Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYW291JN24WESC1537JTPY

Run Details

Duration:
33.3s
Cost:
$0.036920
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The sharp knock rattled the door in its frame, a sound so insistent it pulled her from the depths of a dusty grimoire. Aurora yanked the door open, a half-formed complaint about the landlord on her lips. The words died in her throat. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, a ghost in a perfectly tailored charcoal suit. Rain slicked his platinum blond hair back from his forehead, and a single drop traced a path down his sharp cheekbone. He leaned lightly on an ivory-handled cane, his mismatched eyes—one the colour of aged amber, the other a pit of black—fixed on her. He did not look surprised to see her. He never did. Her hand tightened on the doorknob, knuckles white. “You’re not supposed to be here.” “A charming welcome, Laila.” He used the name she hadn’t heard in two years, and the sound of it was a physical blow. A faint smile touched his lips, a masterpiece of condescension and something else she refused to name. “May I come in?” “No.” She tried to slam the door. His cane shot out, the ivory head jamming it with a sharp crack against the wood. The impact shuddered up her arm. “I believe we have matters to discuss.” His voice was calm, a silken thread of sound against the rising storm in her chest. “We have nothing to discuss.” “Don’t we?” He applied subtle, inexorable pressure, and the door glided open. He stepped inside, bringing with him the scent of wet asphalt, expensive cologne, and something wilder, something elemental. He moved with a liquid grace that was utterly at odds with the cramped, cluttered flat. He cast a dismissive glance over the chaotic stacks of books and scrolls that covered every surface of Eva’s home. His gaze lingered on the worn kilim rug, the half-eaten bowl of noodles on the coffee table, the tabby cat, Ptolemy, who was now winding around his legs, purring loudly. Traitor. “This is where you live now.” It was not a question. It was a verdict. “This is where I’m staying,” she corrected, her voice tight. She closed the door, the triple clicks of the deadbolts sounding loud and futile in the small space. Locking him in felt more dangerous than locking the world out. “Semantics.” Lucien ran a gloved finger along a dusty stack of books. He left no mark. “You ran far.” “Not far enough, apparently.” His amber eye flared. “I would have found you at the ends of the earth.” The air crackled with the weight of everything they left unsaid in a smoke-filled room in Marseille two years ago. His promises. Her refusal. The choice she had made that had led her here, to this life of delivering takeaway and living in borrowed spaces. A life that was blessedly, beautifully normal. A life he had just annihilated by walking through the door. She crossed her arms, a flimsy shield against the sheer force of his presence. “What do you want, Lucien?” “Straight to business. I always admired that about you.” He turned, his back to the single grimy window that looked out over Brick Lane. The dim light haloed his frame, making him seem larger, less human. “There is a contract out. On you.” A cold dread, familiar and sickening, seeped into her bones. It felt like her ex, Evan, all over again, but a thousand times worse. Lucien’s world was not one of bruises and angry words; it was one of ancient blood and binding pacts. “I have nothing to do with that life anymore. I’m out.” “Are you?” He took a step towards her. The cat scattered. “You cannot simply ‘get out’, Aurora. You, of all people, should know that. Your blood sings a song they have not forgotten.” He stopped a mere foot from her, close enough that she could see the faint silver threads in the fabric of his suit, the perfect knot of his tie. “They are calling you Malphora.” The name landed like a stone in her gut. A name from a past she had buried so deep she had convinced herself it was a nightmare. “Who is?” she whispered, hating the weakness she heard in her own voice. “You remember the Alabaster Court? The ones who deal in rare acquisitions?” She flinched. She remembered their sigil burned into the flesh of a man who had failed them. She remembered the whispers of what they collected. Things that breathed. Things that screamed. “They believe you are the key to unlocking the Umbral Gates,” he continued, his voice dropping to a low murmur. “They believe your lineage makes you a living relic. And they are willing to pay a fortune to possess you.” “That’s insane. It’s a myth.” “They don’t think so.” His gaze dropped to her left wrist, where the sleeve of her jumper had ridden up, exposing the small, crescent-shaped scar there. His eyes lingered on it as if it were a brand. “And neither, if I recall, do you.” She pulled her sleeve down. “Why are you telling me this? Why come all this way?” “Because,” he said, his voice dangerously soft, “I am the one they tried to hire.” The floor seemed to drop away beneath her. Of course. Lucien was the finest fixer in Europe. If you wanted something found, something moved, something vanished without a trace, you went to him. “And?” “And I declined.” He reached out, his gloved fingers brushing a stray strand of black hair from her cheek. His touch was cold, a shock against her skin that jolted down her spine. “I do not trade in what is mine.” Her breath hitched. The possessiveness in his tone was a cage snapping shut around her. This was the man she had run from. The beautiful, terrifying man who saw the world in terms of ownership, and who had made it devastatingly clear that he considered her his most prized possession. “I am not yours, Lucien.” “No?” The corner of his mouth twitched. “Then consider me a concerned third party. They will not stop. They will send others. Less discerning brokers. People who will not care if you are delivered to the Court breathing or not.” She stared at him, caught between rage and a gut-wrenching fear. He was manipulating her. Twisting the threat to force her back under his control. And yet, she knew he was not lying. The cold certainty of it settled in her stomach. Her quiet life was over. “So you’re here to what? Protect me?” The laugh that escaped her was bitter and sharp. “What’s your price this time?” His expression hardened. The faint warmth in his amber eye vanished, replaced by something ancient and cold. “My price is you, here, where I can see you. Safe.” “No.” “It was not a request.” A frantic energy seized her. She had to get him out. She had to think. She backed away towards the door, her hand fumbling behind her for the deadbolts. “Get out, Lucien. I can handle myself.” He watched her, unmoved. “Can you?” Suddenly, the scent of ozone and burnt sugar filled the air. It was a smell from her darkest childhood memories, a smell that meant something was crossing over. Something was hunting. On the inside of the door, just above the top lock, a symbol began to glow. It was a faint, sickly purple light, etching itself into the wood like a hot brand. A spiralling maze with a single, unblinking eye at its centre. The mark of the Alabaster Court’s hunters. Lucien’s head snapped towards the door. The casual arrogance fell away, replaced by a razor-sharp focus. “They’re here.” Her blood ran cold. Then came the sound. A soft, metallic click. The top deadbolt slid open on its own. *Click.* The middle one followed. *Click.* The final lock disengaged, and the door swung inward an inch with a low, mournful creak.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.326
leniency0.651
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1329
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"lightly"
2"utterly"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1329
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"depths"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"down her spine"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"etching"
count1
highlights
0"depths"
1"traced"
2"chaotic"
3"weight"
4"familiar"
5"perfect"
6"down her spine"
7"stomach"
8"warmth"
9"etching"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences99
matches
0"was bitter"
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1320
ratio0.002
matches
0"Click."
1"Click."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount1028
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva1
Ptolemy1
Marseille1
Brick1
Lane1
Evan1
Europe1
Alabaster1
Court1
Lucien5
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Evan"
3"Court"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Europe"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like her ex, Evan, all over again"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1320
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences125
matches
0"scrolls that covered"
1"clear that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean24.44
std18.19
cv0.744
sampleLengths
043
114
255
38
46
544
629
723
85
946
1051
1115
1239
1319
144
1515
1663
1719
1843
1943
2011
2167
2227
2313
2412
2531
2640
275
2844
2916
3015
3133
321
3341
3450
355
3640
3747
3821
3928
401
415
4236
436
4431
4550
4618
474
488
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
40.32% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was manipulating"
1"was not lying"
2"was crossing"
3"was hunting"
97.14% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences125
ratio0.016
matches
0"He leaned lightly on an ivory-handled cane, his mismatched eyes—one the colour of aged amber, the other a pit of black—fixed on her."
1"Lucien’s world was not one of bruises and angry words; it was one of ancient blood and binding pacts."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1037
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint, sickly purple light,"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.023143683702989394
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009643201542912247
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean10.56
std7.79
cv0.738
sampleLengths
023
114
26
314
421
523
68
73
88
96
1023
1117
124
137
1416
156
1623
175
1812
1918
2016
2120
2230
231
2411
254
2610
2718
2811
2912
304
313
324
334
3411
3520
362
372
3821
397
4011
4114
425
4324
4412
457
4610
4714
4819
4911
48.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.352
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners44
72.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"Suddenly, the scent of ozone"
1"Then came the sound."
ratio0.022
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences92
matches
0"He leaned lightly on an"
1"He did not look surprised"
2"He never did."
3"Her hand tightened on the"
4"He used the name she"
5"She tried to slam the"
6"His cane shot out, the"
7"His voice was calm, a"
8"He applied subtle, inexorable pressure,"
9"He stepped inside, bringing with"
10"He moved with a liquid"
11"He cast a dismissive glance"
12"His gaze lingered on the"
13"It was not a question"
14"It was a verdict."
15"she corrected, her voice tight"
16"She closed the door, the"
17"He left no mark."
18"His amber eye flared."
19"She crossed her arms, a"
ratio0.5
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences92
matches
0"The sharp knock rattled the"
1"Aurora yanked the door open,"
2"The words died in her"
3"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4"Rain slicked his platinum blond"
5"He leaned lightly on an"
6"He did not look surprised"
7"He never did."
8"Her hand tightened on the"
9"He used the name she"
10"A faint smile touched his"
11"She tried to slam the"
12"His cane shot out, the"
13"The impact shuddered up her"
14"His voice was calm, a"
15"He applied subtle, inexorable pressure,"
16"He stepped inside, bringing with"
17"He moved with a liquid"
18"He cast a dismissive glance"
19"His gaze lingered on the"
ratio0.924
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"If you wanted something found,"
ratio0.011
32.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He moved with a liquid grace that was utterly at odds with the cramped, cluttered flat."
1"His gaze lingered on the worn kilim rug, the half-eaten bowl of noodles on the coffee table, the tabby cat, Ptolemy, who was now winding around his legs, purrin…"
2"His eyes lingered on it as if it were a brand."
3"His touch was cold, a shock against her skin that jolted down her spine."
4"The beautiful, terrifying man who saw the world in terms of ownership, and who had made it devastatingly clear that he considered her his most prized possession…"
5"It was a smell from her darkest childhood memories, a smell that meant something was crossing over."
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she corrected, her voice tight"
1"he continued, his voice dropping to a low murmur"
2"he said, his voice dangerously soft,"
80.23% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she corrected (correct)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"he continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.093
leniency0.186
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.14
80.1498%