Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYWRF3ZBQJWZHF20JC09PA

Run Details

Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.155805

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with its usual evening crowd—locals nursing pints, tourists snapping photos of the vintage maps, and Silas wiping down glasses behind the bar with methodical precision. Aurora pushed through the heavy door, shaking rain from her delivery jacket, the distinctive green neon from the sign outside casting shadows across her face. "Kitchen's through the back," Silas called without looking up. "Tell Yu-Fei I'm still waiting on those spring rolls." "Not a delivery tonight." Aurora slid onto a barstool, water dripping from her black hair onto the worn wood. "Just need something strong." Silas glanced up, taking in her soaked appearance and the tension in her shoulders. He reached for a bottle of whiskey without asking, pouring two fingers neat. "Rough day?" "Rough year." She knocked back half the glass, grimacing. The burn felt good, something real to focus on instead of the churning in her gut. Behind her, the door chimed again. Aurora didn't turn—she'd learned not to look over her shoulder constantly anymore, though the habit died hard. But then a voice cut through the bar's ambient noise, and her glass froze halfway to her lips. "Christ, this place hasn't changed a bit." The Welsh accent hit her like a physical blow. Aurora's fingers tightened on the glass as footsteps approached the bar. In the mirror behind the bottles, she watched a woman with copper hair and designer clothes claim the stool two seats down. "Gin and tonic," the woman told Silas, then froze. "Rory?" Aurora forced herself to turn, meeting Eva's wide green eyes for the first time in three years. "Hello, Eva." "My God." Eva's hand flew to her mouth. "I heard you'd left Cardiff, but London? And you're..." Her gaze swept over Aurora's delivery jacket, the water stains, the exhaustion etched in her face. "What are you doing here?" "Working." Aurora turned back to her whiskey. "Living." Silas, with the instincts of someone who'd spent decades reading rooms, moved to the far end of the bar. "Working as what?" Eva's voice carried that old familiar mix of concern and judgment. "Last I heard, you were finishing your law degree. Your dad said—" "My dad says a lot of things." Aurora's laugh came out harsh. "Doesn't make them true." Eva shifted on her stool, her Louboutin heels clicking against the brass footrest. Everything about her screamed success—the tailored suit, the subtle highlights in her hair, the confidence that money and position brought. Aurora remembered when they'd been equals, two girls from the same Cardiff neighborhood with big dreams. "I tried calling," Eva said quietly. "After you left. Your number was disconnected." "New phone." Aurora signaled Silas for another pour. "New everything." "Even your name? The bartender called you Aurora. Since when do you go by your full name?" "Since Rory belonged to someone I'm not anymore." Eva ordered her gin and tonic when Silas returned, her movements precise and controlled. Aurora recognized the lawyer in her now—the way she gathered information, filed it away, built her case. "How long have you been in London?" "Two and a half years." "That long?" Eva's voice cracked slightly. "Rory—Aurora—we were best friends. How could you just disappear?" Aurora spun the glass between her palms, watching the amber liquid catch the bar's dim lighting. "You know why I left." "Evan." Eva said the name like it tasted bitter. "I told you to leave him, not vanish entirely." "One required the other." "Did it? Or did you just decide it was easier to run from everything?" The accusation hung between them like a blade. Aurora felt her jaw clench, the familiar anger rising. But underneath it, something else—the hollow ache of a friendship that had once meant everything. "Easy?" She turned to face Eva fully, noting the slight flinch in her old friend's expression. "You think any of this has been easy?" "I wouldn't know, would I? You shut me out. Shut everyone out." "I survived." Aurora's voice dropped low. "That's all I could manage." Eva's face softened, and for a moment, Aurora saw the girl she'd known—the one who'd snuck bottles of cheap wine into their dorm room, who'd held her hair back after too many shots, who'd been the first person she'd called when the bruises started. "I would have helped. You know that." "I know." Aurora turned back to her drink. "That's why I couldn't stay." They sat in silence, the bar's noise washing over them. Someone fed coins into the old jukebox, and Dusty Springfield's voice drifted through the speakers. Eva fidgeted with her engagement ring—a massive diamond Aurora hadn't noticed before. "You're engaged." "Last spring." Eva held out her hand, the stone catching the light. "To Richard Pemberton. He's a barrister at—" "Your firm. I remember him." Aurora had met him once at a Cardiff legal society mixer. Ambitious, well-connected, everything a girl like Eva should want. "Congratulations." "We're having the wedding at St. David's Hall. Small ceremony, just family and close friends." Eva paused. "I wanted to invite you, but..." "But I was gone." "You were gone." Eva's voice carried years of hurt. "Do you have any idea what it was like? You just vanished. Your parents didn't know where you were. I spent months wondering if you were even alive." Aurora flinched. She'd known leaving would hurt people, but hearing it laid out so starkly made her chest tight. "I sent a letter. Told them I was safe." "One letter. In three years." Eva's hands clenched around her glass. "I deserved better than that." She had. Aurora knew it, had known it even as she'd deleted Eva's number, ignored her emails, built walls between her new life and everything Cardiff represented. "You did." The admission scraped her throat raw. "But I couldn't—Eva, I couldn't be that person anymore. The one who needed rescuing, who made terrible choices, who stayed too long and believed too many lies. I had to burn it all down and start over." "And I was just collateral damage?" Aurora met her eyes in the mirror. "We all were." Eva finished her drink in one swallow, then stood. Her movements were sharp, controlled fury. "You know what the worst part is? I get it. I understand why you ran, why you changed everything. But understanding doesn't make it hurt less." She pulled out a business card, expensive cardstock with embossed lettering, and placed it on the bar. "In case you ever remember how to be someone's friend again." Aurora didn't pick it up, didn't move as Eva's heels clicked across the floor. At the door, her old friend paused. "You look tired, Ror—Aurora. Tired and sad. I hope whatever you're running towards is worth what you left behind." The door swung shut, taking the moment with it. Aurora stared at the business card, Eva's name in elegant script, a London address, a life she might have had if she'd made different choices. Silas appeared, refilling her glass without being asked. "Old friend?" "The oldest." Aurora pocketed the card, though she knew she'd never use it. Some bridges, once burned, couldn't be rebuilt. They just left you standing on opposite shores, remembering when the distance between you could be crossed. The whiskey burned less on the third glass. Or maybe she'd just gone numb to everything, the way she'd taught herself to be. Either way, she sat in The Raven's Nest, listening to the rain against the windows and the ghosts of who she used to be, until Silas finally called last orders and the night swallowed her whole.
total_cost0.155805

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
12.50% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"She knocked back [back]"
1"Aurora turned back [back]"
2"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
3"Eva's voice cracked slightly [slightly]"
4"Aurora turned back [back]"
5"Eva's hands clenched around [around]"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.359
leniency0.719
rawRatio0.261
effectiveRatio0.188
96.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1272
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1272
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"methodical"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"churning"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count2
6
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"methodical"
1"tension"
2"churning"
3"footsteps"
4"etched"
5"familiar"
6"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1259
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount840
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.86
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Silas9
Aurora24
Welsh1
Eva20
Louboutin1
Cardiff3
Dusty1
Springfield1
Ambitious1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Aurora"
4"Eva"
5"Dusty"
6"Springfield"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.071
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1259
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean21.71
std14.16
cv0.652
sampleLengths
054
118
223
327
42
525
641
77
842
910
1019
1138
128
1319
1426
1516
1649
1713
1810
1917
208
2131
227
235
2415
2521
2618
274
2814
2932
3024
3112
3211
3344
347
3513
3637
372
3819
3926
4023
414
4237
4319
449
4516
4627
4745
486
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs151
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences109
ratio0.064
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with its usual evening crowd—locals nursing pints, tourists snapping photos of the vintage maps, and Silas wiping down glasses behind the bar with methodical precision."
1"Aurora didn't turn—she'd learned not to look over her shoulder constantly anymore, though the habit died hard."
2"Everything about her screamed success—the tailored suit, the subtle highlights in her hair, the confidence that money and position brought."
3"Aurora recognized the lawyer in her now—the way she gathered information, filed it away, built her case."
4"But underneath it, something else—the hollow ache of a friendship that had once meant everything."
5"Eva's face softened, and for a moment, Aurora saw the girl she'd known—the one who'd snuck bottles of cheap wine into their dorm room, who'd held her hair back after too many shots, who'd been the first person she'd called when the bruises started."
6"Eva fidgeted with her engagement ring—a massive diamond Aurora hadn't noticed before."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount848
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.0330188679245283
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007075471698113208
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean11.55
std7.87
cv0.681
sampleLengths
029
125
29
39
419
54
614
713
82
99
1016
116
1217
1318
147
159
1611
1722
189
191
2017
212
228
2325
245
257
261
2719
2814
2912
3012
314
3213
3320
3416
356
367
378
382
3917
408
4114
4217
437
445
456
469
4716
485
499
77.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.48623853211009177
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners53
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences65
matches
0"He reached for a bottle"
1"She knocked back half the"
2"Her gaze swept over Aurora's"
3"She turned to face Eva"
4"They sat in silence, the"
5"She'd known leaving would hurt"
6"Her movements were sharp, controlled"
7"She pulled out a business"
8"They just left you standing"
ratio0.138
21.54% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences65
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"Aurora pushed through the heavy"
2"Silas called without looking up"
3"Aurora slid onto a barstool,"
4"Silas glanced up, taking in"
5"He reached for a bottle"
6"She knocked back half the"
7"The burn felt good, something"
8"Aurora didn't turn—she'd learned not"
9"The Welsh accent hit her"
10"Aurora's fingers tightened on the"
11"the woman told Silas, then"
12"Aurora forced herself to turn,"
13"Eva's hand flew to her"
14"Her gaze swept over Aurora's"
15"Aurora turned back to her"
16"Silas, with the instincts of"
17"Eva's voice carried that old"
18"Aurora's laugh came out harsh"
19"Eva shifted on her stool,"
ratio0.877
76.92% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"Either way, she sat in"
ratio0.015
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Silas, with the instincts of someone who'd spent decades reading rooms, moved to the far end of the bar."
1"But underneath it, something else—the hollow ache of a friendship that had once meant everything."
2"Eva's face softened, and for a moment, Aurora saw the girl she'd known—the one who'd snuck bottles of cheap wine into their dorm room, who'd held her hair back …"
81.52% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Aurora slid, water dripping from her black hair onto the worn wood"
1"Eva held out, the stone catching the light"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.125
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.2736%