Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYX5Q6CYS9YAB94R3F4SFJ

Run Details

Duration:
22.8s
Cost:
$0.004563
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door buzzed with a dying insect's rhythm, casting a sickly pallor over the wet pavement of Soho. Rain slicked the cobblestones, reflecting the fractured lights of passing taxis. Aurora pushed through the heavy oak door of The Raven's Nest, shaking water from her black hair. The scent of stale ale, lemon polish, and old paper hit her instantly. She wiped her boots on the mat, her bright blue eyes scanning the dim interior. Maps covered the walls, their yellowed edges curling in the humidity, alongside black-and-white photographs of faces long forgotten by the rest of London. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a tumbler with a rag that looked cleaner than the glass itself. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the low light as he tilted his head. The limp in his left leg was less pronounced when he stood still, but the way he shifted his weight betrayed the old knee injury. He wore his silver signet ring on his right hand, the metal gleaming against the dark wood of the counter. "You're late," Silas said, setting the glass down. "Or early. Depends on whether you're delivering or hiding." Aurora approached the bar, pulling her damp jacket tighter around her shoulders. "Neither. Just needed somewhere dry." Silas poured a measure of amber liquid without asking. He slid it across the polished surface. The glass stopped inches from her fingers. "Cardiff rain follows you even here," he noted. "Cardiff feels like a different planet," Aurora replied. She wrapped her hands around the glass, letting the warmth seep into her palms. A small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist peeked out from her sleeve. "Been a while, Si." "Seven years, three months, and fourteen days." Silas leaned against the back shelf, crossing his arms. His hazel eyes fixed on her face, tracing the lines that hadn't been there before. "You cut your hair." "It got in the way." "It suited you long. Made you look like your mother." Aurora took a sip. The whiskey burned, sharp and clean. "Jennifer wouldn't recognize me now. Neither would Brendan." "They'd see the same stubborn set to your jaw." Silas reached for a bottle of bitters, adding two precise drops to his own drink. "I heard you left law school." "Fled is more accurate." "Same thing, different packaging." Aurora traced the rim of her glass. "I couldn't do it. The arguments, the posturing, the way they twist truth until it breaks. Reminded me too much of home." "And Evan?" The name hung in the air, heavier than the smoke that used to fill rooms like this. Aurora's grip tightened on the glass. "Gone," she said. "Left him in London. Moved flats. Changed my number. Changed my name on the delivery app." "Laila," Silas tested the alias. "Fits better than Aurora sometimes. Less... exposed." "Rory works for friends. Laila works for strangers." Silas nodded slowly. He walked around the end of the bar, his limp clicking softly against the floorboards. He stopped beside her, close enough that she could smell the tobacco on his coat, though he hadn't smoked in years. "You look tired, Rory." "Work keeps me busy. Golden Empress has a lunch rush that never ends. Yu-Fei expects the dumplings hot, the noodles fast, and the driver invisible." "Invisible is good. Invisible keeps you safe." "Does it?" Aurora turned to face him. "You taught me that. Hide in plain sight. Blend into the background. But after a while, you forget how to step forward." Silas looked away, his gaze drifting to a photograph on the wall. It showed a group of men in Prague, standing outside a café. One of them stood slightly apart, younger, with both legs straight. "I didn't teach you to hide forever," Silas said. "I taught you to survive until the threat passed." "The threat passes. The hiding sticks." A silence stretched between them, filled only by the hum of the refrigerator and the distant wail of a siren. The tension wasn't hostile; it was the weight of unsaid things, of paths diverged and bridges burned. "You could have called," Silas said, his voice low. "And say what? 'Hi Si, I messed up my life, ran from a man who made me feel small, and now I deliver food to people who don't tip'?" "I would have listened." "You would have tried to fix it. You fix things, Silas. That's what you do. But some things aren't broken pieces to be glued back together. They're just... gone." Silas turned back to her. The quiet authority he carried seemed to falter, just for a second. A flicker of regret crossed his features, softening the hard lines around his eyes. "I should have come to Cardiff," he admitted. "When you first called Eva. I should have gotten on a train." "You were busy." "Busy is an excuse cowards use." Silas tapped his signet ring against the bar top. "I thought you needed space. Thought I'd interfere. Old habits. Assess the situation, maintain distance, protect the asset." "I wasn't an asset, Si. I was your friend's daughter." "I know." The words came out rough. "I know that now. Too late, perhaps." Aurora finished her drink and set the glass down with a firm clink. "Time does that. Makes everything too late." "Not everything." Silas reached under the counter and pulled out a key. He placed it on the bar between them. "Flat above the bar. Vacant since last Tuesday. Tenant moved to Manchester." Aurora stared at the key. Brass, worn smooth by use. "I can't afford this place," she said. "Rent is flexible. Payment in company. Or silence. Whatever you prefer." "Why?" "Because you're here," Silas said simply. "Because you walked through that door instead of keeping walking. Because I spent seven years telling myself I gave you what you needed, and seeing you standing there, looking at me like I'm a stranger, proves I was wrong." Aurora picked up the key. The metal felt warm from his hand. She looked at the scar on her wrist, then up at Silas. His expression remained neutral, but his eyes held a question he wouldn't ask aloud. "The flat has a leak in the bathroom," Silas added, breaking the intensity. "And the neighbours play drums at odd hours. Terrible rhythm." Aurora let out a short laugh, surprising herself. "Sounds perfect." "Yufei's orders start at six tomorrow. You'll need to be up early." "I'm always up early." "I remember." Silas picked up his rag again, resuming his polishing. The moment of vulnerability sealed over, replaced by the familiar routine of the bar owner. "Don't let the rain soak your boots again. Wood warps." Aurora pocketed the key. She adjusted her jacket, feeling the weight of it settle differently against her side. "Thanks, Si." "Door locks at two," he said, not looking up. "Use the side entrance if you're late. Main bell wakes the whole street." "Wouldn't want that." Aurora turned toward the exit. The green neon sign still buzzed outside, casting its eerie glow on the wet street. She paused at the threshold, looking back at the man behind the bar. He stood straighter now, the limp less apparent in the shadows. "See you tomorrow," she said. Silas raised his glass in a silent toast. "Count on it." Aurora stepped out into the rain, the door clicking shut behind her. The city noises rushed back in, louder than before, but the cold didn't bite quite as deep.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Silas said simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.317
leniency0.635
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.032
88.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1251
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1251
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"gleaming"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count1
11
word"perfect"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"scanning"
2"weight"
3"gleaming"
4"warmth"
5"tracing"
6"traced"
7"silence"
8"tension"
9"flicker"
10"intensity"
11"perfect"
12"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences72
matches
0"A flicker of regret"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1246
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount732
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.46
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Aurora14
Silas18
Prague1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Prague"
globalScore0.27
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1246
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean20.77
std17.83
cv0.859
sampleLengths
0102
176
217
317
423
58
639
735
85
910
1018
1130
124
134
1429
152
1623
1719
1812
198
2039
214
2225
237
2429
2535
2618
276
2837
299
3029
314
3229
3331
3420
353
3633
3710
3814
3920
4032
4110
427
4311
441
4545
4638
4723
4810
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs125
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences115
ratio0.009
matches
0"The tension wasn't hostile; it was the weight of unsaid things, of paths diverged and bridges burned."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount736
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02717391304347826
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010869565217391304
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean10.83
std6.65
cv0.614
sampleLengths
023
111
217
313
415
523
618
713
825
920
108
119
1212
135
149
157
167
178
188
1914
2013
214
2216
2315
244
255
2610
274
286
298
3024
316
324
334
347
3522
362
3717
386
393
4016
415
427
438
443
4515
4621
474
4825
497
63.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4260869565217391
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners49
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences65
matches
0"She wiped her boots on"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
2"He wore his silver signet"
3"He slid it across the"
4"She wrapped her hands around"
5"His hazel eyes fixed on"
6"He walked around the end"
7"He stopped beside her, close"
8"It showed a group of"
9"He placed it on the"
10"She looked at the scar"
11"His expression remained neutral, but"
12"She adjusted her jacket, feeling"
13"he said, not looking up"
14"She paused at the threshold,"
15"He stood straighter now, the"
ratio0.246
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences65
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Rain slicked the cobblestones, reflecting"
2"Aurora pushed through the heavy"
3"The scent of stale ale,"
4"She wiped her boots on"
5"Maps covered the walls, their"
6"Silas stood behind the bar,"
7"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
8"The limp in his left"
9"He wore his silver signet"
10"Silas said, setting the glass"
11"Aurora approached the bar, pulling"
12"Silas poured a measure of"
13"He slid it across the"
14"The glass stopped inches from"
15"She wrapped her hands around"
16"A small crescent-shaped scar on"
17"Silas leaned against the back"
18"His hazel eyes fixed on"
19"Aurora took a sip."
ratio0.985
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Silas said, his voice low"
1"he said, not looking up"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he noted (note)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
2"Silas added (add)"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.19
leniency0.381
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.095
82.4305%