Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYX0XASHPMK72EXDR957TT

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Duration:
12.3s
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$0.000484
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Clarifai

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest’sgreen neon sign bled into the Soho drizzle, a sickly glow on wet pavement. Aurora Carter, or Rory, as her friends still called her, pushed through the heavy oak door, the scent of stale beer and ozone hitting her like a physical blow. Her worn leather coat, frayed at the cuffs, swallowed her frame. She clutched a battered cardboard delivery bag, the logo of Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress restaurant printed in faded red. The bar’s interior was a cave of shadows, lit only by the amber glow of a single overhead bulb and the green neon. Maps of the world, torn and faded, hung crooked on the walls, their edges curling like old skin. A low hum of conversation and the clink of glasses echoed in the gloom. She didn’t pause. She moved with purpose, her eyes scanning the room. Silas Blackwood sat alone at the far end of the bar, his grey-streaked auburn hair slicked back, the neatly trimmed beard shadowing his jaw. A silver signet ring glinted on his right hand as he swirled a glass of amber liquid. His left leg, stiff from the old injury, rested on a stool. He didn’t look up. He never did, not when he was deep in thought. Rory slid onto the stool beside him, the leather creaking. "Delivery for Mr. Blackwood." Her voice was low, precise, the accent of Cardiff still lingering beneath the London polish. She placed the bag on the worn wood. "Yu-Fei’s finest. Beef in black bean sauce. Extra crispy." Silas finally looked at her, his hazel eyes sharp and unreadable. "Rory." The name was a relic, spoken with a weight that made her breath catch. "Long time." He didn’t offer a hand, didn’t ask how she’d been. He just watched her, the signet ring catching the light. "You’ve changed." The words weren’t a question. They were a statement, a verdict. She felt the familiar prickle of old wounds, the scar on her wrist itching beneath her coat sleeve. "You too." She met his gaze, refusing to flinch. "Still running the nest?" He took a slow sip of his drink, the glass clinking against the bar. "Same bar. Different owner." His voice was dry, like aged wine. "You? Still delivering takeout?" She shrugged, a gesture that felt foreign on her shoulders. "Same as always. Pre-Law degree gathering dust. Evan’s gone. Left me with a scar and a flat above Silas’s bar." She touched her wrist, the crescent-shaped mark a ghost beneath her skin. "You? Still spying?" Silas’s smile was thin, a ghost of something sharper. "Retired. Mostly." He tapped the signet ring. "Though some old contacts still call. Need a favor." Rory’s breath hitched. "You’re not supposed to be here." The words tumbled out, raw and unexpected. "Not in London. Not in the Nest." He leaned closer, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper. "The Nest is the safest place in London. Even for ghosts." His eyes, those sharp hazel eyes, held hers. "You’re not a ghost, Rory. You’re just... hiding." She stared into her empty glass, the silence stretching between them like a chasm. The bar’s low hum faded, replaced by the frantic beat of her own heart. The scar on her wrist burned. "Hiding from what?" she finally asked, her voice barely a whisper. Silas’s gaze drifted to the green neon sign, then back to her. "From yourself." He took another sip. "From the person you used to be. The person you thought you’d be." He gestured vaguely at her worn coat, her tired eyes. "You look like you’re carrying the weight of the world, Rory. And you’re doing it alone." She didn’t deny it. The weight was there, a constant companion. The memory of Evan’s betrayal, the empty flat, the endless deliveries. The scar on her wrist was a reminder of the past she couldn’t escape. "I’m not alone," she said, the words feeling hollow. "I have work. And the bar." Silas chuckled, a sound devoid of warmth. "The bar. Your sanctuary. Your prison." He leaned back, his limp making him shift slightly on the stool. "You used to dream big, Rory. Cardiff University. Law. The world. Now you’re... this." He gestured at her again. "A delivery person. Hiding in a bar." The accusation hung in the air, thick and suffocating. She felt the familiar heat rise in her cheeks, the old anger flaring. "I chose this," she snapped. "I chose to leave. To run." She touched the scar again, a silent testament to her choice. "Evan didn’t break me. He just... showed me what I was running from." Silas’s expression softened, just a fraction. "Running never solves anything, Rory." He tapped the signet ring. "It just makes the shadows longer." He took a final sip of his drink, the amber liquid disappearing. "You’re not the only one running, you know." The words hung in the air, heavy and ominous. Rory’s heart hammered against her ribs. "What do you mean?" she asked, her voice trembling slightly. Silas stood up, his movement stiff but deliberate. The limp was a constant reminder of the past, a ghost in his own life. He reached into his jacket pocket, pulling out a folded piece of paper. He slid it across the bar towards her. "A job. A simple delivery. But the address... it’s in the old part of town. Near the river." Rory’s fingers closed around the paper, her breath catching. The familiar weight of the Raven’s Nest settled around her, a familiar cage. "Why me?" she asked, her voice barely audible. Silas met her gaze, his hazel eyes unreadable. "Because you’re the only one who can do it without asking questions. And because... sometimes, the past has a way of catching up with you." He gave a final, enigmatic smile. "Go home, Rory. Pack a bag. The Nest isn’t safe anymore." The green neon sign outside flickered, casting long, dancing shadows across the bar’s worn wood. Rory looked at the paper in her hand, then at Silas’s retreating back. The weight in her chest wasn’t just from the delivery bag. It was the weight of the past, the weight of the future, and the terrifying certainty that she couldn’t outrun either. The bar’s familiar hum seemed suddenly loud, a cacophony of memories and regrets. She was still running. But this time, she wasn’t sure where she was running to.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
42.11% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she finally asked [finally]"
1"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"He leaned back [back]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.514
leniency1
rawRatio0.158
effectiveRatio0.158
85.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1068
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1068
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count2
4
word"weight"
count7
5
word"familiar"
count5
6
word"whisper"
count2
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count2
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"sanctuary"
count1
11
word"testament"
count1
12
word"enigmatic"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"dancing"
count1
15
word"cacophony"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"gloom"
2"scanning"
3"unreadable"
4"weight"
5"familiar"
6"whisper"
7"silence"
8"reminder"
9"warmth"
10"sanctuary"
11"testament"
12"enigmatic"
13"flickered"
14"dancing"
15"cacophony"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count2
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1064
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.40% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount795
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Soho1
Carter1
Rory6
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Blackwood1
Cardiff1
London1
Silas9
Evan1
Nest2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Cheung"
4"Blackwood"
5"Silas"
6"Evan"
7"Nest"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.934
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed suddenly loud a cacophony of memories and regrets"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1064
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
92.52% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean50.67
std24.01
cv0.474
sampleLengths
0130
179
246
350
442
529
645
725
823
937
1045
1157
1251
1351
1457
1542
1625
1762
1830
1950
2088
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs125
matches
0"was running"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences91
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount798
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.03007518796992481
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.013784461152882205
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean11.69
std6.07
cv0.519
sampleLengths
016
129
211
319
423
518
614
73
89
924
1017
1112
124
1310
1410
1519
168
179
1811
1915
2012
2110
222
235
246
2518
269
274
2814
2911
304
3110
3232
333
349
357
369
373
3813
397
4010
4119
428
4314
4414
456
4611
4712
486
4923
46.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.34065934065934067
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
6.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences75
matches
0"Her worn leather coat, frayed"
1"She clutched a battered cardboard"
2"She didn’t pause."
3"She moved with purpose, her"
4"His left leg, stiff from"
5"He didn’t look up."
6"He never did, not when"
7"Her voice was low, precise,"
8"She placed the bag on"
9"He didn’t offer a hand,"
10"He just watched her, the"
11"They were a statement, a"
12"She felt the familiar prickle"
13"She met his gaze, refusing"
14"He took a slow sip"
15"His voice was dry, like"
16"She shrugged, a gesture that"
17"She touched her wrist, the"
18"He tapped the signet ring"
19"He leaned closer, his voice"
ratio0.533
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences75
matches
0"The Raven's Nest’sgreen neon sign"
1"Aurora Carter, or Rory, as"
2"Her worn leather coat, frayed"
3"She clutched a battered cardboard"
4"The bar’s interior was a"
5"Maps of the world, torn"
6"A low hum of conversation"
7"She didn’t pause."
8"She moved with purpose, her"
9"Silas Blackwood sat alone at"
10"A silver signet ring glinted"
11"His left leg, stiff from"
12"He didn’t look up."
13"He never did, not when"
14"Rory slid onto the stool"
15"Her voice was low, precise,"
16"She placed the bag on"
17"Silas finally looked at her,"
18"The name was a relic,"
19"He didn’t offer a hand,"
ratio0.987
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"She touched, the crescent-shaped mark a ghost beneath her skin"
1"she finally asked, her voice barely a whisper"
2"she said, the words feeling hollow"
3"He took, the amber liquid disappearing"
4"she asked, her voice trembling slightly"
5"she asked, her voice barely audible"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.135
leniency0.27
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.054
74.4732%