9.8s
Cost:
$0.000822
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The clatter of pint glasses and an undercurrent of hushed conversations filled the air within The Raven’s Nest. Rory, her delivery uniform still clinging to her, slung a damp bag of takeout onto the worn counter. The scent of stale beer and something vaguely like lemon polish tickled her nose. She ran a hand through her already tousled black hair, the dampness from London’s perpetual drizzle clinging to strands around her ears. Silas, his usual grey-streaked auburn hair neatly combed, wiped down the bar with a practiced hand, his slight limp barely noticeable with each pivot. “Rough night?” Silas’s voice was a low rumble, cutting through the din without effort. Rory offered a tired smile. “Just another Tuesday. Couple of hangry students.” She peeled off her worn jacket, revealing a faded band t-shirt underneath. “Anything to drown out the existential dread?” Silas chuckled, a dry sound like rustling leaves. He slid a dark ale across the polished oak. “Always. On the house.” She gratefully accepted, the cool glass a welcome sensation against her palm. She took a long sip, the bitter hops a familiar comfort. The Raven’s Nest, with its walls adorned with forgotten maps and grainy photographs, always felt like a sanctuary from the relentless pace of the city. It was a place where time seemed to slow, where secrets could be whispered without fear of immediate dissemination. Just as she settled onto a stool, a voice, impossibly familiar, sliced through the general hum. "Rory? Is that really you?" Rory froze, the pint halfway to her lips. Slowly, she turned, her bright blue eyes widening in disbelief. Standing a few feet away, bathed in the low amber light of the bar, was a woman she hadn't truly seen in… how long? Eva. Eva, whose laugh used to echo in school corridors, whose presence always felt like sunshine. But this Eva was different. Her vibrant energy seemed… subdued. The familiar spark in her eyes, usually so quick to ignite, was banked. She wore a tailored grey suit, impeccably sharp, and her blonde hair, once a riotous cascade, was pulled back into a severe, low bun. There was a hardness about her now, a steely resolve in the set of her jaw. The carefree girl Rory remembered had been meticulously polished into something else entirely. "Eva," Rory breathed, the name feeling foreign on her tongue. "God, it's been… ages." Eva moved closer, her heels clicking softly on the wooden floor. She offered a tight smile, one that didn't quite reach her eyes. "Ages doesn’t even begin to cover it. What are you doing here? I thought you’d vanished off the face of the earth.” Rory’s smile faltered. “Just… around. Working. You?” “Business, mostly,” Eva replied, her gaze sweeping around the dimly lit interior. “Passing through London. Had a meeting nearby and decided to pop in for old times’ sake. Though, I have to admit, I didn’t expect to see you here.” She gestured with a manicured hand towards Rory’s takeaway bag. “Still delivering dodgy noodles?” The jab, though delivered smoothly, landed with a dull thud. Rory felt a flush creep up her neck. She clutched her pint a little tighter. "Someone's got to. Keeps the lights on." She tried to inject levity into her voice, but it sounded brittle, even to her own ears. "What about you? Fancy lawyer now?" Eva’s lips curved into a more genuine, albeit fleeting, smile. “Something like that. Property law, actually. It’s… lucrative.” She paused, her gaze lingering on Rory’s uniform. “You look… well, you look like you. Still got that wild streak, eh?” “Just trying to survive,” Rory murmured, looking down at the dark liquid in her glass. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a relic from a scraped knee and sheer childish recklessness, felt suddenly prominent. “Survival looks different on you than it does on me, I suppose.” Eva’s voice was quiet, almost contemplative. She turned to Silas, who had been watching the exchange with quiet amusement. “Silas, right? Rory’s mentioned you. And this place.” Silas inclined his head, a flicker of something unreadable in his hazel eyes. “Rory’s been a good customer. And a good… friend to the establishment.” He gave Rory a knowing look. “A friend to the establishment,” Eva echoed, a wry twist to her lips. “That sounds about right for Rory. Always finding her way into the most interesting places.” She turned back to Rory, her expression unreadable. “Remember that time we snuck into the old abandoned theatre downtown? You swore you saw a ghost.” Rory’s breath hitched. That felt like a lifetime ago. The memory of their shared mischief, the thrill of trespassing, the innocent terror and laughter, flooded her. She’d been so lost after leaving Evan, after leaving Cardiff, and Eva had been her anchor then, her conduit to a new life in London. Rory had fled, the weight of her father’s expectations and her ex’s cruelty pressing down on her, and Eva, already established in the city, had offered a lifeline. Now, though, that lifeline felt like a gossamer thread, stretched thin by years of silence and differing paths. “I remember,” Rory said, her voice barely a whisper. “You said I was imagining things.” “Because you always did have an overactive imagination,” Eva replied, but the sharpness was gone, replaced by a touch of melancholy. She toyed with the intricate clasp of her handbag. “Some things don’t change, I guess. Though… London changes you. It certainly changed me.” Her gaze drifted, unfocused, towards the darkened corners of the bar. "It made me… practical." Rory watched her, a knot tightening in her chest. The unspoken words hung heavy in the air between them, a silent accusation of what was lost, what was never recovered. The wild spark Eva spoke of felt like a dying ember, and Rory suspected the same was true for Eva. They had been two ships passing in the night, their lights once blazing in tandem, and then diverging, each charting a course through different storms. “Practicality has its place,” Rory managed, trying to sound casual, but the words felt inadequate. Eva finally met Rory’s gaze, and for a brief moment, the hard edges softened. “Does it? Sometimes I wonder if practicality just means you’ve given up on the things that truly matter. The things that used to make us feel alive.” She gestured vaguely with her hand, encompassing the bar, the night, their shared past. “This wasn't exactly the life I envisioned for myself back then. Or for you, for that matter.” A pang of a familiar regret, sharp and unexpected, pierced Rory. She remembered Lily, their fourth friend from school, the one who had dreamed of travel and adventure, the one who had disappeared after graduation, leaving only whispers and unanswered letters. Had Eva’s ‘implacable practicality’ also stamped out that spirit? “Life happens, Eva,” Rory said, the phrase a tired echo of countless other conversations where the real truth had been smoothed over with the balm of inevitability. “Yes,” Eva agreed softly, her gaze dropping to her perfectly polished shoes. “It does. And some of us become very good at letting it happen *to* us, rather than making it *for* us.” She picked up her small clutch bag. “Well, I should go. I have an early flight tomorrow.” She extended a hand, not for a handshake, but for a brief, almost formal, touch on Rory’s arm. “It was… surprisingly nice to see you, Rory. You haven't changed a bit.” The words, meant as a compliment, felt like a condemnation. Rory watched Eva walk away, the click of her heels receding into the general din, leaving Rory alone with her dark ale and the ghosts of shared laughter. Silas was polishing glasses nearby, his face impassive, yet Rory could swear she saw a hint of understanding in the depths of his amber eyes. He knew. He always knew. The Raven’s Nest, a haven for lost souls and clandestine dealings, was a place that collected stories, and perhaps, even collected regrets.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She turned back [back]"
1"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"Eva agreed softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.15
effectiveRatio0.15
66.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1340
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count2
3
adverb"softly"
count2
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"perfectly"
count1
6
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"truly"
3"softly"
4"suddenly"
5"perfectly"
6"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Lily"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1340
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"familiar"
count4
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"echo"
count2
3
word"resolve"
count1
4
word"fleeting"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count2
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"intricate"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count1
13
word"pang"
count1
14
word"depths"
count1
15
word"clandestine"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"sanctuary"
2"echo"
3"resolve"
4"fleeting"
5"flicker"
6"unreadable"
7"echoed"
8"weight"
9"silence"
10"whisper"
11"intricate"
12"unspoken"
13"pang"
14"depths"
15"clandestine"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"time stood still"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"time seemed to slow"
1"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences78
matches
0"g in disbelief"
1"felt a flush"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1338
ratio0.001
matches
0"to"
1"for"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
25.50% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1004
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven3
Nest3
London2
Rory25
Silas6
Eva17
Evan1
Cardiff1
Lily1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.255
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"felt like a sanctuary from the relentle"
1"felt like sunshine"
2"quite reach her eyes"
3"felt like a lifetime ago"
4"felt like a gossamer thread, stretched"
5"felt like a dying ember, and Rory suspe"
6"felt like a condemnation"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.747
wordCount1338
matches
0"not for a handshake, but for a brief, almost formal, touch on Rory’s arm"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean46.14
std27.8
cv0.603
sampleLengths
096
114
231
321
467
521
642
71
891
914
1045
117
1254
1355
1439
1536
1639
1731
1853
1997
2015
2159
2275
2315
2472
2550
2627
2781
2890
87.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences78
matches
0"was banked"
1"was pulled"
2"was gone"
3"been smoothed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs157
matches
0"was polishing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences93
ratio0
matches(empty)
69.42% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount895
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"usual grey-streaked auburn"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.054748603351955305
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.026815642458100558
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean14.39
std8.44
cv0.586
sampleLengths
018
118
214
322
424
514
65
719
87
98
109
114
1212
1311
1425
1519
1616
175
188
1910
2022
212
221
2315
245
254
261
2713
2824
2916
3013
3110
324
3311
3412
3522
363
374
3812
3938
404
4110
428
437
4424
456
4610
4716
4813
4915
70.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.46236559139784944
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners43
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Slowly, she turned, her bright"
ratio0.014
83.01% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences73
matches
0"She ran a hand through"
1"She peeled off her worn"
2"He slid a dark ale"
3"She gratefully accepted, the cool"
4"She took a long sip,"
5"It was a place where"
6"Her vibrant energy seemed…"
7"She wore a tailored grey"
8"She offered a tight smile,"
9"She gestured with a manicured"
10"She clutched her pint a"
11"She tried to inject levity"
12"She paused, her gaze lingering"
13"She turned to Silas, who"
14"He gave Rory a knowing"
15"She turned back to Rory,"
16"She’d been so lost after"
17"She toyed with the intricate"
18"Her gaze drifted, unfocused, towards"
19"They had been two ships"
ratio0.342
1.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences73
matches
0"The clatter of pint glasses"
1"Rory, her delivery uniform still"
2"The scent of stale beer"
3"She ran a hand through"
4"Silas, his usual grey-streaked auburn"
5"Silas’s voice was a low"
6"Rory offered a tired smile."
7"She peeled off her worn"
8"Silas chuckled, a dry sound"
9"He slid a dark ale"
10"She gratefully accepted, the cool"
11"She took a long sip,"
12"The Raven’s Nest, with its"
13"It was a place where"
14"Rory froze, the pint halfway"
15"Eva, whose laugh used to"
16"Her vibrant energy seemed…"
17"The familiar spark in her"
18"She wore a tailored grey"
19"The carefree girl Rory remembered"
ratio0.918
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"Just as she settled onto"
1"Now, though, that lifeline felt"
ratio0.027
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rory watched Eva walk away, the click of her heels receding into the general din, leaving Rory alone with her dark ale and the ghosts of shared laughter."
1"The Raven’s Nest, a haven for lost souls and clandestine dealings, was a place that collected stories, and perhaps, even collected regrets."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Rory breathed, the name feeling foreign on her tongue"
1"Eva replied, her gaze sweeping around the dimly lit interior"
2"She paused, her gaze lingering on Rory’s uniform"
3"She turned back, her expression unreadable"
4"Rory said, her voice barely a whisper"
5"Eva replied, but the sharpness was gone, replaced by a touch of melancholy"
6"Rory managed, trying to sound casual, but the words felt inadequate"
7"Eva agreed softly, her gaze dropping to her perfectly polished shoes"
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory breathed (breathe)"
1"Rory murmured (murmur)"
2"Eva agreed softly (agree)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.389
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.167
74.4652%