Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYX7XTG3THETTE721JV9CE

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Duration:
50.8s
Cost:
$0.004420
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The lock clicked, a sharp metallic snap in the quiet hallway. Aurora pulled the door open and the air left her lungs. Lucien stood on the threshold, rain dripping from the brim of his umbrella onto the worn doormat. He wore a charcoal suit that cost more than her monthly rent, tailored to fit his shoulders with precision. Water darkened the fabric at the seams. He leaned on the ivory-handled cane, knuckles white where they gripped the curve. You should not be here. Lucien stepped forward without invitation. The scent of ozone and expensive tobacco clung to him, overpowering the smell of stale beer drifting up from Silas' bar below. He closed the umbrella and leaned it against the wall, the movement fluid despite the rain-slicked pavement outside. The lock held three deadbolts. Eva installed them. Eva is not here. Aurora moved back into the room, forcing herself to breathe. The flat was small, cramped with boxes she hadn't unpacked since fleeing Cardiff. She crossed her arms over her chest, hiding the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist beneath the sleeve of her jumper. Why did you come, Lucien? He turned to face her. The overhead light caught the mismatched pupils, one amber, one black, shifting in the dimness. He looked tired. The usual immaculate slick of platinum blond hair had a strand out of place, falling across his forehead. You stopped answering the phone. I changed the number. You changed the number. He repeated the words, testing the weight of them. He walked further into the room, the tip of his cane tapping against the floorboards. He stopped near the small kitchenette, running a gloved finger along the edge of the counter. Dust came away on the leather. You look well. Don't. Don't what? Don't pretend you care how I look. Lucien turned back. The distance between them shrunk to mere feet. The heat radiating from him felt unnatural, a side effect of the demon blood running through his veins. It warmed the cold draft seeping through the window frame. I never pretended. You left. You walked out of the warehouse in Southwark and didn't look back. I had to find my own way out of the wards. The wards were collapsing. Staying meant death. You left me there. I saved you. You saved yourself. Aurora walked to the window. The street below buzzed with late-night traffic. Headlights swept across the ceiling, casting moving shadows over the unpacked boxes. She watched the reflection of Lucien in the glass. He hadn't moved. He stood like a statue carved from ice and shadow. I heard about Evan. Her spine stiffened. She kept her eyes on the street. That name does not belong in this room. He hurt you. He is in the past. He is in prison. Because of information I provided. Aurora spun around. Her bright blue eyes locked onto his heterochromatic gaze. The anger flared hot and bright, burning away the shock of his arrival. You watched him beat me for months. You watched and you traded information like currency. You did not lift a finger until it suited your broker schedule. Lucien's jaw tightened. The muscle feathered beneath the pale skin. He took a step toward her, the cane clicking once on the wood. I was building a case. Rushing it would have freed him on a technicality. You know how the courts work. Your father taught you. Do not bring my father into this. Brendan Carter would not want his daughter living above a pub, delivering noodles to pay the rent. Brendan Carter wanted me to be a lawyer. I am not a lawyer. I am alive. That is enough. She moved toward the door, hand reaching for the handle. Lucien shifted, blocking the path without appearing to move. He simply existed in the space, an obstacle made of will and magic. Move. No. Move, Lucien. Not until you listen. There is nothing to listen to. You made your choice when you chose the underworld over me. You chose the shadows. I chose to keep you breathing. The silence stretched, heavy and suffocating. The hum of the refrigerator filled the gap. Aurora dropped her hand from the door. She looked at the cane, at the concealed blade she knew waited inside the ivory handle. A weapon disguised as an accessory. Just like him. You could have told me. If I told you, you would have tried to stop me. I would have helped. You were human. You are still human. The things I hunt... they do not care about your law degree or your quick thinking. They smell fear. They smell blood. I am not afraid of you. You should be. He reached out. His hand hovered near her face. The heat from his palm prickled against her skin. She didn't pull away. The memory of his touch lingered from nights before the warehouse, before the silence. Rough fingers, gentle pressure. I thought you died in Avaros. Almost. Your father is from there. He is. Does he know you are here? He does not care where I am. Lucien lowered his hand. The loss of warmth left a chill on her cheek. He turned away, walking toward the small table covered in delivery receipts and maps. He picked up a slip of paper from the Golden Empress restaurant. Yu-Fei pays you poorly. It pays the bills. You could work for me. I work for myself. You are stubborn. I am independent. There is a difference. Not anymore. Lucien dropped the receipt. He walked back to her, stopping close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in the amber eye. The black pupil seemed to swallow the light around it. I am not leaving tonight. The flat has one bed. I will take the chair. The chair breaks if you look at it wrong. Then I will stand. Aurora looked at the door, then back at him. The tension in her shoulders refused to unwind. The hurt sat in her chest like a stone, heavy and immovable. But the attraction hummed beneath the skin, a live wire connecting them despite the months of silence. Why now? The barrier between the realms is thinning. Things are coming through. Things that know your name. You think I need protection. I know you do. I survived Evan. I survived Cardiff. I survived you. You survived because I was watching. She stepped into his space. The height difference forced her to tilt her head back. She poked a finger into his chest. The suit fabric felt smooth, cold. If you stay, you stay on my terms. No demons in the flat. No deals made over my head. No disappearing. Lucien looked down at her. A ghost of a smile touched his lips, rare and dangerous. Agreed. And you buy dinner. I brought takeout. He gestured to the bag on the floor near the umbrella. Steam curled from the top, carrying the scent of spicy beef and ginger. Aurora looked at the bag, then at him. The anger hadn't vanished, but it had shifted, making room for something else. Something warmer. Put it on the table. Lucien bent to retrieve the bag. The movement pulled the suit tight across his back. He straightened and placed the container on the table. He did not sit. He waited, watching her with those unnerving eyes. Aurora walked to the table and opened the container. The heat wafted up, fogging her glasses slightly. She took a plastic fork from the bag. Sit down, Lucien. I said I would stand. Sit. Before I change my mind and lock you out. He pulled out the wooden chair. It creaked under his weight but held. He rested the cane against the table leg. The ivory handle gleamed in the kitchen light. Eat. You first. I am not hungry. Eat. Lucien picked up a fork. He took a bite of the beef. He chewed slowly, watching her over the rim of the plastic container. It is cold. It is fine. Nothing is fine, Rory. The use of the nickname struck her. Only Eva called her that. Hearing it from Lucien felt like a violation and a comfort all at once. She took a bite of the noodles. The spice burned her tongue. No. Nothing is fine. But we are here. For now. For now. The rain intensified outside, drumming against the glass. The noise from Silas' bar below grew louder as the crowd inside swelled. A glass broke somewhere down the stairs. Neither of them flinched. They sat in the small flat, surrounded by the remnants of a life paused, eating cold takeout in the silence of a truce neither fully trusted. Lucien reached across the table. His fingers brushed the sleeve covering her wrist. He did not push it up. He just rested his hand there, a anchor in the storm. Aurora did not pull away.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1493
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1493
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"silence"
count4
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"warmth"
3"chill"
4"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences217
matches(empty)
77.02% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount8
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences217
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
2"listen"
3"think"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences217
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1488
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount1475
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.56
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Cardiff2
Lucien16
Southwark1
Evan2
Carter2
Avaros1
Golden1
Empress1
Rory1
Eva3
Aurora9
You23
Don3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Evan"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
5"Aurora"
6"You"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Southwark"
2"Avaros"
3"Golden"
globalScore0.72
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences106
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a violation and a comfort all"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1488
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences217
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs109
mean13.65
std16.62
cv1.218
sampleLengths
078
15
245
38
44
544
65
741
85
94
104
1146
123
131
142
157
1639
173
1825
197
204
213
223
2346
244
2510
268
273
285
299
3025
3127
3223
3324
347
3517
3619
3732
381
391
402
414
4221
436
4446
455
4611
474
4829
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences217
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs300
matches
0"were collapsing"
1"was building"
2"was watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences217
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount108
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.009259259259259259
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.009259259259259259
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences217
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences217
mean6.86
std4.51
cv0.657
sampleLengths
011
111
217
319
47
513
65
75
822
918
105
113
124
1310
1413
1521
165
175
1815
193
2018
215
224
234
249
2515
2616
276
283
291
302
317
323
338
3418
3510
363
372
3812
3911
404
413
424
433
443
455
467
4712
489
493
34.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats34
diversityRatio0.2350230414746544
totalSentences217
uniqueOpeners51
50.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences197
matches
0"Just like him."
1"Then I will stand."
2"Only Eva called her that."
ratio0.015
18.98% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount99
totalSentences197
matches
0"He wore a charcoal suit"
1"He leaned on the ivory-handled"
2"You should not be here."
3"He closed the umbrella and"
4"She crossed her arms over"
5"He turned to face her."
6"He looked tired."
7"You stopped answering the phone."
8"I changed the number."
9"You changed the number."
10"He repeated the words, testing"
11"He walked further into the"
12"He stopped near the small"
13"You look well."
14"It warmed the cold draft"
15"I never pretended."
16"You walked out of the"
17"I had to find my"
18"You left me there."
19"I saved you."
ratio0.503
23.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount172
totalSentences197
matches
0"The lock clicked, a sharp"
1"Aurora pulled the door open"
2"Lucien stood on the threshold,"
3"He wore a charcoal suit"
4"Water darkened the fabric at"
5"He leaned on the ivory-handled"
6"You should not be here."
7"Lucien stepped forward without invitation."
8"The scent of ozone and"
9"He closed the umbrella and"
10"The lock held three deadbolts."
11"Eva installed them."
12"Eva is not here."
13"Aurora moved back into the"
14"The flat was small, cramped"
15"She crossed her arms over"
16"He turned to face her."
17"The overhead light caught the"
18"He looked tired."
19"The usual immaculate slick of"
ratio0.873
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences197
matches
0"Because of information I provided."
1"If I told you, you"
2"If you stay, you stay"
3"Before I change my mind"
ratio0.02
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He wore a charcoal suit that cost more than her monthly rent, tailored to fit his shoulders with precision."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.2572%