Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYWFYNX0NYDSVQ86WX05PF

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Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.002551
Provider:
DeepInfra

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The doorbell rang. Rory froze, the half-empty dumpling takeaway container hovering mid-air. She wasn't expecting anyone. Even Eva called first, knowing about the three deadbolts and Rory's lingering paranoia from the Evan days. The bell chimed again - impatient, demanding. Setting the container down, she approached the door cautiously. Through the peephole, a tall figure in a charcoal suit blurred the fish-eye lens. Her breath hitched. She'd recognise that platinum blond hair anywhere, even slicked back like he'd stepped out of a 1940s noir film. "Rory." His voice, smooth as aged whiskey, carried through the wood. "I know you're there." With a deep breath, she opened the door partway, keeping the chain fastened. "Lucien." She folded her arms, leaning against the doorframe. "To what do I owe the pleasure?" "You're going to make me conduct business through the door?" His heterochromatic eyes - one amber, one black - glinted with amusement. "After all we've been through?" She hesitated. Their last encounter had ended with her slipping out of his flat before dawn, leaving only a hastily scribbled note. *Too complicated. Can't do this.* He'd never called, never reached out. Until now. "The chain stays," she said finally, releasing it but keeping her body blocking the doorway. He inclined his head, accepting the compromise. His cane tapped against the floorboards as he entered, the ivory handle gleaming. Close quarters made Rory acutely aware of his cologne - bergamot and something darker, smokier. Demonic, probably. She gestured to the cramped living room, books and papers covering every surface. Ptolemy emerged from beneath the sofa, eyeing their guest with feline suspicion. Lucien surveyed the chaos with raised eyebrows. "Still the scholar, I see." "Still avoiding small talk," she countered, perching on the arm of the sofa. "Why are you here, Luc?" He leaned casually on his cane, the picture of ease, but she noticed the slight tension in his jaw. "A situation has arisen. One that requires your... unique perspective." "You have others for that." "None with your particular skill set." He met her gaze head-on. "Or your understanding of the more clandestine aspects of London's underworld." She snorted. "Flattery will get you nowhere." "It got me through your door." His lips twitched in a hint of a smile. "Are you going to make me beg, Rory? Because I will. Pride means little in matters of survival." The confession startled her. "Who's in danger?" "Potentially everyone." He hesitated, something she'd never seen from the normally unflappable Lucien Moreau. "There's rumblings from Avaros. Disturbance in the demon realms." "And you need a human for...?" "Your perspective. Your connections. Your-" He paused, his voice softening. "Your insight." She studied him, tapping her fingers against her thigh. "You could've called." "Would you have answered?" "Probably not." "There you have it." He spread his hands wide, cane dangling from one wrist. "Besides, face-to-face conveys the urgency better, don't you think?" "Or it's harder to say no when you're standing in my flat smelling like temptation incarnate." His lips curved into a genuine smile this time. "Guilty as charged." Rory sighed, running a hand through her black hair. Ptolemy wound between her legs, a soft rumble in his throat. "Details, Luc. Before I throw you out on your arse." "The short version?" His expression darkened. "There's a tear forming between realms. Small now, but growing. If it bursts... well, picture Armageddon with worse weather." "You're joking." "Do I look like I'm joking?" His mismatched eyes bore into hers. "I need someone who can navigate both worlds. Someone I trust." "Trust?" Her laugh held no humour. "That's rich, coming from you." "Rory." He stepped closer, crowding her space. "Whatever happened between us, you know I wouldn't come to you unless it was dire." She felt the heat radiating from him, caught the faintest flicker of something raw in his eyes. Hurt? Longing? She couldn't tell, and that made her pulse race. "You broke my heart," she said softly. "Do you think that was easy for me?" His voice dropped to a whisper. "I warned you from the start. A human and a half-demon... it's complicated." "And yet, here you are." "Desperate times." He reached out, brushing a strand of hair from her face. She froze, torn between leaning into the touch and pulling away. His hand lingered, thumb brushing her cheekbone. "I've missed you." Her breath hitched. "Don't." "I can't help it." His other hand rested on his cane, knuckles white. "You're all I think about." "You had your chance." She stepped back, putting space between them. Ptolemy hissed, darting beneath the sofa again. "So did you," Lucien shot back. "You walked out that morning, remember? No discussion, no explanation. Just a note." "Because I was scared!" The admission burst out of her, raw and unfiltered. "You terrify me, Luc. Not because you're half-demon, but because I thought I could handle you. Turns out I couldn't." His expression softened, the hard edges melting away. "You underestimate yourself, Rory. You always have." She shook her head, pacing the small space between the sofa and the overflowing bookshelf. "This is a bad idea." "The world might end," he said dryly. "I'd say it's past the point of good ideas." She stopped, glaring at him. "Fine. I'll help. But this is strictly business." "Of course." His lips quirked. "Whatever helps you sleep at night." "Don't push it, Frenchman." She grabbed her jacket off the coat stand. "Where do we start?" His smile turned predatory, the amber in his eye flashing. "Where it all began. My flat." "That's the worst idea yet," she muttered. "Desperate times," he repeated, offering his arm. Against her better judgment, she took it. Ptolemy's amber eyes peeked out from beneath the sofa, watching as they left together. The door clicked shut behind them, sealing her fate.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
78.79% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
2"She stepped back [back]"
3"he said dryly [dryly]"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.379
leniency0.758
rawRatio0.16
effectiveRatio0.121
89.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount972
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount972
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"encounter"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"clandestine"
count1
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"navigate"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"race"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"encounter"
1"gleaming"
2"tension"
3"clandestine"
4"charged"
5"navigate"
6"flicker"
7"pulse"
8"race"
9"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords968
ratio0.005
matches
0"Too complicated. Can't do this."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount570
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Rory4
Evan1
Lucien3
Moreau1
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
3"Lucien"
4"Moreau"
5"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount968
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"recognise that platinum"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean18.62
std10.61
cv0.57
sampleLengths
040
145
215
329
427
535
615
737
825
912
1018
1129
125
1322
147
1533
167
1723
186
1912
2012
214
222
2323
2416
2512
2630
2725
282
2923
3011
3122
3228
337
3427
355
3634
374
3818
3918
4019
4133
4215
4320
4416
4513
4611
4716
4816
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs115
matches
0"wasn't expecting"
64.94% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences110
ratio0.027
matches
0"The bell chimed again - impatient, demanding."
1"\"You're going to make me conduct business through the door?\" His heterochromatic eyes - one amber, one black - glinted with amusement."
2"Close quarters made Rory acutely aware of his cologne - bergamot and something darker, smokier."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount570
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.03333333333333333
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.017543859649122806
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean8.8
std4.97
cv0.565
sampleLengths
03
19
24
317
47
59
614
73
819
911
104
1113
129
137
1422
155
162
1720
182
199
202
2115
227
2313
2415
252
2613
2712
287
295
3013
315
3219
3310
345
3511
3611
372
385
3915
4018
414
423
4314
449
456
4610
472
489
493
80.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners55
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences62
matches
0"She wasn't expecting anyone."
1"Her breath hitched."
2"She'd recognise that platinum blond"
3"His voice, smooth as aged"
4"She folded her arms, leaning"
5"His heterochromatic eyes - one"
6"Their last encounter had ended"
7"she said finally, releasing it"
8"He inclined his head, accepting"
9"His cane tapped against the"
10"She gestured to the cramped"
11"she countered, perching on the"
12"He leaned casually on his"
13"He met her gaze head-on"
14"His lips twitched in a"
15"He hesitated, something she'd never"
16"He paused, his voice softening"
17"She studied him, tapping her"
18"He spread his hands wide,"
19"His lips curved into a"
ratio0.677
16.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences62
matches
0"The doorbell rang."
1"Rory froze, the half-empty dumpling"
2"She wasn't expecting anyone."
3"The bell chimed again -"
4"Her breath hitched."
5"She'd recognise that platinum blond"
6"His voice, smooth as aged"
7"She folded her arms, leaning"
8"His heterochromatic eyes - one"
9"Their last encounter had ended"
10"she said finally, releasing it"
11"He inclined his head, accepting"
12"His cane tapped against the"
13"She gestured to the cramped"
14"Ptolemy emerged from beneath the"
15"Lucien surveyed the chaos with"
16"she countered, perching on the"
17"He leaned casually on his"
18"He met her gaze head-on"
19"His lips twitched in a"
ratio0.887
80.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Even Eva called first, knowing"
ratio0.016
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
85.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He paused, his voice softening"
1"He spread, cane dangling from one wrist"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.076
leniency0.152
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.061
84.8232%