Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYW27ZFYYK5NV85GWWNQF9

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Duration:
54.0s
Cost:
$0.002867
Provider:
Novita

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning the cobblestones of Soho into a river of reflected light. Detective Harlow Quinn ran. Her boots splashed through puddles that had formed in the uneven pavement, water soaking through the cuffs of her trousers. Eighteen years on the force had taught her to pace herself, but the figure ahead ducked into the alley between the shuttered pawn shop and the abandoned textile warehouse, and she pushed harder. She'd been tailing Marcus Webb for three weeks. Low-level enforcer for a operation that moved magical artifacts through the city. Not her usual fare, but DS Morris had been looking into something similar before he died, and Quinn had found his notes buried in a cold case file. The supernatural element she still didn't fully understand. But the pattern was there—bodies found with strange markings, shipments that appeared and disappeared from locked warehouses, a network that operated in shadows most people didn't know existed. The suspect vanished into the darkness of the alley. Quinn slowed, pulling her torch from her coat pocket. The beam cut through the rain, illuminating brick walls slick with moisture, a rusted fire escape hanging at an angle that suggested it hadn't been used in decades. No sign of Webb. She moved forward, each step deliberate, her hand resting on the baton at her hip. A sound to her left. The scrape of shoe on metal. She pivoted. The torch followed the noise to a cellar door, hanging open, a set of stairs descending into blackness. Cold air rushed up from below, carrying a smell she couldn't place—something herbal, something ancient, something that made the hairs on her arms stand up. Her radio crackled. "Quinn, status." She keyed the transmitter. "Lost him, down a cellar. Could be a safe house. Standing by." "Backup is twelve minutes out." Twelve minutes. The suspect would be long gone by then. She looked back at the alley, then at the stairs. The rational part of her brain—the part that had kept her alive through eighteen years of London's worst—screamed at her to wait. This wasn't her territory. Whatever was down there, it wasn't the kind of crime she had training for. But another part of her, the part that still saw Morris's face in her dreams, the part that couldn't let go of the feeling that his death had been more than a random tragedy, pushed her forward. Quinn descended. The stairs were stone, older than the buildings above. Her torch flickered, then steadied. At the bottom, a corridor stretched ahead, lit by candles set into niches in the wall. The architecture was wrong—arched ceilings, walls lined with symbols she didn't recognize, the faint hum of something electrical despite the ancient appearance. She rounded a corner and stopped. The space opened into a vast underground market. Stalls stretched in rows beneath lanterns that burned with flameless light, their glow shifting between blue and amber. Vendors called out in languages she didn't understand—some throaty, some melodic, some sounding like nothing human at all. Potions in colored bottles. Stacks of books with covers that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly. Cages of creatures she couldn't identify. A woman with silver hair and eyes like mirrors haggling over what appeared to be a human tooth. The Veil Market. She'd heard whispers of it in interrogation rooms, dismissed as the ravings of drug-addled witnesses. But here it was, real, alive, and she had walked right into it. Her suspect stood at a stall twenty meters ahead, speaking urgently to a gaunt man with tattoos running up his neck. He hadn't seen her yet. Quinn moved along the edge of the market, keeping to the shadows between stalls. Her heart hammered against her ribs. A child with too many joints walked past, staring at her with eyes that reflected no light. She didn't react. Didn't break stride. The training held. Webb turned, scanning the market. His gaze swept over her position. She pressed herself against a curtain of beads hanging from a neighboring stall, the beads biting into her cheek. He moved. Deeper into the market, toward an exit on the far side. If he reached the exit, she'd lose him completely. Backup was still eight minutes out. Eight minutes in this place felt like eight hours. She followed. The market shifted around her. Stalls gave way to narrow passages, then opened again into different sections—a food court where the meat on spits sizzled with an iridescent sheen, a gaming den where figures hunched over tables playing cards that glowed, an auction house where a crowd gathered around a raised platform displaying a glass orb that seemed to contain a storm. Webb was fast. He knew this place. He'd navigated it before. Quinn pushed harder, her lungs burning. A figure stepped into her path—tall, skeletal, wearing a coat made of what looked like crow feathers. "Human," the figure said, its voice like wind through dead leaves. "You do not belong here." "Police." She held up her warrant card, the laminated photo barely visible in the strange light. "Following a suspect." The figure tilted its head, considering. "The constabulary does not enforce laws here. This is neutral ground." "Which makes it a perfect place for criminals to hide." A pause. The figure stepped aside. "Walk carefully, detective. The Veil has teeth." She didn't wait to ask what that meant. Webb had reached the far exit—a door set into the stone, covered in the same strange symbols as the walls. He grabbed the handle. Quinn was fifteen meters away. Ten. He pulled the door open. Light spilled through, street light, ordinary light, the rain she could hear falling on the other side. She lunged. Her hand caught the edge of the door as it swung shut. She threw her weight forward, forcing it open again. Webb stood on the other side, rain falling on his face, the street beyond empty and real. "Stop, Police!" He ran. The decision came in a fraction of a second. On one side, the exit, the familiar world of rain and streetlights and backup units that would arrive in six minutes. On the other, deeper into this impossible place, further from anything she understood. Quinn stepped through the door. The street was narrower here, older. The buildings rose on either side like cliffs, their windows dark. A sign flickered above a door ahead—green neon, distinctive. The Raven's Nest. She'd heard that name before. Webb disappeared around a corner. She followed. The rain soaked her through. Her boots struck cobblestones worn smooth by centuries of feet. Somewhere above, a church bell rang—the hour, she couldn't tell, the sound distorted as if coming from very far away. A door ahead opened. Light spilled out, warm and yellow, and a man stepped out. He was olive-skinned, dark curly hair, wearing a worn jacket. He held a bag in one hand and a Saint Christopher medallion around his neck caught the light. Tomás Herrera. Former paramedic. The name surfaced from the files she'd read, from the rumors about someone who treated the supernatural community when no one else would. He saw her. Saw the badge. Saw the gun. "Police," she said, breathing hard. "Did you see a man run past? Dark jacket, shorter hair?" Herrera studied her for a moment. His eyes moved to the street behind her, then back to her face. "You're out of your depth," he said. It wasn't a question. "I need to find that suspect." "The Veil Market is not a place for your kind. The people down there—they don't respect your authority. They have their own rules." "I'm aware." "Are you?" He took a step closer. "Because what you're doing, following someone into territory you don't understand—that's how people disappear. I've seen it happen. Good people, people who thought they were doing the right thing." Quinn thought of Morris. His notes, his obsession with the supernatural, the case that had consumed him until he was found in an alley with no explanation, no suspects, no answers. "My partner died trying to understand this world," she said. "I'm not going to stop because it's dangerous." A long silence. The rain fell between them. Herrera sighed. "The Raven's Nest. That's where he'll go if he's smart. It's a bar, run by a man named Silas. Neutral ground, but Silas knows everyone. If you want to find your suspect, you go through him." He pointed to the green neon sign. "Go in the front door. Ask for Silas. Be careful what you say—the people in there, they can smell fear. And detective?" He met her eyes. "Whatever you find down there, remember that not everything is what it seems." She nodded once and walked toward the door. Behind her, Herrera's voice called out, "The entrance to the Veil is three streets east, behind the Indian restaurant. If you need an exit, that's your way back." The door opened. Warmth and noise spilled out. Quinn stepped inside.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:44:20.103Z" 2/19/2026, 12:44:20 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.32
leniency0.64
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1517
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"carefully"
2"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1517
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pawn"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"navigated"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"pawn"
1"flickered"
2"scanning"
3"navigated"
4"perfect"
5"weight"
6"familiar"
7"silence"
8"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences128
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences145
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1500
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1253
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.8
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn10
Marcus1
Webb7
Morris3
London1
Veil1
Market1
Raven1
Nest1
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera4
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Marcus"
3"Webb"
4"Morris"
5"Market"
6"Raven"
7"Saint"
8"Christopher"
9"Herrera"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"covers that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly"
1"felt like eight hours"
2"orb that seemed to contain a storm"
3"looked like crow feathers"
4"as if coming from very far away"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.667
wordCount1500
matches
0"Not her usual fare, but DS Morris had been looking into something similar before he"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences145
matches
0"feeling that his"
1"heard that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean23.08
std21.48
cv0.931
sampleLengths
074
184
29
356
411
545
65
716
85
910
1087
112
1252
136
1487
1531
1626
1746
1830
1913
2024
212
2262
2311
2423
2516
2619
2717
2810
296
307
318
3224
336
3422
352
3638
372
382
3943
405
4134
425
432
4435
4543
4627
479
4816
4919
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences128
matches
0"been used"
1"was found"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs212
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences145
ratio0.069
matches
0"But the pattern was there—bodies found with strange markings, shipments that appeared and disappeared from locked warehouses, a network that operated in shadows most people didn't know existed."
1"Cold air rushed up from below, carrying a smell she couldn't place—something herbal, something ancient, something that made the hairs on her arms stand up."
2"The rational part of her brain—the part that had kept her alive through eighteen years of London's worst—screamed at her to wait."
3"The architecture was wrong—arched ceilings, walls lined with symbols she didn't recognize, the faint hum of something electrical despite the ancient appearance."
4"Vendors called out in languages she didn't understand—some throaty, some melodic, some sounding like nothing human at all."
5"Stalls gave way to narrow passages, then opened again into different sections—a food court where the meat on spits sizzled with an iridescent sheen, a gaming den where figures hunched over tables playing cards that glowed, an auction house where a crowd gathered around a raised platform displaying a glass orb that seemed to contain a storm."
6"A figure stepped into her path—tall, skeletal, wearing a coat made of what looked like crow feathers."
7"Webb had reached the far exit—a door set into the stone, covered in the same strange symbols as the walls."
8"A sign flickered above a door ahead—green neon, distinctive."
9"Somewhere above, a church bell rang—the hour, she couldn't tell, the sound distorted as if coming from very far away."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1267
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.026045777426992895
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004735595895816891
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences145
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences145
mean10.34
std8.87
cv0.857
sampleLengths
017
14
220
333
48
512
628
78
828
99
109
1128
124
1315
145
156
162
1718
1825
193
202
214
2212
235
242
258
2610
2722
284
2914
3037
312
329
335
3416
3522
366
378
3818
3918
404
4115
426
4318
443
4515
4613
4721
485
4914
57.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3724137931034483
totalSentences145
uniqueOpeners54
29.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"Somewhere above, a church bell"
ratio0.009
92.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences113
matches
0"Her boots splashed through puddles"
1"She'd been tailing Marcus Webb"
2"She moved forward, each step"
3"Her radio crackled."
4"She keyed the transmitter."
5"She looked back at the"
6"Her torch flickered, then steadied."
7"She rounded a corner and"
8"She'd heard whispers of it"
9"Her suspect stood at a"
10"He hadn't seen her yet."
11"Her heart hammered against her"
12"She didn't react."
13"His gaze swept over her"
14"She pressed herself against a"
15"He knew this place."
16"He'd navigated it before."
17"She held up her warrant"
18"She didn't wait to ask"
19"He grabbed the handle."
ratio0.319
48.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences113
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ran."
2"Her boots splashed through puddles"
3"She'd been tailing Marcus Webb"
4"The supernatural element she still"
5"The suspect vanished into the"
6"Quinn slowed, pulling her torch"
7"The beam cut through the"
8"She moved forward, each step"
9"A sound to her left."
10"The scrape of shoe on"
11"The torch followed the noise"
12"Her radio crackled."
13"She keyed the transmitter."
14"The suspect would be long"
15"She looked back at the"
16"The rational part of her"
17"This wasn't her territory."
18"Whatever was down there, it"
19"The stairs were stone, older"
ratio0.823
44.25% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"If he reached the exit,"
ratio0.009
31.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Low-level enforcer for a operation that moved magical artifacts through the city."
1"But the pattern was there—bodies found with strange markings, shipments that appeared and disappeared from locked warehouses, a network that operated in shadows…"
2"Cold air rushed up from below, carrying a smell she couldn't place—something herbal, something ancient, something that made the hairs on her arms stand up."
3"The rational part of her brain—the part that had kept her alive through eighteen years of London's worst—screamed at her to wait."
4"Stalls stretched in rows beneath lanterns that burned with flameless light, their glow shifting between blue and amber."
5"Stalls gave way to narrow passages, then opened again into different sections—a food court where the meat on spits sizzled with an iridescent sheen, a gaming de…"
6"Somewhere above, a church bell rang—the hour, she couldn't tell, the sound distorted as if coming from very far away."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.16
leniency0.32
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.3806%