| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The sibilant stretched obscenely [obscenely]" | | 1 | "It sounded almost [almost]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0.133 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 82.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1419 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loosely" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.62% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1419 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "depths" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "marble" | | 7 | "blown wide" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "disrupted" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "sanctuary" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1417 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1114 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.9 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 5 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Hel | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Unless | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | English | 1 | | Standing | 1 | | Aurora | 10 | | Movement | 1 | | Amusement | 1 | | Silence | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Standing" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Amusement" | | 6 | "Silence" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Hel" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 50.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like pushing through warm water, a" | | 1 | "felt like nothing at all" | | 2 | "throb that seemed to match her accelerating pulse" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1417 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 60 | | mean | 23.62 | | std | 17.55 | | cv | 0.743 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 54 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 57 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 51 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 59 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 47 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 49 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 48 | | 45 | 55 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 98.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "were assembled" | | 1 | "were made" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 184 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 122 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "Time moved strangely here; this body might have lain undiscovered for days in the outside world, or mere minutes." |
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| 95.80% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1116 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.044802867383512544 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01971326164874552 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 122 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 122 | | mean | 11.61 | | std | 8.53 | | cv | 0.734 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 74.04% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.48360655737704916 | | totalSentences | 122 | | uniqueOpeners | 59 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead they stood mute and" | | 1 | "Then, from behind the altar:" | | 2 | "Completely, unnaturally still, like a" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd visited Isolde's grove a" | | 1 | "Her voice came out smaller" | | 2 | "She stepped through." | | 3 | "Their perfume hung thick enough" | | 4 | "She kept her voice steady" | | 5 | "She pushed that thought down" | | 6 | "She stumbled, caught herself against" | | 7 | "She dropped to her knees" | | 8 | "She pressed two fingers against" | | 9 | "Her hand found the knife" | | 10 | "She'd carried it every day" | | 11 | "She noticed it now." | | 12 | "It spoke English, but the" | | 13 | "She forced herself not to" | | 14 | "Her voice came out steadier" | | 15 | "It stood roughly human-shaped, if" | | 16 | "It moved closer, and the" | | 17 | "It sounded almost pleased" | | 18 | "She pressed her palm flat" | | 19 | "She rose slowly, knife held" |
| | ratio | 0.215 | |
| 99.78% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed darker" | | 1 | "Aurora pressed her palm against" | | 2 | "She'd visited Isolde's grove a" | | 3 | "The fae had assured her" | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant against her" | | 5 | "Something was stirring near a" | | 6 | "The boundary stones should have" | | 7 | "Her voice came out smaller" | | 8 | "The grove beyond the stones" | | 9 | "She stepped through." | | 10 | "The transition usually felt like" | | 11 | "Tonight it felt like nothing" | | 12 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in" | | 13 | "Their perfume hung thick enough" | | 14 | "The pendant flared hot against" | | 15 | "Aurora grabbed it through her" | | 16 | "She kept her voice steady" | | 17 | "She pushed that thought down" | | 18 | "The grove's centre held a" | | 19 | "Isolde usually received visitors here," |
| | ratio | 0.72 | |
| 53.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it reminded her of" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant against her collarbone had been burning since Tuesday, its crimson depths pulsing with a rhythm that matched no heartbeat she recognised." | | 1 | "Something was stirring near a Hel portal, and the only person who might know which one had gone silent." | | 2 | "The transition usually felt like pushing through warm water, a gentle resistance that parted around her body and left her skin tingling with residual magic." | | 3 | "Aurora grabbed it through her shirt, hissing at the burn, and the warmth subsided to a steady throb that seemed to match her accelerating pulse." | | 4 | "Slender fingers curled loosely against the grass, attached to an arm that disappeared into the wildflowers." | | 5 | "Iron burned fae flesh, disrupted fae magic, offered protection against creatures that laughed at steel." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |