| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 91.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 594 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 594 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "sense of" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "throbbed" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "echoing" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "beacon" | | 13 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 35 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 20.41% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 35 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 588 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "You shouldn’t have come." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 588 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.85 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 2 | | Rory | 2 | | Laila | 1 | | Malphora | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 5 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Laila" | | 3 | "Malphora" | | 4 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "rustle that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 1 | "seemed unnaturally vibrant their petals glowing faintly in the moonlight" | | 2 | "as if reaching for her" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 6.803 | | wordCount | 588 | | matches | | 0 | "not just from the chill, but from a primal sense of being watched" | | 1 | "Not a sound of the forest, but a voice, clear" | | 2 | "not a voice but a thought, echoing in her mind: *You shouldn’t have come" | | 3 | "not towards the gate, but deeper into the Grove, the pendant’s glow a frantic beacon i" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 35 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 1 | | mean | 0 | | std | 0 | | cv | 0 | | sampleLengths | | |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 35 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 96 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 35 | | ratio | 0.143 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hung thick and damp, smelling of wet earth and something else—rotting leaves, perhaps, or something older." | | 1 | "The usual nocturnal sounds of the park—crickets, an owl’s distant hoot—were absent, replaced by a faint, unsettling rustle that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once." | | 2 | "Then, it came—a sound that froze her blood." | | 3 | "The Grove wasn’t just Fae-touched; it was alive, and it knew her." | | 4 | "The wrongness wasn’t just in the air; it was in the very stones beneath her feet, in the pulse of the Heartstone, in the whisper that wasn’t a whisper." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 594 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.03535353535353535 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010101010101010102 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 35 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 88.83% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 35 | | mean | 16.8 | | std | 6.25 | | cv | 0.372 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 15 |
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| 42.86% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.34285714285714286 | | totalSentences | 35 | | uniqueOpeners | 12 | |
| 95.24% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 35 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, it came—a sound that" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 60.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 35 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 1 | "She’d come here for a" | | 2 | "She shivered, not just from" | | 3 | "It always flared when a" | | 4 | "She’d felt it earlier, a" | | 5 | "She pushed the gate open," | | 6 | "She walked deeper, the path" | | 7 | "She kept her head down," | | 8 | "She stopped, leaning against a" | | 9 | "She spun around, heart hammering" | | 10 | "She could feel eyes on" | | 11 | "She turned and ran, not" | | 12 | "She could hear footsteps now," | | 13 | "She didn’t dare look back." |
| | ratio | 0.4 | |
| 2.86% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 35 | | matches | | 0 | "Thegravel crunched under her boots," | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, alias Rory, Laila," | | 2 | "The air hung thick and" | | 3 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 4 | "She’d come here for a" | | 5 | "The usual nocturnal sounds of" | | 6 | "Shadows stretched long and distorted," | | 7 | "She shivered, not just from" | | 8 | "A cold sweat broke out" | | 9 | "The pendant around her neck," | | 10 | "It always flared when a" | | 11 | "She’d felt it earlier, a" | | 12 | "She pushed the gate open," | | 13 | "The air grew colder still," | | 14 | "The wildflowers, blooming year-round, seemed" | | 15 | "She walked deeper, the path" | | 16 | "Every snap of a twig," | | 17 | "She kept her head down," | | 18 | "The pendant’s glow intensified, a" | | 19 | "She stopped, leaning against a" |
| | ratio | 0.914 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 35 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 4.61% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Thegravel crunched under her boots, a sound that echoed unnaturally loud in the suffocating silence of Richmond Park." | | 1 | "The usual nocturnal sounds of the park—crickets, an owl’s distant hoot—were absent, replaced by a faint, unsettling rustle that seemed to come from everywhere a…" | | 2 | "The wildflowers, blooming year-round, seemed unnaturally vibrant, their petals glowing faintly in the moonlight." | | 3 | "She walked deeper, the path winding between ancient oaks whose branches twisted into grotesque shapes, as if reaching for her." | | 4 | "She spun around, heart hammering against her ribs, but the trees stood silent, their leaves unmoving." | | 5 | "The whisper came again, closer this time, not a voice but a thought, echoing in her mind: *You shouldn’t have come.* She stumbled back, her hand flying to the p…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |