Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYVR5AFVJBP842V9XZJXWZ

Run Details

Duration:
43.8s
Cost:
$0.043194
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Mist clung to the iron spikes of the Pembroke Lodge gate. Aurora Carter vaulted the metal, the cold biting into her palms, and dropped into the tall grass on the other side. Her boots hit the earth with a dull thud. Usually, the hum of London bled into Richmond Park—the distant drone of Heathrow, the sirens from the South Circular, the endless murmur of the city. Tonight, the silence was absolute. It rushed in to fill the space where the city noise should have been, pressing against her eardrums like deep water. She adjusted her jacket, shivering not from the temperature, but from the sudden isolation. The darkness here had weight. It wasn't just the absence of light; it was a physical presence that swallowed the beam of her small flashlight after only a few yards. Aurora checked the silver chain around her neck. The Heartstone pendant rested against her sternum, pulsing with a rhythmic, faint warmth. A heartbeat that wasn't hers. "Okay," she whispered. The word died instantly, absorbed by the open space. "Just find the stones. Get in, get the answers, get out." She pushed through the bracken. Ferns brushed against her denim jeans, mimicking the sound of whispering voices. She kept her eyes on the ground, navigating the uneven terrain of rabbit holes and tree roots. Her phone showed midnight, but the sky above suggested something far deeper into the night. The moon hung low and sickly pale, illuminating the park in greyscale. A twig snapped. Aurora froze. She spun, bringing the flashlight beam up in a jagged arc. Nothing but ancient oaks and tangled scrub. The trees in this part of Richmond were old, untreated, allowed to rot and twist into gnarled shapes. In the harsh LED light, a hollow in a trunk looked like a screaming mouth; a broken branch resembled a fractured limb. She waited. Her own breath created small clouds of fog that drifted into the beam. "Hello?" Stupid. Horror movie stupid. She clenched her jaw and turned back to the path. The warmth in the Heartstone spiked, a sudden flare of heat that made her wince. She scratched at the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous tic she hadn't managed to shake since childhood. The path began to curve. The air grew thicker, smelling of ozone and wet decay. The wildflowers that the Codex spoke of—the ones that bloomed year-round in the Grove—were visible now, but they looked wrong. In the daylight, they might have been vibrant purples and yellows. Under this moonlight, they were black and bruised grey, their petals closed tight like fists. She walked faster. The rhythm of her footsteps sounded too loud, crunching on gravel. Then, a second crunch. It came half a beat after hers. An echo. Aurora stopped. Silence. She took a step. *Crunch.* Something behind her took a step. *Crunch.* She whipped around again, the flashlight beam trembling. "Who's there?" The beam illuminated a patch of tall grass twenty feet away. The blades stood still in the windless air. Then, the grass depressed. Not all at once, but systematically, as if an invisible weight were walking toward her. *Crunch.* Panic, cold and sharp, spiked in her chest. She backed away, keeping the light trained on the advancing depression in the grass. "Stay back." Her voice cracked. The crushing sound stopped. The weight shifted. From the darkness to her left, deep in the tree line, a shape detached itself from the shadows. A stag. A red deer, common enough in the park. Aurora let out a breath, her shoulders sagging. "Just a deer," she muttered. "Jesus, Rory. Get a grip." The stag didn't move. It stood perfectly broadside, its massive rack of antlers blending into the branches above. Its eyes reflected the torchlight—two burning orbs of reflective green. It didn't blink. It didn't twitch an ear or stomp a hoof. It stood with the unnatural stillness of a taxidermy mount left in the woods. Then she saw the others. She swung the light left, then right. Dozens of them. Does, fawns, stags. They stood in a perfect circle around the clearing she had walked into. None of them moved. Every single pair of eyes was fixed on her. They weren't grazing. They were waiting. The Heartstone burned hot enough to sting. The boundary of the Grove was close. Aurora took a step backward. The stag nearest to her opened its mouth. No animal sound came out. No grunt, no bell. "Rory," it said. The voice was wet, distorted, like someone speaking with a throat full of blood. It was a man's voice. The cadence was familiar—too familiar. It held the mocking lilt Evan used to have when he’d lock the flat door and pocket the key. Aurora’s blood turned to ice. She stumbled back, her heel catching on a root. "That’s not possible." "Where are you going, Laila?" a doe to her right asked. The voice was different this time—Aurora's mother, but warped, the pitch stretched thin as wire. The circle of deer took a step forward in unison. The sound was a singular, thunderous *thump* against the turf. Aurora didn't wait for them to speak again. She turned and ran. The flashlight beam bounced wildly, illuminating flashes of terror—a tree trunk that looked like skin, a patch of fog that resembled a reaching hand. She abandoned the path, sprinting toward the cluster of ancient oak standing stones that marked the true entrance to Isolde's domain. Behind her, the sounds of pursuit were all wrong. No galloping hooves. It sounded like wet palms slapping against pavement, hundreds of them, moving with terrifying speed. "Rory!" The voice screamed from the darkness, right at her ear. She ducked, swinging her arm blindly. Her hand passed through cold mist. The standing stones loomed ahead, jagged teeth jutting from the earth. The air between them shimmered, a barrier of oil on water. The sanctuary. Aurora lunged for the gap between the two largest oaks. She slammed into the invisible barrier, the impact knocking the wind out of her. It felt like hitting a wall of solid gelatin. It gave, but it didn't break. She clawed at the air, the Heartstone searing her skin now. "Open," she gasped. "Let me in." The slapping sounds stopped. The silence returned, heavier than before. Aurora turned, her back pressed against the yielding, impenetrable barrier of the Grove. She pointed her light into the dark. Ten feet away, something pale crouched on all fours. It had the body of a man, long and emaciated, but its limbs were multi-jointed, bending in places they shouldn't. It wore the head of a stag like a mask, the dead skin draped loosely over its own unseen face. The mask's jaw hung open, limp and rotted. "Found you," the thing whispered, using her own voice. Aurora scrambled sideways, her fingers digging into the bark of the standing stone. The barrier behind her rippled, refusing to admit her. The thing on the ground twitched, its shoulder dislocating with a wet pop to allow it to reach further. It didn't lunge. It just watched, savoring the distance. "Isolde!" Aurora screamed, hammering her fist against the empty air between the stones. "Open the damn door!" The creature rose to its hind legs. It stood seven feet tall, blocking out the pale moon. It raised a hand—fingers too long, too many joints—and pointed a single digit at her chest, right at the glowing crimson pendant. "Mine," it rasped.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.529
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1258
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"loosely"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"loosely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1258
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count2
4
word"navigating"
count1
5
word"fractured"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count2
10
word"lilt"
count1
11
word"loomed"
count1
12
word"shimmered"
count1
13
word"sanctuary"
count1
14
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"rhythmic"
3"warmth"
4"navigating"
5"fractured"
6"footsteps"
7"echo"
8"perfect"
9"familiar"
10"lilt"
11"loomed"
12"shimmered"
13"sanctuary"
14"searing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences134
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords4
totalWords1247
ratio0.003
matches
0"Crunch."
1"Crunch."
2"Crunch."
3"thump"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.83% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1200
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.08
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Pembroke1
Lodge1
Carter1
London1
Richmond2
Park1
Heathrow1
South1
Circular1
Heartstone4
Codex1
Grove3
Panic1
Evan1
Aurora13
Isolde1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Codex"
3"Evan"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Pembroke"
1"London"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"South"
5"Grove"
6"Isolde"
globalScore0.958
windowScore1
33.72% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like a screaming mouth; a broken b"
1"looked like skin, a patch of fog that res"
2"sounded like wet palms slapping against pa"
3"felt like hitting a wall of solid gelat"
39.62% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.604
wordCount1247
matches
0"not from the temperature, but from the sudden isolation"
1"Not all at once, but systematically, as if an invisible weight were walking towar"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean21.5
std16.77
cv0.78
sampleLengths
041
151
244
326
423
561
63
713
847
915
101
1149
1261
1314
144
159
162
171
1812
1910
2038
211
2222
235
247
2536
2610
2728
2826
295
3045
3114
3213
339
343
3543
3617
3726
3820
3912
4045
4127
4211
4312
4424
4539
4617
474
486
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences134
matches
0"was fixed"
1"were multi-jointed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs200
matches
0"were walking"
1"weren't grazing"
2"were waiting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences141
ratio0.064
matches
0"Usually, the hum of London bled into Richmond Park—the distant drone of Heathrow, the sirens from the South Circular, the endless murmur of the city."
1"It wasn't just the absence of light; it was a physical presence that swallowed the beam of her small flashlight after only a few yards."
2"In the harsh LED light, a hollow in a trunk looked like a screaming mouth; a broken branch resembled a fractured limb."
3"The wildflowers that the Codex spoke of—the ones that bloomed year-round in the Grove—were visible now, but they looked wrong."
4"Its eyes reflected the torchlight—two burning orbs of reflective green."
5"The cadence was familiar—too familiar."
6"The voice was different this time—Aurora's mother, but warped, the pitch stretched thin as wire."
7"The flashlight beam bounced wildly, illuminating flashes of terror—a tree trunk that looked like skin, a patch of fog that resembled a reaching hand."
8"It raised a hand—fingers too long, too many joints—and pointed a single digit at her chest, right at the glowing crimson pendant."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1211
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.027250206440957887
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007431874483897605
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean8.84
std5.86
cv0.663
sampleLengths
011
121
29
325
45
521
614
75
825
98
1013
115
123
139
1411
155
1612
1717
1815
1912
203
212
2211
237
2418
2522
262
2713
281
291
303
3110
3215
3320
345
3510
3620
3711
3815
393
4011
414
427
432
442
451
464
471
486
491
40.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.3262411347517731
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences118
matches
0"Usually, the hum of London"
1"Then, a second crunch."
2"Then, the grass depressed."
3"Then she saw the others."
ratio0.034
67.46% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences118
matches
0"Her boots hit the earth"
1"It rushed in to fill"
2"She adjusted her jacket, shivering"
3"It wasn't just the absence"
4"She pushed through the bracken."
5"She kept her eyes on"
6"Her phone showed midnight, but"
7"She spun, bringing the flashlight"
8"Her own breath created small"
9"She clenched her jaw and"
10"She scratched at the crescent-shaped"
11"She walked faster."
12"It came half a beat"
13"She took a step."
14"She whipped around again, the"
15"She backed away, keeping the"
16"Her voice cracked"
17"It stood perfectly broadside, its"
18"Its eyes reflected the torchlight—two"
19"It didn't blink."
ratio0.381
27.80% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount102
totalSentences118
matches
0"Mist clung to the iron"
1"Aurora Carter vaulted the metal,"
2"Her boots hit the earth"
3"Tonight, the silence was absolute."
4"It rushed in to fill"
5"She adjusted her jacket, shivering"
6"The darkness here had weight."
7"It wasn't just the absence"
8"Aurora checked the silver chain"
9"The Heartstone pendant rested against"
10"A heartbeat that wasn't hers."
11"The word died instantly, absorbed"
12"She pushed through the bracken."
13"Ferns brushed against her denim"
14"She kept her eyes on"
15"Her phone showed midnight, but"
16"The moon hung low and"
17"A twig snapped."
18"She spun, bringing the flashlight"
19"Nothing but ancient oaks and"
ratio0.864
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
ratio0
72.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"It wasn't just the absence of light; it was a physical presence that swallowed the beam of her small flashlight after only a few yards."
1"The wildflowers that the Codex spoke of—the ones that bloomed year-round in the Grove—were visible now, but they looked wrong."
2"Not all at once, but systematically, as if an invisible weight were walking toward her."
3"The flashlight beam bounced wildly, illuminating flashes of terror—a tree trunk that looked like skin, a patch of fog that resembled a reaching hand."
4"She abandoned the path, sprinting toward the cluster of ancient oak standing stones that marked the true entrance to Isolde's domain."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"The voice screamed (scream)"
3"she gasped (gasp)"
4"the thing whispered (whisper)"
5"Aurora screamed (scream)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.412
leniency0.824
rawRatio0.857
effectiveRatio0.706
75.0898%