Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYW1RS26RJXRTPSHSMNN11

Run Details

Duration:
30.6s
Cost:
$0.028686
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open, and Aurora froze mid-knock. Lucien stood in the threshold of Eva's flat, one hand on the doorframe, the other gripping that damned ivory-handled cane. His mismatched eyes—amber and black—locked onto hers with an intensity that drove the air from her lungs. He wore a charcoal waistcoat over rolled shirtsleeves, the top button undone. She'd never seen him this dishevelled. "Rory." Just her name. Not a question, not a greeting. Something heavier. "Where's Eva?" The words came out sharper than she intended, but her heart hammered against her ribs and she needed distance, needed space to think without the scent of his cologne—bergamot and something darker—clouding her judgment. "Amsterdam. Research trip." He stepped aside, his movements fluid despite the cane. "I'm minding Ptolemy." As if summoned, the tabby appeared between Lucien's ankles, tail high. Aurora's delivery bag dug into her shoulder. She'd come straight from the Golden Empress after her shift, still smelling of fried rice and the February drizzle that had soaked through her jacket. Three weeks since she'd last seen him. Three weeks since he'd kissed her in the alley behind Silas' bar, then vanished without explanation when she'd pulled away to breathe. "I brought Eva's usual from Yu-Fei's." She lifted the bag. "Mapo tofu and spring rolls." "She won't be back until Tuesday." "Right. Well." Aurora turned toward the stairs. "The food will spoil." She stopped. Closed her eyes. Counted to five because ten seemed excessive. "Are you hungry?" His accent wrapped around the words, French vowels bleeding through the English consonants. "No." "Liar." Her fingers tightened on the bag's strap. "You know what? Fine. I haven't eaten since breakfast and I'm knackered. But we're not doing this." She gestured between them as she pushed past him into the cluttered flat. "Whatever this is." "Whatever this is," he repeated, closing the door. All three deadbolts clicked home. "You'll have to be more specific." Books and scrolls covered every surface—the sofa, the coffee table, stacked against the walls. Aurora navigated the familiar chaos toward the kitchenette, hyperaware of Lucien's presence behind her. He moved quietly for someone who carried a cane, though she suspected he leaned on it less from necessity and more from the blade hidden inside. "I'll be specific." She set the bag down harder than needed. "We're not going to talk about what happened." "Nothing happened." She spun around. He stood in the kitchenette entrance, blocking it with his lean frame. The overhead light caught the platinum of his hair, made his eyes gleam. "Exactly. Nothing happened because I stopped it." "You stopped it," he agreed. His gaze dropped to her mouth. "Very sensible." "Don't patronize me." "I'm agreeing with you." "You're being an arsehole." Something flickered across his face—amusement or irritation, she couldn't tell. Ptolemy wound between his legs again, purring loud enough to hear across the small space. Traitor cat. Aurora pulled containers from the bag, focused on the mundane task of opening lids and finding clean plates in Eva's disastrous kitchen. Her hands trembled slightly. She hoped he wouldn't notice. "You've been avoiding the Rose & Thorn." His voice came from directly behind her now. "I've been busy." "Silas mentioned you stopped coming to the Thursday gatherings." She grabbed plates from the cabinet, china clinking. "Since when do you and Silas chat about my schedule?" "Since you disappeared." "I didn't disappear. I've been working. Some of us have jobs that don't involve selling information to the highest bidder." The words landed like stones in still water. She regretted them immediately but wouldn't take them back. Couldn't. Silence stretched between them, broken only by Ptolemy's continued purring and the distant sounds of the curry house below preparing for dinner service. "You think very little of what I do." His tone remained neutral, but she heard the edge underneath. "I think you're brilliant at what you do." She turned to face him, plate in each hand like shields. "I think you're dangerous and connected and you know things about the supernatural world that most people couldn't dream of. I also think you use that cane to intimidate people who already fear you." His mouth curved—not quite a smile. "And you? Do you fear me?" The question hung between them, weighted with memories. His hands in her hair. Her back against brick. The taste of wine on his lips and the way he'd whispered her name like a prayer or a curse. "No." "Perhaps you should." "Is that a threat?" "A warning." He shifted his weight, the cane tapping once against the linoleum. "I'm not—" He stopped, jaw tightening. Started again. "You were right to stop it." Aurora set the plates down. Her throat felt tight. "Why did you kiss me?" "Why did you kiss me back?" "Don't answer my question with a question. You're better than that." He looked away, toward the window where rain had begun streaking the glass. The streetlights of Brick Lane cast orange shadows across his sharp features. When he spoke again, his voice had lost its careful control. "Because I've wanted to since the moment you walked into the Rose & Thorn covered in mud and demon ichor, demanding to know if anyone had seen Eva. Because you looked at me like I was human instead of something to be bartered with or feared. Because you're the first person in a decade who's called me Luc without asking permission first." The confession stripped something raw between them. Aurora's breath caught. "Lucien—" "But you were also right." He met her eyes again, and she saw something she'd never seen in him before—uncertainty. "I can't give you what you need. My father is a demon lord. My business puts me at odds with creatures who would use you to get to me. And I have no practice at being good." "Good at what?" "At this. At caring for someone enough that their safety matters more than the information they can provide." Aurora crossed the small distance between them. She didn't touch him, not yet, but stood close enough to see the pulse at his throat, to count the silver threads in his platinum hair. "Did Eva put you up to watching her flat, or did you volunteer?" His lips twitched. "I volunteered." "Why?" "Because I knew you'd come by. Because I'm a selfish bastard who wanted to see you even though walking away would be kinder." "Maybe I don't want kind." Her hand moved to his chest, fingers spreading over the silk of his waistcoat. His heart beat rabbit-fast beneath her palm. "Maybe I want honest." "Honest?" The word came out rough. His free hand rose to cup her face, thumb tracing her cheekbone. "Honestly, you terrify me." "Good." She tilted her face up, her lips a breath from his. "Now we're even."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He stepped aside [aside]"
1"His accent wrapped around [around]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.317
leniency0.633
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.067
86.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1147
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1147
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"navigated"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"navigated"
2"familiar"
3"flickered"
4"trembled"
5"silence"
6"weight"
7"pulse"
8"silk"
9"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1135
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount690
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora8
Eva2
Lucien3
Golden1
Empress1
February1
French1
English1
Ptolemy2
Started1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
places
0"Golden"
1"English"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore0.92
windowScore1
47.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed excessive"
1"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.881
wordCount1135
matches
0"not yet, but stood close enough to see the pulse at his throat, to count"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean18.02
std16.3
cv0.905
sampleLengths
08
155
21
311
436
515
611
761
815
96
107
114
1212
1316
141
151
1640
1719
1854
1919
202
2128
227
2313
243
254
264
2727
2831
2915
303
319
3218
333
3420
3518
3623
3718
3853
3912
4037
411
423
434
4427
4514
466
4711
4836
4962
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs114
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences114
ratio0.053
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—amber and black—locked onto hers with an intensity that drove the air from her lungs."
1"\"Where's Eva?\" The words came out sharper than she intended, but her heart hammered against her ribs and she needed distance, needed space to think without the scent of his cologne—bergamot and something darker—clouding her judgment."
2"Books and scrolls covered every surface—the sofa, the coffee table, stacked against the walls."
3"Something flickered across his face—amusement or irritation, she couldn't tell."
4"His mouth curved—not quite a smile."
5"\"But you were also right.\" He met her eyes again, and she saw something she'd never seen in him before—uncertainty."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount503
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"damned ivory-handled cane."
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.027833001988071572
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean9.96
std9.27
cv0.931
sampleLengths
08
120
217
312
46
51
63
76
82
936
1012
113
1211
137
1425
157
1622
1710
185
196
207
214
222
233
247
2516
261
271
287
2930
303
318
325
336
3414
3514
3626
3711
388
392
403
4112
4213
437
445
456
462
473
484
494
74.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.47368421052631576
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners54
50.51% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Just her name."
ratio0.015
1.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences66
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—amber and black—locked"
1"He wore a charcoal waistcoat"
2"She'd never seen him this"
3"He stepped aside, his movements"
4"She'd come straight from the"
5"She lifted the bag"
6"His accent wrapped around the"
7"Her fingers tightened on the"
8"She gestured between them as"
9"he repeated, closing the door"
10"He moved quietly for someone"
11"She set the bag down"
12"She spun around."
13"He stood in the kitchenette"
14"His gaze dropped to her"
15"Her hands trembled slightly."
16"She hoped he wouldn't notice."
17"His voice came from directly"
18"She grabbed plates from the"
19"She regretted them immediately but"
ratio0.545
28.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences66
matches
0"The door swung open, and"
1"Lucien stood in the threshold"
2"His mismatched eyes—amber and black—locked"
3"He wore a charcoal waistcoat"
4"She'd never seen him this"
5"The words came out sharper"
6"He stepped aside, his movements"
7"Aurora's delivery bag dug into"
8"She'd come straight from the"
9"She lifted the bag"
10"Aurora turned toward the stairs"
11"His accent wrapped around the"
12"Her fingers tightened on the"
13"She gestured between them as"
14"he repeated, closing the door"
15"Books and scrolls covered every"
16"Aurora navigated the familiar chaos"
17"He moved quietly for someone"
18"She set the bag down"
19"She spun around."
ratio0.864
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"As if summoned, the tabby"
ratio0.015
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—amber and black—locked onto hers with an intensity that drove the air from her lungs."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"The words came out, but her heart hammered against her ribs and she needed distance, needed space to think without the scent of his cologne—bergamot and something darker—clouding her judgment"
1"He shifted, the cane tapping once against the linoleum"
2"He stopped, jaw tightening"
3"Her hand moved, fingers spreading over the silk of his waistcoat"
4"She tilted, her lips a breath from his"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.033
leniency0.067
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.067
80.2714%