Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYXNDH0SCQA65WJ2FCV028

Run Details

Duration:
2m 5s
Cost:
$0.000981
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park after midnight held a damp, earthy chill that seeped through Rory’s jacket. The map on her phone, a screenshot sent from an encrypted number, glowed in her hand, its blue dot hovering over a patch of woodland just off the main path. Her reason was simple, almost stupidly so: a parcel to deliver. A small, velvet-wrapped box for a “Ms. Isolde,” pickup at the Golden Empress, delivery to these coordinates. Yu-Fei had just shrugged, her face unreadable. “Special client. Pays extra for night drops.” But the moment she’d stepped off the gravel path and into the tree line, the wrongness began. It was quiet. Not peaceful quiet. An oppressive, swallowing silence. The distant hum of London’s night traffic vanished, cut off as if by a wall. Her own footsteps on the fallen leaves sounded too loud, too crisp. The flashlight beam from her phone carved a shaky tunnel through the blackness, illuminating gnarled roots and the skeletal fingers of winter branches. The coordinates led her deeper, away from any recognizable landmark. She found the standing stones without really looking for them. One moment it was just trees, the next, three massive, twisted columns of ancient oak formed a rough triangle ahead, their bark silvered by the weak moonlight filtering through the bare canopy. They looked less like trees and more like petrified giants, hunched and watching. This was the place. The Fae Grove, the map had labeled it. A name that had seemed whimsical in the warm light of the restaurant kitchen. Here, it felt like a warning. Rory stopped at the edge of the clearing the stones guarded. A circle of grass, improbably green and soft-looking, lay within. Wildflowers she couldn’t name dotted the expanse, their petals closed for the night. Or were they? She could have sworn a cluster of tiny blue blossoms near her foot shuddered, then stilled, as if her light had disturbed them. Impossible. It was January. “Hello?” Her voice was swallowed by the grove, leaving no echo. It fell dead at her feet. “Delivery for Isolde?” No answer. Just that dense, listening silence. She stepped between two of the oak stones. The air changed instantly. It grew warmer, carrying a heavy, floral perfume—honeysuckle and something darker, like damp roses. The cold from the park was gone. Behind her, the view of the path and the trees had vanished, replaced by a shifting, misty gloom. The standing stones now formed a perfect ring around her, enclosing the clearing completely. An hour inside can be minutes or days outside. The codex entry flickered in her mind. She pushed the thought away. Focus on the job. Drop the package. Leave. A flat, moss-covered rock sat in the center of the clearing. The designated drop point, according to the instructions. Rory approached, her sneakers sinking slightly into the unnaturally lush grass. The parcel was in her backpack. She shrugged it off, unzipped the main compartment, and pulled out the small velvet box. As she did, the silver chain around her neck shifted. The Heartstone pendant slipped out from under her collar. It was warm. Not from her skin. A distinct, pulsing warmth radiated from the deep crimson gemstone. It hadn’t done that since… she couldn’t even remember. Her hand went to it, fingers closing around the smooth stone. The faint inner glow was visible now, a deep ember-light within the gem. When near a Hel portal, the codex had said. She dropped her hand, her throat tight. Just a coincidence. A geological thing. Static. She placed the velvet box on the mossy rock. The moment it left her fingers, a sound cracked the silence. A twig snapping, to her left. She spun, phone light slashing across the flowers. Nothing. Just the dark trunks of the oak stones and the deeper blackness between them. An animal. A deer. Richmond Park was full of them. She took a step back toward the way she’d come. Another sound. Not a snap this time. A soft, sliding rustle, like something dragging through long grass. It came from her right now. The light caught a tremor in the foliage at the base of one stone. A cluster of ferns trembled. “Is someone there?” Her voice was sharper now, laced with a fear she couldn’t suppress. “I’ve left the package. I’m going now.” The rustling stopped. The pendant throbbed against her chest, a slow, rhythmic beat that matched the sudden hammering of her heart. She was being watched. The certainty of it crawled over her skin. It wasn’t a vague suspicion; it was a physical pressure, a weight in the air behind her eyes. She turned fully, aiming the light at the gap between the stones where she’d entered. The mist there had thickened, coiling like smoke. The path was gone. A whisper. Not a word. Just a breath of sound, sibilant and dry, that seemed to come from everywhere at once. It brushed against her ear. Rory froze, her blood turning to ice. She didn’t dare move her head. Her eyes scanned the edges of her vision, the periphery where the light gave way to shadow. At the far side of the clearing, something moved. Not in the light, but in the darkness just beyond it. A suggestion of a shape, tall and impossibly slender, shifting between two of the oak stones. It was there for a fraction of a second, a vertical smudge of deeper night, and then it was gone. Her light jerked toward the spot, revealing only undisturbed flowers. It was playing with her. The cool-headed, logical part of her mind, the part that had gotten her out of bad situations with Evan, was screaming. This was wrong. This was more than a wrong address. The parcel, the grove, the stones, the warmth of the pendant—it was a set-up. But for what? Another whisper, closer. This time it held a faint, melodic lilt, but the notes were all wrong, stretched and thin. It came from directly above her. She looked up. The canopy was gone. In its place was a vast, starless expanse of deep violet sky, tinged with green at the horizons like a sickly dawn. No moon. Just that empty, colored void. And hanging from the branches of the oak stones—no, not branches, from the very air—were delicate, silvery strands. They glistened in her phone’s light, a complex, shifting web that hadn’t been there a moment ago. A soft *plink*. A drop of something dark and viscous landed on the mossy rock beside the velvet box. Then another on her shoe. She looked down. More droplets were falling, a slow, sporadic rain from the silvery threads above. They smelled of copper and damp soil. Her breath hitched. She had to move. Now. She lurched backward, away from the rock, toward what she hoped was the original entrance. The mist swirled before her, refusing to part. The pendant was burning now, a hot, urgent brand against her sternum. Its glow painted her throat crimson. The dragging rustle came again, faster this time, a frenzied skittering through the grass that circled her. Left, then right, then behind. She whirled, light swinging wildly, catching fleeting impressions: a shadow that stretched too long, a ripple in the flowers where nothing stood, a flicker of something pale and pointed withdrawing into the dark. “Show yourself!” she yelled, the anger born of pure terror. “Take your damn package and let me go!” The whispering ceased. The grove fell utterly silent once more, but the silence now was a held breath, a poised tension. The droplets stopped falling. The silvery threads overhead seemed to tighten. From the mist directly in front of her, a figure resolved. It was tall, willowy, dressed in tatters of shadow and moss. Its face was long and pale, with eyes like chips of black flint that reflected no light. It didn’t walk. It seemed to unfold from the air itself, one long, thin limb after another, until it stood between her and the way out. Its head tilted, bird-like. The creature’s mouth didn’t move, but the voice filled Rory’s head, dry as fallen leaves and cold as the grave. “You brought the tribute. Good. But the stone… the stone you wear is not for you to hold, little thief.” Rory’s hand flew to the Heartstone. Its pulse was a frantic drumbeat. “It was given to me.” “Given?” The voice held a sound like breaking glass. “Stolen from the dark. It calls. It calls, and they listen.” A second shape detached itself from the gloom near the stones, then a third. They were similar, yet subtly different—one hunched, one with too many joints in its arms. They formed a loose circle around her, cutting off any retreat. Their black eyes were fixed on the pendant. The first one took a gliding step forward. “The tribute is accepted. The vessel must remain.” She understood then. The package wasn’t the delivery. She was. And the pendant was the bait.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1513
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"completely"
2"slightly"
3"very"
4"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1513
totalAiIsms37
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count4
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"oppressive"
count1
4
word"silence"
count4
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"whimsical"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"gloom"
count2
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count2
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"throbbed"
count1
14
word"rhythmic"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count2
17
word"scanned"
count1
18
word"lilt"
count1
19
word"tinged"
count1
20
word"complex"
count1
21
word"lurched"
count1
22
word"fleeting"
count1
23
word"flicker"
count1
24
word"tension"
count1
25
word"resolved"
count1
26
word"grave"
count1
27
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"velvet"
2"unreadable"
3"oppressive"
4"silence"
5"footsteps"
6"whimsical"
7"echo"
8"gloom"
9"perfect"
10"flickered"
11"warmth"
12"trembled"
13"throbbed"
14"rhythmic"
15"weight"
16"whisper"
17"scanned"
18"lilt"
19"tinged"
20"complex"
21"lurched"
22"fleeting"
23"flicker"
24"tension"
25"resolved"
26"grave"
27"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences155
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences155
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences163
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1501
ratio0.001
matches
0"plink"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1423
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.42
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Rory6
Golden1
Empress1
London1
Fae1
Grove1
January1
Heartstone2
Hel1
Evan1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
3"London"
4"Fae"
5"Grove"
6"Heartstone"
7"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences100
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed whimsical in the warm light of the restaurant kitchen"
1"felt like a warning"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.666
wordCount1501
matches
0"Not in the light, but in the darkness just beyond it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences163
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean37.53
std26.26
cv0.7
sampleLengths
089
117
270
387
464
520
67
794
870
973
1020
116
1233
1352
1422
1551
1627
172
1854
1966
205
2148
2226
233
2468
253
2644
278
2841
2955
3018
3132
3211
3358
3440
3517
3620
3748
3816
3916
91.68% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences155
matches
0"was swallowed"
1"was gone"
2"was gone"
3"was gone"
4"was gone"
5"were fixed"
47.79% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs219
matches
0"was being"
1"was playing"
2"was screaming"
3"were falling"
4"was burning"
55.21% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences163
ratio0.031
matches
0"It grew warmer, carrying a heavy, floral perfume—honeysuckle and something darker, like damp roses."
1"It wasn’t a vague suspicion; it was a physical pressure, a weight in the air behind her eyes."
2"The parcel, the grove, the stones, the warmth of the pendant—it was a set-up."
3"And hanging from the branches of the oak stones—no, not branches, from the very air—were delicate, silvery strands."
4"They were similar, yet subtly different—one hunched, one with too many joints in its arms."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1435
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, velvet-wrapped box"
1"flat, moss-covered rock"
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.037630662020905925
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.011149825783972125
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences163
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences163
mean9.21
std6.3
cv0.684
sampleLengths
017
130
211
317
47
57
617
73
83
94
1015
1112
1223
1310
1410
1532
1613
174
188
1914
206
2111
2210
2313
243
2523
261
273
2811
296
303
312
325
338
344
3514
367
3718
3814
399
407
415
424
433
441
4511
468
4711
486
4915
42.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3006134969325153
totalSentences163
uniqueOpeners49
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences143
matches
0"Just that dense, listening silence."
1"Just a coincidence."
2"Just the dark trunks of"
3"Just a breath of sound,"
4"Just that empty, colored void."
5"Then another on her shoe."
ratio0.042
71.75% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences143
matches
0"Her reason was simple, almost"
1"It was quiet."
2"Her own footsteps on the"
3"She found the standing stones"
4"They looked less like trees"
5"She could have sworn a"
6"It was January."
7"Her voice was swallowed by"
8"It fell dead at her"
9"She stepped between two of"
10"It grew warmer, carrying a"
11"She pushed the thought away."
12"She shrugged it off, unzipped"
13"It was warm."
14"It hadn’t done that since…"
15"she couldn’t even remember."
16"Her hand went to it,"
17"She dropped her hand, her"
18"She placed the velvet box"
19"She spun, phone light slashing"
ratio0.371
54.41% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount116
totalSentences143
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"The map on her phone,"
2"Her reason was simple, almost"
3"A small, velvet-wrapped box for"
4"Yu-Fei had just shrugged, her"
5"It was quiet."
6"An oppressive, swallowing silence."
7"The distant hum of London’s"
8"Her own footsteps on the"
9"The flashlight beam from her"
10"The coordinates led her deeper,"
11"She found the standing stones"
12"They looked less like trees"
13"This was the place."
14"The Fae Grove, the map"
15"A name that had seemed"
16"Here, it felt like a"
17"Rory stopped at the edge"
18"A circle of grass, improbably"
19"Wildflowers she couldn’t name dotted"
ratio0.811
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
ratio0
72.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"A name that had seemed whimsical in the warm light of the restaurant kitchen."
1"She could have sworn a cluster of tiny blue blossoms near her foot shuddered, then stilled, as if her light had disturbed them."
2"The pendant throbbed against her chest, a slow, rhythmic beat that matched the sudden hammering of her heart."
3"The cool-headed, logical part of her mind, the part that had gotten her out of bad situations with Evan, was screaming."
4"They glistened in her phone’s light, a complex, shifting web that hadn’t been there a moment ago."
5"She whirled, light swinging wildly, catching fleeting impressions: a shadow that stretched too long, a ripple in the flowers where nothing stood, a flicker of s…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she yelled (yell)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.154
82.6707%