Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYW1F08BES6YHM1DKHFY65

Run Details

Duration:
32.6s
Cost:
$0.003385
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door to The Raven's Nest groaned open, a slice of rainy London night slicing through the warm, dim interior. A gust of wind carried the smell of wet asphalt and street food inside before the heavy door swung shut, plunging the bar back into its comfortable gloom. Silas Blackwood looked up from polishing a glass, his hazel eyes taking in the new arrival. A woman, shaking water from a black jacket, her hair plastered to her forehead. He placed the glass on the bar, its base making a soft, definite sound. She moved towards the bar, her steps sure despite the slick floor. The low light caught the side of her face, the straight line of her dark hair. She slid onto a stool a few down from the only other patron, a man hunched over a newspaper at the far end of the bar. The air hummed with the quiet jazz drifting from hidden speakers. “What can I get you?” Silas’s voice was a low rumble, smooth as the aged whiskey he kept on the top shelf. The woman pushed her wet hair back from her face. “Just a whiskey. Whatever you recommend.” She didn’t look at him, not at first. Her gaze swept the room, taking in the old maps tacked to the dark wood walls, the black-and-white photographs of long-dead people in forgotten places. It was a museum of someone else’s life. Then her eyes settled on the bar, on the man standing behind it. Her breath hitched, a tiny, almost imperceptible sound. Silas had already turned to grab a bottle, his movements practiced and economical. He set a heavy tumbler on the polished wood and poured a measure of amber liquid. When he turned back, he found her staring. Not at the drink, but at him. Her face, a moment ago open and weary, was now a mask of disbelief. “Silas?” He froze, the bottle still in his hand. Her voice. It was different, older, but it was hers. He let his gaze truly focus on her for the first time, past the rain-soaked traveller to the person beneath. The bright blue eyes. The sharp intelligence in them. He hadn’t heard that name, his real name, spoken in that tone in over a decade. Only Rory had ever called him that. “Rory Carter.” He set the bottle down with a click. “As I live and breathe. I heard you’d run off to the big city.” A small, tight smile touched her lips. “Not much of a run. More of a stumble. You… you own this place?” “I do. The Raven’s Nest. Suits me, don’t you think?” He gestured vaguely at the walls, at the shadows clinging to the corners. “It’s quieter than the old life.” “The old life.” She repeated the words, her gaze dropping to the glass of whiskey. “Is that what we’re calling it now?” “It’s what I call it.” He pushed the glass towards her. “On the house. For old times’ sake.” She wrapped her fingers around the tumbler, the condensation cool against her skin. “I’m not sure the old times are worth celebrating.” “Maybe not. But they’re worth remembering.” He leaned against the back bar, his bad leg a dull ache. He watched her take a sip, her eyes closing for a second. The scar on her left wrist, a tiny crescent moon, was visible as she held the glass. He remembered the day she got it, falling from a tree in his back garden, trying to prove she could climb as high as any boy. She’d been eight. She hadn’t cried. Just held up her bleeding arm and said, “Well, that was stupid.” She opened her eyes. “You look… different.” “So do you.” He let the statement hang in the air between them. The last time he’d seen her, she was a gangly nineteen-year-old with a fire in her belly and a law school acceptance letter she didn’t want. A girl who was running from something, even then. Now, sitting in his bar, she was a woman. The fire was still there, but it was banked, controlled. “I heard about Prague,” she said softly. “I’m sorry, Si.” He gave a slight shrug, his hand instinctively going to his left knee. “Hazard of the job. You learn to walk with a limp or you don’t walk at all. What’s your excuse?” Her knuckles whitened around the glass. “Life, I suppose. It has a way of… reshaping you.” “Does it now?” He didn’t press. He knew better. In his old line of work, information was a currency you spent carefully. You didn’t demand it; you waited for it to be offered. She took another, longer drink of the whiskey. “I left Cardiff. For good this time.” “I know. Eva told me.” Rory flinched at the mention of their mutual friend. “Of course she did. She always did like to keep tabs on me for you.” There was an edge to her voice now, a bitterness that hadn’t been there a moment ago. “She was worried. We both were.” Silas’s tone remained level. “You just… vanished. After Evan.” The name landed like a stone in the quiet space. Evan. The boy who had seemed so charming, so devoted. The man whose shadow had followed Rory out of the city. Rory stared into her glass, the amber liquid swirling. “He’s gone now.” “Good.” “It wasn’t… clean.” Her voice was barely a whisper. “Nothing about it was clean.” Silas said nothing. He just watched her, the weight of the years settling in the space between them. He remembered teaching her how to pick a lock, how to read a person’s tells in a crowded room, how to blend into a wall. He’d seen a raw talent in her, a mind that worked in angles no one else considered. He’d thought she was meant for more than law school, more than a quiet life in Cardiff. He’d encouraged her restlessness, her desire for something bigger. He wondered, now, if he had made a terrible mistake. “I work for a restaurant,” she said, breaking the silence. “Delivery. It’s mindless. I like that.” “I can imagine.” He thought of the files he used to read, the complex webs of deceit he used to navigate. Mindless sounded like a blessing. “You live around here?” “Upstairs.” She nodded towards the ceiling. “Flat above the bar. Eva found it for me. Said it was a good neighbourhood. Safe.” A humourless smile touched Silas’s lips. Safe. The word was a joke in his world. His bar was a beacon for people like him, people who lived in the grey spaces between right and wrong. A sanctuary, perhaps, but never safe. “It’s good to see you, Rory,” he said, and he meant it. Even with the shadows in her eyes, even with the hard set of her jaw, it was good. It was a piece of his past he hadn’t realised he missed. She finally looked at him, really looked at him, her bright blue eyes searching his. “You too, Silas. You look… settled.” “Settled is a good word for it.” He ran a hand over his auburn hair, now threaded with grey. “This is my kingdom now. Small. Quiet. No one gets shot.” “Most days.” Her gaze drifted to the bookshelf that covered the back wall, the one that didn’t quite sit flush with the floor. She knew about the room behind it. He’d shown her once, when she was young and fascinated by his secrets. He saw the recognition in her eyes and felt a pang of something sharp and unwelcome. Regret. “Some things don’t change.” “No.” She finished her whiskey and set the glass down on the bar with a soft thud. “Some things just get better at hiding.” She stood up, pulling her jacket tighter around her. “I should go. Let you get back to your kingdom.” “Rory.” He stopped her before she could turn away. “If you ever need anything.” She paused, her back to him. For a long moment, she didn’t move. The jazz swelled, a lonely saxophone filling the silence. Then she turned her head slightly, her profile sharp in the dim light. “I know where to find you.” She gave him a final, fleeting glance. “It’s good to know some things really don’t change.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.08
78.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1395
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count2
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"softly"
2"carefully"
3"really"
4"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1395
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"comfortable"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"desire"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"complex"
count1
7
word"navigate"
count1
8
word"beacon"
count1
9
word"sanctuary"
count1
10
word"pang"
count1
11
word"fleeting"
count1
highlights
0"comfortable"
1"gloom"
2"whisper"
3"weight"
4"desire"
5"silence"
6"complex"
7"navigate"
8"beacon"
9"sanctuary"
10"pang"
11"fleeting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1389
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1084
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.55
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Blackwood1
Rory4
Silas6
Cardiff1
Mindless1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Blackwood"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Mindless"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed so charming so devoted"
1"quite sit flush with the floor"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.72
wordCount1389
matches
0"Not at the drink, but at him"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences127
matches
0"heard that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean31.57
std23.56
cv0.746
sampleLengths
092
165
222
316
462
558
61
770
824
921
1029
1122
1218
1322
1491
157
1667
1710
1833
1916
2033
2115
225
2341
2415
2531
2612
271
2814
2996
3016
3130
3222
3341
3442
3521
3630
3743
3821
3924
4019
4114
4235
4322
98.17% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"was banked"
1"was meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs165
matches
0"was running"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences127
ratio0.008
matches
0"You didn’t demand it; you waited for it to be offered."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1090
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.031192660550458717
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.012844036697247707
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean10.94
std6.4
cv0.585
sampleLengths
020
128
216
314
414
512
616
726
811
922
1010
116
128
1325
148
1513
168
1713
1816
198
207
2114
221
238
242
258
2620
274
285
2916
307
3110
3214
337
3414
3523
366
3715
387
3911
407
4113
429
4318
4412
4517
4626
473
483
4912
50.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3543307086614173
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences95
matches
0"Then her eyes settled on"
1"Only Rory had ever called"
2"Just held up her bleeding"
3"Then she turned her head"
ratio0.042
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences95
matches
0"He placed the glass on"
1"She moved towards the bar,"
2"She slid onto a stool"
3"She didn’t look at him,"
4"Her gaze swept the room,"
5"It was a museum of"
6"Her breath hitched, a tiny,"
7"He set a heavy tumbler"
8"Her face, a moment ago"
9"He froze, the bottle still"
10"It was different, older, but"
11"He let his gaze truly"
12"He hadn’t heard that name,"
13"He set the bottle down"
14"He gestured vaguely at the"
15"She repeated the words, her"
16"He pushed the glass towards"
17"She wrapped her fingers around"
18"He leaned against the back"
19"He watched her take a"
ratio0.589
23.16% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences95
matches
0"The door to The Raven's"
1"A gust of wind carried"
2"Silas Blackwood looked up from"
3"A woman, shaking water from"
4"He placed the glass on"
5"She moved towards the bar,"
6"The low light caught the"
7"She slid onto a stool"
8"The air hummed with the"
9"Silas’s voice was a low"
10"The woman pushed her wet"
11"She didn’t look at him,"
12"Her gaze swept the room,"
13"It was a museum of"
14"Her breath hitched, a tiny,"
15"Silas had already turned to"
16"He set a heavy tumbler"
17"Her face, a moment ago"
18"He froze, the bottle still"
19"It was different, older, but"
ratio0.874
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"Now, sitting in his bar,"
1"Even with the shadows in"
ratio0.021
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She repeated, her gaze dropping to the glass of whiskey"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She repeated (repeat)"
1"her bleeding (bleed)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.08
89.7550%